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[Defeated] Condemn New Scorpio

Postby Xanixi » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:24 pm

This is the first time that I'm writing a proposal, so I'll take any constructive criticism from those, more experienced, proposal submitters...or whatever the correct word is.

Also, I have it understood that the Security Council is concerned MORE with the actual gameplay that Role-Play, but (because I'm taking Max to his very word), I can assume that they, also, are concerned (even slightly) with roleplaying. This is a condemnation for a roleplaying act...

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Condemn New Scorpio

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: New Scorpio | Proposed by: Grand Empire of Xanixi


The Security Council,

Apprehensively disclosing the fact that nation of "New Scorpio" successfully transported a nuclear device into the capital city of Scorpion City, during Coalition of Steel occupation, after the Emperic-Scorpion War, and during a rebel uprising that was intended to rival Coalition forces in the nation,

Horrified that the nuclear device was managed to be transported, activated, and detonated in the city center's ruins,

Further Horrified that said explosion was of massive yield, similar or greater to 21 kilotons of TNT, completely obliterated the city, engulfed it in radiation, and managed to kill over 30,000,000 Scorpion Citizens, as well as several hundred thousand Coalition personnel,

Nauseated by the losses of both civilian and military personnel, as well as millions of Universal Standard Dollars,

Disgusted that the regional commander, Seer, detonated the weapon with no regard to the civilian casualties, as well as his own forces, still combating Coalition forces throughout the city,

Regretfully Acknowledging that the Scorpion "administration" was not destroyed, and, instead, retreated to a set of islands holding millions more, as well as advanced military equipment and fortifications,

Shocked that several nations, after being brought up to the international community, sided with New Scorpio, stating that it was a necessary act to defend the nation against the imperialistic occupiers,

Appalled that the New Scorpion government has paid no reparations to the families of Coalition forces who died in the fighting, the government of those nations, nor the families and loved ones of the civilians massacred in the attack, and claims that such actions were justified, in order to free itself from occupation,

Additionally, this was not the first time that the nation of New Scorpio detonated a nuclear weapon in an attempt to defeat its enemies; During the Emperic-Scorpion War, New Scorpio managed to detonate several nuclear devices inside the nation of New Emperica, one of which killed 3 million Emperican Citizens,

Adamant that any nation that has committed such atrocities both domestically and internationally deserves proper punishment,

Hereby Condemns New Scorpio


Such events occured in The Recapture of New Scorpio
Here is us bringing it up to the international community
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Postby Super Bwitain » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:26 pm

I feel like joining the WA.

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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:50 pm

The Ambassador read the proposal carefully, noting the details therein. He looked back up to the author when he finished.

A very well-written draft for a first-timer. Well done. I have some minor edits and suggestions.

Further Horrified that said explosion was of massive yield, completely obliterated the city, engulfed it in radiation, and managed to kill over 30,000,000 Scorpion Citizens, as well as several Coalition personnel,

Disgusted that the regional commander, Seer, detonated the weapon with no regard to the civilian casualties, as well as his own forces, still combatting Coalition forces throughout the city,

I don't see any major rule violations either. However, this proposal is really too centralized. This is all about one incident (an RP incident, no less) which isn't nearly enough substance to get a condemn/commend passed. Should you have more substance to add (perhaps the poor political freedoms in the nominated nation, etc.), it would make many more nations apt to approve and vote for your proposal.

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Postby Sedgistan » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:55 pm

Xanixi wrote:Also, I have it understood that the Security Council is concerned MORE with the actual gameplay that Role-Play, but (because I'm taking Max to his very word), I can assume that they, also, are concerned (even slightly) with roleplaying. This is a condemnation for a roleplaying act...

Heh, you are allowed roleplay-based condemnations in the Security Council. Don't worry - there've been quite a few passed already.

As a draft from a newcomer to the SC, it's impressive. Worth bearing in mind, though, that you can't include links in the proposal text when you submit it.

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Postby Milograd » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:30 pm

Xanixi wrote:Shocked that several nations, after being brought up to the international community, sided with New Scorpio, stating that it was a necessary act to defend the nation against the imperialistic occupiers,

I'm against this, because ICly Milograd was one of those nations. :P
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Postby Xanixi » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:51 pm

Skyrim Diplomacy wrote:The Ambassador read the proposal carefully, noting the details therein. He looked back up to the author when he finished.

A very well-written draft for a first-timer. Well done. I have some minor edits and suggestions.

Further Horrified that said explosion was of massive yield, completely obliterated the city, engulfed it in radiation, and managed to kill over 30,000,000 Scorpion Citizens, as well as several Coalition personnel,

Disgusted that the regional commander, Seer, detonated the weapon with no regard to the civilian casualties, as well as his own forces, still combatting Coalition forces throughout the city,

I don't see any major rule violations either. However, this proposal is really too centralized. This is all about one incident (an RP incident, no less) which isn't nearly enough substance to get a condemn/commend passed. Should you have more substance to add (perhaps the poor political freedoms in the nominated nation, etc.), it would make many more nations apt to approve and vote for your proposal.


Well, considering he killed 30 million of his own citizens...
I consider that some major genocide. Which is against one of the GARs (38, I think). He is a WA Member-Nation, yet did not abide by said rules. When it's something of this magnitude, I consider even one "incident" to be enough to condemn the nation globally.
Thanks for those error corrections.

Thanks for the compliment! I tried my best.


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Xanixi wrote:Also, I have it understood that the Security Council is concerned MORE with the actual gameplay that Role-Play, but (because I'm taking Max to his very word), I can assume that they, also, are concerned (even slightly) with roleplaying. This is a condemnation for a roleplaying act...

Heh, you are allowed roleplay-based condemnations in the Security Council. Don't worry - there've been quite a few passed already.

As a draft from a newcomer to the SC, it's impressive. Worth bearing in mind, though, that you can't include links in the proposal text when you submit it.


Thanks for clearing that up for me. Glad to know that my proposal didn't go kaput.

Thanks for the compliment, and I'm going to delete all of the links inside the proposal. Thanks for that. I'm gonna leave the picture there, because it looks cool, but I'll keep it out when I submit the actual proposal (whenever that may be).


Milograd wrote:
Xanixi wrote:Shocked that several nations, after being brought up to the international community, sided with New Scorpio, stating that it was a necessary act to defend the nation against the imperialistic occupiers,

I'm against this, because ICly Milograd was one of those nations. :P


Understood.
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:40 pm

Xanixi wrote:
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Condemn New Scorpio

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: New Scorpio | Proposed by: Grand Empire of Xanixi


The Security Council,

Apprehensively disclosing the fact that nation of "New Scorpio" successfully transported a nuclear device into the capital city of Scorpion City, during Coalition of Steel occupation, after the Emperic-Scorpion War,

Horrified that the nuclear device was activated and detonated in the city center's ruins,

Further Horrified that said explosion was of massive yield, completely obliterated the city, engulfed it in radiation, and managed to kill over 30,000,000 Scorpion Citizens, as well as several hundred thousand Coalition personnel,

Nauseated by the losses of both civilian and military personnel, as well as millions of Universal Standard Dollars,

Disgusted that the regional commander, Seer, detonated the weapon with no regard to the civilian casualties, as well as his own forces, still combatting combating Coalition forces throughout the city,

Regretfully Acknowledging the Scorpion "administration" was not destroyed, and, instead, retreated to a set of islands holding millions more, as well as advanced military equipment and fortifications,

Shocked that several nations, after being brought up to the international community, sided with New Scorpio, stating that it was a necessary act to defend the nation against the imperialistic occupiers,

Appalled that the New Scorpion government has paid no reparations to the families of Coalition forces who died in the fighting, nor the government of those nations, and claims that such actions were justified, in order to free itself from occupationstriking the lack of punctuation :p,

Adamant that any nation that has committed such atrocities both domestically and internationally deserves proper punishment,

Hereby Condemns New Scorpio.


You know this ain't half bad. Just a few things I fixed that you can check out.
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Postby Xanixi » Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:46 pm

Mallorea and Riva wrote:You know this ain't half bad. Just a few things I fixed that you can check out.


Thanks. I appreciate the error correction; Just checked over the entire draft, making sure it's all correctly punctuated and such.

Thanks for the compliment!
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Dr. Carl Sagan wrote:“They say astronomy is a humbling and character-building experience. There is perhaps no better demonstration of the folly of human conceits than this distant image of our tiny world. To me, it underscores our responsibility to deal more kindly with one another, and to preserve and cherish the pale blue dot, the only home we've ever known.”
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:47 pm

Xanixi wrote:
Mallorea and Riva wrote:You know this ain't half bad. Just a few things I fixed that you can check out.


Thanks. I appreciate the error correction; Just checked over the entire draft, making sure it's all correctly punctuated and such.

Thanks for the compliment!

You're welcome! Just make sure you're up to date on the rules regarding campaigning for WA resolutions and whatnot and you should be fine, this draft seems like it will fit in with the other RP condemnations that have been passed.
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Postby Tim-Opolis » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:35 pm

This ain't bad for an RP Resolution. Though I by policy vote against RP Proposals that don't have Gameplay mentioned as well, I wish you luck.
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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 5:24 am

Tim-Opolis wrote:This ain't bad for an RP Resolution. Though I by policy vote against RP Proposals that don't have Gameplay mentioned as well, I wish you luck.


...Sorry? I don't think I fully understood your message, the "Though I by policy vote against RP Proposals that don't have Gameplay mentioned as well" part.

I appreciate the wish of luck, though! :)
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Postby Tim-Opolis » Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:45 am

Xanixi wrote:
Tim-Opolis wrote:This ain't bad for an RP Resolution. Though I by policy vote against RP Proposals that don't have Gameplay mentioned as well, I wish you luck.


...Sorry? I don't think I fully understood your message, the "Though I by policy vote against RP Proposals that don't have Gameplay mentioned as well" part.

I appreciate the wish of luck, though! :)


I'll elaborate. Sorry. That is a bit hard to understand.

Essentially- I don't vote FOR on any RP Resolutions. (So and so did a genocide and killed peoples)
UNLESS
Say it's like "So and so did such and such RP, and then achieved such and such thing in Gameplay (Raiding/Defending/WA Resolution Authoring)
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Postby New Emperica » Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:41 pm

Damnit. If only I were still a member of the WA...wait, I have a defender nation...yes!
Anywho, I fully support this, needless to say.
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New Emperica wrote:Damnit. If only I were still a member of the WA...wait, I have a defender nation...yes!
Anywho, I fully support this, needless to say.


Appreciated to the fullest extent. This is for the lives of those millions who died, both Emperican or Scorpion, and for the hundreds of thousands of soldiers that were killed in the explosion, as well as their families. It's not rightfully fair that their nation get to up and walk away; There needs to be consequences.
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Postby New Emperica » Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:49 pm

That is what I've been saying since he attacked New Emperica that fateful July day...
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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:49 pm

So...is it good enough to submit...or...?
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:01 pm

Xanixi wrote:So...is it good enough to submit...or...?

Even though I won't be voting for it (heck, I'm not even in the WA at the moment) I'd say this is top-quality stuff and very much worth submitting. You'll have to get on a furious approval campaign. :lol:

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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:02 pm

Skyrim Diplomacy wrote:
Xanixi wrote:So...is it good enough to submit...or...?

Even though I won't be voting for it (heck, I'm not even in the WA at the moment) I'd say this is top-quality stuff and very much worth submitting. You'll have to get on a furious approval campaign. :lol:


Thanks. I suppose that this isn't really earning the top-notch amount of views I wanted, but, eh. More people view the proposals than the forums, I suppose.
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Dr. Carl Sagan wrote:“They say astronomy is a humbling and character-building experience. There is perhaps no better demonstration of the folly of human conceits than this distant image of our tiny world. To me, it underscores our responsibility to deal more kindly with one another, and to preserve and cherish the pale blue dot, the only home we've ever known.”
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:05 pm

Xanixi wrote:
Skyrim Diplomacy wrote:Even though I won't be voting for it (heck, I'm not even in the WA at the moment) I'd say this is top-quality stuff and very much worth submitting. You'll have to get on a furious approval campaign. :lol:


Thanks. I suppose that this isn't really earning the top-notch amount of views I wanted, but, eh. More people view the proposals than the forums, I suppose.

That's understandable though, because (as Tim mentioned), some vote against RP commend/condemns on principle. Not many people are in the WA (relatively speaking), and even less of those are affected by RP incidents.

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Postby New Emperica » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:06 pm

I'll go contact some old comrades of mine...
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Postby Osycia » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:09 pm

For.

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Postby Vaugania » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:17 pm

I think if you make all the suggested corrections, it is pretty good. Even though I go along the lines military, military, military, cops, cops, cops in running my country, I frown upon nuking 30 million of your own citizens. For.
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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:18 pm

Osycia wrote:For.


I appreciate it, but you need to be in the World Assembly to vote for this condemnation.
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| Pop.: 508,191,116 | Area: 24.670.330 km2 | Demonym: Thedosian/Republic/Imperial |
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Dr. Carl Sagan wrote:“They say astronomy is a humbling and character-building experience. There is perhaps no better demonstration of the folly of human conceits than this distant image of our tiny world. To me, it underscores our responsibility to deal more kindly with one another, and to preserve and cherish the pale blue dot, the only home we've ever known.”
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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:19 pm

Vaugania wrote:I think if you make all the suggested corrections, it is pretty good. Even though I go along the lines military, military, military, cops, cops, cops in running my country, I frown upon nuking 30 million of your own citizens. For.


Thanks. Ill submit it momentarily, as soon as Im not busy...
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| Pop.: 508,191,116 | Area: 24.670.330 km2 | Demonym: Thedosian/Republic/Imperial |
| Military: 5,482,193 | GDP: US$32,842,135,458,524.96 | Lifespan: ~650 y/o |
Dr. Carl Sagan wrote:“They say astronomy is a humbling and character-building experience. There is perhaps no better demonstration of the folly of human conceits than this distant image of our tiny world. To me, it underscores our responsibility to deal more kindly with one another, and to preserve and cherish the pale blue dot, the only home we've ever known.”
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Postby Xanixi » Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:28 pm

Submitted. Any and all delegates that agree with the proposal, please approve it.
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| Military: 5,482,193 | GDP: US$32,842,135,458,524.96 | Lifespan: ~650 y/o |
Dr. Carl Sagan wrote:“They say astronomy is a humbling and character-building experience. There is perhaps no better demonstration of the folly of human conceits than this distant image of our tiny world. To me, it underscores our responsibility to deal more kindly with one another, and to preserve and cherish the pale blue dot, the only home we've ever known.”
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