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by Damukuni » Tue Oct 18, 2016 10:49 pm
by Eshan » Tue Oct 18, 2016 10:50 pm
by Bonesea » Tue Oct 18, 2016 11:05 pm
by The Royal Kingdom of Quebec » Wed Oct 19, 2016 2:07 am
Episode IV : Avalanche
Yay, the emotional clusterfuck continues for everybody. On top of that, the coach's away so the assistant has to handle the load....let's see how this falls into.
Key Events - Dana
The interim captain's decided, and coaches agree on something for once. But obviously this does not mean that the saga is close to calming down.
This storyline starts on a Sunday morning, Coach Dana starts the day with a jog in a nearby park to hers. The readers quickly get to find out that it's a routine activity of hers, as have been since her old high school days in Montreal. After an hour of that, Dana heads back to her room where a letter is placed right under the window. It is stated that the coach Antoine will be out for a week in a recruiting trip. This catches the coach surprised, as the 26-year old is placed in the role of interim head coach for the time being. Why the hell would one schedule a recruiting trip at this time of the year? She wonders, especially given how early it is. but what else she can do? Decline the offer? No such alternative exists in this very team, so coach Dana just sighs over it before grabbing her lunch.
Later that night, Dana comfortably rests in her sofa while working on a case report. In the following montages, we find out that coach Dana's known her boss for a very long time. She experiences brief flashbacks of her first meeting with much-younger Antoine back in Quebec City. It was already 14 years ago that they had first met, and she realises some changes within the coach the past couple of years she's moved. She wonders if this could possibly be due to the forced retirement of Ellie, family life or her worrying too much.
Throughout the rest of the week, we watch from the distance as she struggles to balance the heightened expectations as head coach. From dealing with administrative matters to keeping non-fencer rentals off the gym in practice hours, she deals with more tasks than she's ever had, on top of fulfilling the existing occupational duties in daytime. To keep up with the demand, she often phones coach Antoine and then contacts executive for the help, something that only reveals her weaknesses as an administrator. She may be a good coach, but not an administrator material, as have seen with the QIS eligibility rules and doping regulations. This catches the attention of coach Kim, who informs her that she may need to be more careful, for other coaches will not take it positively.
The episode ends when Coach Dana receives a call from coach Park, a good friend of coach Kim dating back to his Kirkenes days. When asked of why one is in need of calling, coach Park, much to her surprise, responds that he will be coming next week of a joint practice session with his team from Mount Ester University.
Quote of the Episode
"Like that Avalanche of hearts, thy emotions can be both dangerous and fatal. You need to walk off from this."
- Felix Yang, saying it to himself -
"I notice something different in her today. It is more than just a viewing.....the very vivid smell of coffee and walnut covering my mouth, as I look at the sight. What is it?"
- Jordan Salaberry -
What's happening with....
Felix
It looks like for once there'll be sunny days in the life of Felix.......but nope. That won't happen.
We start the entire episode by getting introduced to Felix's latest gaming habit, something that gets more noticeable and noticeable throughout the series: RLStates! The owner behind Kushleesi, a nation ruled by Sanskrit-speaking, dragon-riding stoners, he is busy typing up a roleplay on his laptop in the room at Chunnam Hall, when Andres knocks the door to see if Felix's still alive. Felix closes the room door and lets him in. Andres starts talking about this latest kegger he is planning to go this friday, just down the hallway, and asks if he's interested. Felix entertains the idea, but tells his friend to maybe wait a couple more days because he'll be occupied with a task.
Life proceeds like water for him. Philosophy and English classes he starts skipping, but the others (especially French) he makes sure not to miss a single lecture. He's still struggling in getting his arm and feet to move faster in practices but still tries his best, hoping to make some difference in the upcoming competitions at home, only 3 weeks away. He is still chilling with the floor and notices that he should maybe go after Tara, that floormate who only lives 3 doors away. Andres shrugs and tells him that maybe he should give it a try.
Sometime in middle of the week, Felix skypes his mother back in Kingston, talking about his new life in Kirkenes. He hears back from her that everybody in family misses him and that she will be looking forward to see everybody during thanksgiving. Once that's done, he goes back to play RLStates with Andres and Frederic, whom he has discovered as fellow nation-owners in 'Al-umrah' and 'San-Renee', before realising that he should maybe just chill with floor in common room. He leaves the laptop open, closes the door and leaves.
Unfortunately, that does not end well. The thursday starts perfectly perfectly for Felix, as he excels in both tutorials and then scores a couple of points against Alain, a huge achievement given how hard it is to score on 6'3, lanky bloke. Unfortunately this luck and achievement does not continue in rest of the saga, as the team sets up the wizard staff making competition as part of year-long floor alcolympics. He starts drinking and then after 6 cans (so like halfway) through realises that he has an interview. One takes a break, walks and eats some food before going to the student life centre for the interview. He does stumble but pulls through it all very well, and gets applauded for his delivery, before heading back to the residence hall. But then who knew that his temper could suddenly change from heaven to hell? Not me.
During the final stretch, he tries to woo her on a couple of occasions but struggles to say further words indicating his interest, as he finds himself stumbling in every can he consumes. Eventually, Andres' roommate, Ibrahim, tells him that she has no interest in him and that there's no point trying, enraging the 18-year old in a matter of seconds. Then, a BOOM! occurred, as he destroyed his almost-done wizard staff in 4 pieces. Tara's roommate, Ainsley, asks what is wrong, to which Felix responds, "Some things are better not said and better not committed", and leaves.
Frederic
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What worked
• Excellent acting by the cast once again, as they saved the episode from being an absolute disappointment through their delivery and passion. Special shout-outs have to go to Georges Woo for depicting Felix Yang in emotional hinges and hyper-aggressive bursts this episode, especially durin the second half, and Sandra Aski as the much-overwhelmed, struggling interim in place of THE BOSS.
• Accuracy in meticular details of college life. Though the viewers take this for granted, this is something that is not easy to reenact in all of this series due to the merging of two eras (early 1970s of Philippe Ahn and early 2000s of Christopher Tsu-Ahn), with modern day adaptation. Bravo.
• Mysterious introduction of Coach Park. So far we've only had him introduced through mentions of a huge rival in his age for a couple of episodes, but not enough, so getting at least SOMETHING, even if it was newspaper article or a cryptic phone call, just added further intrigue into this character. As someone who's supposed to be based off Dr. Ahn's older self, most notably in his Gaspe days, I'll be looking forward to how this progresses. Hopefully they'll not fuck up.
• Music soundtrack's finally well-matched to the scenes! Good mix of music from traditional Korean music to electric dancehall music like the materials of JVG and Jubi-Jubi. Loved the choice, and it helped bringing the trance party mood going in the second half.
What didn't work
• Where did all the other characters go? We didn't get enough parts of Ellie and Marianne this episode, even though their parts the last episode were left on the cliffhanger the last episode, while Frederic got unnecessarily large part of action and to lesser extent Felix as well. With Felix it's forgivable because he's the character originally based off Philippe Ahn, but Frederic? Could have and should've given more time on the others of cast instead.
• Lots of holes in the plot development. We're not getting enough info about what had caused Felix to be interested in Tara and why we didn't get any update on his developing dangers with Thalia and interesting tensions with Marie. Felix Yang is not meant to be a character particularly driven by a singular sexual tension or thought, and only gets his interest triggered by a combination. The writer of this episode, I'm afraid, missed out on things like that and really downgraded the quality of this episode.
General Thoughts
"It's not a perfect episode. There were some key errors and missed details in all storylines. What made it worth watching was superb acting from the cast. From the emotional-driven, half-hinged actions of Georges Woo to the overwhelmed Sandra Aski, Varsity once again comes out on top with various dynamics of action by its cast to keep us watching. Hopefully the plot and character development on this episode will catch up with the rest for next episode though."
by Electrum » Wed Oct 19, 2016 2:08 am
by Osarius » Wed Oct 19, 2016 2:30 am
by Super-Llamaland » Wed Oct 19, 2016 9:50 am
A Proclamation Regarding Recent Events in Super-Llamaland
CONCERNING the recent declaration of war by the Llamanean Union and closely-aligned Northern Republic of Hakifao, the government of the Second Republic of Vjaalsbürg, as well as its allies in Arondesheim, has no other choice but to defend the liberty of the Northern Isles through a moral defense of the northern islands. THEREFORE, the Vjaal government will raise an army to defend its territory by, if necessary, a draft. Additionally, the Vjaal government believes it fit to convene the National Legislature and National Cabinet for immediate meetings towards the war effort.
Signed,
ISAK STRAUSS - President of the Second Republic of Vjaalsbürg
AARON RASMUSSEN - Secretary of War
COMMUNIQUE TO THE HONORABLE EXECUTIVE COUNCIL OF THE
In light of recent events in Vjaalsbürg, it has become imperative that we increase the rate of our militarization. We have made great progress, but there are still enemies to Llamanean prosperity in the north, the east, the south, and even within our borders. I am confident that we may both strengthen our hold over Hicaña, Arcturus, and Hakifao and expand into the Eastern and Northern Islands.
We need to take immediate measures to
i) Combat spies within our borders while increasing espionage efforts abroad, particularly in Vjaalsbürg and Arondesheim.
ii) Increase the strength of our navy, which will prove essential in invasion efforts.
iii) Consolidate our control over Hicaña, including setting up a new government there.
iv) Capture the island of Arcturus, an Eirelian stronghold just miles off the Nikcoro shore.
v) Stop covert arms shipments between Vjaalsbürg and Eirelia.
Signed,
William Granveir
Honorable President of the Llamanean Union
by Fluvique » Wed Oct 19, 2016 2:56 pm
by Jeruselem » Wed Oct 19, 2016 5:37 pm
by Red Blackiland » Thu Oct 20, 2016 5:16 am
Players entrance
Schwartz trying to break Matthewsianian defense
Werdickley Safadão rolls the ball
in the middle after RB first goal
Verano's gang guys at Deliz house
Deliz' new place
by Abanhfleft » Thu Oct 20, 2016 7:47 am
by Anglatia » Thu Oct 20, 2016 10:22 am
by Port Christopher » Thu Oct 20, 2016 10:28 am
by Matthewsiania » Thu Oct 20, 2016 12:23 pm
by Alasdair I Frosticus » Thu Oct 20, 2016 1:59 pm
by Bonesea » Thu Oct 20, 2016 2:13 pm
by Anglatia » Thu Oct 20, 2016 3:20 pm
by Eshan » Thu Oct 20, 2016 4:00 pm
by Damukuni » Thu Oct 20, 2016 5:27 pm
by Eura » Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:17 pm
by Ceni » Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:18 pm
by Damukuni » Thu Oct 20, 2016 8:17 pm
Defence Changes
[ 4] Garth CATANESE OUT ↑↓ IN TANAKA Sadori [68] LF
[10] SHIZUMI Takahashi OUT ↑↓ IN Alec MATTERHORN [ 8] CF
[ 9] Rich WILLIS OUT ↑↓ IN Jenna Lee DOYLE [ 2] RF
Midfield Changes
[12] Nicole STATHAM R OUT ↑↓ IN Milburn ROSE [14] CM
[21] Joni BUTLER R OUT ↑↓ IN Lillianna RIVERA [59] CM
Offence Changes
[55] SAWACHIKA Takara R OUT ↑↓ IN Margaret VAYNE [59] ST
Retained Starters
TATSUYUMI Raiden [36] GK
Ayala BAT NOA [65] DM
ENDŌ Shikoku [98] LM
Joanna DIETRICH [22] RM
Jannie-Aurelia JONES [97] (C) ST
by Chiata » Fri Oct 21, 2016 9:00 am
by Fluvique » Fri Oct 21, 2016 11:10 am
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Corporate Bordello
Big Sam furrowed his brow, reached forward, and grabbed his pint of gravy. He downed two large mouthfuls of it, pulled out a half-used
Greggs napkin, wiped his mouth, and answered the man's question.
"For four hundred grand there isn't a great deal I woudn't do, to be honest, but yeah, I'd be happy
to put the word out about your firm."
"We hear the process is illegal in England" said one of the businessmen. Big Sam eyed the falafel and hummus wrap that the man half left
unfinished on the table in front of him. "The English are, somewhat less open to the idea of businesses owning players, rather than the,
how you say, outdated current method of players being owned by football clubs"
"Are you going to eat that wrap?" asked Big Sam, salivating.
"What? Oh, no, here..." replied the man, offering the plate. Big Sam leaned forward and took the wrap in his teeth without even moving his hands,
flipping it up into the air and swallowing it whole as it landed in his mouth. He took his hip-flask of gravy and refilled his pint glass, before
nodding at the man.
"Yeah, 4-4-2 and they don't like it up 'em. Football football son, football football. Top lad. Top top top."
"I'm sorry what?"
"So, where do I sign?"
Back at the hotel room, the 'businessmen' replayed the tape on a laptop. Both were shaking their heads.
"They'll never believe us" said one.
"We'll have to edit out the really bad bits. 'Only' make it look like he's agreeing to take money from foreigners in exchange for info on how
to circumvent some of the country's rules and regulations on ownership of footballers"
"It'll be enough for a story. The readers'll lap up anything to do with that. 'Slavery', they're calling it. Let's just make sure we don't
make him look even more like a pantomime bloodhound in the process."
With that, they sent the file to the editor of the newspaper.
to be continued
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[11.41] <England> RP up!
[11.41] <England> No time to expand on it before the cut-off. I'll update it with everyone's reaction soon enough
[11.42] <Scotland> Nice. Wait. Wait are you sacking Big Sam *already*
[11.42] <Uruguay> Hey Eng
[11.42] <Uruguay> Wait what
[11.42] <Germany> Dude you *just* got done introducing that character
[11.43] <England> Yea inorite random
[11.43] <England> I was thinking of giving Gareth Southgate a go as manager. Got bored of Big Dam
[11.43] <England> *Big Sam
[11.44] <El_Salv(FAS_6-1_ALI)> What has England did now?
[11.44] <El_Salv(FAS_6-1_ALI)> o noo fucking fuck
[11.44] =-= El_Salv(FAS_6-1_ALI) is now known as El_Salv(FAS_7-1_ALI)
[11.45] <Uruguay> Who the fuck is Gareth Southgate?
[11.45] <Scotland> !
[11.46] <Ireland> Wait *that* Gareth Southgate?
[11.46] <Italia> He seem a familiar I think
[11.47] <England> LOL
[11.47] <England> He should sound familair Italy! Remember that penalty shoot out we lost? He's the guy who missed.
[11.47] <Uruguay> The psycho left-back guy?
[11.47] <England> No the other one
[11.47] <France> O the man that I have at Marseille for a time? With ze hair and ze diamond lights?
[11.48] <Ireland> Wait I thought the penalty guy was Beckham?
[11.49] =-= El_Salv(FAS_7-1_ALI) is now known as El_Salv(FAS_8-1_ALI)
[11.49] <El_Salv(FAS_8-1_ALI)> ffs
[11.49] <Portugal> <England> He should sound familair Italy! Remember that penalty shoot out we lost? He's the guy who missed. <-- which one?
[11.49] <Portugal> Vassel? Beckham? Lampard? Gerrard? Carragher?
[11.50] <England> No the other one
[11.50] <Portugal> Narrow it down lol
[11.40] <USA> <Ireland> Wait I thought the penalty guy was Beckham? <-- nah he's at NY Giants
[11.50] <Argentina> Quiet shit-rectangle. He's clearly talking about the David Batty guy or the Guvnor character he had. And stop godmodding...
[11.50] <Argentina> ...C.Ronaldo.
[11.51] <Portugal> No u.
[11.51] <Greece> Shit guys I think Byz is back
[11.51] <Brazil> Guys I just got done making 8bit pokemon logos for my sixth-tier regional Distrito Federal Campeonato Brasiliense state...
[11.51] <Brazil> ...championship second division
[11.51] <Brazil> Wait whats going on?
[11.51] <England> Guys no Southgate was the pizza guy. Remember EC10? Missed against Germany
[11.52] <Brazil> <Argentina> Quiet shit-rectangle. He's clearly talking about the David Batty guy or the Guvnor character he had. And stop...
[11.52]< Brazil> ...godmodding C.Ronaldo. <-- rich coming from you
[11.52] <Brazil> Messi Maradona etc
[11.52] <Germany> I don't remember that, England
[11.52] <Portugal> Shut up
[11.53] =-= El_Salv(FAS_8-1_ALI) is now known as El_Salv(FAS_9-1_ALI)
[11.53] <El_Salv(FAS_9-1_ALI)> nooooo o god please make it stop...
[11.54] <England> Of course you remember, you won that tournament!
[11.55] <Argentina> Shut up Brazil. You've had Pele, Garrincha, Ronaldo, Deco, Zico, Socrates, Romario...
[11.55] <Germany> Yeah but I can't remember playing you
[11.56] <Portugal> C. Ronaldo best Ronaldo
[11.56] <Brazil> Deco wasn't mine.
[11.56] <England> What do you mean you can't remember!!! Seminal moment in English football
[11.56] <Honduras> lollolololol
[11.57] <Portugal> GLORIOUS DECO
[11.57] <Portugal> Is he still doing well in your league Brazil?
[11.57] <Ireland> Northgate is the fella from that semi-final, Germany
[11.58] <Brazil> Fucker must be forty by now, Portugal, just because he looks like a child doesn't mean he doesn't age
[11.58] <Scotland> Southgate is the one from that tournament, Germ. Missed a penalty
[11.58] <England> It's Southgate not Northgate.
[11.58] <Ireland> Same either way
[11.59] <Argentina> Arg league best league.
[12.00] <N.Iron> <Ireland> Same either way <--- Oi
[12.00] <N.Iron>
[12.00] <N.Iron> wind ur neck in bollox
[12.01] =-= El_Salv(FAS_9-1_ALI) is now known as El_Salv(FAS_10-1_ALI)
[12.01] <El_Salv(FAS_10-1_ALI)> fuck this
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[12.02] <Honduras> loloollol
[12.02] <Espain> Nice RP England
[12.02] <Espain> Is Big Sam free? I might have a spot at Barcelona for him
[12.03] <England> OMFG really?
[12.03] <Espain> No.
[12.04] <England>
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