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by Sacara
Tue Nov 10, 2020 11:57 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: NationStates Issues **SPOILER ALERT**
Replies: 6962
Views: 1386224

New issue I got on my main nation. I don't think either of the names (Deloris May and Angela Night) are random because I couldn't find them in the @@RANDOMNAME@@ list. Other custom fields were replaced with their respective macros. Edit: forgot the option numbers. Internal numbering is 0, 1, 2, 3 s...
by Sacara
Mon Nov 09, 2020 10:05 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Necrocracy the Future of Democracy?
Replies: 20
Views: 764

Love the premise and title of this issue! Here are some suggestions to improve the draft: [description] The recent election for the mayor of @@CAPITAL@@ was a tough competition between young political newcomer @@RANDOMNAME_1@@, and geriatric lifetime politician @@RANDOMNAME_2@@. @@RANDOMNAME_2@@ won...
by Sacara
Mon Aug 03, 2020 11:40 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Explosive Conflict
Replies: 17
Views: 377

But really, my main issue is with the premise. It doesn't really feel like it does a good enough job establishing why we should care - especially as the first option is a humanitarian one and not a military one. It all feels very off kilter to me. Agree with Drasnia , here. I don't think this is so...
by Sacara
Wed Jul 22, 2020 12:55 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Meat Meet
Replies: 36
Views: 1239

I really like this issue, Fauxia. :) Meat Meet would be a fun title, and I love Option 1's effect line. ;)
by Sacara
Mon Jul 20, 2020 9:30 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: The Pentuple Contest: Anything-But-Pandemics
Replies: 221
Views: 16638

Congrats to each of the editors who had their drafts in the top ten! Unfortunately, I didn't submit any drafts into the contest. I can't wait to see the new editors!
by Sacara
Wed Feb 05, 2020 1:37 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Having Faith In Communism
Replies: 37
Views: 1805

I take back what I said about the issue encroaching on player autonomy, as there is precedent for it. Issue #451, A Proselyte to Burn, also assumes a lot about @@RELIGION@@'s sacred text.
by Sacara
Sun Jan 19, 2020 9:42 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] A Minor Political Problem
Replies: 20
Views: 727

Also feel this one is nearing the submission point. Going to leave up for a few more days to get feedback, though.
by Sacara
Sun Jan 19, 2020 9:39 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Flushing Away the Forest
Replies: 28
Views: 969

I like this one. It's got a good mix of humor (very appropriate to the topic) and does a good job at pinpointing the issue of toilet paper sustainability. Thanks! I made a few small edits to the options, nothing major. I think this one is getting ready, but I'll leave it up for a few more days to c...
by Sacara
Sun Jan 19, 2020 9:48 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Having Faith In Communism
Replies: 37
Views: 1805

The teachings of @@FAITH@@ say riches are evil and that all men should help one another, and I think there's something about seizing the means of production in there, too, probably. I believe the quoted lines are in violation of player autonomy. @@FAITH@@ is a religion chosen by the player, so it c...
by Sacara
Tue Jan 14, 2020 9:45 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] A Dilapidated Dilemma
Replies: 5
Views: 369

[DRAFT] A Dilapidated Dilemma

This was a fun one. The original draft was posted in September 2017 by Austerlitsch . While going back through old posts, I stumbled upon it and thought it had some real potential, so I telegrammed Austerlitsch and asked if I could do some work on it, to which he said yes and gave me control over th...
by Sacara
Tue Jan 14, 2020 7:34 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [LAST CALL] @@NAME@@s Got Horror?
Replies: 32
Views: 1828

Title Suggestions:
  • Keep Calm and Spook On
  • Handle With Scare
  • No Guts, No Gory
by Sacara
Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:24 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [LAST CALL] @@NAME@@s Got Horror?
Replies: 32
Views: 1828

Description: Extreme haunted houses have become a thrill-seekers joy ride throughout @@name@@. However, when multiple reports come in of people experiencing heart attacks, physical injuries, mental impairment, and even death through these amusement tours, moral principles come into question. You ad...
by Sacara
Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:15 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Ahh! Sweet Unicameralism!
Replies: 24
Views: 1229

Just throwing in my two cents here: I think if you take some of Jutsa's suggestions it would make this a stronger issue. I agree that as it stands it just feels like a "You just did x, do you want to keep it?" sort of draft.
by Sacara
Mon Jan 13, 2020 1:58 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Curb Your CARbon
Replies: 20
Views: 758

While I totally see where you're coming from Kaschovia, I must agree with Sacara that the dilemma of this issue is too plain and unoriginal; hence why it overlaps with Issue #002 a bit, even with the compromise option. With so many issues that ban automobiles already, you're going to have to be a l...
by Sacara
Mon Jan 13, 2020 9:46 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Curb Your CARbon
Replies: 20
Views: 758

There are already thirteen issues in the game which ban bars, per Trotterdam's website. Also, this issue feels quite similar to #002: Reclaim the Streets! The overlap seems too strong. While this is a competent draft, this whole thing just feels... uninspiring. On top of the overlap, this draft does...
by Sacara
Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:24 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] - Gonna Take My Hearse To The Old Town Road
Replies: 13
Views: 774

I don't quite get option four, how do you just get more embalming fluid? I think it just clutters the draft a bit, and I think you could probably just remove it (and the corresponding reference in the intro). You could also add a little more beef to each of your options, too.
by Sacara
Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:20 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] A Minor Political Problem
Replies: 20
Views: 727

There's at least one existing issue that lets you give children the right to vote, and IIRC the right to stand for election. Maybe if you've done that, and it's tracked, this should influence the situation? At the very least, perhaps candidates who are children should be able to receive donations f...
by Sacara
Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:08 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Naked Philanthropy
Replies: 5
Views: 256

[DRAFT] Naked Philanthropy

Inspired by true events. I could use help on the effect lines for options one and three. [ Name ] Naked Philanthropy [ Desc ] Following a deadly outbreak of tornados in southern @@NAME@@, an adult film actress Cinnamon Twist fundraised thousands of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ to give to the areas in need in...
by Sacara
Sun Jan 12, 2020 1:20 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Flushing Away the Forest
Replies: 28
Views: 969

List of changes I've made in my next version of the draft ⋅ Completely changed option three from getting rid of toilet paper to install bidets everywhere ⋅ Edited option one for clarity of what the speaker is asking for, edited effect line ⋅ Edited option two slightly f...
by Sacara
Sat Jan 11, 2020 10:27 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: NS Stats - Trends, Correlations, Anti-Correlations, Oh My!
Replies: 194
Views: 14245

I think it would neat to see Public Education vs Intelligence. :)
by Sacara
Sat Jan 11, 2020 11:59 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Between A Rock And A Hard Space
Replies: 23
Views: 841

Upon closer inspection, I think it would be better to switch options one and two around to make it flow a little better. I do like the two option dilemma presented here. Also, I think if you add something along the lines of @@LEADER@@ giving a speech to the public about the astronauts to the rationa...
by Sacara
Fri Jan 10, 2020 10:36 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] The Price of Fine Farming
Replies: 18
Views: 740

I'd have to agree with Trotterdam. Whether or not having less cattle would actually decrease methane amounts, it seems like it would, at least to me anyway, and I would guess to the average reader as well. Along with that, CWA's draft is about this same topic, though just because someone has a simil...
by Sacara
Fri Jan 10, 2020 10:29 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [Draft] Is there a time and a place for this nation?
Replies: 23
Views: 806

The premise of your draft is a referendum in one of Brancaland's provinces is not being respected by their central government, and people from both sides are coming to @@LEADER@@'s office asking for support. The premise of 808 is one of Daguo's province is being rebellious and is attempting to break...
by Sacara
Fri Jan 10, 2020 10:07 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Sweeping the Competition
Replies: 21
Views: 685

I like this draft, particularly option 3. The only thing I have is this doesn't need to be a five option issue, imo. The way to fix this is combining option one and two, as there really isn't a difference between them. Option one says the organizers just clean it up, while option two is a fine + tho...
by Sacara
Fri Jan 10, 2020 10:00 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Between A Rock And A Hard Space
Replies: 23
Views: 841

[DESC] After space debris blew a hole in the side of @@NAME@@ prized space station, several astronauts, including @@RANDOMNAME@@, @@NAME@@'s most famous astronaut, are believed to be aboard the station in the airlocked safe room, with their condition currently unknown. After public outcry to immedi...
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