PotatoFarmers wrote:Took a first glance. Is it possible to explain why you chose to use the phrase "reductive or arbitrary characteristic" in clause 1? Or rather, what do you mean by it?
For the second clause, I am dissapointed that the author didn't use the opportunity to enact regulations that would help in ensuring safety of the blood donation process, especially since the title is "Blood Donation Safety and Equality Act"
The fourth clause is okay, but I think a better wording could help in improving the clarity. Right now, it is particularly mouthful and difficult to understand.
See the two above posts for the first point.