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Condemn Milograd

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: Milograd | Proposed by: Connopolis

The Security Council,

APPREHENSIVELY disclosing the horrendously macabre and highly classified dossier of Milograd, which includes religious and racial intolerance, unacceptable police policies, obstruction of democratization and many other grevious and unjustifiable acts against its peers in the international theatre,

HORRIFIED by the prohibition of Catholicism within Milograd and the mass eradication of Catholic citizens on multiple occasions,

FURTHER HORRIFIED by Milograd's xenophobic policies which deliberately classify non-whites as non-human and therefore allowing these people to be hunted as if they were animals,

ABHORRING Milograd's use of VX nerve gas against protesters in the Milogradian cities of Argyz, Kremho, and various other locations, which resulted in the death of over 40,000 Milogradian citizens,

NAUSEATED by the unjust abuse of authority and poor conduct of Milograd's Resource Initiative Urban Police (RIUP), the members of which frequently rape and assault innocent civilians in order to maintain order; the RIUP often kidnaps and murders overwhelming numbers of "threats to the state,"

DISGUSTED by the delusional leader of Milograd, Dh'arco Rahavuhra Jukill, primarily for his decisions that resulted in the demise of many of the world's idyllic democracies and has intentionally stymied the progress of many democracy-advocating organizations such as the Polaris Initiative,

REGRETFULLY ACKNOWLEDGING the Milogradian invasion of the Judean lands and the forced migration of millions of native Trescotters, leading thousands to their deaths, and others to their forced displacement,

SHOCKED by the infamous genocide of Argatov, which resulted in the loss of over 80,000 innocent lives,

APPALLED by Milograd's intolerance of all ideologies not authorized by the Milogradian government in the Milogradian "Belief Authorization Act,"

ADAMANT that any nation that has committed such atrocities both domestically and internationally deserves proper punishment,

HEREBY CONDEMNS Milograd.

Condemn Milograd

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: Milograd | Proposed by: Connopolis

The Security Council,

DEDICATED to the advocation of international peace, cooperation, and harmony between all nations,

NOTING the existence of nations that do not share this goal common goal and that directly disturb international peace through means of war, genocide, or other such actions,

APPREHENSIVELY disclosing the horrendously macabre and highly classified dossier of Milograd,

DEEPLY perturbed by the grievously unjustifiable acts committed by Miograd against its peers in the international theatre,

HORRIFIED by the prohibition of Catholicism within Milograd and the mass eradication of Catholic citizens on multiple occasions,

FURTHER HORRIFIED by Milograd's generally xenophobic policies which deliberately classify non-whites as non-human and therefore allowing these people to be hunted as if they were animals,

ABHORRING Milograd's use of VX nerve gas against protesters in the Milogradian cities of Argyz, Kremho, and various other locations, which resulted in the death of over 40,000 Milogradian citizens,

NAUSEATED by the unjust abuse of authority and poor conduct of Milograd's Resource Initiative Urban Police (RIUP), the members of which frequently rape and beat innocent civilians in order to maintain order; the RIUP often kidnaps and murders overwhelming numbers of "threats to the state,"

DISGUSTED by the delusional leader of Milograd, Dh'arco Rahavuhra Jukill, primarily for his decisions that resulted in the demise of many of the world's idyllic democracies and has intentionally stymied the progress of many democracy-advocating organizations such as the Polaris Initiative,

REGRETFULLY ACKNOWLEDGING the Milogradian invasion of the Judean lands and the poorly conducted forced migration of millions of native Trescotters which led to the deaths of thousands,

SHOCKED by the infamous genocide of Argatov, which resulted in the loss of over 80,000 innocent lives,

APPALLED by Milograd's intolerance of all ideologies not authorized by the Milogradian government in the Milogradian "Belief Authorization Act,"

ADAMANT that any nation that has committed such atrocities both domestically and internationally deserves proportional punishment,

HEREBY CONDEMNS Milograd.

A mean old man wrote:PUNCTUATION INSIDE QUOTATION.

Goobergunchia wrote:To be fair, that one's U.S.-specific. (And as a CS major, I personally think it's incredibly dumb.)

A mean old man wrote:

Goobergunchia wrote:To be fair, that one's U.S.-specific. (And as a CS major, I personally think it's incredibly dumb.)

It's all I've ever known and I've never seen anyone do it otherwise.

Unibot II wrote:Me out of protest.

It's a dumb rule.

A mean old man wrote:Better dumb rules than no rules.

A mean old man wrote:

Unibot II wrote:Me out of protest.

It's a dumb rule.

Better dumb rules than no rules.

A mean old man wrote:Whatever. You're welcome for all the edits.

Tim-Opolis wrote:No Offense Conn.

But I will be fully against. I don't like RP Proposals. Never have, never will.

Warzone Codger wrote:That's only coz you don't hang out in #the_south_pacific on IRC enough. Carta/Milo will BLOW your mind.

But umm yea, the proposal.

A mean old man wrote:Heh. I remember when I suggested RPing as a potential subject for C&Cs back in the day. People thought it was hilarious.

Unibot II wrote:No, you got laughed at for suggesting it was the only thing that should be commended or condemned .. or at-least the SC should be 'neutral' in military gameplay. I still passed the first RP C&C..sucker.

Unibot II wrote:Okay thanks Sedge *cough*.

Connopolis wrote: The Security Council,

DEDICATED to the advocation of international peace, cooperation, and harmony between all nations,

NOTING the existence of nations who do not share this goal common goal, either directly, or indirectly, by disturbing or stymieing international peace through means of war, genocide, or other such actions,

As such;

[I think this has been said enough times for people to just assume that the Security Council isn't advocating world destruction... often-times these generalized lines in the beginning annoy reader and hint to them that you're just trying to increase your character count.]

APPREHENSIVELY disclosing the horrendously macabre, yet highly classified dossier of Milograd,

[I recommend changing around the Apprehensively clause to become a introduction clause; briefly overview what you're going to talk about.. "dossier of Milograd, including religious and racial intolerance, unacceptable police policies, obstruction of democratization and many other grevious and unjustifiable acts against its peers in the international theatre," -- this way you can get rid of the next clause which is unnecessary.]

DEEPLY perturbed by the grievously unjustifiable acts committed by Miograd against its peers in the international theatre,

HORRIFIED by the prohibition of Catholicism within Milograd, and its mass eradication of Catholic citizens on multiple occasions,

FURTHER HORRIFIED by their generally xenophobic policies, deliberately classifying non-whites or asians as non-human, and are therefore are [perhaps just "thus subject to.."] subject to similar hunting laws as standard animals,

ABHORRED [I see no reason why Milograd would "abhor" the Security Council for its murder of dissenters... so perhaps a new preambulatory verb is in order] ABHORRING by Milograd's use of VX nerve gas against protesters in the Milogradian cities of Argyz, Kremho, and various other locations, subsequently resulting in the death of over 40,000 Milogradian citizens,

NAUSEATED by the unjust abuse of authority, and poor conduct of Milograds Resource Initiative Urban Police (RIUP), who frequently rape, and assault ing innocent civilians in order to maintain order; the RIUP often kidnaps, and murders "threats to the state" in overwhelming amounts [Statistics? If you can note the source too like "World Democracy Organization reports 10,000 blah blah blah],

DISGUSTED by the delusional leader of Milograd, Dh'arco Rahavuhra Jukill, primarily for his decisions that resulted in the demise of many of the world's most idyllic democracies, and has intentionally stymied the progress of many democracy advocating organizations, such as the Polaris Initiative,

REGRETFULLY ACKNOWLEDGING the Milogradian invasion of the Judean lands, and the poorly conducted forced migration of millions of native Trescotters, which led leading thousands to their deaths and others to their forced displacement,

SHOCKED by the infamous genocide of Argatov, which resulted in the loss of over 80,000 innocent lives,

APPALLED by Milograd's intolerance of all ideologies not authorized by the Milogradian government, as defined by the Milogradian "Belief Authorization Act", [what are some of these ideologies?]

ADAMANT that any nation that has committed such atrocities both domestically, and internationally deserves proportional punishment, [your asking for proportional punishment.. and your response is a piece of paper, perhaps we could at least slap MIlograd's wrist? ]

Hereby Condemns Milograd.