I'm just as confused as Mr. Fungschlammer. Restorative justice and criminal rehabilitation are two separate concepts, and I had to do extra research to figure out how they relate to each other- it's not apparent from your draft that there is a difference (there is), how they relate (they do) and why any of that is important. It's just as well to remove the references to punitive and restorative justice and focus squarely on criminal rehabilitation to save on character count.
I also fail to see how this is an "Education & Creativity" proposal when it is proposing massive intervention in the criminal justice system.
Primua Tarhunthamanapa
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