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For discussing a long-overdue overhaul of the Assembly's legislative protocols.
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Mon May 04, 2015 1:27 pm

Format

Proposals need to be more than just empty rhetoric. This includes repeals with no argument, one-liners, proposals that are questions ("Don't you think we should...?"), and proposals that are just too incomprehensible to make sense of.
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Thu May 21, 2015 2:37 pm

Discussion bump.
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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Thu May 21, 2015 2:41 pm

Keep this rule, and merge it with blogposal, the technical elements of the rules on repeals, the English rule, the spam rule, and anything else that falls into that general category. Could also merge in plagiarism, although I feel that should be discussed separately as there are some issues about it yet to be clarified.

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Postby Kaboomlandia » Thu May 21, 2015 3:52 pm

Agreed with DSR. Keep this rule and merge it with Bloody Stupid, Blogposal, and Language, and call it "Miscellaneous".
In=character, Kaboomlandia is a World Assembly member and abides by its resolutions. If this nation isn't in the WA, it's for practical reasons.
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Postby Christian Democrats » Thu May 21, 2015 5:01 pm

Agree.

EDIT: with merging the rules, not with the suggested name "Miscellaneous"
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GA#160: Forced Marriages Ban Act (79%)
GA#175: Organ and Blood Donations Act (68%)^
SC#082: Repeal "Liberate Catholic" (80%)
GA#200: Foreign Marriage Recognition (54%)
GA#213: Privacy Protection Act (70%)
GA#231: Marital Rape Justice Act (81%)^
GA#233: Ban Profits on Workers' Deaths (80%)*
GA#249: Stopping Suicide Seeds (70%)^
GA#253: Repeal "Freedom in Medical Research" (76%)
GA#285: Assisted Suicide Act (70%)^
GA#310: Disabled Voters Act (81%)
GA#373: Repeal "Convention on Execution" (54%)
GA#468: Prohibit Private Prisons (57%)^

* denotes coauthorship
^ repealed resolution
#360: Electile Dysfunction
#452: Foetal Furore
#560: Bicameral Backlash
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Thu May 21, 2015 5:08 pm

Would anyone like to take a swing at actually writing up such a rule? (Laptop is currently dead so I'm unable to contribute too much for now)
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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Thu May 21, 2015 5:48 pm

    Format

    There's no set format for proposals, but there are some basic rules all proposals must abide by:
    • Proposals are works of international law. Blogs, essays, questions, regional ads, spam, and anything else that's not an international law will be deleted. This counts for joke proposals too: if you absolutely must write them, post them to the Joke Proposals thread, but don't submit them.
    • Proposals must contain an operative clause. Every proposal has to have some recognisable effect on member nations, such as requiring them to take action or encouraging them to support a policy. If nothing in your proposal is recognisable as an operative clause, it will be deleted.
    • Proposals must be in English. Using small phrases such as "Habeas Corpus" is fine, but the whole proposal cannot be written in another language. Proposals that are so illegible or incomprehensible as to be meaningless in English will also be deleted.
That doesn't include the special rules for repeals as they might be separate, but it covers most things - as usual, in about twice as many words as are needed.
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Postby Christian Democrats » Thu May 21, 2015 5:54 pm

Mallorea and Riva wrote:Would anyone like to take a swing at actually writing up such a rule?

Proposal Formatting

All proposals shall be written in standard English (loanwords are allowed). They must coherently identify problems proper for WA voters to consider (e.g., a proposal to ban lime-green socks will be removed) and offer serious solutions to those problems. Proposals should not be dependent on the real world, they must be your own original work, and they have to comply with all other site rules (e.g., no malicious or obscene content).
Leo Tolstoy wrote:Wrong does not cease to be wrong because the majority share in it.
GA#160: Forced Marriages Ban Act (79%)
GA#175: Organ and Blood Donations Act (68%)^
SC#082: Repeal "Liberate Catholic" (80%)
GA#200: Foreign Marriage Recognition (54%)
GA#213: Privacy Protection Act (70%)
GA#231: Marital Rape Justice Act (81%)^
GA#233: Ban Profits on Workers' Deaths (80%)*
GA#249: Stopping Suicide Seeds (70%)^
GA#253: Repeal "Freedom in Medical Research" (76%)
GA#285: Assisted Suicide Act (70%)^
GA#310: Disabled Voters Act (81%)
GA#373: Repeal "Convention on Execution" (54%)
GA#468: Prohibit Private Prisons (57%)^

* denotes coauthorship
^ repealed resolution
#360: Electile Dysfunction
#452: Foetal Furore
#560: Bicameral Backlash
#570: Clerical Errors

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Postby Omigodtheykilledkenny » Thu May 21, 2015 6:56 pm

I like TDSR's version, but CD's is good if you want to keep it simple.

Although loanwords are already a part of "standard English," are they not?
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Postby Christian Democrats » Thu May 21, 2015 7:03 pm

Omigodtheykilledkenny wrote:Although loanwords are already a part of "standard English," are they not?

I'd say so. Clarification, though, would prevent too many questions in the Q&A thread.
Leo Tolstoy wrote:Wrong does not cease to be wrong because the majority share in it.
GA#160: Forced Marriages Ban Act (79%)
GA#175: Organ and Blood Donations Act (68%)^
SC#082: Repeal "Liberate Catholic" (80%)
GA#200: Foreign Marriage Recognition (54%)
GA#213: Privacy Protection Act (70%)
GA#231: Marital Rape Justice Act (81%)^
GA#233: Ban Profits on Workers' Deaths (80%)*
GA#249: Stopping Suicide Seeds (70%)^
GA#253: Repeal "Freedom in Medical Research" (76%)
GA#285: Assisted Suicide Act (70%)^
GA#310: Disabled Voters Act (81%)
GA#373: Repeal "Convention on Execution" (54%)
GA#468: Prohibit Private Prisons (57%)^

* denotes coauthorship
^ repealed resolution
#360: Electile Dysfunction
#452: Foetal Furore
#560: Bicameral Backlash
#570: Clerical Errors

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Postby Omigodtheykilledkenny » Thu May 21, 2015 7:08 pm

Christian Democrats wrote:
Omigodtheykilledkenny wrote:Although loanwords are already a part of "standard English," are they not?

I'd say so. Clarification, though, would prevent too many questions in the Q&A thread.

Are there a lot of questions about that in the Q&A thread right now?
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Postby Kaboomlandia » Thu May 21, 2015 7:11 pm

TDSR's version seems like a good catch-all.
In=character, Kaboomlandia is a World Assembly member and abides by its resolutions. If this nation isn't in the WA, it's for practical reasons.
Author of GA #371 and SC #208, #214, #226, #227, #230, #232
Co-Author of SC #204
"Insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result."
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Postby Mousebumples » Thu May 21, 2015 8:49 pm

I like DSR's description, but am I the only one who thinks it would be confusing to start with the name (Format rule) and then say in the next sentence "there is no required format for proposals" ?

Any suggestions for alternate names (or names from the rules we're potentially collapsing in) ... or am I getting worried over nothing?
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Postby Flibbleites » Thu May 21, 2015 9:02 pm

Mousebumples wrote:I like DSR's description, but am I the only one who thinks it would be confusing to start with the name (Format rule) and then say in the next sentence "there is no required format for proposals" ?

Any suggestions for alternate names (or names from the rules we're potentially collapsing in) ... or am I getting worried over nothing?

Maybe if we make it "Formatting"?

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Postby Three Weasels » Thu May 21, 2015 9:02 pm

Mousebumples wrote:I like DSR's description, but am I the only one who thinks it would be confusing to start with the name (Format rule) and then say in the next sentence "there is no required format for proposals" ?

Any suggestions for alternate names (or names from the rules we're potentially collapsing in) ... or am I getting worried over nothing?

"Proposal Standard".
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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Fri May 22, 2015 2:30 am

It could simply say "There is no required way to write a proposal, but every proposal must follow certain rules".

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Postby Kaboomlandia » Fri May 22, 2015 6:09 am

Mousebumples wrote:I like DSR's description, but am I the only one who thinks it would be confusing to start with the name (Format rule) and then say in the next sentence "there is no required format for proposals" ?

Any suggestions for alternate names (or names from the rules we're potentially collapsing in) ... or am I getting worried over nothing?

I would suggest "Miscellaneous", since it's a combination of the Language, Blogposal, Bloody Stupid and Format rules.
In=character, Kaboomlandia is a World Assembly member and abides by its resolutions. If this nation isn't in the WA, it's for practical reasons.
Author of GA #371 and SC #208, #214, #226, #227, #230, #232
Co-Author of SC #204
"Insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result."
Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former."

"Your legitimacy, Kaboom, has melted away in my eyes. I couldn't have believed that only a shadow of your once brilliant WA career remains."

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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Fri May 22, 2015 6:12 am

"Your proposal has been deleted. Why? Miscellaneous."

No, let's no go there, tis a silly place.

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Postby Kaboomlandia » Fri May 22, 2015 6:15 am

The Dark Star Republic wrote:"Your proposal has been deleted. Why? Miscellaneous."

No, let's no go there, tis a silly place.

No, actually list the reasons in the deletion TG, for example:
You submitted a proposal blah blah blah. We suggest you read the rules blah blah blah. Your proposal was illegal under part of the Miscellaneous rule for not containing an operative clause.
In=character, Kaboomlandia is a World Assembly member and abides by its resolutions. If this nation isn't in the WA, it's for practical reasons.
Author of GA #371 and SC #208, #214, #226, #227, #230, #232
Co-Author of SC #204
"Insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result."
Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former."

"Your legitimacy, Kaboom, has melted away in my eyes. I couldn't have believed that only a shadow of your once brilliant WA career remains."

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Postby Defwa » Fri May 22, 2015 10:59 am

Kaboomlandia wrote:
Mousebumples wrote:I like DSR's description, but am I the only one who thinks it would be confusing to start with the name (Format rule) and then say in the next sentence "there is no required format for proposals" ?

Any suggestions for alternate names (or names from the rules we're potentially collapsing in) ... or am I getting worried over nothing?

I would suggest "Miscellaneous", since it's a combination of the Language, Blogposal, Bloody Stupid and Format rules.

Miscellaneous is a word for various unrelated things when you can't think of a real word. So lets not suggest it because we have a real word. We might use a better one but miscellaneous aint it.
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Postby Flibbleites » Fri May 22, 2015 3:00 pm

I also oppose calling it "Miscellaneous." And it's not just because I have a hell of a time spelling it, I believe the name of the rule should have something to do with what the rule is about and "misc." is a catch-all term. Part of the rewrite is about making the rules clearer and having a rule named "misc." just does not help in that regard.

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Postby Christian Democrats » Fri May 22, 2015 3:22 pm

I agree.
Leo Tolstoy wrote:Wrong does not cease to be wrong because the majority share in it.
GA#160: Forced Marriages Ban Act (79%)
GA#175: Organ and Blood Donations Act (68%)^
SC#082: Repeal "Liberate Catholic" (80%)
GA#200: Foreign Marriage Recognition (54%)
GA#213: Privacy Protection Act (70%)
GA#231: Marital Rape Justice Act (81%)^
GA#233: Ban Profits on Workers' Deaths (80%)*
GA#249: Stopping Suicide Seeds (70%)^
GA#253: Repeal "Freedom in Medical Research" (76%)
GA#285: Assisted Suicide Act (70%)^
GA#310: Disabled Voters Act (81%)
GA#373: Repeal "Convention on Execution" (54%)
GA#468: Prohibit Private Prisons (57%)^

* denotes coauthorship
^ repealed resolution
#360: Electile Dysfunction
#452: Foetal Furore
#560: Bicameral Backlash
#570: Clerical Errors

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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Fri May 22, 2015 3:29 pm

One thing I left out of my wording of that format rule is "not from the WA's perspective" because I've never understood that rule, and if it is enforced, it probably belongs in the Branding section.

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Postby Flibbleites » Fri May 22, 2015 3:33 pm

The Dark Star Republic wrote:One thing I left out of my wording of that format rule is "not from the WA's perspective" because I've never understood that rule, and if it is enforced, it probably belongs in the Branding section.

I believe that that's mainly to cover things like, "I think the WA should do this."

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Postby The Dark Star Republic » Fri May 22, 2015 3:36 pm

Flibbleites wrote:
The Dark Star Republic wrote:One thing I left out of my wording of that format rule is "not from the WA's perspective" because I've never understood that rule, and if it is enforced, it probably belongs in the Branding section.

I believe that that's mainly to cover things like, "I think the WA should do this."

Yeah - and I don't really see why that should be illegal, so long as it has an operative clause.

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