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by Candensia
Fri Dec 07, 2018 2:19 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: NationStates Issues **SPOILER ALERT**
Replies: 5210
Views: 1042452

Nicely-done, Sacara!
by Candensia
Mon Nov 26, 2018 9:43 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

And submitted.

Your feedback was invaluable, everyone. Thank you. :)
by Candensia
Mon Nov 26, 2018 9:34 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Step 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 17
Views: 399

Best wishes!
by Candensia
Sat Nov 24, 2018 1:24 pm
 
Forum: Forum 7
Topic: Democrat or Republican? You decide!
Replies: 2457
Views: 17970

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by Candensia
Sat Nov 24, 2018 12:25 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

If there aren't any loose ends to tie up, I'll be sending this one to meet its maker (or rather to await its fate) in the coming days.

Last call.
by Candensia
Fri Nov 23, 2018 7:15 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DISCARDED] Straight to the Box Office?
Replies: 10
Views: 227

The premise really, really reminds me of #1066. Not the same exact topic, to be sure, but it feels quite similar in introduction and presentation.
by Candensia
Fri Nov 23, 2018 11:31 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

I've tweaked option one to promote some variety in dialect. How're we looking now?
by Candensia
Wed Nov 21, 2018 4:49 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

I really like the current form, and I think it's a great issue, but I still think it would be good to vary the language used by some of the speakers a little. They all sound like well-informed, well-educated citizens with a good number of Greek- and Latin-derived terms in their vocabulary. Could yo...
by Candensia
Tue Nov 20, 2018 8:09 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] The Villain in Red
Replies: 22
Views: 521

Best wishes!
by Candensia
Tue Nov 20, 2018 2:44 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

Okay. Fourth draft out.

Here are some key changes.

Option 3 has been significantly reworked.

Option 3A is a variant for capitalist nations, 3B for communist nations.


Hopefully, the draft now avoids sounding repetitive in the wake of #1016.
by Candensia
Mon Nov 19, 2018 1:35 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

Additionally, I’m starting to feel as if Option 3 would work IF this issue was intended as a standalone issue, rather than one that chains off #1016.

Should I tweak the option so that it doesn’t sound like a broken record of #1016.1?
by Candensia
Mon Nov 19, 2018 11:22 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

Draft three is out, here are some key changes. Title has been changed to "Meet Your (Meth) Maker. (Tell me if those parenthesis should be removed or not) The description has been edited slightly for enhanced satire. Option 3 has been reworded to increase humor and to highlight d...
by Candensia
Sun Nov 18, 2018 2:01 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

Jutsa wrote:Got Meth?

:rofl:


Suggestion noted. I’ll keep thinking.


I’ve spruced up option two some more. Never thought I’d refer to a pharmacy as a “24-hour meth mini-mart”, but here we are.
by Candensia
Sun Nov 18, 2018 11:35 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft] The Final Straw?
Replies: 32
Views: 835

Escape my feedback? Never! While I am I, and you are you. After a rather ghastly video has been making rounds of a straw being... I think simply “made” would work better here. I like your style and wordplay, and the peppering of references throughout the draft. However, I prefer Eckie-Cola over Eck...
by Candensia
Sun Nov 18, 2018 8:22 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

Submitted.

Thank you everyone, your help was invaluable. :D
by Candensia
Sun Nov 18, 2018 8:13 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

Draft two is out!

I've reworded options one and two, they should be a bit more humorous.
I have not yet changed the title, but suggestions are appreciated.

Thank you for your continued feedback. :)
by Candensia
Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:33 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

I did some hotfixes. The order of options 2 and 3 have been swapped, and both options have been tweaked to accommodate this. I believe the narrative flows a bit better because of this.

I've also swapped the title out for something I think works better. (although I'm going to keep twisting it around)
by Candensia
Sat Nov 17, 2018 2:28 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker
Replies: 19
Views: 598

[SUBMITTED] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker

Hello GI colleagues, my latest offering is ready for peer-review. Your comments are appreciated, as always. :) First Draft [DRAFT] - Meet Your (Meth) Maker/b] [b][The Issue] - As @@NAME@@ continues to grapple with methamphetamine and its cooks, law enforcement officials have suggested limiti...
by Candensia
Fri Nov 16, 2018 8:19 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

I'm content with how this draft has developed, and shall now push it towards submission.

Last call.
by Candensia
Wed Nov 14, 2018 4:21 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Step 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 17
Views: 399

It took me a lot longer than I would’ve liked to figure out that option one is horribly misspelled (on purpose).

Darn you, brain.

I do like the odd characters present in this draft.
by Candensia
Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:57 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

Sacara wrote:I like it.

This one has the stamp of approval from me. :)


I shall add your stamp to my collection. :)

Any further comments?
by Candensia
Tue Nov 13, 2018 1:00 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

I’ve reworked option 3. It should be less confusing now.
by Candensia
Mon Nov 12, 2018 5:23 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

I like the idea. However, 'old' and 'new' get thrown out quite a bit in the new option, and I'm not sure a new company (no matter their intent) would want a name so close to the original. Personally, I think you should make it an executive from the old company forming a new company with a different...
by Candensia
Mon Nov 12, 2018 2:05 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] - Plug the Hole
Replies: 29
Views: 537

So basically, this issue is “what to do now that we have a hole in a concrete wall.” Although the topic is, truthfully, boring on first glance, you have made it a compelling discussion. Some thoughts I’d like to send your way. You mention masked protestors near/on the destroyed section of the border...
by Candensia
Mon Nov 12, 2018 11:28 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] - Side Effects
Replies: 18
Views: 483

Second draft is up!

A third option has been added.

Thank you for the continued feedback.
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