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[COMPETITION] Arm for an Arm

Postby Nature-Spirits » Wed Nov 19, 2014 4:39 pm

I'm thinking I'm going to submit this to the competition.
The title is in the works.


Valid for all nations.

Maxtopia, a country renowned for its dictatorial government and deplorable civil rights, has recently erupted into civil war as the citizenry revolts.

[option]"We must show that we staunchly support government and order!" exclaims your Minister of Defence, who also happens to be the heir to a major arms manufacturing company. "These revolutionaries are barbaric! Haven't you heard? Just yesterday a group of them tortured one of Maxtopia’s politicians to death! If we supported them, what kind of message would that send our own people about how they should treat government? We need to help the Maxtopian government quell this uprising — we must supply them with weapons."
[effect] weapons are routinely exported to governments whose citizens show signs of unrest
[stats] Arms Manufacturing increases, Law & Order increases, Corruption increases, Political Freedoms decrease, Pacifism decreases

[option]"We can't possibly help such a corrupt government!" argues @@RANDOMNAME@@, a civil rights activist. "You should see the way they treat their people — it’s no wonder they're revolting! I think we should support them in any way we can: let’s send them the weapons! Of course, we'll have made an enemy of the current Maxtopian government, but they won't be able to do anything about it once they've lost the war."
[effect] the lower classes of other countries are actively encouraged to revolt against their governments
[stats] Arms Manufacturing increases, Political Freedoms increase, International Aid increases, Pacifism decreases, Safety decreases, Compassion increases

[option]"Why should we be sending any weapons at all?" implores @@RANDOMNAME@@, a pacifist and anti-gun protester. "They only further conflict! If anything, we need to do away with the military altogether. Down with guns! Down with war!"
[effect] the now-minuscule military is armed solely with sticks
[stats] Arms Manufacturing decreases, Defence decreases, Pacifism increases, Safety decreases, Compassion decreases
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Corrupt Dictatorship

Postby Cedoria » Sat Nov 22, 2014 10:11 pm

Economy should probably increase for Option 1 and 2, from the money made by arms sales.

Also International Aid isn't a measurable category so far as I know, (someone can correct me if I'm wrong) so it shouldn't be in the stats on option 2.

Also, why would compassion decrease for Option 3? Getting rid of your military is probably excessively compassionate.

I like the premise of the issue, and I think it shows good potential, so just adjust these things and anything else anybody picks up on.
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Luna Amore » Sat Nov 22, 2014 10:17 pm

Cedoria wrote:Also International Aid isn't a measurable category so far as I know, (someone can correct me if I'm wrong) so it shouldn't be in the stats on option 2.

It's a very new category.

That said, don't get tied up too much in the stats. They are the least important part of a draft.

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Postby Nature-Spirits » Sat Nov 22, 2014 10:21 pm

Cedoria wrote:Economy should probably increase for Option 1 and 2, from the money made by arms sales.

Thanks; I hadn't thought of that (though looking back, it does seem glaringly obvious).
EDIT: Actually, trying to remember back (it's been a while since I put that in my draft), it's because the idea is that the country is sending the weapons for free (which does happen in real life, by the way).

Cedoria wrote:Also, why would compassion decrease for Option 3? Getting rid of your military is probably excessively compassionate.

Because the country is ignoring Maxtopia's massacring of its own citizens. Ignoring the plights of foreigners is not compassion.

Thanks for your feedback!

Luna Amore wrote:That said, don't get tied up too much in the stats. They are the least important part of a draft.

Duly noted. Thanks.
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Postby House Liao » Sun Nov 23, 2014 1:38 am

What's the difference between this and issue 194 or 267? The issues I get are all getting the same. Why?

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Postby Nature-Spirits » Sun Nov 23, 2014 6:23 pm

House Liao wrote:What's the difference between this and issue 194 or 267? The issues I get are all getting the same. Why?

>.>
<.<
Damn. I hadn't seen those when I went through the Issues list before to check for similarities to my idea. Dammit.

A question for someone more knowledgeable about the world of Issues: Is my idea distinct enough?
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Left-wing Utopia

Postby Fauzjhia » Sun Nov 23, 2014 9:01 pm

Lol, its perfect. yeah.
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Postby Nature-Spirits » Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:50 pm

Is there any more feedback on this, or shall I submit it?
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