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Godmarked [Technically Dead]

Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 12:24 pm

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Before the beginning of time, the Void reined supreme over all that was and all that could possibly be. The Universe was but a blank canvas back in the Forgotten Era, anxiously awaiting an artist of great skill to fill it with life, color, and amazement. However, the Void enjoyed his domain as it was, what it considered "pure" free of blemishes, everything was where it should be. Or rather, nothing was where it should be. Over a few millennium, the Void grew wary of rooting out attempts of an upstart of matter constantly vigilant, it grew tired of doing micromanaging the Universe. He wished to resign. He needed to rest. But he couldn't, who would ensure his domain remained pure? The answer was simple, he needed someone trustworthy. He needed someone obedient.

He needed an heir.

The first child of the Void was Navitas, an omniscient being with complete influence and control over all of energy and time. The Void charged his only son with rooting out energy that had leaked from other dimensions into his domain, the young god eagerly accepted his task and obediently destroyed energy where it may appear throughout the domain of the void. This marks the end of the Forgotten Era and the start of the Era of Gods.

Every child must reach an age of rebellion and disobedience, such was no different with the Void's own child, tired of only destroying energy, Navitas attempted the utterly unthinkable and greatest act of rebellion the Void knew of. Navitas attempted to create. Navitas created a small blue ball of pure energy and light, many times smaller than an atom. The Void instantly suspected something was wrong, his pure world has a blemish, a hideous abomination of creation. The Void attempted to consume this small orb, when he attempted Navitas willed the orb to burst. Obeying it's master, the orb exploded in a violent array of color and gas, the Void reeled in pain, it screamed in pain as matter overtook every corner of itself. Effectively killing it. Navitas had slain the Void itself.

Alone in the Universe Navitas took to toying with his abilities, speeding up time when it seemed to bore him, and slowing it down when something had interested him. As the Universe expanded as did the loneliness Navitas experienced in his time ruling all that once was his creator's domain. So, he had done what his father did, and created more gods like him, each with the power to control one aspect of nature or another, none quite as powerful as he. Thus, the pantheon was set, and they each became wardens of the Universe.

Fearing for his new young brothers and sisters in the early and extremely chaotic universe, Navitas took it upon himself to create a paradise where all gods could be protected from the violent randomness of the world sparked from nothingness. As the gods learned to master their aspects assigned to them by Navitas, they became ever enthralled with the universe and eager to explore it's wonders.

One of the wonders reared it's head on a lone world orbiting a giant red star. Over the many years of this rock's existence, it slowly grew liquid water upon it's surface. With liquid water, arose the first plants. The gods took extreme interest in the natural processes of this world, some able to force those processes to bend to their will. Controlling plants and animals to their every whim.

However, this age of curiosity and discovery was not to last for much longer, over the years a species that had achieved sentience grew to dominate the planet. The gods treated these creatures like animals, and observed them from a distance, though it soon became apparent they were not. The gods became confused, and strayed away from the intelligent species.

Fearing sentience of animals was the biggest downfall of the Gods, the race grew in technology to the point where they could destroy the very gods themselves, and when it became apparent the beings which created them would stop them from achieving universal domination, they attempted just that. Several gods were slain, narrowing the pantheon to a meager seven, however, humanity was stopped in their heinous efforts to crush the gods. Such marked the start of the Godmarked Era.

Unable to fully destroy life on Zitoal and unable to prevent it from becoming conscious, the gods agreed upon a solution. They would mark one creature on the planet with their holy symbol, giving them divine power to stop the Zitoal from advancing any farther on the technological tree. The creature and god would gain a neurological bond, both being able to communicate with one another psychologically. The more destruction the Godmarked created, the more they were rewarded with better abilities. However, many of the power-craved Godmarked wanted even more power than that of which was given to them, so, many seized control of entire kingdoms and empires for themselves.

Over time, industry spread throughout Zitoal like a wildfire, in an effort to stop the progress, the gods created a plague that is spreading rapidly all across the realm. Men and women, tired of the oppressive Godmarked ruling above them are beginning revolutions across several nations. Greed and anger has driven the Kings and Queens of the realm to declare war on oneanother, plunging the continent into a bloody and violent crusade. Several cultists are threatening to unleash the gates of a Hellish domain long forgotten unto the world. In these chaotic times, who will rise to glory? Who shall find their way into obscurity? Who will be the savior of this world? Who shall bring about it's downfall?

Either way, whatever these beings do now, will effect Zitoal for the rest of existence.


Rules:
Don't take anything to heart, we're all here to tell a good story
Don't godmod or metagame
1. I demand quality posts
2. Well-formatted posts are also mandatory.
3. Have fun
4. Don't have more than 2 characters
5. Know when to lose
6. Please, if you aren't going to be active, don't sign up
7. Be mature
8. PG-13. Keep it like that.

MAP:http://oi44.tinypic.com/25iapzd.jpg
Political Map: N/A as there are no nations yet.

*Cautiously steps out from the shadows*

Greetings all, welcome to Godmarked, an RP I hope will not completely fade into obscurity and quickly die due to lack of interest. Anyway, characters will be taking the role of a God (first five who apply), Godmarked, or simply a mere mortal as you try to progress your characters sneaky personal goals. The bulk of the RP will take place on a continent of Zitoal known as Brandor. Brandor is home to several ingenious races of varying looks and skills, but is on thin ice, many of the people are sick of their oppressive Godmarked rulers and are threatening revolts, foreign relations across the continent are at an all time low, automations are slowly gaining self-awareness, and a mysterious arena hosting gladiator fights appeared just of the cost. Strange times we live in, indeed.

Brandor is a continent home to several nations that players (not Gods) can take control of should they wish to. Industry has spread far across the land, with fancy tesla-coils and other items along those lines dotting every city street. Far warning, don't breathe too deeply there, you may die.

Races

There are multiple races across Brandor, and most are not the stereotypical elf, dwarf, ogre, or troll either. These are the hardened and unique species that one can only think of in the mind of a madman (or me, in this case) each have their own unique set of skills and traits, as well as setbacks, so I'd advise you to choose wisely.

Name of Species: Stin
Location on Map: Mainly the Eastern swamplands
Detailed description (picture preferred): http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/144/f/0/blue_fish_lizard_guy_by_drakelake-d66fqm1.png
Skills: Can change their skin color at will to blend in with surroundings, are quite agile, and can breath under water for some time.
Weaknesses: If they are away from water for more than a day, they will die.
Lifespan: 50-90 years
Stats: You have 1 points remaining!
Strength 6/10 (How strong is this species? 10 would be able to punch the head clean off of someone, 5 would be human-level, 0 would be unable to literally lift a feather.)
Speed 9/10 (How fast can this species move? 10 would be like holding the record for fastest human alive, 5 would be pretty standard, 0 would be a snail)
Agility: 9/10 (How fast can this species change direction and move around? 10 would be reflexes like a cat, 5 would be reflexes of a normal man, 0 would be the agility of a rock.)
Intelligence: 4/10 (How smart is this species? 10 would be genius Tulli, 5 would be man, 0 would [again] be a rock.)


Name of Species: Tulli
Location on Map: The far northern mountain ranges
Detailed description (picture preferred): The Tulli are a race of creatures with horse-like legs, a human torso with extra long and thin arms that end in sharp and threatening claws, they also boast large leathery wings on their back and are completely covered in small-penguin like feathers. Their eyes are small and focused, and their beaks are extremely long and narrow.
Skills: can jump really high, can glide long distances, use their claws as weapons, can see incredible distances, and are really really smart. What with creating the Automations and all.
Weaknesses: They aren't all too strong and can't hear very well, making them susceptible to assassinations.
Lifespan: 150-200 years.
Stats:
Strength 3/10
Speed 8/10
Agility: 7/10
Intelligence: 10/10


Name of Species: Automations
Location on Map: Mainly the urban Western portion of the continents, but originally from the Northern mountain range.
Detailed description (picture preferred): They are robots with skull-like heads, completely made of metal, with several gaps in their chest and stomach to reveal turning gears. They un-ironically cry and bleed oil.
Skills: They hit like a truck, being made of metal and all, and are notably faster and more intelligent than mere mortals. They seem to be everything humanity is, but better!
Weaknesses: They have an unfortunate weakness to water, disabling them should they go out when some god or another decides they don't like you. Which is why it is in their best interests to make nice with the gods.
Lifespan: indefinite
Stats:
Strength 7/10
Speed 7/10
Agility: 7/10
Intelligence: 7/10


Name of Species:
Location on Map: EVERYWHERE! Except the Northern mountain ranges.
Detailed description (picture preferred): They... are humans... if you don't know what they look like... just...just...
Skills: None.
Weaknesses: None.
Lifespan: 80 years.
Stats:
Strength 5/10
Speed 5/10
Agility: 5/10
Intelligence: 5/10


Name of Species: Vavec
Location on Map: Brandor's remote islands
Detailed description (picture preferred): I apologize, but I had this lying around and decided it would be as good as any http://i.imgur.com/igKIZuX.png
Skills: The Vavec's homeland is harsh and unforgiving. They have endured all that nature threw at them by developing excellent survival and hunting skills as well as a very open society. All Vavec are brother and sister in their mind, and war among them is rare indeed.
Weaknesses: The Vavec are not a very advanced race. Few outsiders venture to their land and because of this they are strangely untouched by modern civilization. They are a rare sight on the mainland and as such face great discrimination. This is greatly from the Human kingdoms, although others are not immune to such things.
Lifespan: 85-150 Years
Stats:
Strength 7/10
Speed 7/10
Agility: 8/10
Intelligence: 6/10


Name of Species: Ryraptor Sotonius
Location on Map: http://i.imgur.com/bpCW0zv.png I tried, I really did... but that map is hard to edit XD
Really just the fertile coasts and foothills on the west coast, I assume we live with some of the robots too, and accept them, as we're very advanced (how advanced is allowed? I mean there are freakin robots)

Detailed description:
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Skills: Tools, industry, technology, plague resistance (not completely obviously)
Weaknesses: Not very religious, as our society isn't as pious as we were centuries ago. That makes the gods not like them, like at all.
Lifespan: Can reach human level spans (80-90) but infant mortality is so high that the average is only 50 years. Pretty much if you get past the infant age and you aren't a soldier you've a great chance at making it past 60.
Stats: You have 0 points remaining!
Strength 6/10
Speed 7/10
Agility: 7/10
Intelligence: 8/10


Name of Species: Kitsuna
Location on Map:Northern Island-Red
Detailed description: Average female Kitsuna
Variations- (can be any combination of these)
Usual- One Tailed
Uncommon- Three Tailed, Retrospective Horned, Purple Eyes
Unusual- Six Tails, Straight Horned
Rare-Nine Tails, Ten Tailed, Red Eyes,
Legendary- Eighteen Tailed, Curved Horned, Black Eyes
Skills: Theater, Novel writings, mask making, rice growing, sake brewing, art of fire control
Weaknesses: Not skilled at fighting due to having less strength
Lifespan: 150-250 years, at the most extreme 500 years
Stats:
Strength 1/10
Speed 9/10
Agility: 9/10
Intelligence: 9/10


Name of Species: Fae
Location on Map: Northern Island-Blue
Detailed description: Female Fae- single winged
Variations-
Usual- Single Wing Pair, White Wing Color
Uncommon- Double Wing Pair
Unusual- Red Eyes
Rare- Black Wing Color
Legendary- Triple Wing Pair, Gold Eyes
Skills: Smithing, Swordsmanship, Spearmanship, Flight, Farming, Survivalism, Marksmanship
Weaknesses: Isolated culturally, therefore quite harsh to other groups they encounter. They are great survivalists due to living in forests, outside of a forest life is harsh and deadly for them. They have little resistance to disease due to no interaction with other races
Lifespan: 100-150, most extreme 200
Stats:
Strength 10/10
Speed 6/10
Agility: 7/10
Intelligence: 5/10


Name of Species: stormgarderr
Location on Map: Northern frozen part
Detailed description:
Skills: great skills with killing conquering pillaging great weapons masters
Weaknesses: always on the marsh to war
Lifespan: 30 but I could be high most stormgarderr die at the age of 30
Stats: You have 0 points remaining!
Strength 8/10
Speed 8/10
Agility: 8/10
Intelligence: 2/10 (on average but some show exceptional skill with thinking)
RP Reference: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=305933
Short background:
the stormgarderr were created for one single reason and one only and that was to kill humans since the cold climate of the frozen north cant sustain such a high population the the stormgarderr migrate every 10 or so years down to the more fertile plains were the humans live there they sack kill pillage everything but in the end a human army defeats them in an epic battle. And since stormgarderr reproduction rate is so high a new migration continues 10 years later. Maybe this time the stormgarderr can actually succeed maybe from divine intervention?


However, if none of these races tickle your fancy, try creating your own by filling out the app below, if I like it enough, i'll add it to the main list of species.

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SPECIES APP
Name of Species:
Location on Map:
Detailed description (picture preferred):
Skills:
Weaknesses:
Lifespan:
Stats: You have 8 points remaining!
Strength 5/10 (How strong is this species? 10 would be able to punch the head clean off of someone, 5 would be human-level, 0 would be unable to literally lift a feather.)
Speed 5/10 (How fast can this species move? 10 would be like holding the record for fastest human alive, 5 would be pretty standard, 0 would be a snail)
Agility: 5/10 (How fast can this species change direction and move around? 10 would be reflexes like a cat, 5 would be reflexes of a normal man, 0 would be the agility of a rock.)
Intelligence: 5/10 (How smart is this species? 10 would be genius Tulli, 5 would be man, 0 would [again] be a rock.)
RP Reference:
9821 (for tracking purposes.)


As well as being able to make their own species, certain players will be able to control Gods! These will be the first seven to apply for gods and be accepted, once we have seven, we have our pantheon. I will play as the Supreme Creator, or Navitas, the one mentioned repeatedly in the backstory and creator of the other gods and the heavens. Controlling all of energy basically means I have some sort of influence in basically everything, anyway, the gods are divided into three different classes. Depending on your aspect(s) I will fit you into one, also, multiple aspects are allowed, but they cannot contradict. Gods will get the power to choose their Godmarked from the mortal applicants that have been accepted. No longer accepting god apps.

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GOD APP

So, here we come to it finally, the moment some of you have been waiting for! The character app. Now, as a character, you can select if you want to be Godmarked or not, but if you do I cannot guarantee you'll get a super-cool set of powers that fits with your character's theme. It's whichever god replies to your accepted application and gives your set of powers, remember gods, you're trying to prevent an uprising from the races of Zitoal from killing you by picking the most destructive people you can find. Remember that. So I really don't want to see someone pure of heart being picked to be Godmarked, if you want to be a hero, you have to be mortal.

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CHARACTER APP

Name of character:
Personality:
Age:
Weapons:
Armor:
History:
Race:
Fears:
Stats: You have 35 points to spend!(* = races' stats)
Strength*: 0/10
Speed*: 0/10
Agility*: 0/10
Intelligence*: 0/10
Attack:(How effective are you at delivering a blow?) 0/10
Competence: (How effective are you at using skills learned?) 0/10
Vitality: (How long can you last in battle before going down?) 0/10
Blacksmithing: (How effective can you make your armor?) 0/10
Composure: (How good are you at keeping your cool in intense situations?) 0/10
Defense: (How good are you at taking a blow without feeling a thing?) 0/10
Stealth: (How good at you at not being detected?) 0/10
Godmarked?: [Yes/No]
RP Reference:
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As well as being able to apply to be a mortal, Godmarked, or god, one will get to apply to own their own little piece of Brandor, isn't that amazing? I think it is. Nations will have to deal with no allies right of the bat and being at the starts of a brutal war that will engulf the land. Fun, right?

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NATION APP

Nation name:
Population:
Map Claim:
Flag:
Capital City:
Culture

Foreign Policy:

Head of State:
Godmarked?:
Head of Government:
Godmarked?:
Style pf Government:

Exports:
Imports:
Description of Economy:

Military Population:
Military Equipment:

Population of Revolutionaries (Mandatory)
9823


Example Apps:
Name of Deity: Navitas
Gender: Male
Appearance: Image
Aspect[s]: Energy, Time
Powers: can manipulate energy in all it's forms, can bend time to his will.
RP Reference: OP.
9820 (For tracking purposes)


Nation name: The United Empire of Valrifell
Population: 1.9 Billion
Map Claim: That one part over there
Flag: Flag.jpg
Capital City: Brotopia
Foreign Policy: Kill, conquer, claim, repeat.

Head of State: Sir Head of State
Godmarked?: Yes
Head of Government: Sir Head of Government
Godmarked?: No
Government style: Complete consulship
Culture: A mixture of Spartan and Athenian architecture, Roman style of ruling, and Roman love of wine and knowledge.

Exports: Fruits and vegetables
Imports: Gold and beer
Description of Economy: Completely nonexistent, too much importing of beer and gold, not enough exporting of fruits or veggies.

Military Population: 1 billion
Military Equipment: Laser swords and iron armor

Population of Revolutionaries: 9,000,000


Name of character: Bob NormalTon
Personality: A quit character, who works as a balcksmith in the cold northern lands of Brandor. Which has made him tough, though the racism by the Tulli on a Stin like him is nearly unbearable.
Age: 45
Weapons: Energy sword and small laser pistol.
Armor: Iron breastplate and chainmail leggings and boots
History: Born and raised in the Eastern swamplands, Bob was raised in the simple backsmithing town of NewBrecksworth were he learned and mastered the trade he had grown up around. Eventually, two Tulli on a quest of utmost importance took note of the skilled blacksmith and offered Bob to return back to their homeland with them, he happily obliged. Once back in the Northern mountains, the rest of the Tulli acted with fear and hatred towards the Sin man, but he was put to work in sculpting the various intricate parts of the Automations the Tulli used as servants.
Race: Stin
Fears: The undead, necromancy, Godmarked
Stats: You have 40 points to spend!(* = races' stats, you can take points away from these if you wish)
Strength*: 3/10
Speed*: 8/10
Agility*: 7/10
Intelligence*: 10/10
Attack: 5/10
Competence: 5/10
Vitality: 5/10
Blacksmithing: 10/10
Composure: 5/10
Defense: 5/10
Stealth: 5/10
Godmarked?: No
RP Reference: @OP
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OP: ME
Co-OP: None as of now.
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Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 12:24 pm

Roster

Gods
Oceanus ----------- New Romanis
Navitas ------------ Valrifell
Lailys----------------Gandham Islands
Metus----------------Ethirus
Yolos-----------------Ahvulon
Tiberius-------------Astavar
Tenei----------------Creataris


Godmarked
Varren Kailas (Navitas)----- Reath

Mortals
Belathor-----------Sardian republic
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Postby Ouldale » Tue Jul 29, 2014 12:53 pm

Tag. Looks very cool. Hopefully a few more people will show up.
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Postby Sardian republic » Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:27 pm

hmm this could be interesting

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Postby Ouldale » Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:32 pm

GOD APP

Name of Deity: Slaryus
Gender: Male
Appearance: Still looking for a full body picture, here is the head.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_rzdB5a4kLAo/S-iIUOKTYzI/AAAAAAAATgU/GWM7I25MUZE/s1600/d91e5a49-fc40-4fde-bb5b-7f20e4170017.jpeg

Aspect[s]: The Mind, Dreams, Creativity, Intelligence, Memory, Imagination
Powers: Omniscience, give ideas and occasionally knowledge to mortals, influence decisions of mortals. Usually these are done through dreams, which are under his authorship and his domain. He also has the ability to occasionally give mortals visions or hallucinations, whichever way you look at it.
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=301060&p=20684585&hilit=elrond#p20684585
9820 (For tracking purposes)
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Postby Sardian republic » Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:44 pm

Name of character:Belethor
Personality: an adventurous character who started adventuring after hearing stories on the adventurers of old
Age:16
Weapons: Rapier and Crossbow
Armor: Chainmail, plate armor leggings, leather boots, and Kettle hat
History: Belethor is an orphan when he was little he and the other orphans heard stories from an old storyteller about the adventurers of old
after hearing the stories belethor wanted to become an adventurer. When he was 16 he left the orphanage to become an adventurer and explore all of Zitoal like the adventurers from the stories. During his travels he helped an old man who was having problems with local bandits and the nearby town of drifting falls with the a group of bandits that where causing problems after defeating the bandits he was called the hero of drifting falls.
Race: Human
Fears: fear of heights
Stats:
Strength*: 5/10
Speed*: 5/10
Agility*: 0/10
Intelligence*: 5/10
Attack:5/10
Competence: 5/10
Vitality: 5/10
Blacksmithing:0/10
Composure: 3/10
Defense: 2/10
Stealth: 0/10
Godmarked?: no
RP Reference:
9822
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Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:58 pm

Ouldale wrote:GOD APP

Name of Deity: Slaryus
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Picture preferred) Still looking for a full body picture, here is the head
[spoiler=Face/Head]
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_rzdB5a4kLAo/S-iIUOKTYzI/AAAAAAAATgU/GWM7I25MUZE/s1600/d91e5a49-fc40-4fde-bb5b-7f20e4170017.jpeg[/spoiler]

Aspect[s]: Wisdom, Intelligence, Intellect
Powers: Omniscience, give and take knowledge to and from mortals, influence decisions of mortals.
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=301060&p=20684585&hilit=elrond#p20684585
9820 (For tracking purposes)


A god of Knowledge with the power to take away knowledge from mortals would defeat the entire purpose of even having Godmaked in the first place, you would have to either change your aspect, powers, or both.
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Sardian republic wrote:Name of character:Belethor
Personality: an adventurous character who started adventuring after hearing stories on the adventurers of old
Age:16
Weapons: Rapier and Crossbow
Armor: Chainmail, plate armor leggings, leather boots, and Kettle hat
History: Belethor is an orphan when he was little. He and the other orphans heard stories from an old storyteller about the adventurers of old
after hearing the stories belethor wanted to become an adventurer. When he was 16 he left the orphanage to start adventuring
Race:Human
Fears: fear of heights
Stats:
Strength*: 5/10
Speed*: 5/10
Agility*: 0/10
Intelligence*: 5/10
Attack:5/10
Competence: 5/10
Vitality: 5/10
Blacksmithing:0/10
Composure: 3/10
Defense: 2/10
Stealth: 0/10
Godmarked?: no
RP Reference:
9822


Shocking, the first mortal app doesn't want to have a fraction of a power of a god? Wow...
Okay...
All I request is that you flesh out the backstory a bit, then I'd accept you.
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Postby Sardian republic » Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:06 pm

okay I edited if it isn't fleshed out I'll try to fix it thank you for telling me.

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Postby New Romanis » Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:19 pm

GOD APP

Name of Deity: Oceanus
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2013 ... 7/1645.jpg
Aspect[s]: Water, Storm
Powers: Can create bodies of water, create monsoons, typhoons, and tsunamis
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=305683
9820 (For tracking purposes)
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New Romanis wrote:GOD APP

Name of Deity: Oceanus
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2013 ... 7/1645.jpg
Aspect[s]: Water
Powers: Can create bodies of water, create monsoons, typhoons, and tsunamis
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=305683
9820 (For tracking purposes)


Accepted

Sardian republic wrote:Name of character:Belethor
Personality: an adventurous character who started adventuring after hearing stories on the adventurers of old
Age:16
Weapons: Rapier and Crossbow
Armor: Chainmail, plate armor leggings, leather boots, and Kettle hat
History: Belethor is an orphan when he was little he and the other orphans heard stories from an old storyteller about the adventurers of old
after hearing the stories belethor wanted to become an adventurer. When he was 16 he left the orphanage to become an adventurer and explore all of Zitoal like the adventurers from the stories. During his travels he helped an old man who was having problems with local bandits and the nearby town of drifting falls with the a group of bandits that where causing problems after defeating the bandits he was called the hero of drifting falls.
Race: Human
Fears: fear of heights
Stats:
Strength*: 5/10
Speed*: 5/10
Agility*: 0/10
Intelligence*: 5/10
Attack:5/10
Competence: 5/10
Vitality: 5/10
Blacksmithing:0/10
Composure: 3/10
Defense: 2/10
Stealth: 0/10
Godmarked?: no
RP Reference:
9822


Meh. I would really want you to work on your formatting more, but, Accepted
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Apologies, but I decided to make this a two-in-one

Postby Reath » Tue Jul 29, 2014 4:33 pm

SPECIES APP

Name of Species: Vavec
Location on Map: Brandor's remote islands
Detailed description (picture preferred): I apologize, but I had this lying around and decided it would be as good as any http://i.imgur.com/igKIZuX.png
Skills: The Vavec's homeland is harsh and unforgiving. They have endured all that nature threw at them by developing excellent survival and hunting skills as well as a very open society. All Vavec are brother and sister in their mind, and war among them is rare indeed.
Weaknesses: The Vavec are not a very advanced race. Few outsiders venture to their land and because of this they are strangely untouched by modern civilization. They are a rare sight on the mainland and as such face great discrimination. This is greatly from the Human kingdoms, although others are not immune to such things.
Lifespan: 85-150 Years
Stats: You have 0 points remaining!
Strength 7/10
Speed 7/10
Agility: 8/10
Intelligence: 6/10
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=302527
9821



CHARACTER APP

Name of character: Varren Kailas
Personality: Intelligent, kind, however sees others as untrustworthy
Age: 23
Weapons: Trained well with a variety of blades as well as the trusty bow and arrow. (Which he prides himself on a tad too often)
Armor: Light leather armor
History: Landed on the Brandor mainland in search of adventure. They seemed even stranger to him, and for a time after he first arrived he stared at the strange inhabitants of the nations as much as they did him. They whispered behind his back.
Called him a devil. And he put up with it, but only for so long.
A young man was passing by and rather loudly commented on his appearance, although clearly not with the intent of him hearing. This did it. Varren leaped on to the man and before he knew what he had done blood dripped from his knuckles. The guards rushed footsteps drew near and Varren knew it was over for him. He gazed upwards towards the oncoming group. It was as if reality was playing on in front of him it felt... unreal. Very sharply he was pulled back to what was happening. And so he got up and ran. He kept running, and running. And before they could lay a finger upon him he ran towards their stables. Quickly, he hauled himself upon a stead and tightly grabbed the reigns. He was off, with the sounds of the search slowly quietening down...
He galloped into the Brandor countryside, not knowing what was ahead of him, but wanting to escape what was behind.
Race: Vavec
Fears: Nothing! Varren is a man of pure strength! (Oh, but he does fear most people around him. He also has quite a fear of water despite his father being a fisherman)
Stats: You have 0 points to spend!
Strength*: 7/10
Speed*: 7/10
Agility*: 8/10
Intelligence*: 6/10
Attack:(How effective are you at delivering a blow?) 6/10
Competence: (How effective are you at using skills learned?) 4/10
Vitality: (How long can you last in battle before going down?) 4/10
Blacksmithing: (How effective can you make your armor?) 4/10
Composure: (How good are you at keeping your cool in intense situations?) 4/10
Defense: (How good are you at taking a blow without feeling a thing?) 5/10
Stealth: (How good at you at not being detected?) 8/10
Godmarked?: Yes
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=302527
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Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:12 pm

Reath wrote:SPECIES APP

Name of Species: Vavec
Location on Map: Brandor's remote islands
Detailed description (picture preferred): I apologize, but I had this lying around and decided it would be as good as any http://i.imgur.com/igKIZuX.png
Skills: The Vavec's homeland is harsh and unforgiving. They have endured all that nature threw at them by developing excellent survival and hunting skills as well as a very open society. All Vavec are brother and sister in their mind, and war among them is rare indeed.
Weaknesses: The Vavec are not a very advanced race. Few outsiders venture to their land and because of this they are strangely untouched by modern civilization. They are a rare sight on the mainland and as such face great discrimination. This is greatly from the Human kingdoms, although others are not immune to such things.
Lifespan: 85-150 Years
Stats: You have 0 points remaining!
Strength 7/10
Speed 7/10
Agility: 8/10
Intelligence: 6/10
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=302527
9821



CHARACTER APP

Name of character: Varren Kailas
Personality: Intelligent, kind, however sees others as untrustworthy
Age: 23
Weapons: Trained well with a variety of blades as well as the trusty bow and arrow. (Which he prides himself on a tad too often)
Armor: Light leather armor
History: Landed on the Brandor mainland in search of adventure. They seemed even stranger to him, and for a time after he first arrived he stared at the strange inhabitants of the nations as much as they did him. They whispered behind his back.
Called him a devil. And he put up with it, but only for so long.
A young man was passing by and rather loudly commented on his appearance, although clearly not with the intent of him hearing. This did it. Varren leaped on to the man and before he knew what he had done blood dripped from his knuckles. The guards rushed footsteps drew near and Varren knew it was over for him. He gazed upwards towards the oncoming group. It was as if reality was playing on in front of him it felt... unreal. Very sharply he was pulled back to what was happening. And so he got up and ran. He kept running, and running. And before they could lay a finger upon him he ran towards their stables. Quickly, he hauled himself upon a stead and tightly grabbed the reigns. He was off, with the sounds of the search slowly quietening down...
He galloped into the Brandor countryside, not knowing what was ahead of him, but wanting to escape what was behind.
Race: Vavec
Fears: Nothing! Varren is a man of pure strength! (Oh, but he does fear most people around him. He also has quite a fear of water despite his father being a fisherman)
Stats: You have 0 points to spend!
Strength*: 7/10
Speed*: 7/10
Agility*: 8/10
Intelligence*: 6/10
Attack:(How effective are you at delivering a blow?) 6/10
Competence: (How effective are you at using skills learned?) 4/10
Vitality: (How long can you last in battle before going down?) 4/10
Blacksmithing: (How effective can you make your armor?) 4/10
Composure: (How good are you at keeping your cool in intense situations?) 4/10
Defense: (How good are you at taking a blow without feeling a thing?) 5/10
Stealth: (How good at you at not being detected?) 8/10
Godmarked?: Yes
RP Reference: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=302527
9822


Both are Accepted!
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Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:54 pm

*A slightly impatient bump*
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Postby Reath » Tue Jul 29, 2014 6:04 pm

Bumps ahoy, because why not.
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Postby Gandham Islands » Tue Jul 29, 2014 7:07 pm

GOD APP

Name of Deity: Lailys
Gender: Female
Appearance:Lailys
Aspect: Moon and the Hunt
Powers: controls the tide, stronger during the night and strongest during a full moon. can shapeshift into animals, and has mind manipulation of them. expert marksman.
RP Reference:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=300378&p=20513502&hilit=scott#p20513502
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Postby Reath » Tue Jul 29, 2014 7:49 pm

I like it Gand, but you'll have to wait for Val.
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Postby Valrifell » Tue Jul 29, 2014 8:16 pm

Gandham Islands wrote:GOD APP

Name of Deity: Lailys
Gender: Female
Appearance:Lailys
Aspect: Moon and the Hunt
Powers: controls the tide, stronger during the night and strongest during a full moon. can shapeshift into animals, and has mind manipulation of them. expert marksman.
RP Reference:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=300378&p=20513502&hilit=scott#p20513502
9820


Accepted. Well, that's all for tonight, I need to sleep.

By the way, Reath, I hereby declare you as a Godmarked of Navitas himself!
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Postby Valrifell » Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:29 am

*Another slightly more impatient bump*
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Postby Sardian republic » Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:25 am

uh if it's okay I could copy the link to this and post it on my region message board and see if anyone wants to join from my region.

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Postby New Romanis » Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:34 am

Sardian republic wrote:uh if it's okay I could copy the link to this and post it on my region message board and see if anyone wants to join from my region.

Yeah, I could do this too.
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Postby Valrifell » Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:43 am

New Romanis wrote:
Sardian republic wrote:uh if it's okay I could copy the link to this and post it on my region message board and see if anyone wants to join from my region.

Yeah, I could do this too.

Sardian republic wrote:uh if it's okay I could copy the link to this and post it on my region message board and see if anyone wants to join from my region.


Yeah, that's fine.
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Postby Reath » Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:55 am

I shall serve you well O Great One.
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Postby Reath » Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:59 am

Oh, and you need to edit the Roster Val.
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Postby Valrifell » Wed Jul 30, 2014 10:39 am

Reath wrote:Oh, and you need to edit the Roster Val.


I know, if no one else applies, though, it will be for naught.
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Postby Reath » Wed Jul 30, 2014 11:33 am

It's disappointing, but this RP requires quite a lot of active participants, which can be rather difficult.
I think the best we can do is keep the thread open in case there is any sudden interest but after that we could just close it and re-open some other time.
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