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by Widowed Land
Mon Apr 29, 2019 9:22 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

"Chief Delegate of Widowed Land to WA agrees to leave only "physical and health care" in the subclause to avoid duplicating already implemented resolution, but also disagrees that wording of the first clause should be changed. "Improved by implementing following requirements"...
by Widowed Land
Sat Apr 27, 2019 12:44 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: The Nox is the official co-author of the draft and presented me new form.
by Widowed Land
Sun Apr 21, 2019 9:04 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: This is the most unnecessary thing to fight over. Someone said that clause needs new wording, I think it is okay as it is. I just asked how would that person like to put the clause for me to consider about it. So far I did the most job about the proposal, although I acknowledge others part in i...
by Widowed Land
Sun Apr 21, 2019 2:22 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: Suggest how should I put that OOC: Remind me who's writing this proposal? If you want more people to write your own proposal for you, you'll probably have to waive your 'no more co-authors' statement. :p But jokes aside, you could write 'prisoners' for one and 'convicted prisoners' for the oth...
by Widowed Land
Sun Apr 21, 2019 10:45 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

Kenmoria wrote:(OOC: That currently isn’t reflected in the proposal. Although what you say does make sense, the legislative text only says that all prisoners must be offered practical subjects, regardless of whether they are convicted.)


OOC: Suggest how should I put that
by Widowed Land
Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:17 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC Bearing in mind that the current wording refers simply to "prisoners", are this proposal's clauses about education and therapy supposed to apply even to people who are currently imprisoned only because they're awaiting trial? OOC: clauses like infrastructure improvement and worker qua...
by Widowed Land
Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:49 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] LAWS Monitoring Act
Replies: 90
Views: 1883

Danlina wrote:I’m just trying out a winning MUN legislation of mine to see if this game is even suitable for practicing diplomacy.


OOC: hah ^_^ I did the same(not 100% copy of MUN resolution, but some clauses were copied) But nobody liked it so I had to rewrite it...
by Widowed Land
Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:23 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: I think preamble has no active subclauses anymore... So yea. Resolution says about overcrowding and infrastructure that if problem is significant in individual nations(and then operative clause), so I don't see problem for nations which don't have such issues to be unhappy with the clause.
by Widowed Land
Sat Apr 20, 2019 2:06 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

The infrastructure and overcrowding bits still need to be removed. Rehabilitation isn't hinged on either and they're just confusing leftovers, now. Also, right now you have mixed preamble and active clauses in your preamble. Don't do that. Also, not even every SCHOOL offers every subject possible, ...
by Widowed Land
Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:40 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: I wonder how many puppets he has....I had many puppets but after usage of them eventually shrinks, they usually cease to exist.
by Widowed Land
Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:22 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: I think I addressed every problem that Kenmoria and East Meranopirus presented. Except for private prison stuff, where I kinda don't have an answer... *Screams internally help*
by Widowed Land
Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:02 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

"This whole discussion simply shown how utterly pathetic, ineffective and weak the General Assembly is in dealing with even their most basic function, and even on top of the draft presented is simply blatant violation of human rights, national security and sovereignty, seeking to only bring ch...
by Widowed Land
Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:20 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: Okay, I think I fixed everything you said up there. But what are you thoughts on the resolution(rather than grammar and many typos). Are you finally okay with it now that furloughs are removed? or you have some other thoughts...
by Widowed Land
Fri Apr 19, 2019 5:34 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: I had school, the highschool club(I am the leader), bla bla bla... Finally home to upload new and arguably improved version of the resolution. Check it out, like it, hate it, criticize it, improve it, debate me one on one on the ring bros... You know what you should do... Waiting for your respo...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 3:12 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: withdrawing, improving, and resubmitting is *never* a waste of time. Seriously, listen to Wrapper. While I personally disagree with much in this proposal ( not going into that now as those points have been argued to death by others already ), you appear to now have a good ally in this. Don’t t...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:59 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

OOC: All the grammar mistakes have been edited. at least those I found during 2 AM. Okay, I will withdraw it(even if it is so hard to click that delete button), for the greater insurance that you'll use stamps and spread the word(again). Oh and co-author should submit his initiative tomorrow as prom...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:38 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

Imperium Anglorum wrote:Stamps take zero time.


OOC: stamps take money... right?

oh and congratulations, your proposal will soon reach the quorum I see.
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:29 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

Changing to non-mod account, because reasons. Dude..... You know have much energy have I lost MANUALLY sending hundreds of telegrams. And aside from this forum, people really compliment my resolution(and they have read it.) So I will not rely only on reviews on this forum. I get enough amounts of p...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:09 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

Is your goal to get something to vote, or to get something to pass? If merely the former, I just might start a counter-campaign in fifteen minutes. I have the stamps to do so. And, if it’s still in queue after that, I’m sure the major delegates will take notice of the internal contradictions and wi...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:05 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

damn, i noticed that yesterday..... Well 82 delegates didn't notice it... (OOC: That was my point. 6% of delegates to approve a proposal just requires getting the support of less than one in fifteen people. Succeeding in vote requires over one in two people to approve your idea, so people will noti...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:02 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

(OOC: This will fail at vote; I can almost guarantee it. There are just far too many internal contradictions and nonsensical clauses for this to gain the approval of voting blocs or experienced players. Getting something to quorum requires only 6% of delegates to approve and, though it does show th...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:58 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

Wrapper wrote:OOC:
Kenmoria wrote:This will fail at vote; I can almost guarantee it.

Agreed. Here’s just one “oops” that will ensure defeat:
Mandates to let the detainee out of a prison for one day
2.) During three days release


damn, i noticed that yesterday..... Well 82 delegates didn't notice it...
by Widowed Land
Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:04 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Improving rehabilitation of prisoners
Replies: 292
Views: 4932

You say that wording is wrong but I legit got few telegrams saying how WA proposals are always written in hardly understandable words and how this one is just simple... so you know, for you its bad, for someone else its wonderful. I am will not scream out how much of a good job I did(even if I did) ...
by Widowed Land
Wed Apr 17, 2019 5:11 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [Draft] Repeal of "Rights and duties of WA states"
Replies: 19
Views: 384

Marxist Germany wrote:
Widowed Land wrote:
OOC: omg, it was you? sorry, i thought it was other nation, which i don't like much. Not sleeping didn't do much good. Sorry again, it wasn't for you.

OOC:Excuses.



OOc: not excuses, it was meant for you.
by Widowed Land
Tue Apr 16, 2019 4:10 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [Draft] Repeal of "Rights and duties of WA states"
Replies: 19
Views: 384

OOC: you in the first place cannot speak of the garbage. And mind your own business. OOC: Can. Am. I've seen probably thousands of drafts. I am eminently qualified to judge them as garbage. No. OOC: omg, it was you? sorry, i thought it was other nation, which i don't like much. Not sleeping didn't ...
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