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Postby Shadowwell » Fri May 13, 2016 3:10 pm

Name: Yoshiro
Role: antagonist
Age: 28 (or so may change it once i get it fleshed out)
Rank: S-rank
Gender: Male
Native Land/Village: Unknown (but was in Kiri in his youth)
Current Place of Residence: none
Appearance: Image
Personality: Ruthless, arrogant and cold.
Biography: When he was younger the Mizukage took him in seeing his skill. Due to certain incidents that happened, Yoshiro grew disillusioned with the Village and many Ninja nations in general. The incident involved his newborn son. At the time a rather notorious group of Bandits ahd been harrasing the area around Kiri. Yoshiro was sent out to take care of them.

He agreed on one condition that the Anbu of Kiri would watch his house and family. He was protective of them, and they lived outside of the village. Not even the Mizukage that he was close to could get him to live in the village itself. So Yoshiro left the village and took care of the bandits, but somethign was wrong. The number at the hideout was less then had been reported. He had a bad feeling and rushed back, but it was too late. When he got back to his house it was in shambles and the area was strewn with corpes, both of Anbu and the bandits, one of the corpses was his wife. She was pinned to a tree, by a massive sword and the area around her was frozen and the corpses were shattered.

While he was distraught at the loss of his family, he survived by rejoining the Anbu. He threw himself into the missions he was given, over time he grew colder and more ruthless. But his anger and rage still lay below the surface. This culminated when he found out that, his son had been alive. He was taken by the Anbu, presumably at the command of the Mizukage. In his anger he destroyed the lab where his son had been experimented on, and cut a bloody swath through Kiri.

They had taken his son, because the child possessed his own Kekkei Genkai as well as that of his wife. If one could create an army of controllable shinobi like him, they would be near unstoppable. He eventually confronted the Mizukage however before they fought He left as a last show of respect towards them. Since then he has been roaming around the various lands, killing those who were foolish enough to get in his way, regardless of faction.


Motivations: revenge against the Shinobi responsible for his family being taken from him. other Motives TBD.
Strengths: Taijutsu and close range combat in general. He can sense chakra, and blood. He can increase his chakra reserves and is never truly unarmed. He has an nincredible helaing factor, adn he gets stronger the more he fights and is injured. He can absorb chakra through blood, because of that he has a monstrous chakra pool. he also has incredible defense due to his kekkei genkai.
Weaknesses: He can get reckless in battle. He is blind, and thus has a weakness to physical ranged attacks. When he is in the Blood rage state, he can suffer from injuries and side effects if he is in it for to long.
Specialty Jutsu(s): While proficient in many techniques he specialises in techniques that combine his kekkei genkai with Water and/or wind justu.

Blood Release: Blood Reservoir, he Channels his Chakra into his bones increasing the amount of blood his body produces. this also allows him to absorb the blood of others.

Blood Release: healing, Allows him to expend chakra to regenerate nearly any wounds, larger wounds more chakra used, if the wound is too life threatening he may die or fall into a coma.
Blood Release: Blood mist, similar to the Hiding in the mist technique, but the Mist is red and consists of blood. Requires massive amount of blood, Chakra, and water.
Blood Release: Iron count, he can increase the amount of iron in his blood, enough to form weapons. He uses his bones for the hilts adn iron from his blood for the blades.
Blood Rage: not technically a jutsu, but a condition many of the Blood release users in the past have suffered from. When injured in battle they go into a rage, the more they are injured the stronger and more reckless they get. during this period his memories are hazy afterwards. IT can reach levels of power comparable to Sage mode, when in the Blood rage the user's Kekkei Genkai may start to change their appearance during this time.

Blood armor He can harden the blood in his skin to make it incredibly hard. He also has a bone armor beneath the skin.
Disguise: This is a jutsu created using his Kekkei Genkai, he literally Changes his bone structure and appearance. This makes him nearly invulnerable to being seen through as to who he is, but if someone can sense chakra they can tell he is the same person.

Kekkei Genkai: It is rather unique, and he is the only living possessor of it, to his knowledge. It allows him to control blood, both his and others, as well as his bone structure.
Essentially it is the below:
Blood and bone release:(Imagine blood release mixed with Kimamaros kekkei genkai, I will make a clan app if i must for the backstory behind the kekkei genkai, but he is the last of his bloodline.) The Blood aspect of his Kekkai genkai allows him complete control over his blood. He can form it into weapons and various shapes, and use it to make Blood clones. Users can also manipulate the acidity of their blood. They can absorb chakra from the blood of dead and occasionally living beings. They use little chakra to control their own blood in this way, but substantially more Chakra is used for blood that isnt their own. They can also manipulate the Iron in their blood to create a variety of weapons. He can regenerate his bones and body extremely quickly at the cost of Chakra. He alone can increase his blood supply through his Kekkei Genkai.
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This is the original app, his youth will be much the same as that apps bio. I am including it for reference.
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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Fri May 13, 2016 3:19 pm

Shadowwell wrote:
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It's a different continuity with a different plot.


Ok, I might Make this guy an antogonist, would that work?

a different version of him of course.
since he was in the original and not reborn.


That is accepted. I am entertaining the idea of the Mizukage's being secretly one of the Rebirthed in a village that they do not yet solidly control.
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Postby Shadowwell » Fri May 13, 2016 3:23 pm

Altruistic Paladins wrote:
Shadowwell wrote:
Ok, I might Make this guy an antogonist, would that work?

a different version of him of course.
since he was in the original and not reborn.


That is tentatively accepted. I say "tentatively" not because of the app but because I want to figure-out how to deal with the Mizukage relative to Kirigakure/the Village Hidden in the Mist (so far, I am starting to entertain the idea of the Mizukage as being secretly one of the Rebirthed, while the rest of the village may only have cells of Reborn rather than any solid majority over the village).

I am revamping the app for this rp. I will be changing his backstory a bit, he will have left Kiri.
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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Fri May 13, 2016 3:32 pm

Shadowwell wrote:
Altruistic Paladins wrote:
That is tentatively accepted. I say "tentatively" not because of the app but because I want to figure-out how to deal with the Mizukage relative to Kirigakure/the Village Hidden in the Mist (so far, I am starting to entertain the idea of the Mizukage as being secretly one of the Rebirthed, while the rest of the village may only have cells of Reborn rather than any solid majority over the village).

I am revamping the app for this rp. I will be changing his backstory a bit, he will have left Kiri.


That's fine.
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Postby Anowa » Fri May 13, 2016 3:43 pm

I'm gonna be porting over Revan. But he's gonna be different.
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Postby Nachfolgia » Fri May 13, 2016 4:23 pm

I would love to have the Kuronami clan ported over.

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Postby Anowa » Fri May 13, 2016 4:28 pm

Name:Revan Uzumaki 'The Kamikaze'
Role: Recurring Antagonist
Age: 26
Rank: S-Rank Missing Nin
Gender: Male
Native Land/Village: Konohagakure
Current Place of Residence: Whirlpool Ruins.
Appearance:Visual aid
Personality:Calm, calculating, stoic.
Biography:
Born as one of the many descendants of Naruto Uzumaki and Hinata Uzumaki nee Hyuga, two of the few heroes of the Fourth Shinobi war, he grew up as nobility. from a young age he shared the attitude of his Great-Great-Grandfather. Being the dead last of his respective class due to his abysmal chakra control, he eventually grinded his way through the process. He showed a fondness for swords at an early age, and began training with them in conjunction with Taijutsu. Eventually he went so far as to begin practicing with Long cleaver style swords. Just prior to his Academy graduation at the age of 14 he created a rather large sword he dubbed Mankatta, the sword became a piece of recognition for the man up until his desertion from Konoha and even later.

During his time with a Genin team assigned to a Jonin Sensei, he accomplished a number of missions, he might have even been considered for the Chunin exams. However, on a mission to patrol the border between the Land of Fire and the Land of Rivers, hsi team was seemingly attacked by Bandits. It turned out they were being attacked by dozens of clones of their own sensei. The fight only took minutes, but by the end of the fight, the only three left alive were Revan, his teammate Yoshi Yamanaka, and his Sensei. Yoshi was greviously wounded, and was quickly scooped up by Revan's sensei. His Sensei escaped with Yoshi, and Revan feared the worst. His sensei's defection and the revelation of his teammate's clan secrets. This was not the case.

When Revan returned to Konoha, he was almost immediately beset upon by ANBU, and he barely escaped with his life, by making a dash for the border with Taki and some hasty seal work. He would later learn that his teammate Yoshi had been rendered brain dead, and his Sensei had no trouble coming to him. He also found out that he was blamed for the death of his teammate and the wounds upon both his friend and his teacher.

He now spends his time scouring the ruins of Uzushiogakure, looking for any lost Jutsu or sealing techniques to help him in getting retribution. He occasionally ventures out to collect bounties on some of the more lucrative individuals.

Motivations: Kill his sensei, find out why he did what he did.
Strengths:Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Water and Wind release.
Weaknesses: Chakra control, Genjutsu, Ninjutsu.
Specialty Jutsu(s):
  • Water Release: Nova Mist: Superheated water in the form of plasma is sprayed in a forward cone, incinerating or greviously burning those in the path
  • Water Release: Black Rain technique
  • Wind Release: Godly Wind From the Mountains
  • Wind Release: Vacuum blade
  • Wind Release: War Scars: Mass assassination technique, capable of toppling concrete buildings and turning large groups of people into mince meat.
  • Wind Release: Invisible Black: AOE technique: Infusing his sword with Chakra, Revan swings the blade with enough force that the shockwave from breaking the sound barrier can cleave through his surroundings with ease.
  • Lightning Release: Spider web
  • Adamantine Sealing Chains
  • Redline Array: A combination of seals engraved into one's body immediately suck in Nature chakra making a form of psuedo-Sage mode, the longer this technique lasts the faster and more powerful the user becomes, though with the tradeoff of a decently sized coma after it expires. The longer it lasts the longer the coma.
Kekkei Genkai:Obscene Uzumaki reserves, Byakugan.
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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Fri May 13, 2016 4:42 pm

Nachfolgia wrote:I would love to have the Kuronami clan ported over.


I presume that would include the clan leader too?

Anowa wrote:snip

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Postby Nachfolgia » Fri May 13, 2016 4:57 pm

Altruistic Paladins wrote:
Nachfolgia wrote:I would love to have the Kuronami clan ported over.


I presume that would include the clan leader too?

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ACCEPTED


Of course it does.

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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Fri May 13, 2016 5:38 pm

Nachfolgia wrote:
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I presume that would include the clan leader too?


Of course it does.


ACCEPTED
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Postby Atlannia » Fri May 13, 2016 5:41 pm

Taag. I might bring over some characters from the first iteration that I didn't get to do all the stuff I wanted to with.
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Postby Acroticus » Fri May 13, 2016 7:10 pm

Let me know if this is acceptable. :)

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Name: Zankuro Masoka

Role: Protagonist

Age: 21

Rank: Jonin

Gender: Male

Native Land/Village: Kumogakure

Current Place of Residence: Konohagakure

Appearance: Zankuro is very pale, especially for a resident of Kumogakure. He has dark red hair and yellow eyes. He is 5’11 and is moderately thin. He is fit, but not particularly bulky.

Personality: Zankuro is young for his rank. He is extremely intelligent, but also somewhat impatient. He is averse to waiting, strongly proficient, and sometimes dismissive. However, he is also particularly caring, with a strong sense of morality (stronger than most ninja), which makes him appear naïve.

Biography: Zankuro was an orphan; both of his parents had been shinobi, but neither as part of a larger clan. Instead, he was raised by his aunt and uncle, a nonshinobi. As a toddler, he met and hit it off with a young girl who happened to be training as a shinobi. When he showed potential as a ninja, he began working towards that goal. Zankuro quickly rose to the top of his class, showing up even those from popular shinobi clans. He made few friends, and spent most of his time training and studying.

Zankuro became a Genin when he was 11, and a Chunin at age 16. His skill attracted the attention of a man named Hiragu Yamara, the Raikage’s right hand man. Yamara trained Zankuro, raising his skills once again, to the dismay of the clans. Yamara used the Kinzotora, a trident-like weapon using Jikiton magnetic powers to create a storm of weapons that could attack from every angle. When Yamara, an old man, died from an illness, he left the Kinzotora to Zankuro.

With the Kinzotora, Zankuro reached the rank of Jonin at 18. He began running high rank missions, and actively tried to join Kumogakure’s equivalent of the Anbu, but failed. When he was 20, he became Kumogakure’s representative to Konohagakure, where he remains. Zankuro believes this was due to his unpopularity among the clans.

Motivations: Zankuro is extremely ambitious, and he is looking for any way to get the attention of his superiors. He is also bound by his moral beliefs.

Strengths:
Intelligence
Uses the Kinzotora

Weaknesses:
Naivety
Relies heavily on Kinzotora
Bound by morals

Specialty Jutsu(s):
Kinzotora, particularly, the Knzotora’s use of the Jikiton. The Kinzotora is a trident that has metal stars magnetically attached. The user can use jikiton to remove the stars, and have them float around the battlefield, or be thrown at the enemy. These stars, through the use of a jutsu, can be made to fire bolts of energy at the opponent. Similarly, they can be manipulated into different formations to protect the user. (Similar to Pamoon’s stars in Zatch Bell, if you’ve ever seen it).

Raiton(lightning) jutsu

Kekkei Genkai: Nope

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Postby Shadowwell » Fri May 13, 2016 7:43 pm

Paladins I am assuming since Yoshiro will be a villain, he can be more powerful/in more control than in the original?
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Postby The Glenn Nation » Fri May 13, 2016 8:25 pm

So do the Rebirthed control any of the major villages?

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Postby Anowa » Fri May 13, 2016 11:21 pm

Name:Kei Uzumaki
Role: Protagonist
Age:19
Rank: Tokubetsu Jonin
Gender:Female
Native Land/Village:Konohagakure
Current Village of Residence:Konohagakure
Appearance:Visual Aid
Personality:Brash, Supportive, Quick to anger, determined.
Biography:
Kei was born eight years after her brother Revan, despite the age gap the duo were always close to each other like any other siblings would be. Revan was always there to support her in any of her endeavors, when she displayed interest in sword fighting, he gave her advice and a sparring partner, when she wanted to learn how to water walk, he gave her the basics. This pattern continued until Kei entered the Academy and had others to look for help in. At the age of seven she discovered that she was essentially an antithesis to the rest of her clan, her reserves were much smaller than the average Uzumaki's, and she lacked any ability to perform the Byakugan, the trade off being that her chakra control was much higher than her family members.

The last time she saw her brother, was right before he went on his last assignment as a Konoha shinobi, when he gave her a handcrafted sword, something he had spent three years perfecting... And then he committed treason. Kei would think it her fault for his act of treason, since she hadn't spent nearly any time with her brother after she joined the Academy. It wasn't until she reached the chunin exams that her life took a dive, she not only failed to reach a higher rank, but she was given such extensive injuries that she was taken off active duty for nearly eleven months.

During that time she was given some time to think about her life, and what had happened so far during her short existence. She reflected on everything, including what her brother had taught her, and the consequences of his disappearance. It was then she decided to find out why he did what he did. Less than three months later she passed the Chunin exams with a different team. Two years later she joined the ANBU, another year after that and she became a Tokubetsu Jonin. She's spent the last year learning all she could, and now she thinks she just might be ready to face her brother.

Goals:Protect Konoha and her friends, find out why her brother did what he did.
Strengths:Chakra control (compared to other Uzumakis), Fuinjutsu, Kenjutsu (though not to the extent of her brother), Ninjutsu.
Weaknesses:Her stamina is lacking and so is her brute strength.
Specialty Jutsu(s): Kekkei Genkai:
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Postby Bycrest » Fri May 13, 2016 11:37 pm

I was thinking about porting my puppet master over from the first thread but I don't know whose side he would be on.
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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Sat May 14, 2016 8:33 am

Acroticus wrote:Let me know if this is acceptable. :)


ACCEPTABLE

Shadowwell wrote:Paladins I am assuming since Yoshiro will be a villain, he can be more powerful/in more control than in the original?


Yes. It is inevitable that there will be more heroes than villains, so it's a good idea have somebody who could conceivably take-on several at once.

The Glenn Nation wrote:So do the Rebirthed control any of the major villages?


Indeed.

Bycrest wrote:I was thinking about porting my puppet master over from the first thread but I don't know whose side he would be on.


I will look over the character.
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Postby Acroticus » Sat May 14, 2016 8:43 am

Altruistic Paladins wrote:
The Glenn Nation wrote:So do the Rebirthed control any of the major villages?


Indeed.


Which ones? :p
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Acroticus wrote:
Altruistic Paladins wrote:
Indeed.


Which ones? :p


Kusagakure/the Village Hidden in the Grass, Amegakure/the Village Hidden in the Rain, and Otogakure/the Village Hidden in the Sound are the major ones at the start. There are some minor ones and there might be ambitious plans for additions.
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Postby Acroticus » Sat May 14, 2016 8:56 am

Altruistic Paladins wrote:
Acroticus wrote:
Which ones? :p


Kusagakure/the Village Hidden in the Grass, Amegakure/the Village Hidden in the Rain, and Otogakure/the Village Hidden in the Sound are the major ones at the start. There are some minor ones and there might be ambitious plans for additions.


Alright, so none of the major 5 then...

Also, does "ACCEPTABLE" mean Zankuro is accepted?

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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Sat May 14, 2016 9:01 am

Acroticus wrote:Alright, so none of the major 5 then...


They've got ambition, that's for sure, also a few cards up their sleeves, and I think they might have taken a bunch of chips before the game even started so as to shore-up their numbers and use as leverage to get other players to fold, so I think they are playing a variety of Teas Holdem known as "Highway Robbery".

Acroticus wrote:Also, does "ACCEPTABLE" mean Zankuro is accepted?


Yes, I was just being a bit jokey.
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 14, 2016 10:06 am

Altruistic Paladins wrote:
Acroticus wrote:Also, does "ACCEPTABLE" mean Zankuro is accepted?


Yes, I was just being a bit jokey.

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Altruistic Paladins
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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Sat May 14, 2016 10:18 am

Anowa wrote:
Altruistic Paladins wrote:


Yes, I was just being a bit jokey.

*poke poke*


Ah, right, I added her but I forgot to say that she is ACCEPTED.
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The Imperial Majesty Emperor Norton II of the People of the DSA and Protector of Ukraine
Inaugurated 12:06 A.M. Ecuador Standard Time, June 26, 2014; crowned 12:23 A.M. EST; June 26, 2014; instituted the Separation of Positions 1:07 A.M. EST, June 26, 2014; retired from office 4:58 P.M. EST, June 27, 2014; returned to office 1:05 A.M. EST, June 30, 2014; retired again 12:05 P.M. EST

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Postby Bycrest » Sat May 14, 2016 12:52 pm

Name: Maris Benjiro
Age: 20
Role: Protagonist
Rank: Jonin/ Missing-nin
Gender: Male
Native Land/Village: Sunagakure
Current Village of Residence: Traveling
Appearance: Ignore the leaf symbol
Puppets
Humanoid puppet in a black cloak. Main weapon is a scythe drenched in poison. Mouth opens to emit a smoke gas. Chest opens to use Death’s Door technique, inside are various symbols similar to a weapon storage scroll. Left arm is a chakra shield. Right arm can detach to become a sword for the puppet master.

Puppet armor with metal plating and reinforced spring joints. Large forearms with built-in brass knuckles for punching power. The back of the arms are steel plated for defense. A missile launcher, with a total of 10 small rockets, is hidden on top of the right arm, while a flamethrower is inside. The left arm is capable of shooting poisoned senbon at high speeds. A smoke emitter is inside the mouth in order to provide cover for quick getaways. The waist down is designed like and ape for increased agility and speed. Has a retractable iron tail, soaked in poison. There is a hidden access panel on the back.

  • Appearance: When disguised, it looks like a very tall, muscular man with an odd walk. Maris covers the puppet's lower face with a mask and hides the rest with a black kasa. He uses standard shinobi pants and shoes to disguise the lower half, and covers the upper half with a large grey shirts and a black trench coat. It also wear wears large black gloves to hide it's hands.
Personality: Maris is normally calm and collected but in the heat of battle he goes slightly insane. He is a believer of eternal art and believes that the world is one giant puppet stage and puppet masters control the strings. He also hates it when someone insults the art of puppetry.
Biography: Maris is a traveler who doesn’t allege himself with any nation or village, although it has been rumored that he serves the Kazekage in secret. He travels around the world in order to learn everything about puppets and the techniques in order to preserve the knowledge through the next generation. He has studied the works of the first puppet master, Monzaemon Chikamatsu, and Sasori of the Red Sands. When he was studying Sasori’s work he paid particular interest in human puppets and considered turning himself into one in order to live forever and carry the knowledge of puppet masters.
Goals:
  • To become the best puppet master ever.
  • To have the largest puppet collection ever.
Strengths: Expert Puppet Master, strategist, high reserves of chakra, good with ninja tools, inventive
Weaknesses: Not a good with taijutsu or genjutsu, not very durable
Specialty Jutsu(s):
  • Secret Gray Technique: Curtain Call- The Reaper emits a thick curtain of smoke concealing his position and sneaks up on the enemy to attack
  • Secret Gray Technique: Show Time- The Reaper uses its scythe in a series of combo attacks to inflect critical damage to the opponent.
  • Secret Gray Technique: Fear the Reaper- The Reaper emits a nerve toxin that will stimulate the opponent’s fear center of their brain, making their worst fears appear before them.
  • Secret Gray Technique: Death's Door- A special technique that allows Maris to use the Reaper as a portal to a pocket dimension. The Reaper traps the enemy inside its body and uses marks to activate the teleportation jutsu and transport them there. This is a way of capturing an opponent without harming them.
Kekkei Genkai: (if applicable) N/A
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I believe that madness can find more madness, and that every ounce of madness has a spark of truth. And truth, as you know, has a way of depressing people who don't want to find it.

No one is 100% honest... We all keep 20% of the truth from the world, to protect ourselves & sometimes others.

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Postby Altruistic Paladins » Sat May 14, 2016 1:04 pm

Bycrest wrote:snip


ACCEPTED

Have you decided yet on whether you want him to be a protagonist or antagonist (do keep in mind that there should be something that might compel a recurring villain or two to switch sides before the final arc).
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By Hits Holy Hand,
The Imperial Majesty Emperor Norton II of the People of the DSA and Protector of Ukraine
Inaugurated 12:06 A.M. Ecuador Standard Time, June 26, 2014; crowned 12:23 A.M. EST; June 26, 2014; instituted the Separation of Positions 1:07 A.M. EST, June 26, 2014; retired from office 4:58 P.M. EST, June 27, 2014; returned to office 1:05 A.M. EST, June 30, 2014; retired again 12:05 P.M. EST

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