Age of Shinobi: Rebirth (OoC)

[Bycrest]

I just noticed this post and immediately thought of this.

Revan

I am disappointed.

#someoneannouncedtheygotthereference

Have a cookie!

There's two more to find!

Seriously, that's such an obvious reference. Every time I think of Revan I think of the guy you screwed over both the Jedi and the Sith.

[Acroticus]

So, AP, I was wondering if it would be okay if Reiko and her team find a rogue ninja in the Land of Waterfalls carrying the Hiramekarei (http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiramekarei), and kill him and take it? If so, would you want me to post another character app for it?

[Sonitusia]

So, AP, I was wondering if it would be okay if Reiko and her team find a rogue ninja in the Land of Waterfalls carrying the Hiramekarei (http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiramekarei), and kill him and take it? If so, would you want me to post another character app for it?

I wonder how it ended up in that person's possession in the first place...

[Bycrest]

So, AP, I was wondering if it would be okay if Reiko and her team find a rogue ninja in the Land of Waterfalls carrying the Hiramekarei (http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiramekarei), and kill him and take it? If so, would you want me to post another character app for it?

I wonder how it ended up in that person's possession in the first place...

Most likely stole it, just like that jerk Suigetsu did with Kubikiribocho.

[Sonitusia]

I wonder how it ended up in that person's possession in the first place...

Most likely stole it, just like that jerk Suigetsu did with Kubikiribocho.

Speaking of that blade, I should bring over Yoshi before someone steals Kubi.

[Anowa]

"This is Kurogami, I found one of the target's clones! I'm in pursuit!"

This is a problem:

With the exception of Madara Uchiha, whose mastery of the Rinnegan allowed him to tell a clone from the original,[4] shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with the Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or Rinne Sharingan.[5][6][7][8]

Unless Kurogami is secretly Madara Uchiha you need to edit that.

[United States of Indonesia]

"This is Kurogami, I found one of the target's clones! I'm in pursuit!"

This is a problem:

With the exception of Madara Uchiha, whose mastery of the Rinnegan allowed him to tell a clone from the original,[4] shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with the Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or Rinne Sharingan.[5][6][7][8]

Unless Kurogami is secretly Madara Uchiha you need to edit that.

Done. I said that he found Revan (though it's just a clone), but he knew that there's no actual way to confirm if that guys is the original or just a clone, he just kept pursuing, betting on his luck.

[Altruistic Paladins]

Sonitusia, the Shirogane I mentioned is merely an imposter. Do not worry; it is not godmodding.

So, AP, I was wondering if it would be okay if Reiko and her team find a rogue ninja in the Land of Waterfalls carrying the Hiramekarei (http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiramekarei), and kill him and take it? If so, would you want me to post another character app for it?

Why would you need a character app for a character who is going to die very shortly after appearing?

[Shadowwell]

I am back, but probably wont be able to get any posts up until tomorrow or even later.

[Sonitusia]

Paladin, I found this funny, but ever since before, you kept calling my ninjas from Iwagakure 'of the Sand' or 'Sand ninjas'. That's Sunagakure xD

Iwagakure ninjas are 'of the rock'.

[Altruistic Paladins]

Paladin, I found this funny, but ever since before, you kept calling my ninjas from Iwagakure 'of the Sand' or 'Sand ninjas'. That's Sunagakure xD

Iwagakure ninjas are 'of the rock'.

I think I just overgeneralized since I swore that the term "leaf shinobi" has been used before, but I am probably wrong about it.

[Acroticus]

Sonitusia, the Shirogane I mentioned is merely an imposter. Do not worry; it is not godmodding.

So, AP, I was wondering if it would be okay if Reiko and her team find a rogue ninja in the Land of Waterfalls carrying the Hiramekarei (http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiramekarei), and kill him and take it? If so, would you want me to post another character app for it?

Why would you need a character app for a character who is going to die very shortly after appearing?

Idk, maybe you want to "okay" his abilities... but that's why I asked

[Altruistic Paladins]

Idk, maybe you want to "okay" his abilities... but that's why I asked

That seems fine, no need for coming-up with an app for Sir Not Living in this Feature.

And speaking of applications, I cannot believe how I just completely forgot to add categories in the apps for the most necessary descriptions of any character in the Naruto Universe:

Code: Select all

Hobbies:
Favorite Word/Phrase:
Favorite Food:
Least Favorite Food:

[Acroticus]

Idk, maybe you want to "okay" his abilities... but that's why I asked

That seems fine, no need for coming-up with an app for Sir Not Living in this Feature.

And speaking of applications, I cannot believe how I just completely forgot to add categories in the apps for the most necessary descriptions of any character in the Naruto Universe:

Code: Select all

Hobbies:
Favorite Word/Phrase:
Favorite Food:
Least Favorite Food:

LMAO

[Sonitusia]

I'll put up an app for Shirogane as reference.

Name: Okazaki Shirogane
Role: Supporting
Age: 13
Rank: Genin
Gender: Male
Native Land/Village: Iwagakure
Current Place of Residence: Iwagakure

Appearance


He typically wears an armband on his right arm that has the clan symbol, and chooses to wear a track jacket similar to Shinko's, but with inverted colors.

Personality: A hard headed kid who admires both Shinko and Yuuki for being the first Okazaki clan members to be shinobi, he's one of the few who are willing to work hard to achieve what their idols have already gotten to.
Biography: Son of a kitchenware blacksmith in the Okazaki clan, Shirogane thought that life was rather mundane until he heard the news that Okazaki Shinko and Yuuki had graduated as Genin in the Iwagakure ninja academy. This made certain gears within the boy click, and ever since then he trained to become a shinobi himself. This was mostly focused on physical training, but after he successfully gained tutelage from Shinko, he began to control his chakra as well, though in a different path from his sensei. While Shinko focused on using steel release techniques in conjunction to a wide knowledge on weaponry, Shirogane would find himself excelling in taijutsu and using earth release techniques to use brute strength on his opponents.
Motivations: To make the clan the best in Iwagakure!
Strengths:

• Is very capable in both taijutsu and ninjutsu
• Has good understanding in how to use the earth in combat
• Despite his looks, he hides a very durable body underneath his clothing, and can take hit after hit without going down
• Like many clan members, he is very good at creating weapons

Weaknesses:

• Oddly mediocre in handling weapons
• Is prone to genjutsu
• Not very agile

Specialty Jutsu(s):

• Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique - Using the forces of gravity in the earth to slow down a target, it allows Shirogane to fight on an even pace. It can also be used to increase one's own strength when timed correctly.
• Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin - Allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent, proceeding to form two gigantic sections that can crush the opponent.
• Earth Release: Golem Technique - Allows him to summon a large humanoid golem which carries a battle axe. It is mostly sentient, but Shirogane will be mostly defenseless if using this jutsu, and it consumes chakra at an alarming rate if used for too long.
• Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique - Allows him to dig into the earth and hide before launching a surprise attack on an unsuspecting enemy.
• Steel Release: Body Support - A jutsu taught by Shinko, it allows Shirogane to further enhance his taijutsu to outstanding capabilities.
• Steel Release: Needle Trap - Using minerals stored within the earth, they harden and sprout upwards as pinpoint sharp needles below a target's feet.
• Steel Release: Reparation - The user can repair shattered or broken objects made of minerals should every single piece be available.

Kekkei Genkai: Kōton (Steel Release)
Hobbies: Enjoys making kitchenware in his free time, or studying more about how to become a great ninja
Favorite Word/Phrase: Aye!
Favorite Food: Steak
Least Favorite Food: Okra
Writing Sample: Nope

[Anowa]

"No. According to our cameras, they're already inside the tower."

>Stage two started less than two hours ago
>Genin are already inside the tower
Anko would have an aneurysm.

[Nachfolgia]

"No. According to our cameras, they're already inside the tower."

>Stage two started less than two hours ago
>Genin are already inside the tower
Anko would have an aneurysm.

Welp, it looks like Akihko didn't make it. there's always next year. I was hoping to do a little more, but Russian never replied.

[Bycrest]

"No. According to our cameras, they're already inside the tower."

>Stage two started less than two hours ago
>Genin are already inside the tower
Anko would have an aneurysm.

*cough*Garra*cough*

[Altruistic Paladins]

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ACCPETED

Still, I am surprised that you added in the joke categories. I was joking, but you are free to add them to applications if you so wish.

Also,

ocra

Is that a misspelling of orca?

[Bycrest]

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ACCPETED

Still, I am surprised that you added in the joke categories. I was joking, but you are free to add them to applications if you so wish.

Also,

ocra

Is that a misspelling of orca?

ocra is a food.

[Altruistic Paladins]

ACCPETED

Still, I am surprised that you added in the joke categories. I was joking, but you are free to add them to applications if you so wish.

Also,

Is that a misspelling of orca?

ocra is a food.

Oh, "okra". I get it now. I just misread it as "orca" the first time and that stuck with me.

[Sonitusia]

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ACCPETED

Still, I am surprised that you added in the joke categories. I was joking, but you are free to add them to applications if you so wish.

Also,

ocra

Is that a misspelling of orca?

The joke categories were fun to fill in, so I did .w.

And it's actually a misspelling of okra, lol xD

Edited that.

[Acroticus]

I'm not sure how to continue with Zankuro.... we fought off a Revan clone, but what's next? i guess they could keep searching for Revan...

[Anowa]

I'm not sure how to continue with Zankuro.... we fought off a Revan clone, but what's next? i guess they could keep searching for Revan...

That's really all you can do currently... also act fucking terrified since clones are usually only a fraction of the skill of the original.

[Acroticus]

I'm not sure how to continue with Zankuro.... we fought off a Revan clone, but what's next? i guess they could keep searching for Revan...

That's really all you can do currently... also act fucking terrified since clones are usually only a fraction of the skill of the original.

Yea I suppose.... although Zankuro was supposed to be a Jonin... But, will the find the actual Revan? I'm assuming not, right?