Chester Pearson wrote:Araraukar wrote:Submitted a bit hastily, perhaps, considering it had been stashed away since March and you didn't allow even a full day for more comments before submission?
People have had
nine months to comment on it.....
"Except that the version you submitted is a different draft to the most recent one people were commenting on: all the comments about non-members are now irrelevant, for example. It means your proposal doesn't make much sense:
ALARMED by the possibility of widespread devastation that could occur as the result of the uncontrolled proliferation of nuclear technology, particularly by non-members who are not bound by the conventions of international law,
"'Non-members who are not bound by the conventions of international law' are not mentioned anywhere in the operative section. More importantly:
Demands that member nations take all measures necessary and practical in preventing the transfer of nuclear technology, design specifications, and materials if there is reason to suspect that they will be weaponized,
"This doesn't limit the ban on transfer to other nations. It means that
all transfers are banned: even within our own nation! If The Dark Star Republic wishes to put nuclear weapons in its colonial holdings, that transfer of materials is now banned!
"This is
not the language that has been sitting there for nine months. It is language you redrafted one day ago, and I agree that submission was hasty.
"However, I believe your proposal will pass."
~ former Ambassador to the WA Inky Fungschlammer