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by Snoodum
Wed Aug 14, 2019 6:04 am
 
Forum: Trading Cards
Topic: Common and Uncommon cards for sale!
Replies: 0
Views: 102

Common and Uncommon cards for sale!

Below are the links. If you have any questions, just telegram me! Thanks for your time. https://www.nationstates.net/page=deck/card=2588879/season=1 https://www.nationstates.net/page=deck/card=2578972/season=1 https://www.nationstates.net/page=deck/card=2574701/season=1 https://www.nationstates.net...
by Snoodum
Wed Aug 14, 2019 5:14 am
 
Forum: General
Topic: Should parents be able to track their children?
Replies: 137
Views: 1580

Alright, I just read the top post and the title of the article linked. Those children should put the trackers on stray cats and dogs. The tracking of children should be illegal (by their parents at least). Reading further down in the article is sickening. There should not be a market for this. No on...
by Snoodum
Wed Aug 14, 2019 4:54 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Well it's certainly an American issue. I'll go some research and get back to you on whether it's more widespread. It would be a lot to ask a doctor to know exactly what each drug does especially when it's been marketed as safe by the drug companies, then again, what do I know? Okay, scratch that, i...
by Snoodum
Wed Aug 14, 2019 4:23 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Rest assured, this draft shows promise. However, it's not quite there yet. Before I get to the suggestions provided below, the first point of order is a request to change the current title. While allusions to Gollum may be visually evocative, my personal opinion is that it's in somewhat poor taste ...
by Snoodum
Sun Aug 11, 2019 6:12 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

I'll explain it here and add it later. The drug is prescription only. It has been marketed as a drug to help with moderate pain (and more intense pain too). Pharmacists and doctors prescribe the drug based on the fact that their patients say they are in moderate pain. Like in America and probably i...
by Snoodum
Sun Aug 11, 2019 5:00 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Is it over the counter or prescription only? If the former, maybe it should be prescription only. If the later, how are all these people getting prescriptions? I'll explain it here and add it later. The drug is prescription only. It has been marketed as a drug to help with moderate pain (and more i...
by Snoodum
Sat Aug 10, 2019 4:51 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Australian rePublic wrote:I've read the entire issue and am still not sure if drug is medicinal or recreational

I've added it to the description of the third draft.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 9:28 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Sorry to be blunt but how about you just give me a brief run-down of how to structure it/tell it. I thought it worked fine but evidently, what do I know? By the way, I would appreciate it if you gave constructive criticism in future. It doesn't seem too much to ask and it would help speed up the wh...
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 9:05 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Second draft is up!
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 8:38 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Candensia wrote:I’d be careful about overlap with #284 and #597.

I'll check them out and make appropriate changes.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 8:26 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

I've made a change to the description that I think works. The rest of the isssue remains the same as I feel it still fits.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 8:15 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

Sorry to be blunt but how about you just give me a brief run-down of how to structure it/tell it. I thought it worked fine but evidently, what do I know? First and foremost, the narrative setup is lacking. A reader should know what the issue is going to be about by the time they are done reading th...
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 8:06 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

This issue fails on many, many levels. I suggest a good read of the How To thread: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=424657 This will help you identify a better way to structure and tell this story. Sorry to be blunt but how about you just give me a brief run-down of how to st...
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 7:32 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft]My Preciouss!
Replies: 20
Views: 541

[Draft]My Preciouss!

This is trying to confront nations with what they would do if the US opiate Crisis hit their nation. Thank you for any feedback. I have changed the name to 'Painless but hurtful' after some very sound advice. Description: After a brief walk down the street to enjoy the sights and smells of @@CAPITAL...
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:34 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: The Writers' Block
Replies: 5841
Views: 335938

Australian rePublic wrote:
Snoodum wrote:I was thinking about writing an issue based on the opiate crisis in the US. Any thoughts?

Don't be too America-centric

I'll try my best not to.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:28 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: The Writers' Block
Replies: 5841
Views: 335938

I was thinking about writing an issue based on the opiate crisis in the US. Any thoughts?
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 4:57 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Abandoned]Water sanitation...abroad?
Replies: 5
Views: 159

Australian rePublic wrote:We have plenty of issues about foreign aid

Oh. I guess i was thinking more specifically about water shortages. I'll need to adjust that thinking in future. Thank you. I'll close this.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 4:26 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Abandoned]Water sanitation...abroad?
Replies: 5
Views: 159

Mzeusia wrote:I don't know anything about parasitic worms, but you know that the water purification tablet would help?

Oh! Thank you. They wouldn't! I'll obviosuly change it.
by Snoodum
Fri Aug 09, 2019 4:12 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Abandoned]Water sanitation...abroad?
Replies: 5
Views: 159

[Abandoned]Water sanitation...abroad?

Validity: Invalid for nations that don't have poor economies or foreign aid spending (I might do one for richer nations where it is a more localised problem) Description: After an outbreak of Maxtopian parasitic worms spread uncontested in Maxtopia, the international @@REGION@@ community has asked ...
by Snoodum
Tue Jul 23, 2019 12:25 pm
 
Forum: General
Topic: UK Politics Thread X: Boris' Big Bonkers Brexit Bash
Replies: 12063
Views: 143073

Maybe the Lib Dems can do something.

Clegg is still sorry guys.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUDjRZ30SNo
by Snoodum
Sat Jul 06, 2019 3:44 am
 
Forum: NationStates
Topic: Snoodum-Mzeusia ONLY RP [COMPLETED]
Replies: 18
Views: 646

John Sinistrum cracked his knuckles. ‘Well done, Miss Appletine will face Mzeusian justice somewhere though you two have done a great job. The East Lebuk authorities are running an investigation. Your tracks are covered so nothing's coming back here and that’s down to you not going too hot. Sure, th...
by Snoodum
Fri Jul 05, 2019 9:38 am
 
Forum: NationStates
Topic: Snoodum-Mzeusia ONLY RP [COMPLETED]
Replies: 18
Views: 646

Thomas spotted the name of the alley they were supposed to park in and swerved out of the traffic. Someone had been cutting the dimensions a bit fine as the car’s wing mirrors exploded in showers of glass and twisting metal. The car grinded against the brickwork on either side, sparks flying. Thomas...
by Snoodum
Fri Jul 05, 2019 6:54 am
 
Forum: NationStates
Topic: Snoodum-Mzeusia ONLY RP [COMPLETED]
Replies: 18
Views: 646

Portinum’s legs pumped hard as the bike picked up speed. Soon he could see the city's tower blocks coming into view. He cycled harder, thinking of how he would steal a car. He flexed his left hand, the tiny motor whirring in response. He smiled as he entered the city, an idea forming in his head. Th...
by Snoodum
Mon Jul 01, 2019 5:06 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [ABANDONED]Nuclear...what exactly?
Replies: 3
Views: 185

Description: Following the introduction of nuclear power to @@NAME@@, many have felt rather unstable about the whole situation.It's got to the point that a meeting has been called in your office. This isn't a sufficient cause to trigger an issue. "Some people are griping about this" will ...
by Snoodum
Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:53 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [ABANDONED]Nuclear...what exactly?
Replies: 3
Views: 185

[ABANDONED]Nuclear...what exactly?

I'd appreciate feedback as this is my first issue draft. Thank you! Valditiy: Invalid for nations that don't have nuclear power. Description: Following the introduction of nuclear power to @@NAME@@, many have felt rather unstable about the whole situation.It's got to the point that a meeting has be...
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