The Federal Republic of Estovakia wrote:I edited it.
Alright.
- Funds still need to be fixed. Would be $0 after acquiring your aircraft, which costs $5 million.
- Would prefer a non-Eurusean emblem for who I can only assume was a nationalistic Belkan.
- The bio is better but his claim as one of the most skilled pilots is doubtful. This is 3 years before the Belkan War and the Belkan Air Force was one of the most powerful forces at the time. For him to be among the top would make him perhaps a bit too powerful. Likewise, with Belka marching towards war I think they would do whatever they could to keep him from potentially deserting.
- Your IC posts leave a lot to be desired. If you are accepted it would be under the condition that you not write dismally short posts and that some effort is made for something of worth.