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Star Chronicles: Rise of the Sith Academy (OOC|OPEN)

Postby Esselman » Thu Nov 26, 2015 11:24 am

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Backstory
The year is 3653 BBY and the Sith Empire has been steadily growing stronger, awaiting the right moment to take the final grip of a complacent galaxy disillusioned by the Great Galactic War. In a location unofficially disclosed by public record, The Sith Empire has been removed from it's usual academy on Korriban to an ancient artifact station of thus far unmatched power to train the next generation of The Sith. Under the lead of Darth Karak, an elite Triad widely unmet by most, leads the new generation in search for those who can hunt down and destroy the Jedi once and for all. With remnants of the Republic under Admiral Yeal and Jedi Master Zym still vying for stability in the galaxy, Lord of the Sith Karak has other plans to displace them. On the search for an elite team of Sith able to take down tactical opponents to the Sith Empire, the Lord of the Sith has tasked Overseer Thal to take charge at the hidden academy of the sith. Located in The Foundry, an ancient base of operations for Revan's infinite empire, is the new academy able to produce plenty of practice material and eventually an army that The Triad hopes to crush the existence of Jedi throughout the entire galaxy.

The Triad
Born on the Nautolan planet of Glee Anslem, Zaa Do as he was known, was seemingly crafted to be a force user, an initially high prospect by the jedi order, it was a sith master that would take a young Zaa Do from his homeworld to Dromund Kaas. There he was to be experimented on as a non human Sith was merely out of the question at the time. Upon seeing his possible abilities ans their use he was kept alive if only by chance. In his youngling years he was put through harsh treatment to be trained as a weapon of the Sith. The worst of which was his test of resilience without a weapon against a deadly Vine Cat. The beast proved to be almost too much for Zaa, its' ferocious behavior and untameable nature had bred hunger for meat in its years released into the jungle. Clawing him directly in the face he forever scarred Zaa, a mark now seen clearly to all who meet him, the gruesome appearance being a mere result of a truly fortified Sith. Eventually killing the beast among other challenges, he would treat his training as a proving ground similar to the beast that nearly mauled him. Zaa was a dangerous Sith, killing with little sense sometimes, a reckless wonder rising through the ranks began to worry many in the Sith Empire. This was until he killed the very master that once spared him from death was slain by Zaa, in the cold of night a switch seemingly flipped in him, calming his bloodlust to an oddly serene amount. Eventually deemed as Lord Zado, he was a natural choice to lead a strike force that captured Jedi and brought them to Dromund Kaas and other planets as prisoners of war for torture or other means by the Sith. Once the power vacuum was created with the sudden death of the Emperor, Lord Zado was considered for the powerful triumvirate to unite the Sith Empire.
As a Dark Lord of the Sith he enlisted a widespread contract program that rewarded the capture of Jedi, as long as their head, and lightsaber was intact. Though he couldn't carry out the experiments his master once did, he still firmly believed that the blood of jedi must be she but they themselves could have a use as a warning to others in the galaxy that the Jedi were dead and gone.
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In a battle against Lord Xenxhar and Dyona Liv, Lord Zado's battle prowess proved to be too much amongst the numerous Sith and was killed in the process. His death encouraged the outrage of the two other Triad members, starting infighting amongst some Sith who disapproved of the Sith Empire's new course of action.

Often referred to as "Lady Bolt" in underground circles, the fiercely competitive and dangerous with force lightning Lady Xel was not one to ever be crossed. As the second member of The Triad, she rarely used brute force as a means of carrying out her orders but merely relied on the foot soldiers and droids of the seemingly limitless Sith Empire. While some have whispered of her becoming soft, the origins of Lady Xel provide another story. Born on Coruscant to a fairly wealthy family of traders, Xel rarely went without as a young child. It was her time in the Jedi Order that she was often ridiculed for being to aggressive in training, and overly emotional in many tasks asked of her. When it came time to decide if she could become a padawan, she was ultimately denied by Knights and Masters alike. This rejection sent her into a tailspin of hatred towards the order that had taken her from home and given her less than she felt deserved. Returning to her home on Coruscant she found that war had ravaged the planet, but unfortunately her home as well. With her mother dead and father nowhere to be found she retired to Nar Shaddaa where a Dark Jedi by the name of Mirk Surtu recruited her to aid in his quest of finding the Sith and joining their forces. Upon arrival on Korriban Mirk and Xel had all but fallen for each other in their short time going from planet to planet, gaining what clearances they needed for Imperial space. At the academy on Korriban they were asked if joining the Sith was truly what they wanted. If this was to be so then they would have to do the task that the Overseer of the time demanded of them. "Kill the other," they were instructed by the overseer. With ease, Mirk drew his lightsaber and seeing this initial sign of aggression so easily befalling him she too enlisted her double-bladed lightsaber. The battle was a seemingly short one, Mirk barely trying it would appear, and in this she granted him the death he silently asked for. Shortly after she killed the overseer who laughed at the death of Mirk, a poor choice for him. She was immediately taken on by a master at her source of power was evident.
As the apprentice to a new master, she studied heavily wanting to be powerful enough to slay the very jedi that dismissed her. Once a master herself she was deemed Lady Xel and was in command of the forces on a minor planet, but often moved from planet to planet. It was not until the death of the Emperor that she was chosen to be a part of The Triad. Clearly the strongest force user of the sith that were considered she and Lord Zado often began to quarrel here and there over the direction of the rising Sith Empire a battle that might not meet its' end until one of them did. A fact which they were both plainly aware of.
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Mystery and an air of misunderstanding had lead the dark lord himself to his position of power, held in the grips of The Triad. A loose coalition in the past and power hungry rule had plagued the Sith Empire in years past, but Lord Karak sought to improve it. Like many before him he began as an underling, craving both power and notoriety; a fool's gold. With such notoriety came danger and as he would come to learn, with power came those who wished to take it.
Karak began his training under Sith tutelage on Dromund Kaas, a destitute jungle favored by beasts and mandalorians, though they were one in the same. A close ally, not a friend but someone he worried less about stabbing him in the back during the heat of night was a young man named Veradun. A warrior by pure design Karak followed his lead but felt more in touch with the force than any other aspect of the dark side, Veradun would help him through their time in the academy though never all that he knew. Veradun would soon be joining the Imperial military to which Karak greatly disapproved, he suggested that the two of them form a plot to gain significant power with the Sith on Dromund Kaas. By killing their instructor they would prove that they were the future of the academy and of the Sith Empire. Veradun easily agreed to help his friend, but little did Karak know it was nothing more than a complete lie. In the still of the night as Karak approached the quarters of the instructor he was stopped by a shadowed figure, Veradun, who repelled him with the force. Rising up with a vibroblade at the ready. Veradun easily parried flinging it away. In defeat Karak began to retreat but Veradun sliced away his hand, dealing a cruel blow to a friend who would not know of his treachery until it was merely too late. In the coming week Veradun had left Dromund Kaas and Karak would remain their for two additional years before being taken on by a Master.
The trials of Karak would continue to be stressful to the future Dark Lord, encounters with Jedi, smugglers, and the Republic would give him trouble in proving himself but luck proved to be his best friend. In a small conflict on the planet of Korriban where Karak was promised the position of overseer, a struggle between his master and another sith lord killed Karak's master for which he took credit. Now a master of the Sith his rise would begin slowly, killing off important Sith while others took the fall. Now a true Dark Lord of the Sith his final plans established The Triad, a loose coalition who assured the empty throne of power over a Sith Empire eager to strike against the Jedi. With Lord Karak at the helm the now elusive Sith Lord commanded a mighty Empire, one unsure of his grip but focused on vengeance more than leadership.


Other Characters


Gender: Male
Race/Species: Human
Personality: A cold killer, he can sometimes have witty yet snarky moments
Biography: Born into a clan who trained their young as soon as possible Kemp eventually found that he along with other Mando's had very little work in the years since the Mandalorian Wars. Venturing off to the filth of Nal Hutta where he was personally hired by Kabbura the Hutt before his relocation to Nar Shaddaa. In the process he has been known to closely associate with the Hutt and rarely ever strays from this line of work, especially with the rise of the emergent Sith Empire. As with many hunters, he respects the challenge of killing his opponents but credits tend to override the honor with which he is previously accustomed too
Rank: Bounty Hunter
Appearance: Image
Fighting Style: Uses a blaster rifle but is proficient in the Echani style of hand to hand combat
Weapon: X-22 Blaster Rifle, additional scope added
Midichlorian Count: 2,500


Race/Species: Assassin/Protocol Droid
Personality: Deliberate, literal, programmed to be agreeable
Biography: HK-24, the model for which Revan built his infamous HK-47 droid, is a little used model by the Czerka Arms corporation. The use of the droid has since been defunct and little is known of the whereabouts of any models of the same nature, although future makes have been implemented since the dawn of this model. Most HK units serve either the Hutt cartel, Exchange, or Sith Empire due to their innate personalities and overall function.
Appearance: Image
Fighting Style: A ranged fighter, prefers surprise assaults
Weapon: Czerka modified Blaster Rifle




Basic Premise
You will be a force wielding member in the Sith Order, trying to crawl your way to the top of the food chain or being a faithful member of The Sith Empire, your decisions to work together or step on your enemies and allies will ultimately decide your fate. There is an overarching main plot to the story but there are of course alternate and side stories going on both between your characters and the NPC's that I control. Those who apply as Jedi will lead a role almost entirely of what they make it, within reason, and will eventually come into conflict with other dark side players. No Bounty Hunters, Soldiers/Officers, or Smugglers in this RP as main characters. You are all limited to TWO characters at max as of now, anymore is a bit much for the focus I'd like in this RP as of now.


RULES
1) No meta gaming.
2) No god modding.
3) No one-liners, at least a paragraph.
4) Original Characters
5) After 13 days without response through either TG or OOC/IC post your character will die
6) Three broken rules and you're OUT
7) Follow the application to be ACCEPTED
8) Have Fun

Application
Character Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race/Species:
Personality:
Biography:(At least a paragraph.)
Rank:(Warrior, Inquisitor, Apprentice)
Appearance:(Picture preferred or detailed description.)
Fighting Style:
Light saber:(Image or detailed Description.)
Midichlorian Count: (10,000 - 15,000)
Strongest Force Abilities:(Choose 2 or Less)
DO NOT REMOVE: Sithyy

Resources:
http://starwarsuniverse2.tripod.com/id9.html
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith
Starting Point/Base of Operations: The Foundry - http://i45.tinypic.com/2iawzza.jpg

Star Wars Galaxy Map Recomended for space travel and a good guide for other Star Wars RP!

IC LINK HERE
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Tag and reserving for application.

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Postby Kaledoria » Thu Nov 26, 2015 12:03 pm

Character Name: Gol Ra
Gender: Male
Age: 35
Race/Species: Weequay
Height: 1.85m
Personality: Quite, stoic, melancholic
Biography: Gol Ra was a Jedi Apprentice who saw his master fall to the Dark side. Master Zephas had taken him far along the way but Gol Ra decided to stay loyal to the Order. In their final confrontation, Gol Ra proved, that his personal fighting style was superior to Zephas' style, who had turned his back on his former defensive style and embraced Juyo.
However Zephas managed to disrupt Gol Ra's determination and self-consciousness by bringing up his race and escaped. Gol Ra started to walk his own path, keeping only a loose affiliation with the Jedi Order while studying the history of his people and the force (Despite the fact, that they soon later pronounced him a Jedi Knight). He wondered how his master could bring him so close to falling to the dark side and he wondered whether the mean spirit natural to many members of his race mend, that he was in fact doomed to fall.
He found an old ritual, that was supposed to shield him from the lure of the dark side but the Jedi intervened and prohibited him from further exploring those sources, calling them lies.
This was when he broke entirely with the Jedi. He then was approached by a friendly group of Grey force users, who supported him in his quest for the ritual. He succeeded and realized the truth, that the Sith was more then just mad maniacs controlled by the Dark side, the Sith had very elaborate techniques to control the Dark side instead of being controlled by it. It was the way of the ancient Weequay Sith Masters that he had studied for the past 5 years and it was the way of his new allies, as he was now able to accept.

It was a change for the greater good, Gol Ra realized. He still had his consciousness, his empathy, his respect for sentient life. He was not the EVIL, that he had thought the Sith to be (and as he still regarded many Sith individuals, now that he was able to get to learn to know them better, since he walked among them). He was the Sith of the future, able to do research unhindered by the dogmatic restrictions of the Order but also able to build a functioning society.

Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Typical Weequay Male of the sub-polar northern part of Sriluur; tan skin, black hair (but head shaved except for a long, thick braid at the back); no dark side taint. In fact by human standards he would be considered better looking then most Weequay. By the beauty-standards of his own race, the (relatively) big eyes and the soft skinned section below his eyes give him a slightly androgynous and rather naive look. If you know about Weequay aging you would not consider him older then 25, though on closer look the neck-wrinkles and rough hands give away his real age.
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Fighting Style: Gol Ra is a Shii Cho master. He has also brought Makashi and Niman to a high level (his Jar'Kai is only rudimentary, however). Through merging those styles, Gol Ra has created moves, that share some aspects of Form V (But without either the precision of Shien or the power of Djem So). While he has learned to imitate Juyo Katas, he lacks the fundamental mindset of the Form and can not even be considered an apprentice of it.
Light saber: A long handled (About 1.5 times the normal length), long bladed orange lightsaber. The synthetic crystal is dotted with some incineration inclusions, giving it a flickering look and causing it to emit heat.
Midichlorian Count: 12.000
Strongest Force Abilities: Telepathy (Long range communication, mind probe, limited mind control, powerful emotion control). As a Weequay, he easily senses and manipulates emotions, since the race's natural pheromone communication provides him with a sense through which he can interpret the emotions of another in a better way then to visualize emotions in pictures or sounds, as hearing- and sight-based races try.
As a minor drawback, other Weequay and very, very sensitive instruments close to him can sense it when Gol Ra uses telepathy-based powers, as he subconsciously produces highly increased level of pheromones while doing so.

DO NOT REMOVE: Sithyy


Aditional information:
Other okay Force Abilities: Energy Absorption, Force Concealment, Telekinesis, Physical enhancement (in order of proficiency but they are all very close to another while his telepathy is far above those and anything else is less significant).
Ambition:
- Pursue his research unhindered by ethical or ideological restrictions. (This works quite well so far)
- Root out the psychologically instable elements of the Sith and created a gnostic, controlled Order that replaces the Jedi in their function for the Republic. (This is more of a long term goal, with little ideas how to put this on the way)
Possessions:
- Star Saber XC-01 starfighter incl. B2E2, Astromech maintenance droid (Or similar model of the current era, single pilot with enough space for his pet and a decent fast hyperdrive)
- Lycaon, his pet Raquor'daan
- Sith holocron of master Koshka, Weequay Sith Lord, approximately 400 years old
- Dark Robes with temperature regulation, a light armor-weave and a hidden emergency rebreather.
- Plated vest, the traditional armor of the warriors of his people (good against cutting and piercing weapons, okay against sluggers, little use against blasters and lightsabers)
- Personal energy shield
- Blaster pistol with a laser-pointer and a needler secondary weapon included
- Disrupter pistol
- Vibroknife
- Medpack with extended antidote selection
- Hand-held scanner (magnetic resonance; UV/microwave/X-ray reflection)
- Comlink
- Echani Fiber Armor (Mercenary disguise)
- Czerka Utility Belt
- Data Recorder
- Various Datapads







Btw: You should at least mention the century this plays in. "10 years removed from another war leaving the Jedi in shambles" is not exactly unique and it matters whether we are post Darth Vader or maybe just 10 years after the first Jedi purge.

I would suggest something between 3950 BBY (Restoration of the Jedi Order after Kotor2 events) and 3681 BBY (Darth Malgus returns) or maybe at the beginning of the new Sith Wars (some point after 2000 BBY). Edit: The more I think about it, ~1900 BBY would be great because for one it does set a general timeframe (Sith like Freedon Nadd, Reavan and Malgus are legends only known to Archivists and Historians any longer, Darth Bane and Vader are yet to be born; technology is generally available but really good pieces are rare as high tech industry is rare) while overall the there is enough white space here that we can do whatever we want.
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Postby Beiarusia » Thu Nov 26, 2015 1:17 pm

Tag.

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Postby Esselman » Thu Nov 26, 2015 1:46 pm

Kaledoria wrote:Character Name: Gol Ra
Rank: Warrior
DO NOT REMOVE: Sithyy

Btw: You should at least mention the century this plays in. "10 years removed from another war leaving the Jedi in shambles" is not exactly unique and it matters whether we are post Darth Vader or maybe just 10 years after the first Jedi purge.

I would suggest something between 3950 BBY (Restoration of the Jedi Order after Kotor2 events) and 3681 BBY (Darth Malgus returns) or maybe at the beginning of the new Sith Wars (some point after 2000 BBY).


ACCEPTED, the pet might have to be kept under a tight control due to its species.

I've set the time frame to right before the Jedi Order can rebuild on Tython, letting the sith have a more direct mission while maintaining our alt history.
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Postby Beiarusia » Thu Nov 26, 2015 10:08 pm

Character Name: Demari
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Race/Species: Human / Icarii

Personality: Coy, Hedonistic, Indignant, Mischievous, Neurotic, Unpredictable, Unstable

Biography:
Demari was born on the agricultural world of Dantooine. The daughter of a local merchant, she was an unwanted child and was soon given up to the local Jedi Enclave, her connection to the Force prompting her acceptance within the Order. Her childhood from here on out was particularly unremarkable.

At the age of twelve Demari was assigned to the tutelage of her first master, a Jedi Knight named Reza. A man cruel in his expectations, he desired nothing short of perfection and was quick to punish even the most minor of failings. Verbal and at times physical punishments soon became the norm of her training. Upon learning of the girl's natural resistance to pain Reza was apt to increase the severity of his punishments. This would continue unabated for the next several years, the girl's reluctance to speak out and her master's distance from the Council allowing his methods to go unknown and with impunity. As a result Demari would become increasingly withdrawn and prone to various mental ailments, including anxiety attacks and neurosis. The abuse would only end following a mission to the Outer Rim Territories. Reza was killed under mysterious circumstances and his Padawan, Demari, then 17, was nowhere to be found. A search for the missing Jedi would turn up nothing and, to this day, the mystery remains unsolved.

In reality Demari killed her master, striking him down from behind before fleeing deeper into the Outer Rim. Free of her inhibitions, the girl would engage in various illicit acts, from thievery to murder, eventually making a name for herself within the criminal underworld as a hired gun, though more often than not she was prone to killing her would-be employers. Her actions would eventually gain notice of the Council, with several Jedi attempting to hunt down the mercenary. Most failed to locate the girl, though at least one would disappear after tracking the girl to Vorzyd.

The Jedi, however, were not the only ones tracking the girl. The Sith would eventually take note of her actions.

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance:
Demari is a young near-human, the daughter of a human woman and an Icarii father. She is thin framed with small shoulders and somewhat wider hips. Not scrawny but not muscular either. Her hair is a deep brown-red, cut short and often kept tied in two messy ponytails. Eyes are violet. Soft featured with an overall youthful if not tired appearance. Skin is pale with a slight greenish-grey tint, darker and more noticeable around her eyes. Simple markings adorn her face (two dots under each eye). Due to her Icarii parentage, Demari is resistant to pain and is capable of surviving grievous injuries, including dismemberment.

Fighting Style:
Form I (Variant). Using a one-handed stance, Demari uses movement to her advantage, striking out to force openings either for her blade or her free hand. Being left-hand dominant allows her a greater freedom of movement. Defense is difficult and is reliant almost entirely on avoidance and deflection.

Form V (Variant). Using two blades held reverse, Demari again uses movement to her advantage though at a cost to overall attack strength. As such she is focuses more so on distracting her opponents and striking at opportune moments. Defense is near impossible and is completely reliant on avoidance. Alternatively, she is capable of launching her lightsabers with precision.

Lightsaber:
Her original lightsaber is simple in design, being minimalist but noticeable scarred from heavy use. The hilt is slightly thinner and slightly longer than average. The blade is a standard blue.

Her second lightsaber formerly belonged to her master, Reza. The hilt is dark with beauty in its spartan design. The blade is a deep yellow like that of any sun.

Midichlorian Count: 13,000

Strongest Force Abilities:
Force Pull. Demari is adept at manipulating objects through the Force, but is the most skilled at pulling objects - and people, among other things - towards her, allowing for opportune strikes in combat or simply retrieving a lost weapon.

Force Speed. Demari can heighten her senses and movements to a small degree to give her an edge in her combat styles, emphasizing movement above all else. While not incredibly adept in this skill, the slight boost in movement and reaction times is invaluable to her preferred methods of fighting.

DO NOT REMOVE: Sithyy
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Postby Camicon » Thu Nov 26, 2015 11:32 pm

Character Name: Matthias Brandstone
Gender: Male
Age: 64
Race/Species: Morellian
Personality: Outwardly, Matthias is gregarious, amiable, and unflappable; however, beneath this exterior persona is a calculating man of great intensity and focus.

Biography: Matthias Brandstone was born on Morellia, a little known planet residing within Wild Space. Given the close-knit community that characterized the Morellian population, Matthias' parents were reluctant to let him leave to train with the Jedi Order, but relented after a great deal of encouragement from the Jedi Knight who had discovered him. Back on Coruscant, the Jedi found Matthias to have a natural curiosity that extended to all aspects of his life; more often than not, he was found to be taking something apart to figure out how it worked, or conducting extensive research on topics ranging from the most mundane to the wildly esoteric. Over time, this led Matthias to develop a philosophy of the Force which was quite contrary to that held by the Jedi Council.
As a newly knighted Jedi, Matthias requested to be assigned as a Watchman, and was sent to the Velabri system, near to his home planet of Morellia. For the next several decades, Matthias settled a variety of border disputes, investigated corruption within a handful of planetary governments, disrupted the activities of a few loosely organized piracy rings, and mediated two civil wars on the Velabri planet. Relatively secluded from the rest of the Jedi Order, Matthias further explored and developed his own personal philosophies and theories of the Force. He found that he did not find any particular truth that held his attention within the teaching of the Council, and found himself gravitating towards the teachings of the Grey Jedi, though even then he found he did not agree entirely with their philosophies. Regardless, Matthias began describing himself as a Grey Jedi, though he referred to his particular philosophy of the Force as the "Simple Force" which broadly maintains a position of skepticism regarding most debates about the subject.
Upon the outbreak of the Great Galactic War, Matthias was recalled to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, to assist in the mobilization of the Jedi Order to combat the unexpected threat. He assisted with bring newly discovered Force sensitive individuals to the Temple for training, and in assessing what paths apprentices were best equipped to take. While going to retrieve a force sensitive child from the Outer Rim, deep within Sith controlled space, an overwhelming need to detour into Wild Space visited him through the Force; he felt himself drawn to his home planet of Morellia, where he found a previously unknown Force sensitive by the name of Danica Taggert, a Morellian-Human. He took Danica with him as he went to retrieve the charge he had been sent out for in the first place, which turned into a harrowing, life-or-death game of cat-and-mouse with a Sith force that had been tasked to interdict him. Ultimately, Matthias returned both children to the Jedi Temple unharmed, and gained no small amount of notoriety among the Sith invaders. Resuming his duties, training and assessing young Padawan's, he kept a particularly watchful eye on Danica, noting her progress with great interest.
Some years later, the Jedi Order established a task force under Master Mari-Elan Nora to depose the Argazdan slave lords of Kanz; given his experience in dealing with such matters, Matthias was tapped to join the task force and assist Master Nora in her efforts. Upon returning to the Temple, Matthias was raised to the rank of Jedi Master, and took Danica as his apprentice.
Over the next decade Matthias taught Danica according to the principals of the Jedi Order, as well as his own, continually noting the differences between the two while encouraging her to think critically and decide for herself which beliefs made the most sense. As Danica grew older, Matthias felt comfortable taking her to the front lines of the Outer Rim, often assisting Master Ven Zallow in his defence against Sith forces there; he was left in command of Republic forces in the Outer Rim while Master Zallow saw his apprentice off to Alderaan from Coruscant. After being informed of the Sacking of Coruscant, Matthias was recalled by Grand Master Zym to the now ruined Jedi Temple.

Rank: Jedi Master, Sentinel, Watchman
Appearance
Fighting Style: Matthias is most proficient in the Makashi and Soresu forms, having mastered them both, and he is also able to utilize the Juyo form to great effect.
Lightsaber: Matthias utilizes a dual-phase lightsaber, equipped with an Upari and a Lingnan crystal, as well as a specialized Pontite lens and fencing emitter. It is amber in colour.
Midichlorian Count: 11,500
Strongest Force Abilities: Force Valor | Force Protection
Character Name: Danica Taggert
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Race/Species: Morellian-Human
Personality: Danica is a fairly withdrawn individual, not taken to outgoing sorts of behaviour. While she is a very thoughtful person, she is hesitant to share those thoughts with people she does not know or trust.

Biography: Danica Taggert was born on Morellia, the child of a Morellian woman and human male. Though she was not entirely Morellian, as is clear by her lacking the auburn hair which all pure-blood Morellian's have, she was treated no differently than any other child.
At only a few years of age, Danica was taken to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant by Jedi Master Matthias Brandstone, who was a Morellian himself. Despite her young age, she remembers every moment of her journey back to the Jedi Temple; evading Sith forces, hounded at every turn, was an experience which Danica found simultaneously exhilarating and terrifying. She saw little of him during her training on Coruscant, though she did note that he often observed her lightsaber combat training. After one particularly trying combat tourney Matthias took her as his apprentice, despite her finishing only slightly ahead of the middle of the pack.
At his side, Danica experienced very nearly everything a Jedi might experience during their life: negotiations, ranging from the almost inconsequentially small to those that had the potential to shake the balance of galactic power; combat, from muggings to full-scale war; diplomacy, from the subtle and intricate games played by the nobles, to the all-or-nothing gambits of the underworld. Throughout it all, Matthias shared his unfiltered thoughts with her, and she with him, each one shaping the other's perspectives in unforeseen ways.
After the Sacking of Coruscant Danica ascended to the rank of Jedi Knight, and though she was strongly encouraged by the Council to leave her former Master and pursue matters on her own, she chose to remain at his side as much as she could.

Rank: Jedi Knight, Consular, Healer
Appearance
Fighting Style: Danica learned the Soresu form from Matthias, and is currently working on developing her Niman form.
Lightsaber: Danica's lightsaber is quite basic, notable only for utilizing a Ruusan focusing crystal. It is a viridian in colour.
Midi-chlorian Count: 13,000
Strongest Force Abilities: Force Healing | Precognition


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Given that, according to the link in the OP, the "Average Jedi" has a midi-chlorian count of 10,000, should the counts of our own characters not reflect that? I mean, you apparently need at least 7,000 in order to be considered for Jedi training, so should the range not start there?.
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Postby The Holy Empire of Steel » Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:11 am

Is 9,000 truly the max for midichlorian count? It's a shame, my Sith is more focused as a support/ stealth type. By that I mean using deception more than direct attacks. Going to basically use the same app as in the previous attempt.. so..yeah.. Previous Jedi Councilman/master who desires above all else to discover the secrets of immortality, no matter how violent the means.

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Postby Kaledoria » Fri Nov 27, 2015 1:18 am

The Holy Empire of Steel wrote:Is 9,000 truly the max for midichlorian count? It's a shame, my Sith is more focused as a support/ stealth type. By that I mean using deception more than direct attacks. Going to basically use the same app as in the previous attempt.. so..yeah.. Previous Jedi Councilman/master who desires above all else to discover the secrets of immortality, no matter how violent the means.

The Force is a metaphysical, spiritual, binding, and ubiquitous power, it does not care for your Mitochondrions ... I mean Midichlorians. Maybe they can be taken as a measurement of someone's power in the force but this does not have to be correct or static, so it's a rather vague measurement.

I for one do not believe in Midichlorians. ;)

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Postby Videssos » Fri Nov 27, 2015 4:43 am

Character Name: Solari
Gender: Male, though frequently mistaken for otherwise.
Age: 489 as a Shard, around five or six in his current droid body. Though he has had a number of bodies before.
Race/Species: Shard in a Sithspawn cyborg-humanoid prototype droid vessel.
Personality: Sometimes seems somewhat serious, Solari can be a rather curious, inquisitive individual, though at the same time quite shy, for various reasons, such as a long-held unease with being separated from the rest of his Shard cluster. He can have an odd perspective on things, being a crystalline lifeform contained within a droid body. Though he tries to be patient, he can sometimes be a bit over-eager and impetuous in battle. Due to his nature, both as a crystalline, almost-immortal organism (save through destruction; be it through violence, or natural erosion), and the way his experiences outside of Orax have all come through the lenses of a droid body, he sometimes struggles to comprehend the concerns and plights of mortal, flesh and blood creatures, though more recently having been housed in a state of the art human replica droid, helps, to a small extent. Still, it can mean he seems to lack empathy at times, especially when it comes to matters of transient life, and ever-lurking death. Certain insecurities, and a hidden mental instability, and bloodlust may reside within him. Gradually becoming tainted by Sith Alchemy wrought upon him not so long ago, the crystal that is his true body, alternates in colour between purple, red and black, as the corruption grows, and as if with a will of its own, seeks to assert an insidious dominance, and to crush whatever remnants of Jedi ideals, or hesitation that might dwell within Solari. Nontheless, remnants of his older self do sometimes resurface and attempt to resist, revealing that Solari has not entirely succumb. This instability can be considered one of his flaws, and can perhaps be considered to be holding him back as a potential Sith Lord. His memory also sometimes attempts to "rewrite" itself in order to deal with particularly traumatic or unfortunate experiences, in the midst of this internal chaos.
Biography:
For a fair amount of his existence, he was but one of many Shards, linked up to one of the various hive-minds that clusters of them composed, in Orax. Being a rather young one, he was perhaps more impetuous and curious than most. Merely two centuries had passed, before he sought to leave Orax, and travel elsewhere. Contacting the humans who dwelt there, communicating with the otherwise inert, yet sentient crystals through translator units that they had developed a long time ago, some Shards had been known to be fitted to droid bodies, allowing them a proper medium of efficient communication, travel, and interaction. Soon himself bestowed with such a vessel, and his mind now separated from the others, he was even more curious. He hid amongst a storage compartment of droids bound for another world, and ended up elsewhere. At some point, he met an at the time Jedi Knight, Syal Emaekun


Originally on the Jedi side, he fought in the Great Galactic War, and was, in its latter stages to be defeated by a Sith. He would be captured, tortured, and experimented on with Sith alchemy, which even now slowly corrupts him.

Rank: Apprentice
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Fighting Style: Form II: Makashi, and Form IV - Ataru are the two particular forms Solari is versed in. Of particular note is Solari's speed and agility, and he often uses a lightsaber in one hand, and a blaster or slugthrower pistol in the other hand. Solari's droid body is remarkably sophisticated for its size, and many of its design elements focus more on high quality sensors, balance micro-gyros and speed-enhancing functions, rather than outright strength or endurance, though it is still quite robust. On that note, the self-repair mechanisms are more than enough to compensate, even though his body is for the most part, seemingly flesh and blood, to the extent that scanners don't detect his body as being robotic, merely "anomalous". Of course, being part Sithspawn, and part droid makes things a bit more complicated.
Light saber: See pics above, though imagine the white-core purple lightsaber as curve-hilted. He also has a second one, either as backup, or to dual-wield, which has a purple blade with a crimson core. Both lightsabers can sometimes flicker and change to dark red and black in colour, due to the influence of Solari's growing dark side contamination, and the Shard's bond with his lightsaber crystals.
Midichlorian Count: 14,900
Strongest Force Abilities: Force Speed, Dark Healing (since healing with the dark side is different from normal).
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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:19 am

Beiarusia wrote:Character Name: Demari
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Rank: Apprentice
Fighting Style:
Form I (Variant). Using a one-handed stance, Demari uses movement to her advantage, striking out to force openings either for her blade or her free hand. Being left-hand dominant allows her a greater freedom of movement. Defense is difficult and is reliant almost entirely on avoidance and deflection.
Form V (Variant). Using two blades held reverse, Demari again uses movement to her advantage though at a cost to overall attack strength. As such she is focuses more so on distracting her opponents and striking at opportune moments. Defense is near impossible and is completely reliant on avoidance. Alternatively, she is capable of launching her lightsabers with precision.
Midichlorian Count: 7,400
Strongest Force Abilities:
Force Pull. Demari is adept at manipulating objects through the Force, but is the most skilled at pulling objects - and people, among other things - towards her, allowing for opportune strikes in combat or simply retrieving a lost weapon.
Force Speed. Demari can heighten her senses and movements to a small degree to give her an edge in her combat styles, emphasizing movement above all else. While not incredibly adept in this skill, the slight boost in movement and reaction times is invaluable to her preferred methods of fighting.

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Character Name: Matthias Brandstone
Gender: Male
Age: 64
Rank: Jedi Master, Sentinel, Watchman
Fighting Style: Matthias is most proficient in the Makashi and Soresu forms, having mastered them both, and he is also able to utilize the Juyo form to great effect.
Midichlorian Count: 11,500
Strongest Force Abilities: Force Valor | Force Protection

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Character Name: Danica Taggert
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Rank: Jedi Knight, Consular, Healer
Fighting Style: Danica learned the Soresu form from Matthias, and is currently working on developing her Niman form.
Midi-chlorian Count: 13,000
Strongest Force Abilities: Force Healing | Precognition


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Given that, according to the link in the OP, the "Average Jedi" has a midi-chlorian count of 10,000, should the counts of our own characters not reflect that? I mean, you apparently need at least 7,000 in order to be considered for Jedi training, so should the range not start there?.


I have changed the range of midichlorians to adjust to this.

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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:38 am

Videssos wrote:Character Name: Solari
Race/Species: Shard in a Human Replica Droid.


Though I am weary of even having a Shard, I'll allow it but the human droid replica making you look like a human was not truly perfected until the Galactic Empire, far from where this currently takes place. Since the technology just isn't available I'd strongly suggest a change to an average robotic looking shard. Or a human with a few robotic parts or merely one, as that's all this time frame can accommodate to.

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Postby The Nomad » Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:44 am

MY APPLICATION

Character Name:Kyba Oberoth
Gender:Male
Age:25
Species/Race:Zabrak
Rank:Warrior
Fighting Style:Although skilled in all 7 his speciality is Juyo
Midichlorian Count:8,000

Strongest Force Abilities:Force Lightning,Repulse

Lightsaber:Two separate red blades with curved hilts much like Count Dookus.They can be connected to create a saber staff.

Physical Appearance: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sta ... loseUp.jpg (Picture him also wearing an ashy gray cloak.
Underneath his armor he's a normal looking gray skinned Zabrak with a bald head,shaven face and yellow snake like eyes.

Voice:Raspy,low,deathly sounding.

Biography:Kyba was born on the planet of Tatooine,however even at a young age was very force sensitive,and therefore was eventually sensed by the wicked Sith.
His mother and father owned and worked on a moisture farm near Anchorhead,and were rather well off.
Late one night a Sith came to Tatooine and,once sensing him,murdered his family and left the farm deserted and then kidnapped Kyba and took him away to the Sith Academy.
That was 23 years ago,and since then Kyba has trained,bonded,and strengthened alongside those who murdered his family and destroyed his home.

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Good?
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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:02 am

The Nomad wrote:MY APPLICATION

Character Name:Kyba Oberoth
Gender:Male
Age:25
Species/Race:Zabrak
Rank:Warrior
Fighting Style:Although skilled in all 7 his speciality is Juyo
Midichlorian Count:8,000

Strongest Force Abilities:Force Lighting,Force Push,Force Choke,Force Grasp,Repulse

Lightsaber:Two separate red blades with curved hilts much like Count Dookus.They can be connected to create a saber staff.

Physical Appearance: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sta ... loseUp.jpg (Picture him also wearing an ashy gray cloak.
Underneath his armor he's a normal looking gray skinned Zabrak with a bald head,shaven face and yellow snake like eyes.

Voice:Raspy,low,deathly sounding.

Good?


Add at least a paragraph of biography and I will accept.

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Postby Garengad » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:14 am

Character Name: Roth Mishii
Gender: Male
Age: 53
Rank: Jedi Master
Fighting Style: A Form II (Makashi) Master and skilled duelist. When facing blaster fire he uses form III to an extent.
Midi-chlorian Count: 13,000
Strongest Force Abilities: Telekinesis, Force Protection
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Postby Videssos » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:26 am

Esselman wrote:
Videssos wrote:Character Name: Solari
Race/Species: Shard in a Human Replica Droid.


Though I am weary of even having a Shard, I'll allow it but the human droid replica making you look like a human was not truly perfected until the Galactic Empire, far from where this currently takes place. Since the technology just isn't available I'd strongly suggest a change to an average robotic looking shard. Or a human with a few robotic parts or merely one, as that's all this time frame can accommodate to.


How about something that essentially is akin, or somewhat equivalent to a Human Replica Droid, yet is a cyborg-droid/Sithspawn type construct/organism/vessel made through Sith Alchemy?
Also, why are you weary (or wary) of even having a Shard? It's not like they're overpowered or anything, simply a bit more obscure or unusual than some other species. Just curious on that account. Though I know it was a while before they were officially discovered by the Republic.
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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:31 am

Videssos wrote:
Esselman wrote:
Though I am weary of even having a Shard, I'll allow it but the human droid replica making you look like a human was not truly perfected until the Galactic Empire, far from where this currently takes place. Since the technology just isn't available I'd strongly suggest a change to an average robotic looking shard. Or a human with a few robotic parts or merely one, as that's all this time frame can accommodate to.


How about something that essentially is akin, or somewhat equivalent to a Human Replica Droid, yet is a cyborg-droid type construct/organism made through Sith Alchemy?
Also, why are you weary (or wary) of even having a Shard? It's not like they're overpowered or anything, simply a bit more obscure or unusual than some other species. Just curious on that account.


Only because Shard didn't make contact with the Republic until the end of it when it became the Empire, merely a time frame thing. I will allow a more primitive version of the human replica droid though that the Sith have been studying and you can incorporate that into your characters backstory and such of course.

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Postby The Holy Empire of Steel » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:32 am

Character Name: Darth Xenzhar
Gender: Male
Age: late 90's
Race/Species: Twi'lek
Height: 7.4 ft (Hunched) 7.6 (Full height)
Personality: Cruel, Inquisitive, Humorless, Calculating
Rank: Inquisitor

Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/73 ... b94fdc.jpg

Fighting Style: Often considered a Form II savant, has put considerable training into Forms III,V, and VI.

Light saber: http://imgur.com/ZgIza2T

Midichlorian Count: 14,900

Strongest Force Abilities: Battle Meditation, Dominate Mind

Ambition: To unlock the secret of Immortality, no matter the cost.

Biography: Formerly known as Uka'Kolaris, a kind and wise member of the Jedi Council.. As a Jedi, Uka was fascinated with the Sith order, especially with some of it's more (in)famous members, Specifically that of Darth Andeddu, Exar Kun, and Darth Revan. Over Uka's life, he began to focus less on combat, and more on that of a more scholarly pursuit. He slowly became less and less involved with the Jedi order, more preferring his restless study of the ancient Sith's power. Through some means, he discovered an old Sith holocron, which included an Ancient Sith Lord discovering a piece of the secret of Immortality.. Uka became infatuated with the idea of immortality, realizing that his own life was quickly coming to it's natural end. He became so infatuated with his search that he funded a secret mission to the world of Yavin IV, being accompanied by a half dozen Jedi Knights, as well as his own padawan. Upon arriving, he ignored the temple's own protocols for Yavin IV expeditions and charged ahead to a nearby temple seething with Dark Side energies. The group made camp, and Uka demanded that the more powerful force users create a form of force shield around them, to ward off any beings that would do them harm. It wasn't enough, instead of protecting the group, the shield acted as a beacon, alerting a horde of nearby Massassi warriors who were protecting the ancient temple. The warriors were ruthless, and within an hour, only Master Uka'Kolaris was left standing alive. The warriors felt the aging Twi'lek's power in the Dark Side growing exponentially, and left him be.

The Jedi Temple would never see Uka'Kolaris again. Out of guilt he self-exiled himself into the Unknown Regions of the galaxy, at once realizing that his search for power had destroyed those around him, as well as the very ideals he had championed for his entire life. This guilt now is his ultimate source of power. Through decades of self-exile Uka'kaloris realized a simple truth. Life was pain, and the only way for him to attone was to bear the brunt of what life could throw at him. With gritted teeth he threw away his title, his life, and his devotion to the light side of the force. Now, Uka'Kolaris has returned to inhabited space, championing the ways and ideals of the Sith, recognizing the faults and weaknesses of the Republic he gave so much for. He will bring order to the galaxy, even if it means burning the galaxy to the ground..


Other Force Powers: Precognition, Lighting/Storm, Fear/Horror, Heal, Drain,Push/Pull.

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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:35 am

The Holy Empire of Steel wrote:Character Name: Darth Xenzhar
Gender: Male
Age: late 70's
Rank: Inquisitor
Fighting Style: Often considered a Form II savant, has put considerable training into Forms III,V, and VI.
Midichlorian Count: 14,500
Strongest Force Abilities: Battle Meditation, Dominate Mind


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Postby Videssos » Fri Nov 27, 2015 8:40 am

Esselman wrote:
Videssos wrote:
How about something that essentially is akin, or somewhat equivalent to a Human Replica Droid, yet is a cyborg-droid type construct/organism made through Sith Alchemy?
Also, why are you weary (or wary) of even having a Shard? It's not like they're overpowered or anything, simply a bit more obscure or unusual than some other species. Just curious on that account.


Only because Shard didn't make contact with the Republic until the end of it when it became the Empire, merely a time frame thing. I will allow a more primitive version of the human replica droid though that the Sith have been studying and you can incorporate that into your characters backstory and such of course.


Seems like I edited my post a little too late. :p
But yeah, I was thinking possibly something like that, or a vessel/body that is essentially a human-appearing Sithspawn cyborg/droid thing for him, though I might be getting a bit too creative there.
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Postby The Nomad » Fri Nov 27, 2015 9:04 am

Alright edited my app.

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Postby Esselman » Fri Nov 27, 2015 10:43 am

The Nomad wrote:Character Name:Kyba Oberoth
Gender:Male
Age:25
Rank:Warrior
Fighting Style:Although skilled in all 7 his speciality is Juyo
Midichlorian Count:8,000
Strongest Force Abilities:Force Lighting,Force Push
Lightsaber:Two separate red blades with curved hilts much like Count Dookus.They can be connected to create a saber staff.


ACCEPTED

With shortened "Strongest abilities" section as I specified to choose two

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Postby The Nomad » Fri Nov 27, 2015 10:58 am

Esselman wrote:
The Nomad wrote:Character Name:Kyba Oberoth
Gender:Male
Age:25
Rank:Warrior
Fighting Style:Although skilled in all 7 his speciality is Juyo
Midichlorian Count:8,000
Strongest Force Abilities:Force Lighting,Force Push
Lightsaber:Two separate red blades with curved hilts much like Count Dookus.They can be connected to create a saber staff.


ACCEPTED

With shortened "Strongest abilities" section as I specified to choose two


Edited again.
You know it would've been more courteous to tell me both mistakes rather than me edit it twice.
But oh well is it good now??

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