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by Kenmoria
Fri Sep 18, 2020 2:16 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: DRAFT: Homeschooling Regulations
Replies: 21
Views: 638

“Is clause 2 intended to require homeschooling tutors, such as parents, to provide these materials, or to require member states to provide these materials? Also, your current definition of ‘student’ includes adults taking online courses, which should probably be fixed.”
by Kenmoria
Thu Sep 17, 2020 8:53 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Upholding Journalistic Freedom in Wartime
Replies: 42
Views: 1066

"Small, possibly unneeded feedback: I’d put a colon after the Hereby instead of a comma." “I’ve gone with a comma, since colons should technically only fall after what could otherwise be a complete sentence. This isn’t always true, especially in a legal context, but is the style I was tau...
by Kenmoria
Thu Sep 17, 2020 12:03 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [QUORUM] Pedagogical Freedom
Replies: 16
Views: 599

“I’m not sure that I can support this. Although the idea looks good in theory, I don’t see how this could work in actuality, due to the concerns raised by the delegation from Attempted Socialism. I do acknowledge clause d as a potential counterargument, but feel that this serves to complicate the ma...
by Kenmoria
Wed Sep 16, 2020 3:33 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [AT VOTE] Commercial Arbitration Recognition
Replies: 38
Views: 1276

“This seems like a well-worded and effectively-crafted piece of legislation. As such, I have voted in favour.” "Honestly, the blatant cronyism on display here is nothing short of appalling. How this resolution's gotten so much support is beyond me.The very idea of giving control of legal arbitr...
by Kenmoria
Wed Sep 16, 2020 8:32 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] REAL ESTATE LEGAL REFORM
Replies: 3
Views: 166

“Perhaps this is because real estate in Kenmoria mostly consists of buying different levels of housing in corporate compounds, but I’m not quite sure on the purpose of this. How does preventing people from buying real estate in certain areas increase affordability?” But moreover, is there any basis ...
by Kenmoria
Tue Sep 15, 2020 8:55 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [SUBMITTED] Safe Transport Of Radioactive Substances
Replies: 14
Views: 360

I really like this, I think it is well worded and well thought out. I can see where people are coming from about the backlash that animals are not included in the first clause but honestly don't see the need. If we are safely transporting radioactive materials for humans than it is most likely Safe...
by Kenmoria
Tue Sep 15, 2020 8:53 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [Draft] Reasonable Self-Defence Act
Replies: 159
Views: 5437

“Ah yes, I remember this one. Clause 3 should have ‘basic act of reasonable self defence’ rather than ‘basic act of self defence’, in order to use your definition.”
by Kenmoria
Tue Sep 15, 2020 8:45 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DEFEATED] Repeal GA#495 "SaVing the Humanities"
Replies: 42
Views: 1719

2. Talking about uranium mines in a education bill. You’re being irrelevant about the bill at hand. (OOC: That was the basis of the criticism levied at the target proposal. A clause in the target had a debatable impact on all instances of GAO funding, including uranium mines, which clearly should h...
by Kenmoria
Sun Sep 13, 2020 11:50 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [LAST CALL] Preventing Unprovoked Use of WMDs
Replies: 87
Views: 2843

“What’s clause 2-2 intended to represent in terms of a mandate? The protections of the proposal only apply in event of WMD warfare, so you appear to be saying the protections of the legislation don’t apply until someone does something that causes the protections to be used.”
by Kenmoria
Sun Sep 13, 2020 3:44 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: New proposal - and my first proposal
Replies: 16
Views: 367

Read the proposal rules. Your proposal can't include your own nation name in it, that's branding. Also, you almost certainly want to be more specific. Exactly what pledge? Pledge to what? Donation of how much? Prevention of what? Keeping nature vibrant how? Diverse to what level? Answering these ki...
by Kenmoria
Fri Sep 11, 2020 3:05 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Repeal "Supporting and Valuing the Humanities"
Replies: 7
Views: 231

“I believe there was a typing error with regards to the appearance of ‘s 8’ in clause 4. This is regardless a well-argued and persuasive repeal, and I have no other issues with it.” Could you clarify? (OOC: Looking back, I somehow didn’t recognise ‘s 8’ as being ‘section 8’, and assumed it was just...
by Kenmoria
Fri Sep 11, 2020 2:16 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Repeal "Supporting and Valuing the Humanities"
Replies: 7
Views: 231

“I believe there was a typing error with regards to the appearance of ‘s 8’ in clause 4. This is regardless a well-argued and persuasive repeal, and I have no other issues with it.”
by Kenmoria
Wed Sep 09, 2020 2:29 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: Repeal GAR "Restrictions on Forced Eugenics." [abandoned]
Replies: 34
Views: 1087

I give up anyway I was trying to repeal it so I could have my breeding programs and birth quotas (OOC: In that case, add an [ABANDONED] tag, or similar wording, to the thread title. Though this particular repeal didn’t work out, I urge you to stick around these forums, and possibly contribute other...
by Kenmoria
Wed Sep 09, 2020 2:27 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [LAST CALL] Preventing Unprovoked Use of WMDs
Replies: 87
Views: 2843

“Your second mandate clause appears to suggest that, once a member state has broken this legislation once, it can do so again with impunity. I suggest altering the wording to make your intent clearer. Also, number the active clauses and subclauses, for easier reading.”
by Kenmoria
Tue Sep 08, 2020 11:49 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Upholding Journalistic Freedom in Wartime
Replies: 42
Views: 1066

“Minor wording changes have been made; more feedback is always welcome.”
by Kenmoria
Tue Sep 08, 2020 8:31 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: Repeal "Marine Protection Act"
Replies: 8
Views: 279

“I think you are missing the word ‘do’ before ‘things’ in clause 2. Nevertheless, this repeal has my full support.”
by Kenmoria
Mon Sep 07, 2020 7:05 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: Innocent Passage and Open Ocean Jurisdiction [Draft]
Replies: 93
Views: 2343

OOC: If I was you, I'd try to get legality opinions on whether the following, from GA #168, would create issues with your "innocent passage through territorial waters must be allowed" concept. I'm too tired right now to puzzle that out, so I can't quite tell if the emphasized part means t...
by Kenmoria
Mon Sep 07, 2020 6:19 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Protecting the Rights of Religious Pilgrims
Replies: 42
Views: 803

OOC: Serious question for everyone, notwithstanding your personal support, how close do you all think this is to being ready to be submitted? (OOC: It’s been only two days, so I think there is still a significant amount of time this needs to go through. A lot of GA regulars probably haven’t seen th...
by Kenmoria
Sat Sep 05, 2020 11:46 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [PASSED] Marine Protection Act
Replies: 61
Views: 2054

Similar to your country, clean and safe waters are vital to the survival of my country, as fishing is a large part of my country’s economy and food source. You can just be a little bugger like me and sneak out of the World Assembly for a day before the resolution passes. That way you won't be affec...
by Kenmoria
Sat Sep 05, 2020 10:04 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: Innocent Passage and Open Ocean Jurisdiction [Draft]
Replies: 93
Views: 2343

“I can’t see the category or strength anywhere on the draft. It should be added somewhere, preferably at the top of the proposal.”
by Kenmoria
Sat Sep 05, 2020 9:04 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [DRAFT] Protecting the Rights of Religious Pilgrims
Replies: 42
Views: 803

“Clause 6a I have a few issues with, mainly because it doesn’t contain any exemptions. If a very religious ancient civilisation previously occupied the area in which a member state has recently grown, this clause could make it impossible for that member state to build virtually any large-scale build...
by Kenmoria
Fri Sep 04, 2020 2:04 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [PASSED] Marine Protection Act
Replies: 61
Views: 2054

The WA acts as if all of its members have bottomless treasuries. Every new resolution tanks the economy further. Are there any resolutions about budgets, and limiting WA actions and/or members compliance based on such? Going to have to leave if this keeps up... “Although you do what many consider a...
by Kenmoria
Fri Sep 04, 2020 6:02 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [PASSED] Marine Protection Act
Replies: 61
Views: 2054

Why invoke a committee for a purpose member nations can do themselves? (OOC: The proposal covers international waters, meaning that member states doesn’t have jurisdiction. The WA recently destroyed my safety rating with a proposal, it took a month to recover. Is this going to crush my Trout Fishin...
by Kenmoria
Thu Sep 03, 2020 3:25 pm
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: Innocent Passage and Open Ocean Jurisdiction [Draft]
Replies: 93
Views: 2343

OOC: While the question was mentioned briefly once before during the drafting, can it be assured that the current usage of 'Territorial Waters' and 'Exclusive Economic Zone' does not create a house of cards situation? (OOC: I’m not sure, but I think it might do. The rule says ‘Proposals cannot rely...
by Kenmoria
Thu Sep 03, 2020 2:53 am
 
Forum: General Assembly
Topic: [Draft] Rights of People with Disabilities
Replies: 33
Views: 1204

“With regards to the last bullet point on clause 1, it is usually the university’s decision as to whether to award financial assistance to economically-marginalised students, irrespective of disability, at least in Kenmoria. On another note, I suggest lettering your bullet points, so that they are e...
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