Sierra Lyricalia wrote:Starting out by assuming the conclusion as a premise is counterproductive at best. At minimum it makes any following argument seem trumped up to support a pre-determined outcome whether that outcome is ultimately justified or not. In this case it may be justified; but that certainly hasn't been established yet.
That is an introductory clause. It does not assume the conclusion as a premise because it is substantiated by later arguments. Should an essay not begin with a thesis statement because no constructive arguments have yet been made?
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:That seems disingenuous. Section 4 (and only Section 4) deliberately and specifically lists five things which member nations are required to do to be in compliance with this act, while not micromanaging the exact manner in which they must do them.
There is a delicate balance between too much micromanagement and too little clarity. This resolution unquestionably fails on the far side of that scale.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:"Natural" is not the same thing as "native...
As stated in an earlier post, "natural" clearly means "native" in this context, not "not artifical".
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:It is in fact quite relevant whether an unpopulated area is unsafe or contains pollution, for a number of reasons.
True, but not to the same extent. As I said earlier, I will change "irrelevant" to "limited relevance".
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:Speaking of nuclear waste, is it really the intention of any WA member state to convert whole areas to wasteland for the disposal of pollutants?
Even when appropriate measures are taken to secure dangerous waste, substantial risk remains. I doubt too many people want to live next to a toxic or nuclear waste disposal site.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:My colleague from Pacifist Chipmunks addressed this quite adequately. It's a flaw, but it's also entirely clear from context what is required.
No, not really. The word "adapt" also makes sense in that context, though it substantially limits the effectiveness of that clause.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:The lack of definition of "energy contaminant" is a real concern, since this phrase is not widely enough used to be covered by Reasonable Nation Theory. We're assuming for the moment that it means radioactive materials, in contradistinction to chemical contaminants...
Actually, given that the definition seems to have been taken from the Wikipedia article on pollution, it means sound pollution.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:"Adverse change..." is obviously straightforward and can't possibly be held up as an example of "lack of clarity." Plain reading is more than sufficient.
"Adverse change" is vague and over-broad. What is "adverse" change? What magnitude of "adverse change" is required to trigger that clause? Both are important questions that the resolution doesn't answer.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:The WASP does the recommending; member nations are required to do the reducing. Surely you wouldn't want the WASP to have total control over member nations' laws and economies? It's clearly spelled out that the WASP "work[s] with member nations" [emphasis mine] to come up with the pollution reduction recommendations; it is then the member nation's responsibility to try to reach those goals.
Per clause 4(i), the pollution reduction requirements seem to be mandatory and not on a "best effort" basis.
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:We note that without a penalty listed for failure to comply in a timely fashion, this act does not have the sort of far-reaching teeth that some nations are apparently worried about.
Doesn't the resolution require member nations to criminalize violations of the resolution (including failure to meet reduction targets, I suppose) under clause 4(iv)?
Sierra Lyricalia wrote:Nothing in the act appears to give the WASP this kind of power.
We disagree, per our argumentation above.