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by Westinor
Mon Sep 28, 2020 7:23 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: The Writers' Block
Replies: 6768
Views: 399210

Is there an issue that reinstates the upper house/abolishes the lower house? Not as of yet, no. Unless abolishing the lower house includes the abolishment of the entire legislature. Exclusively the lower house but not the upper house? Sounds vaguely familiar but I can’t recall. Take a look at the i...
by Westinor
Sun Sep 27, 2020 11:04 pm
 
Forum: Vault 41
Topic: Augustin Alliance
Replies: 25
Views: 760

Congratulations and well-played! GG
by Westinor
Sat Sep 26, 2020 12:58 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: NationStates Issues **SPOILER ALERT**
Replies: 6628
Views: 1290756

#1371:@@NATION@@ Rocked by Rolls’ Fatal Role The Issue A low-level bureaucrat was recently found murdered after rejecting a retired homeowner’s request for a construction permit. During the subsequent court case, the homeowner admitted that he found their address in the public voter rolls, which ha...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 26, 2020 11:48 am
 
Forum: Moderation
Topic: [Report] "Move, Merge, Gravedig, or Lock" MegaThread
Replies: 4764
Views: 221400

viewtopic.php?p=37698349#p37698349

Unsure if this is an adbot or something else but a gravedig nonetheless
by Westinor
Tue Sep 22, 2020 9:38 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Corruption Paired with Expensive Gifts... Oh My!
Replies: 10
Views: 233

Some things I'd note in your description: As a result, a decision needs to be made now regarding adverts promoting luxury goods. This is a redundant sentence, and you could do without it. Furthermore, I don't see how the rest of the description relates to adverts promoting luxury goods. It seems to ...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 19, 2020 9:57 pm
 
Forum: Technical
Topic: Issue Author not listed
Replies: 3
Views: 233

Zwangzug wrote:I...don't believe this nation has authored any issues that have been published, to date?!

(They have one in the top ten of the recent contest and another in the long list of candidates, so don't be surprised if you see one by them published soon. But not as of this moment.)


Yep, that’s right
by Westinor
Wed Sep 16, 2020 9:09 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Push Polling
Replies: 7
Views: 355

I like the issue draft overall! Great humor, and nice premise. The description seemed extremely familiar to me, might've been an issue draft I read in the past but I'm not quite certain. We're just tryin' ta help, is all I'd suggest adding an apostrophe after the "ta"s in this option. anyo...
by Westinor
Tue Sep 15, 2020 2:53 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Fish Out Of Water
Replies: 32
Views: 826

Updated the first option - the wording still feels a bit strange. I'll probably take a look at that later - otherwise, barring any other concerns, I'm looking to move this up to last call soon! :p
by Westinor
Tue Sep 15, 2020 2:50 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] I Saw Three Ships
Replies: 49
Views: 1323

The draft has been updated and changed to a conflict between Marche Noire and Marche Blanche - I couldn't find very many descriptors for Marche Blanche and how their citizens act, so this is what I'm going with for now. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated, particularly on these sections: "...
by Westinor
Mon Sep 14, 2020 6:38 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: A List of Characters and Companies in Issues
Replies: 24
Views: 992

Updated the family section a bit, will get to companies next chance I get. The descriptions might not be super in-detail or accurate, if anything incorrect is spotted please let me know and I will fix it :p EDIT: Oh, also it'd be nice if CWA could link this here for accessibility! Sure, the previou...
by Westinor
Sun Sep 13, 2020 11:54 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: The Pentuple Contest: Anything-But-Pandemics
Replies: 220
Views: 14067

Sedgistan wrote:On which note...

It's taken a while to sort, but I'd like to announce Noahs Second Country as the second (wahay!) new Issues Editor to join the team from this contest!


Congrats Noah!
by Westinor
Sat Sep 12, 2020 11:25 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [SUBMITTED] On the Right Track
Replies: 41
Views: 2478

Unfortunate to see this end this way, but this was definitely a fun project to work on and I hope that when everyone is ready again (or whoever else may be up for it) that we try again! (Wow, that was a confusing sentence, but you get the sentiment) Honestly, we've genuinely worked the best we could...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 12, 2020 8:45 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Please don't go, H2O
Replies: 3
Views: 142

Seems a bit similar to Issue #264 in premise to me. I'd also note that we usually use @@NAME@@ instead of @@NATION@@ for the name of the player's nation, and it's a player autonomy breach to assume south @@NAME@@ is a desert. Finally, please note that effect lines should not be capitalised or end in...
by Westinor
Fri Sep 11, 2020 8:19 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [MEGATHREAD] Unusual Issue Effects
Replies: 2995
Views: 174379

Nation: Insaafistan Date: 11th Sept 2020 Issue: #193 (Robots leaving workers jobless) Unusual effect: i thought banning automation would boost my employment but it actually decreased it, albeit very slightly. i guess it could be cos certain businesses could no longer stay afloat due to increased pr...
by Westinor
Thu Sep 10, 2020 8:17 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: A List of Characters and Companies in Issues
Replies: 24
Views: 992

Thanks! :p

Chan Island wrote:Though I am disappointed that you didn't mention Muhammad Lee, Muhammad Lee and their friend, Muhammad Lee.


I.. didn't? :blink: It appears I only included two of them. Fixed that!
by Westinor
Wed Sep 09, 2020 11:30 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: A List of Characters and Companies in Issues
Replies: 24
Views: 992

The list has been updated to the most recent issue (thanks Val and Jutsa! :3) and I'm currently working on formatting plus adding descriptions to recurring characters and companies. The newest additions to the list for characters and companies have been formatted and given descriptions, and I'll be ...
by Westinor
Wed Sep 09, 2020 7:08 am
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [LAST CALL] Putting The 'E' In Democracy
Replies: 27
Views: 738

Not many readers would get 'noel tusk', if you mean Elon musk. Put something a little closer, like Melon Husk. I think Noel Tusk should be fine. I used the same reference in another draft that's already submitted, and everyone commenting there seemed to get it. As such, I see nothing wrong with kee...
by Westinor
Tue Sep 08, 2020 8:51 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Fish Out Of Water
Replies: 32
Views: 826

Fauxia wrote:The description and options are quite fat right now. I didn’t know fish was so filling, but perhaps you could get them liposuction.


Cut it down a bit - let me know if it looks better!
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 7:12 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Royal Rage
Replies: 24
Views: 788

Yep, something like that! It might be a bit more humorous if you were more specific. I'll see if I can come up with something, but if not, I'll leave it at this. Thank you for all your feedback though! It was a huge help :) Actually, hold on. I think it's fine, considering you detail it in the firs...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 4:14 pm
 
Forum: Technical
Topic: [suggestion] link issues with policies/stats
Replies: 10
Views: 349

It's probably been repeated above, but I'd like to make it clear here. The link provided is the correct source to link issues that have discrepancies, such as if you've banned computers but receive an issue that includes computers. However, many of the examples you listed above, like the religious s...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 2:56 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] I Saw Three Ships
Replies: 49
Views: 1323

"After all, isn't that what allies are for?" I've been thinking about this line, and I am unsure whether it should be worded this way, given that you state in the premise "United Federation, your loose ally". Perhaps you could instead go for a line saying something along the lin...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 2:49 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Royal Rage
Replies: 24
Views: 788

Westinor wrote: That makes sense, mistake on my part, mostly due to my style of diction. I like to use "however" as a transition even if the contradiction is not obviously clear when I speak or write. A better suggestion probably would've been just removing the "as" and changing...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 2:41 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] I Saw Three Ships
Replies: 49
Views: 1323

Small modifications to options 2 and 3 - feedback and suggestions would be appreciated!
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 2:27 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Fish Out Of Water
Replies: 32
Views: 826

high trout-fishing industry(?) Perhaps not a high trout-fishing industry. Maybe you could put it down like "must not have below moderate trout-fishing industry" or even more simply "must not have low trout-fishing industry". Changed validity to 'large discrepancy between agricul...
by Westinor
Sat Sep 05, 2020 2:18 pm
 
Forum: Got Issues?
Topic: [DRAFT] Royal Rage
Replies: 24
Views: 788

Westinor wrote: I think the transition at the beginning of this sentence is a bit confusing. I think "However, it turns out many..." would probably work better. Also, maybe a different word for "royalty" would make sense here, seeing as their obsession is with the couple moreso ...
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