by North Libya (Ancient) » Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:39 pm
by North Libya (Ancient) » Sat Jul 19, 2014 2:36 pm
by Semolia » Sat Jul 19, 2014 2:41 pm
by Franklin And Jefferson » Sat Jul 19, 2014 2:54 pm
by North Libya (Ancient) » Mon Jul 21, 2014 6:58 pm
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 11:33 am
by Common Territories » Tue Jul 22, 2014 11:52 am
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:06 pm
Xyrx wrote:Xyrx would like permission to fly a Star Warrior satellite over your nation and the planes destinations to search for more survivors.
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:08 pm
Semolia wrote:Need some help ???
by Tiami » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:13 pm
by Common Territories » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:14 pm
by Xyrx » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:18 pm
Tiami wrote:OoC: Hey everyone, I'm just posting here to offer some advice regarding RPing that can further supplement future growth. I will be addressing each individual post in this RP, so this could be a long post. Without further ado, let's get started!
North Libya: viewtopic.php?p=20995403#p20995403 - the OP and remaining posts.-Instead of simply stating that your planes were shot down, why don't you post about how they were shot down (air, via land, or from sea/ocean).
-Maybe you could RP persons within the plane moments before being shot down- it'd be a enjoyable experience on your part.
-Watch capitalization. Try not to capitalize every word; it's rough on reader, but it's also improper grammar. Names, places, books, etc., should all be capitalized.
-Try describing what the passenger planes looked like; in other words, what kind of passenger planes were they?
-Maybe try your government announcing the attack and who they believe shot the plane(s) down.
-You stated that you have found out who it was, but did not provide a name. Try providing it so the international community is made better aware of the ongoing crisis.
Semolia: viewtopic.php?p=20996062#p20996062-Try to be clearer on you intended actions.
-Instead of posting a single sentence, try to expand it; specify how you would aid N.Libya or go against his/her country.
-Delve into communiques. Communiques are a form… a letter- fancy if anything. They are used on NS to communicate peacefully and to establish diplomatic meetings, declare war.
Xyrx: viewtopic.php?p=21035241#p21035241-The same applies for you as it does for Semolia. Try to expand and delve into communiques.
-Don't send military squads. There is no telling how long it would actually take for them to get there. Plus, it's not safe to assume you directly border North Libya unless this has already been consented to.
This thread is for players to ask about RPing. It's a wonderful thread and it'd be great if it were utilized more. I'd advise a visit there. There are also so many guides out in the forums to look at. They have been helpful to many players, myself included. I'd also advise to look into a few guides. Regardless, feel free to TG any questions regarding RP. I'm always available, so I will have an answer ASAP.
Hope this helps,
Tiami
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:21 pm
Common Territories wrote:Nope. I shot it down. Like, totally in flames and junk. Besides; I don't see their confession here do you?
Xyrx wrote:Tiami wrote:OoC: Hey everyone, I'm just posting here to offer some advice regarding RPing that can further supplement future growth. I will be addressing each individual post in this RP, so this could be a long post. Without further ado, let's get started!
North Libya: viewtopic.php?p=20995403#p20995403 - the OP and remaining posts.-Instead of simply stating that your planes were shot down, why don't you post about how they were shot down (air, via land, or from sea/ocean).
-Maybe you could RP persons within the plane moments before being shot down- it'd be a enjoyable experience on your part.
-Watch capitalization. Try not to capitalize every word; it's rough on reader, but it's also improper grammar. Names, places, books, etc., should all be capitalized.
-Try describing what the passenger planes looked like; in other words, what kind of passenger planes were they?
-Maybe try your government announcing the attack and who they believe shot the plane(s) down.
-You stated that you have found out who it was, but did not provide a name. Try providing it so the international community is made better aware of the ongoing crisis.
Semolia: viewtopic.php?p=20996062#p20996062-Try to be clearer on you intended actions.
-Instead of posting a single sentence, try to expand it; specify how you would aid N.Libya or go against his/her country.
-Delve into communiques. Communiques are a form… a letter- fancy if anything. They are used on NS to communicate peacefully and to establish diplomatic meetings, declare war.
Xyrx: viewtopic.php?p=21035241#p21035241-The same applies for you as it does for Semolia. Try to expand and delve into communiques.
-Don't send military squads. There is no telling how long it would actually take for them to get there. Plus, it's not safe to assume you directly border North Libya unless this has already been consented to.
This thread is for players to ask about RPing. It's a wonderful thread and it'd be great if it were utilized more. I'd advise a visit there. There are also so many guides out in the forums to look at. They have been helpful to many players, myself included. I'd also advise to look into a few guides. Regardless, feel free to TG any questions regarding RP. I'm always available, so I will have an answer ASAP.
Hope this helps,
Tiami
by Common Territories » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:23 pm
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:25 pm
Common Territories wrote:Nope. Still shot them down using the lightning bolt I stole from Zeus. The lazy bastard didn't need it anyways.
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:27 pm
Common Territories wrote:Yes. Yes I did.
by Common Territories » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:35 pm
by North Libya (Ancient) » Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:42 pm
Common Territories wrote:Okay how about this. I bet you that I can write a post that is longer, more descriptive, and overall better quality then this "unggoy Star"; I also bet I can outshine even all your posts in this thread in both length and quality. This post will outline my asinine imagination in me shooting them both down. If I fail to match quality and length promises, I will gladly pay your government IC $1 Trillion NSD and as many storefront services as you want from my storefronts, free of charge.
Either way, you win; you either get a good post for your RP or you get trillions worth of currency and services. Lets see you deny the only person actually making public their involvement.
by Common Territories » Tue Jul 22, 2014 2:16 pm
by Tiami » Tue Jul 22, 2014 2:53 pm
Xyrx wrote:Tiami wrote:OoC: Hey everyone, I'm just posting here to offer some advice regarding RPing that can further supplement future growth. I will be addressing each individual post in this RP, so this could be a long post. Without further ado, let's get started!
North Libya: viewtopic.php?p=20995403#p20995403 - the OP and remaining posts.-Instead of simply stating that your planes were shot down, why don't you post about how they were shot down (air, via land, or from sea/ocean).
-Maybe you could RP persons within the plane moments before being shot down- it'd be a enjoyable experience on your part.
-Watch capitalization. Try not to capitalize every word; it's rough on reader, but it's also improper grammar. Names, places, books, etc., should all be capitalized.
-Try describing what the passenger planes looked like; in other words, what kind of passenger planes were they?
-Maybe try your government announcing the attack and who they believe shot the plane(s) down.
-You stated that you have found out who it was, but did not provide a name. Try providing it so the international community is made better aware of the ongoing crisis.
Semolia: viewtopic.php?p=20996062#p20996062-Try to be clearer on you intended actions.
-Instead of posting a single sentence, try to expand it; specify how you would aid N.Libya or go against his/her country.
-Delve into communiques. Communiques are a form… a letter- fancy if anything. They are used on NS to communicate peacefully and to establish diplomatic meetings, declare war.
Xyrx: viewtopic.php?p=21035241#p21035241-The same applies for you as it does for Semolia. Try to expand and delve into communiques.
-Don't send military squads. There is no telling how long it would actually take for them to get there. Plus, it's not safe to assume you directly border North Libya unless this has already been consented to.
This thread is for players to ask about RPing. It's a wonderful thread and it'd be great if it were utilized more. I'd advise a visit there. There are also so many guides out in the forums to look at. They have been helpful to many players, myself included. I'd also advise to look into a few guides. Regardless, feel free to TG any questions regarding RP. I'm always available, so I will have an answer ASAP.
Hope this helps,
Tiami
Not being a rager or anything, but I know how to rp and plus, the squad will be sent by a plane. Also, the military part is so the investigators are safe, just incase the camp is really some of the hostiles.
by San Pera » Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:09 pm
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