Your writing of the Starkindlers is a lot like how you do fantasy elves, and I'm writing Aren like a child. They're immeasurably old, and talk the way elves do, while Aren's a child in everything but age. It doesn't work in my mind.
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by New Neros » Fri Aug 14, 2015 12:58 pm
The Templar High Council wrote:The Starlight wrote:I'm sorry to hear that, but I'll accept your decision.
Your writing of the Starkindlers is a lot like how you do fantasy elves, and I'm writing Aren like a child. They're immeasurably old, and talk the way elves do, while Aren's a child in everything but age. It doesn't work in my mind.
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by The Starlight » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:03 pm
The Templar High Council wrote:The Starlight wrote:I'm sorry to hear that, but I'll accept your decision.
Your writing of the Starkindlers is a lot like how you do fantasy elves, and I'm writing Aren like a child. They're immeasurably old, and talk the way elves do, while Aren's a child in everything but age. It doesn't work in my mind.
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by New Neros » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:41 pm
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by Osnil » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:51 pm
by The Republic of Atria » Fri Aug 14, 2015 2:04 pm
The Starlight wrote:Well, here it is.
Valka's feats
Has reforged Asgard 146 times
Forged Mjolnir, Gungnir, the Destroyer.
Defeated Asra upon Aiuar with the help of the Vokoronians and their Collective
Possesses possibly the greatest arsenal of weapons: Mjolnir, Gungnir, a Nord Corps Ring, Oathbringer and the Odinsword
Inherited the cosmic Odin Force upon the death of Odin
Became All-Mother of Asgard(all feats under this are Valka with the Odin Force)
Defeated 5+ Thors on Battleworld
Disarmed 12+ Thors of their Mjolnirs
Fought Alex(As the Golden Guardian) to a stalemate, until Alex joined the Asgardian side. (not really a defeat as he agreed to lose, I think)
Caught one of Zeus' bolts and broke it in half
Defeated Wonder Woman in a duel
Stated that she could teleport 2,000 Einherjar and their ships to the Gates of Olympus
Cleared Zeus' dark clouds to reveal the Sun at High Noon
Built chains able to restrain the Olympian Pantheon and deprive them of their powers
Has wielded both Mjolnirs in battle at times
Fought Zeus for five days and four nights
Survived being charged with Zeus' electricity(while wearing metal) and being punched straight through a planet
Cut off Zeus' arm and summoned a ball of metal from the Earth to herself, giving it more mass, several planets away.
Defeated Skyfather Zeus
Shielded most of the Asgardians with the Valka-Force, enabling them to survive the destruction of Asgard by Sentry
Killed Sentry
Tore a tank missile in two(true, but here just for lols)
Restored Asgard to its undestroyed state with a snap of her fingers
Removed Loki's godhood, cursed him, removed his ability to do magic and then killed himThe Templar High Council wrote:Your writing of the Starkindlers is a lot like how you do fantasy elves, and I'm writing Aren like a child. They're immeasurably old, and talk the way elves do, while Aren's a child in everything but age. It doesn't work in my mind.
We could always have her be part of a new generation, but I see why you would think that.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Aug 14, 2015 2:08 pm
The Republic of Atria wrote:The Starlight wrote:Well, here it is.
Valka's feats
Has reforged Asgard 146 times
Forged Mjolnir, Gungnir, the Destroyer.
Defeated Asra upon Aiuar with the help of the Vokoronians and their Collective
Possesses possibly the greatest arsenal of weapons: Mjolnir, Gungnir, a Nord Corps Ring, Oathbringer and the Odinsword
Inherited the cosmic Odin Force upon the death of Odin
Became All-Mother of Asgard(all feats under this are Valka with the Odin Force)
Defeated 5+ Thors on Battleworld
Disarmed 12+ Thors of their Mjolnirs
Fought Alex(As the Golden Guardian) to a stalemate, until Alex joined the Asgardian side. (not really a defeat as he agreed to lose, I think)
Caught one of Zeus' bolts and broke it in half
Defeated Wonder Woman in a duel
Stated that she could teleport 2,000 Einherjar and their ships to the Gates of Olympus
Cleared Zeus' dark clouds to reveal the Sun at High Noon
Built chains able to restrain the Olympian Pantheon and deprive them of their powers
Has wielded both Mjolnirs in battle at times
Fought Zeus for five days and four nights
Survived being charged with Zeus' electricity(while wearing metal) and being punched straight through a planet
Cut off Zeus' arm and summoned a ball of metal from the Earth to herself, giving it more mass, several planets away.
Defeated Skyfather Zeus
Shielded most of the Asgardians with the Valka-Force, enabling them to survive the destruction of Asgard by Sentry
Killed Sentry
Tore a tank missile in two(true, but here just for lols)
Restored Asgard to its undestroyed state with a snap of her fingers
Removed Loki's godhood, cursed him, removed his ability to do magic and then killed him
We could always have her be part of a new generation, but I see why you would think that.
Star, Valka didn't kill Sentry. Thor did because he let him. But the rest is good.
For Alex post nerf:
Manipulating Matter: Creating Naja's outfit, as well as repairing a Walmart after Lobo blew it up.
Barriers that withstood an onslaught of blows that were capable of harming skyfathers.
Held his own against a powerful Saiyan.
Illusions capable of tricking said Saiyan.
Thinks with portals: Making DoomNaja hit herself.
Is capable of tapping into the power of Demons.
by Mavorpen » Fri Aug 14, 2015 2:09 pm
by The Starlight » Fri Aug 14, 2015 2:27 pm
The Republic of Atria wrote:Star, Valka didn't kill Sentry. Thor did because he let him. But the rest is good.
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by New Neros » Fri Aug 14, 2015 3:23 pm
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by The Starlight » Fri Aug 14, 2015 3:47 pm
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by The Starlight » Fri Aug 14, 2015 4:17 pm
Osnil wrote:Anyone have an arc that I can jump into-or want to do an arc with me? Starlight, I might be bringing Loki back to life using Jenny. Then Asgarde will have issues.
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by New Neros » Fri Aug 14, 2015 4:40 pm
The Starlight wrote:Osnil wrote:Anyone have an arc that I can jump into-or want to do an arc with me? Starlight, I might be bringing Loki back to life using Jenny. Then Asgarde will have issues.
How would Jenny bring him back to life? How would she even know that he's dead?
Issues? Even if he did come back, Loki can no longer do magic. So yeah, nope.
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:20 pm
by Osnil » Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:25 pm
The Starlight wrote:Osnil wrote:Anyone have an arc that I can jump into-or want to do an arc with me? Starlight, I might be bringing Loki back to life using Jenny. Then Asgarde will have issues.
How would Jenny bring him back to life? How would she even know that he's dead?
Issues? Even if he did come back, Loki can no longer do magic. So yeah, nope.
by New Neros » Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:39 pm
Osnil wrote:The Starlight wrote:How would Jenny bring him back to life? How would she even know that he's dead?
Issues? Even if he did come back, Loki can no longer do magic. So yeah, nope.
I have my methods-part of why I want Loki back is to make Jenny lean toward the villain stance, where she has to make an end decision eventually.
So, the way I am going to bring Loki back is:
Legend has it that an ancient civilization once ruled over an area of the South Pacific. They were far more technically advanced that that of other civilizations and knew the ways of magic. However, the race grew corrupt and soon diverged into civil war and died out. However, some tribals still live and there are whispers that an ancient weapon in the temple on the island has the ability to restore the dead, in exchange for another soul (this is where Penguin comes in). Another weapon has the power to restore any lost magic power you have in exchange for a soul. Legends also state that a Guardian protects these artifacts.
The question is how to get to Asgarde. Hmm. Starlight, do you have any ideas?
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:41 pm
New Neros wrote:Osnil wrote:I have my methods-part of why I want Loki back is to make Jenny lean toward the villain stance, where she has to make an end decision eventually.
So, the way I am going to bring Loki back is:
Legend has it that an ancient civilization once ruled over an area of the South Pacific. They were far more technically advanced that that of other civilizations and knew the ways of magic. However, the race grew corrupt and soon diverged into civil war and died out. However, some tribals still live and there are whispers that an ancient weapon in the temple on the island has the ability to restore the dead, in exchange for another soul (this is where Penguin comes in). Another weapon has the power to restore any lost magic power you have in exchange for a soul. Legends also state that a Guardian protects these artifacts.
The question is how to get to Asgarde. Hmm. Starlight, do you have any ideas?
Not sure a Penguin soul equals an Asgardian soul.
by Tomia » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:21 pm
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Name/Alias: Kirisvala Az Ranwynn
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Appearance: Looks like this, with a bony tail like this and claws and horns like these. Wears a red cloak over the armor.
Species: Hadrian
Backstory: Kirisvala was born into the Wynn clan in the monstruous mountain ranges of Hadrimmelis, where the silver spires of the Hadrians are built atop the highest peaks. The Wynn clan had been plotting to dethrone the Eternal Ruler of the world, Adrianne, for centuries, without really knowing that said Eternal Ruler was also the Dragon Deity and the World itself. Regardless, they went at it for quite a bit, failing because Hadrimmelis herself would always know what they were plotting and would manipulate things ever so slightly so that their plans would harmlessly backfire. This did little to deter the ambitions of the Wynn clan, who attempted to teach every new generation to continue the work of their ancestors.
Then came along Kirisvala, who, for some reason or another, just wouldn't take their noble purpose seriously. Kiris was pretty much a child prodigy, quickly mastering several spellsongs, but she preferred to be out playing with the monsters of the mountains than inside the metal spires, plotting to overthrow the Eternal Ruler. Such was the exasperation of her elders that they eventually gave up on her altogether, instead focusing on the others. So, finding herself with more and more freedom, Kiris began wandering further and further, until she eventually left the mountain range, arriving at the crystal city of Anrriven, where she found one of the portals leading to the Devil's Den, and then another one that led to Jump City.
Powers and Abilities:
Hadrian Physiology: The Hadrians are a people of beast-like appearance who live in the fiery world of Hadrimmelis. They form into clans and make their abodes in giant metal spires, and they're mostly a warrior culture, though there are clear exceptions sometimes. They have a great variety of racial abilities.
- Somatosensory Imprint: Hadrians can detect the presence of anyone they have come into contact with recently, and track them down no matter where they may be. This effect, however, is temporary. After a while, the Hadrian in question will stop being able to sense the target.
- Linguistic Assimilation: Of a particular type. It does not work with physical contact, but rather, it works by 'perceiving' the language in question. For example, if a Hadrian were to hear someone speak, they would instantly assimilate the language. However, if they notice their particular body language, then they will also learn it and become able to interpret it. In certain instances, this peculiar racial trait can allow Hadrians to communicate with abstract entities and concepts.
- Enhanced Roar: The Hadrian race have evolved strong vocal chords which allow them to let out a powerful roar that can achieve a variety of effects.
Energy Bullet Projection: Through both the Hadrian roar and her own magical abilities, Kirisvala's roar can project magic energy bullets.- Healing Tears: Hadrian tears are golden in color and have healing properties that allow them to cure most injuries, though they have no capacity to cure disease and sickness.
- Enhanced Bite: Hadrians have sharp teeth and strong jaws, not much else to say here.
- Siren Song: Hadrians have supernaturally beautiful singing voices.
- Elemental Immunity: To fire and lightning.
Magic: The people of the mountain clan Wynn are a particular group of Hadrians, in that they have dedicated themselves to the practice of magic. Specifically, they employ special songs which allow them to harness the power of magic. Along with these songs, they also have a variety of magic-related powers. Worth noting is that all of these songs have the added effect of the Siren Song trait.
- Song of the Wanderers: Basically Access & Occlusion.
- Hymn of Valor: Applies Heroism Inducement to those on Kirisvala's side.
- Hymn of Ruin: Enables Holy Fire Manipulation.
- Anthem of the Sanctum: Effect Field Projection, where the effect is attack negation.
- Song of the Builders: Enables Crystal Manipulation.
- Spell Reflection via innate magic aura.
Weaknesses: Hadrians are especially susceptible against the cold. Their bodies are relatively fragile in relation to their claws and tails, so if one avoids targetting those, it is easier to cause harm to a Hadrian. If one were able to silence Kirisvala, she would be unable to either utilize her magic or her roar and her energy bullets, so it would negate most of her offensive capabilities (of which she doesn't have many, since most of her powers are utility). Her magic, though strong, requires time to activate, and she cannot move while casting.
Destructive Capacity: City Block Level
Speed: 1 m/s walking/running speed, Sonic when using her claws to move.
Durability: Claws are Multi City Block Level, the rest of her is Large Building Level
Lifting Strength: Class 100
Striking Strength: Class MJ
Standard Equipment: Metal armor like the one shown in the first image, though obviously without the arm parts and with space for the tail.
Intelligence: Little knowledge, but high learning capacity.
Optional stuff.
Theme song: Paradise on E
Random Facts about your character: Kirisvala would mean "little flame". She'll be the overly-chipper member of the team.
Well, since it's weekend now and I'm home, I was able to work more on this. It's pretty much done, though I'll accept any feedback.
by Charmera » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:21 pm
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:And here, we see a wild Shittonicus Charactericus, coloquially known as Charmera, in its natural habitat. It seems to be displaying behavior expected from one of its kind, producing numerous characters and juggling them with its front paws.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:22 pm
Tomia wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Name/Alias: Kirisvala Az Ranwynn
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Appearance: Looks like this, with a bony tail like this and claws and horns like these. Wears a red cloak over the armor.
Species: Hadrian
Backstory: Kirisvala was born into the Wynn clan in the monstruous mountain ranges of Hadrimmelis, where the silver spires of the Hadrians are built atop the highest peaks. The Wynn clan had been plotting to dethrone the Eternal Ruler of the world, Adrianne, for centuries, without really knowing that said Eternal Ruler was also the Dragon Deity and the World itself. Regardless, they went at it for quite a bit, failing because Hadrimmelis herself would always know what they were plotting and would manipulate things ever so slightly so that their plans would harmlessly backfire. This did little to deter the ambitions of the Wynn clan, who attempted to teach every new generation to continue the work of their ancestors.
Then came along Kirisvala, who, for some reason or another, just wouldn't take their noble purpose seriously. Kiris was pretty much a child prodigy, quickly mastering several spellsongs, but she preferred to be out playing with the monsters of the mountains than inside the metal spires, plotting to overthrow the Eternal Ruler. Such was the exasperation of her elders that they eventually gave up on her altogether, instead focusing on the others. So, finding herself with more and more freedom, Kiris began wandering further and further, until she eventually left the mountain range, arriving at the crystal city of Anrriven, where she found one of the portals leading to the Devil's Den, and then another one that led to Jump City.
Powers and Abilities:
Hadrian Physiology: The Hadrians are a people of beast-like appearance who live in the fiery world of Hadrimmelis. They form into clans and make their abodes in giant metal spires, and they're mostly a warrior culture, though there are clear exceptions sometimes. They have a great variety of racial abilities.
- Somatosensory Imprint: Hadrians can detect the presence of anyone they have come into contact with recently, and track them down no matter where they may be. This effect, however, is temporary. After a while, the Hadrian in question will stop being able to sense the target.
- Linguistic Assimilation: Of a particular type. It does not work with physical contact, but rather, it works by 'perceiving' the language in question. For example, if a Hadrian were to hear someone speak, they would instantly assimilate the language. However, if they notice their particular body language, then they will also learn it and become able to interpret it. In certain instances, this peculiar racial trait can allow Hadrians to communicate with abstract entities and concepts.
- Enhanced Roar: The Hadrian race have evolved strong vocal chords which allow them to let out a powerful roar that can achieve a variety of effects.
Energy Bullet Projection: Through both the Hadrian roar and her own magical abilities, Kirisvala's roar can project magic energy bullets.- Healing Tears: Hadrian tears are golden in color and have healing properties that allow them to cure most injuries, though they have no capacity to cure disease and sickness.
- Enhanced Bite: Hadrians have sharp teeth and strong jaws, not much else to say here.
- Siren Song: Hadrians have supernaturally beautiful singing voices.
- Elemental Immunity: To fire and lightning.
Magic: The people of the mountain clan Wynn are a particular group of Hadrians, in that they have dedicated themselves to the practice of magic. Specifically, they employ special songs which allow them to harness the power of magic. Along with these songs, they also have a variety of magic-related powers. Worth noting is that all of these songs have the added effect of the Siren Song trait.
- Song of the Wanderers: Basically Access & Occlusion.
- Hymn of Valor: Applies Heroism Inducement to those on Kirisvala's side.
- Hymn of Ruin: Enables Holy Fire Manipulation.
- Anthem of the Sanctum: Effect Field Projection, where the effect is attack negation.
- Song of the Builders: Enables Crystal Manipulation.
- Spell Reflection via innate magic aura.
Weaknesses: Hadrians are especially susceptible against the cold. Their bodies are relatively fragile in relation to their claws and tails, so if one avoids targetting those, it is easier to cause harm to a Hadrian. If one were able to silence Kirisvala, she would be unable to either utilize her magic or her roar and her energy bullets, so it would negate most of her offensive capabilities (of which she doesn't have many, since most of her powers are utility). Her magic, though strong, requires time to activate, and she cannot move while casting.
Destructive Capacity: City Block Level
Speed: 1 m/s walking/running speed, Sonic when using her claws to move.
Durability: Claws are Multi City Block Level, the rest of her is Large Building Level
Lifting Strength: Class 100
Striking Strength: Class MJ
Standard Equipment: Metal armor like the one shown in the first image, though obviously without the arm parts and with space for the tail.
Intelligence: Little knowledge, but high learning capacity.
Optional stuff.
Theme song: Paradise on E
Random Facts about your character: Kirisvala would mean "little flame". She'll be the overly-chipper member of the team.
Well, since it's weekend now and I'm home, I was able to work more on this. It's pretty much done, though I'll accept any feedback.
Think it's good Zark, welcome to the team
by Charmera » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:25 pm
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:And here, we see a wild Shittonicus Charactericus, coloquially known as Charmera, in its natural habitat. It seems to be displaying behavior expected from one of its kind, producing numerous characters and juggling them with its front paws.
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