missing nuclear missiles

[Pananau]

Yesterday, three tactical nuclear missiles, went missing off a cargo ship that left, Pananau city harbor to dispose of them. We are currently searching for them within our borders, but we ask any nation to aid us. Any willing participant, must alert me within the next twenty four hours in order to get our forces deployed into your country, with, your permission. These nukes have trackers on them which can be remotely activated, but they aren't well concealed, they also have numerous safety systems which prevent premature detonation. But those are very crude. You must help us find them before millions of people are killed if they end up on the black market.

[Pananau]

This incident has been classified a LEVEL 1 danger classification

[Newne Carriebean7]

" sir. "
" what? I'm busy."
emperor David growled
" sorry to bother you sir, but nuclear missiles have gone missing in the nation of Pananau."
" that name sound's like a fucking fruit! contact AL carriebean, I have a mission for them..."
" yes sir."
the aide went of to contact the terrorists.

[Pananau]

" sir. "
" what? I'm busy."
emperor David growled
" sorry to bother you sir, but nuclear missiles have gone missing in the nation of Pananau."
" that name sound's like a fucking fruit! contact AL carriebean, I have a mission for them..."
" yes sir."
the aide went of to contact the terrorists.

Say no more I'm deploying to your country and should be there in twenty four hours. We know how to handle the situation, and the device. If you find it keep every civilian person you can away from it farther than five miles, that/ those devices are dangerous.

[New Tuva SSR]

Tuvan terrorist and paramilitary group Comrades of the Fasces (Komraderfaszcishtizmal) aka Kefal,has taken the blame.They have claimed that they bribed Pananau's national guard to get ahold of the missiles.They escaped to Tuva.Premier Kayr Digyatov has declared a state of emergency,in case the missiles are detonated.

[New Axiom]

I will donate several AWACS aircraft, Imperial Attack Helicopters, and multiple Air Strike Forces, if you need any of the above.

The loss of nuclear weapons is nothing to be taken lightly.

Empower Cyrus Silva

[Pananau]

Tuvan terrorist and paramilitary group Comrades of the Fasces (Komraderfaszcishtizmal) aka Kefal,has taken the blame.They have claimed that they bribed Pananau's national guard to get ahold of the missiles.They escaped to Tuva.Premier Kayr Digyatov has declared a state of emergency,in case the missiles are detonated.

The best way to find them is to do a search from the air. Does your country have any AWACS planes in its air force. If it does I'll send in the necessary equipment and people to operate the equipment. If not I'll send in some RPAF AWACS planes and the equipment, along with the armed forces's elite Nuclear And Biological Deterance Unit, to get the devices, along with 500 troops.

[New Tuva SSR]

Tuvan terrorist and paramilitary group Comrades of the Fasces (Komraderfaszcishtizmal) aka Kefal,has taken the blame.They have claimed that they bribed Pananau's national guard to get ahold of the missiles.They escaped to Tuva.Premier Kayr Digyatov has declared a state of emergency,in case the missiles are detonated.

The best way to find them is to do a search from the air. Does your country have any AWACS planes in its air force. If it does I'll send in the necessary equipment and people to operate the equipment. If not I'll send in some RPAF AWACS planes and the equipment, along with the armed forces's elite Nuclear And Biological Deterance Unit, to get the devices, along with 500 troops.

Do not worry,Tuva SSR has it all under control.Yes,we do have AWACS planes.However,if you could send over some expendable troops,that would be nice.

[Western Pacific Territories]

You need this: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=118474
You really need help, you don't have a good RP'ing reputation and I feel sad for the low quality in these posts.

[Pananau]

The best way to find them is to do a search from the air. Does your country have any AWACS planes in its air force. If it does I'll send in the necessary equipment and people to operate the equipment. If not I'll send in some RPAF AWACS planes and the equipment, along with the armed forces's elite Nuclear And Biological Deterance Unit, to get the devices, along with 500 troops.

Do not worry,Tuva SSR has it all under control.Yes,we do have AWACS planes.However,if you could send over some expendable troops,that would be nice.

No, I'll send in the equipment and certified individuals who have experience using it. I'll only send troops in, ONLY if the terrorist group makes demands. Understand me.

[New Tuva SSR]

You need this: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=118474
You really need help, you don't have a good RP'ing reputation and I feel sad for the low quality in these posts.

I have restarted my RPing career.Forget my "reputation." Nothing big has happened yet.Also,I am on Mobile.Harder to type longer posts.

[Pananau]

I will donate several AWACS aircraft, Imperial Attack Helicopters, and multiple Air Strike Forces, if you need any of the above.

The loss of nuclear weapons is nothing to be taken lightly.

Empower Cyrus Silva

I agree. The equipment to look for the nukes will arrive tomorrow night and will be installed on your AWACS planes by the end of the month. And you can keep the equipment after this thing is ended.

[Pananau]

I will donate several AWACS aircraft, Imperial Attack Helicopters, and multiple Air Strike Forces, if you need any of the above.

The loss of nuclear weapons is nothing to be taken lightly.

Empower Cyrus Silva

I agree. The equipment to look for the nukes will arrive tomorrow night and will be installed on your AWACS planes by the end of the month. And you can keep the equipment after this thing is ended.

[Western Pacific Territories]

You need this: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=118474
You really need help, you don't have a good RP'ing reputation and I feel sad for the low quality in these posts.

I have restarted my RPing career.Forget my "reputation." Nothing big has happened yet.Also,I am on Mobile.Harder to type longer posts.

I wasn't talking to you. I understand low quality on mobile. I was talking to the OP of this.

[New Tuva SSR]

Kefal has declared that they will detonate the missiles if their region,Kamchatka,will be given independence. The Tuvan military has been called in,they have mobilized 120,000 troops ready to storm the Kamchatka Peninisila by air.Only when Pananau gives the word to attack.

[New Tuva SSR]

I have restarted my RPing career.Forget my "reputation." Nothing big has happened yet.Also,I am on Mobile.Harder to type longer posts.

I wasn't talking to you. I understand low quality on mobile. I was talking to the OP of this.

Nevermind then,my reputation isn't exactly "shiny" either.

[New Axiom]

:kiss:

I will donate several AWACS aircraft, Imperial Attack Helicopters, and multiple Air Strike Forces, if you need any of the above.

The loss of nuclear weapons is nothing to be taken lightly.

Empower Cyrus Silva

I agree. The equipment to look for the nukes will arrive tomorrow night and will be installed on your AWACS planes by the end of the month. And you can keep the equipment after this thing is ended.

I look forward to their arrival. If you need, I can also provide the last 36 hours of public police survellience camera footage to your analysts.

Also, thank you for letting us keep the equipment.

[Greater Franco-Iberia]

I have restarted my RPing career.Forget my "reputation." Nothing big has happened yet.Also,I am on Mobile.Harder to type longer posts.

I wasn't talking to you. I understand low quality on mobile. I was talking to the OP of this.

I didn't know they had Terrible-RPing interventions on Nation States :3
Browsing over this made my eyes bleed and I was preparing to sue and/or stage an intervention, but you seem to have beaten me to it.

[Western Pacific Territories]

I wasn't talking to you. I understand low quality on mobile. I was talking to the OP of this.

I didn't know they had Terrible-RPing interventions on Nation States :3
Browsing over this made my eyes bleed and I was preparing to sue and/or stage an intervention, but you seem to have beaten me to it.

I beat you by 20 minutes lol.

[Greater Franco-Iberia]

I didn't know they had Terrible-RPing interventions on Nation States :3
Browsing over this made my eyes bleed and I was preparing to sue and/or stage an intervention, but you seem to have beaten me to it.

I beat you by 20 minutes lol.

I'M A LITTLE SLOW OK DON'T JUDGE ME!
-sobs-

[Mizrad]

I didn't know they had Terrible-RPing interventions on Nation States :3
Browsing over this made my eyes bleed and I was preparing to sue and/or stage an intervention, but you seem to have beaten me to it.

I beat you by 20 minutes lol.

Telling people their RP'ing is shit and then slapping a link up on their RP isn't the way to go about helping them. I don't know why you think you're so much higher than them either because last time I checked you need help just as much as them.

Anyways what I believe Western Pacific Territories was trying to say was that the people in this roleplay's writing skills could improve by a wide margin. For example incorporating more detail, improved grammar or characters and sub-plots can really help to make a story come to life. Let's use this RP's plot to help make my point. From what I've gathered I understand it is about missing nuclear weapons. I see you're also trying to recover them from terrorists. Now that's a start. But why not widen it out more? Somebody could RP as the terrorists or a search party. Maybe somebody could go back and write about the nukes going missing in the first place. Here's a great thread filled with even more links to a couple more good threads and websites to assist you in learning more about how to make longer, detailed and fascinating posts:

viewtopic.php?f=4&t=170098

If you have any other questions, feel free to either telegram myself or a roleplaying mentor. Good luck and have fun!

[Pananau]

Kefal has declared that they will detonate the missiles if their region,Kamchatka,will be given independence. The Tuvan military has been called in,they have mobilized 120,000 troops ready to storm the Kamchatka Peninisila by air.Only when Pananau gives the word to attack.

OK, wait for my troops to get there. Remember the nukes will give off considerably more radiation if they have been activated, if they're activated they'll give off a gieger reading of 14, so when they're active, I'd advise against using an airstrike. But if they're not activated, the budget reading is going to be closer to 8 or 9, that is when you can use an airstrike. And wait for my gieger equipped AWACS planes to be there, I'm only sending five planes in.

[New Tuva SSR]

32 People's Revolutionary Army Spetsnaz soldiers are being readied to storm a compound thought to be holding Kefal leader Burgyhn Dhaklan,and are readying a strike force of dive bombs and long range missiles pointed towards the missile command center,effectively destroying the building.Kefal has hid the missiles on Komandorski Island off the coast of Kamchatka.

[Pananau]

My forces were late due to a technical problem. The plan is for my AWACS planes to fly over the command center to determine if it's really the bombs in there, or if it's just a hoax. They will also determine if the bombs are active or not. Then RPAF C-17 Globemaster's, C-5 Galaxy's, and C-130 Hercules, all loaded with Pananauan Paratroopers will overfly the compound and drop them as a diversion for your forces and more of our forces to storm the air base, after that both forces will link up at a rally point and enter the compound through a ventilation shaft, if they are unable to continue and the bombs launch, your fighter planes and mine will shoot them down, but if the bombs are inactive, either the forces will destroy them with C-4 or we can bomb out the bunker if possible.

[Pananau]

New Axiom, move your forces to the GUAF AFB on Sakhalin island