Since Tinhampton decided to not draft this on the forum for some strange reason: THE SECURITY COUNCIL: CONCERNED at how SC#126 reels off various important-sounding regional positions previously held by Sanctaria without explaining the significance of - or even summarising - any of Sanctaria's co...

#1429: The Wind Become Death The Issue Recent studies of becquerel-burdened berries have found that radioactive fallout from nuclear weapons testing in Althaniq has been carried into @@NAME@@ by transoceanic jet streams. The Debate 1. “Althaniq might be keen to join the big boys at the nuclear-capa...

1. Unsure about the category here. GA #460, where this legislation derives from (like two puzzle pieces in my opinion) is in the category as noted in the box, but there might be an Environmental category this fits in better. (Other ones that could work: Environmental-All Businesses-Strong; Regulati...

#1428: In the Bag The Issue A Bigtopian diplomatic bag was accidentally searched by customs officers, contrary to diplomatic conventions. Before the search was stopped, the bag was found to contain cocaine brownies, snortable marijuana, gold leaf toilet paper rolls, and jars of whale oil. Even thou...

Opposed. Let's not micromanage how nations can remove justices, at least not like this. I agree with others' arguments to that end. Edit: “There are issues with the proposal, such that I do not recommend submission. For a start, clause 6 is still completely arbitrary. What if the percentage is only ...

All this is going to do is waste people’s time and hold up a far better proposal.

Please send to Cretox State

1. Zwangzug S2
2. Mallorea and Riva S1
3. Bears Armed S2
4. Glen-Rhodes S2
5. Ransium S1
6. Ransium S2
7. Xoriet S2
8. McMasterdonia S2
9. Drasnia S2
10. Imperium Anglorum S1
11. The Free Joy State S1
12. Candlewhisper Archive S2

Thanks so much for doing this!

Needs more fluff and actual accomplishments (yes, I have those).

Also I like the "cold" opening, but for some reason feel the "cool down" is in direct opposition to "thaw chilly" and "avert... winter" which ends up causing it to lose some of it's... poetic quality? Just a note, not a nitpick. That contradictory phrasing wa...

Honeydewistania wrote:I don't want to do the 'culturally significant' thing again because that's basically the same 'against penny removal' option from 'Brother, Can You Spare a Dime?', so it'd just be the same issue again.

Fair enough; it's up to you. I still think that the premise needs work.

Racoda wrote:I can confirm this (including Salvatore Matei being a random (male?) name).

Seems to be so. I got "Pedro Falopian."

I agree with Westinor on the premise. As I suggested to you privately, perhaps introduce the issue as the removal of pennies from circulation being well underway, but people are upset because a major historical figure’s face is on them. Just something to consider. I don't quite get the title. Is the...

Frieden-und Freudenland wrote:In short, Number #3 is your typical male dinosaur boomer who had a very easy ride in life and now pontificates about the value of education and wants to put a price on it so it can become more exclusive.

Excellent description

Reserved.

Fire another one! :D Feedback appreciated. I thought it made sense to split this into 2 issues: a capitalist and a communist version. Some questions: ⋅ Is option 4 superfluous? ⋅ Does it make sense to have this as 2 issues? ⋅ Does option 3 make sense in each version? Go...

I agree with Electrum; there's definitely potential here and more options are warranted. The writing should also be cleaned up a bit (e.g., "Foreign Relations" shouldn't be capitalized and it doesn't make sense to say something will "increase" foreign relations).

This isn't ready for submission or last call. I highly recommend implementing Atlae's edits just so the draft is more readable. I think that local customs atrophying in the face of increasing globalization could make for an interesting premise. However, the way this draft handles its premise just do...

I like it. My only critique is that the opening could do a better job of establishing why declining international enrollment rates are problematic, and that option 2 seems to assume that @@NAME@@ already has some form of affirmative action in place.

I concur. This premise just doesn't work on a logical level.

Okay, bear with me here because I'm not an expert in this field, but let me see if I've got this right. Interference is defined as such: 1. Defines "interference" as any acts intended to place or keep a labor union under the control of an employer whose workers are represented by that uni...

Erm... it's fine, I guess. Really scraping the bottom of the barrel, though.

By "a lot of," you mean 1. By "ill reasoned" and "random," you mean "he passed a resolution I don't like." "He passed a resolution I don't like" is pretty lousy grounds for a condemnation. The trick with writing one of these is to do actual research...

The Atlae Isles wrote:I don't quite get the joke in the effect line for Option 1

Unless it just means running away, in which case I was overthinking things.

It just means running away. Is the joke too basic?

Revisiting this. Made some changes.

#1427: May the Fourth Estate Be With You [Cretox State; ed: Electrum] The Issue All hail @@LEADER@@! As the nation enters yet another period of unbounded success, your infinitely dedicated and even more competently selected advisors are working hard to further consolidate your power, with counsel o...