ALMF wrote:Kershya wrote:
You used 16 points, one too many. You need to expand on the Follower Birthright, is it a level 3 Birthright? And is it Quality or Quantity you're going to expand it with? And your Bio seems to give a bit of an Out-of-Character moment for both Aphrodite and Apollo. I can accept Aphrodite being a lesbian but having a happy relationship? The legends show that Aphrodite, despite being married to Hephaestus, cheated behind his back too many times to count, and that's also the reason why Apollo wouldn't have tried to keep Aphrodite all for herself, she's legally married to another god. But other than that and some general cleanup, it look ok.
I got name of god wrong fixing: lesbian by cannon --Artemis. you corrected me and I assumed you had it right without thinking. Apollo wants his sister's girlfriend was the primes. Hence the nead for adoption.
PS: 9 for epics 3 for skills and 3 for followers is 15. The followers is the intelligence agents in the background size for now but intend to upgrade qulity
Actually, you use 3 points for Abilities, 3 for Birthright, the first Epic and its Knack is free, the two other Epics are 3 points each, and those Knacks are 2 points each. So you used 16 points in total.