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[DEFEATED] Condemn New Edom

Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:46 pm

Since the OP of the last attempt just abandoned his attempt at the resolution, I'm taking this to a new thread. This is the current draft:

Category: Condemn || Nominee: New Edom || Proposed by: Bodobol

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RECOGNIZING that each World Assembly member nation has a duty to adhere to each of its resolutions,

DISGUSTED that New Edom, a member of the World Assembly, has repeatedly violated several resolutions, including General Assembly Resolutions #9, #15, #23, #30, #35, #38 and #160, and shows no signs of trying to adhere to its duty,

APALLED that said nation has committed acts of genocide against the native Elwe people inside its own borders and denied several rights to LGBT citizens, including those outlined in GA Resolutions #15 and #35,

SHOCKED at the discriminatory actions of the government against those who criticize it, including forcibly disbanding the Feminist Party and sentencing its members to hard labor or execution and jailing and raiding the homes of anarchists and socialists,

DEPLORING the government of New Edom for doing little to stop widespread discrimination against its own LGBT citizens, and actually encouraging it by making homosexuality appear abnormal via the establishment of several, albeit voluntary, re-education camps throughout the nation,

DENOUNCES New Edom as a misogynistic, homophobic nation whose human rights abuses include allowing women to be forced into marriages,

HEREBY CONDEMNS New Edom.



And some background on the resolution...



Constructive criticism is appreciated (also, I only noticed some WA violations after gathering up all the examples- the ones I found afterward are mentioned in the resolution, but not in the spoiler).
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Postby Ikania » Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:52 pm

I didn't abandon the attempts, I just figured that he's an okay person and hasn't broken a single WA law that you mentioned.
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:56 pm

Ikania wrote:I didn't abandon the attempts, I just figured that he's an okay person and hasn't broken a single WA law that you mentioned.


:palm:

We literally just went over this.

And you asked the mods to lock your thread. I think that classifies as abandoning the attempt.
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Postby Ikania » Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:59 pm

Bodobol wrote:
Ikania wrote:I didn't abandon the attempts, I just figured that he's an okay person and hasn't broken a single WA law that you mentioned.


:palm:

We literally just went over this.

And you asked the mods to lock your thread. I think that classifies as abandoning the attempt.

But see, it's not an attempt if I'm actually defending him now.
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:00 pm

Ikania wrote:
Bodobol wrote:
:palm:

We literally just went over this.

And you asked the mods to lock your thread. I think that classifies as abandoning the attempt.

But see, it's not an attempt if I'm actually defending him now.


You abandoned your attempt to condemn him. I did not. Now let's stop the needless bickering and actually discuss the resolution, okay?
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Postby Ikania » Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:02 pm

Bodobol wrote:
Ikania wrote:But see, it's not an attempt if I'm actually defending him now.


You abandoned your attempt to condemn him. I did not. Now let's stop the needless bickering and actually discuss the resolution, okay?

Okay fine. I don't like it and will not support it. Done.
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Postby Orentor » Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:11 pm

Although I am intially against homosexuality I do not like that New Edom has persecuted them, well done Bodobol! :)
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Postby Ikania » Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:58 pm

Orentor wrote:Although I am intially against homosexuality I do not like that New Edom has persecuted them, well done Bodobol! :)

New Edom isn't persecuting them at all.
Start from around the bottom of the page and see the telegrams we exchange. See how New Edom is doing a service to actually save gays from being discriminated by society. Although it isn't very good that they're being taught to cover instinct instead of showing pride, it's better than being called a fgt all the time.
Sorry if that was offensive...
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:01 pm

Ikania wrote:
Orentor wrote:Although I am intially against homosexuality I do not like that New Edom has persecuted them, well done Bodobol! :)

New Edom isn't persecuting them at all.
Start from around the bottom of the page and see the telegrams we exchange. See how New Edom is doing a service to actually save gays from being discriminated by society. Although it isn't very good that they're being taught to cover instinct instead of showing pride, it's better than being called a fgt all the time.
Sorry if that was offensive...


Doesn't change the fact that the New Edomite government is encouraging discrimination of gays by making them appear abnormal; that being said, I'll edit my proposal.
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Postby Orentor » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:04 pm

I just wrote persecuting because most of what i've heard has shown NE conducting actions against them sorry if i didn't get my point acroos clearly enough.
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:04 pm

Orentor wrote:I just wrote persecuting because most of what i've heard has shown NE conducting actions against them sorry if i didn't get my point acroos clearly enough.


They're still persecuting homosexuals by not allowing them to marry and setting up reeducation camps for them.
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Postby Abacathea » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:07 pm

Bodobol wrote:
Orentor wrote:I just wrote persecuting because most of what i've heard has shown NE conducting actions against them sorry if i didn't get my point acroos clearly enough.


They're still persecuting homosexuals by not allowing them to marry and setting up reeducation camps for them.


Is that really persecution. Are these voluntary camps? Mandatory? This is the level of information your proposal needs to have rather than us having to clarify here on the forum. If we have to here, it's likely those who vote will have similar questions.
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:09 pm

Abacathea wrote:
Bodobol wrote:
They're still persecuting homosexuals by not allowing them to marry and setting up reeducation camps for them.


Is that really persecution. Are these voluntary camps? Mandatory? This is the level of information your proposal needs to have rather than us having to clarify here on the forum. If we have to here, it's likely those who vote will have similar questions.


By denying them the same rights heterosexuals have, yes, they are discriminating. The camps are voluntary (I'll edit that in as well), but it still does nothing to shed the public image of homosexuality being abnormal. Plus, New Edom is directly violating GAR #15.
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Postby Ikania » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:28 pm

Lemme sum this up.
1. Gay marriage is technically legal, but you can only get it from pastors and priests, who typically refuse because they're Christian.
2. The camps are completely voluntary, and are not filthy hellpits. They are comfortable, nice places with great food.
3. The camps teach you how to act straight so you can pass off as hetero in public and not be insulted and discriminated in public. As a Christian state, the people would hate an LGBT Pride event, so they resort to this.
4. New Edom has never killed any gays except for those who raped children. That's good, right?
5. So let's see... Freedom of Marriage is technically being followed, Freedom of Expression is being discouraged but not outlawed in any manner. No Genocide, no anything, really. So what's so bad?
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Postby Bodobol » Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:31 pm

Ikania wrote:Lemme sum this up.
1. Gay marriage is technically legal, but you can only get it from pastors and priests, who typically refuse because they're Christian.
2. The camps are completely voluntary, and are not filthy hellpits. They are comfortable, nice places with great food.
3. The camps teach you how to act straight so you can pass off as hetero in public and not be insulted and discriminated in public. As a Christian state, the people would hate an LGBT Pride event, so they resort to this.
4. New Edom has never killed any gays except for those who raped children. That's good, right?
5. So let's see... Freedom of Marriage is technically being followed, Freedom of Expression is being discouraged but not outlawed in any manner. No Genocide, no anything, really. So what's so bad?


1. Linky, please.
2. Doesn't matter, they're still encouraging discrimination against homosexuals.
3. See 2.
4. I never said anything about killing gays.
5. Again, source. And the FoE resolution is being violated- as seen here.
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Postby New Edom » Tue Jul 23, 2013 10:00 pm

This is an outrage! New Edom has been attempting to join the Stonewall Alliance, and has had an investigative commission from that alliance exploring the nature of the education centers. As for political dissidents, naturally our governments have defended our people against them. We expect to see the world reject this proposal in favour of justice.

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Postby Aquafireland » Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:01 pm

Did you submit this before you put this on the forums. If you have, that's one of the worst moves you could ever make when submitting a proposal. Let other experienced nations check out the proposal for any illegal content. Or risk the proposal removed from the floor. Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.
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Postby Lamoni » Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:04 pm

The Free Republic of Lamoni is hereby AGAINST this condemnation, as all the the Edomite camps have done is to protect the LGBT crowd from discrimination by the rest of the nation's own highly religious population.

Also, we find fault with your accusation that New Edom's government is actively encouraging discrimination against the LGBT crowd. The so-called encouragement in question is coming from the various forms of Christianity practiced within New Edom, and not the government itself. Unless I missed a WA resolution stating that the WA can do something about what religion teaches, then the main thrust of this condemnation simply does not stand up to serious scrutiny.

The government of New Edom is attempting to help their LGBT citizens to survive against persecution from more religious members of Edomite society.
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Postby SkyDip » Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:12 pm

Aquafireland wrote:Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.

What, exactly, are you basing that on? :eyebrow:
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Postby Aquafireland » Wed Jul 24, 2013 12:42 am

SkyDip wrote:
Aquafireland wrote:Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.

What, exactly, are you basing that on? :eyebrow:


On the resolution. Was this proposal submitted before it was put on the forums or the other way around?
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Postby Bodobol » Wed Jul 24, 2013 10:49 am

Aquafireland wrote:Did you submit this before you put this on the forums. If you have, that's one of the worst moves you could ever make when submitting a proposal. Let other experienced nations check out the proposal for any illegal content. Or risk the proposal removed from the floor. Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.


I let it sit here for about a day, but being the impatient person that I am, I will admit that I submitted it before any of the experienced nations got to it. :unsure:

Lamoni wrote:The Free Republic of Lamoni is hereby AGAINST this condemnation, as all the the Edomite camps have done is to protect the LGBT crowd from discrimination by the rest of the nation's own highly religious population.

Also, we find fault with your accusation that New Edom's government is actively encouraging discrimination against the LGBT crowd. The so-called encouragement in question is coming from the various forms of Christianity practiced within New Edom, and not the government itself. Unless I missed a WA resolution stating that the WA can do something about what religion teaches, then the main thrust of this condemnation simply does not stand up to serious scrutiny.

The government of New Edom is attempting to help their LGBT citizens to survive against persecution from more religious members of Edomite society.


...You know, I would try to argue against this, but you're right. My train of thought was that the camps were being set up, thereby making homosexuals feel abnormal and in need of being 'reeducated', but your post has brought me to the realization that that is not the case. Unfortunately, the proposal has already been submitted and I can't remove that clause from it. Apologies.
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Postby Aquafireland » Wed Jul 24, 2013 11:13 am

Bodobol wrote:
Aquafireland wrote:Did you submit this before you put this on the forums. If you have, that's one of the worst moves you could ever make when submitting a proposal. Let other experienced nations check out the proposal for any illegal content. Or risk the proposal removed from the floor. Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.


I let it sit here for about a day, but being the impatient person that I am, I will admit that I submitted it before any of the experienced nations got to it. :unsure:

Lamoni wrote:The Free Republic of Lamoni is hereby AGAINST this condemnation, as all the the Edomite camps have done is to protect the LGBT crowd from discrimination by the rest of the nation's own highly religious population.

Also, we find fault with your accusation that New Edom's government is actively encouraging discrimination against the LGBT crowd. The so-called encouragement in question is coming from the various forms of Christianity practiced within New Edom, and not the government itself. Unless I missed a WA resolution stating that the WA can do something about what religion teaches, then the main thrust of this condemnation simply does not stand up to serious scrutiny.

The government of New Edom is attempting to help their LGBT citizens to survive against persecution from more religious members of Edomite society.


...You know, I would try to argue against this, but you're right. My train of thought was that the camps were being set up, thereby making homosexuals feel abnormal and in need of being 'reeducated', but your post has brought me to the realization that that is not the case. Unfortunately, the proposal has already been submitted and I can't remove that clause from it. Apologies.


My friend, I have been quite eager to do that in the past. Don't let impatience beat you to the finish line. The Security Council and the proposal are not going anywhere. Next time you do something, make sure you take my advice.
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Postby SkyDip » Wed Jul 24, 2013 11:53 am

Aquafireland wrote:
SkyDip wrote:What, exactly, are you basing that on? :eyebrow:


On the resolution. Was this proposal submitted before it was put on the forums or the other way around?

You didn't answer my question. Remotely.
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Postby Frattastan II » Wed Jul 24, 2013 12:07 pm

SkyDip wrote:
Aquafireland wrote:Remember - three proposals yanked from the floor and you lose your WA membership.

What, exactly, are you basing that on? :eyebrow:


GA rules, though I have no idea if it applies to the SC too.
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Postby Sedgistan » Wed Jul 24, 2013 12:28 pm

It's done on a case by case basis really. Unless you submit something extremely offensive, utterly spammy or similar, you won't be removed before 3 illegal proposals. If it's a player making honest mistakes, we won't kick them for three. It very much depends on the circumstances.

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