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Rothward Index [OPEN]

Postby Geanna » Wed Jun 17, 2015 9:59 am

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This Cycle ends on July 6th; Applicants must be enrolled by June 20th to be listed on the Rothward Report




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The Rothward Academy is an older relic of the Tarlene Reforms (est. in 1884), an extensive policy that established the collective Hemingburg Institute of Consolidated Academies. The Hemingburg Institute was a nationwide assortment of prestigious schools and Universities that were managed under a council of directors.

The Rothward Academy of Economic Studies was established in 1893, and named after the late Director, Henry Rothward. Each established Academy had a certain educational criterion that explicitly catered to students performing, and researching in that field of study. There are other Academies such as the Eldrige Academy for Science and Mathematics or the Arthurian School for Cultural Arts to name a couple of examples.

The Hemingburg Institute's funding was significantly cut in 1927, and the Institute was completely dismantled in 1934 as a result of extensive budget cuts in the Ministry of Education. The Academies were then re-organised under their own school boards, and further elevated as their own separate trade universities.

During the 1956 Education Reforms under the Gartin Administration - funding was renewed to these Academies and the Scholastic Selective Programme for Graduates was passed shortly after, establishing a programme for soon-to-be Graduates to take and potentially be selected to attend one of the schools. Up until this point, the participation in these Academies was almost expressively reserved for that of wealthy families.

Rothward as a result, received much of this funding and a large influx of students not long after - who started their pursuits into Economics and studies relating thereof. As a result, the Rothward Academy also holds numerous think-tanks that are often consulted by varying institutions from government to school criteria.


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The Rothward Index of itself, is an assorted index of indices or categories of varying fields in relation to economics that further display varying store-fronts and businesses. It is a reference, categorical study, and essentially a prestigious and free advertisement for the aforementioned businesses that it lists.

Businesses register with the Index, and are first alphabetically categorised in a list with concise information, and then further categorised into several indices relative to their speciality. Rothward then sifts through every applicant and reviews their storefronts on several criteria.

Following this, companies are then rated on the Rothward Index in the form of Grades. Every month, the Rothward Report is then published with these reviews, Grades, and categorised into Tiers based on these criteria. There are four Tiers, the Platinum Tier reserved for (1) Storefront, the Gold (3), the Silver (5), and the Bronze (10).

One storefront will be selected and given the Platinum Certificate of Significance and be named the Storefront of the Month allowing the use of a specialized seal on their storefront thereafter. Furthermore, the storefront that gains Platinum will receive a generous donation by the Rothward Academy to be used as seen fit by the storefront.

At the end of every three month period, known as the Quarterly Review - One storefront may be selected for the Quarterly Certificate of Excellence, the highest award possible for participants. Storefronts can only win the Quarterly once a year and reserve a spot at the top of the Rothward Index Report for Exemplary Mention as a profound model of an operational, stylistic, and friendly storefront.

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Assuming applicants have met the criteria within the below application, enrolment is to be considered open, and easily obtainable. However, should an applicant be proven to have falsified information within their application, they shall be denied. Applicants are to present their information in a professional, and civil manner resonate of the standing of their character, and representative of their Storefront.

During Rothward Reviews, such character within applicants is deeply, and thoroughly critiqued as well. Should an applicant fail the enrolment process three times (via strikes), they shall be barred from further attempts of enrolment on the index for one Quarterly Cycle. Falsified, Misrepresented, and other malicious or fallacious applicants will be denied along these lines, and repeated abuse will result in a permanent ban of the applicant from the Rothward Index following three consecutive strikes and Quarterly Ban previously.

Once an applicant has enrolled themselves, and been accepted by the Rothward Academy - they will be listed into their respective index. From there on, the enrolled storefront will be observed carefully by the Academy for their conduct among other criteria that shall be listed. Therefore, any conduct that seems anything other than professional or civil can reflect negatively on the Storefront's review during the release of Rothward Reports.


Please find the aforementioned Application below, and fill out the fields to the best of your ability. Due note that applications not professionally addressed to the Rothward Academy in the form of a Communique or other Official Missive will be denied.

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[b]Name of Storefront to be Enrolled[/b]::
[b]Link of Storefront to be Enrolled[/b]::
[b]Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin[/b]::
[b]CEO or Similar[/b]::
[b]Speciality of Business[/b]::




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Please note, that this is merely the publicised criteria performed during reviews. Other criteria does exist, however, in order to avoid any potential bias or unfairness, this criteria will not be publicised.

Furthermore, the critiques performed during the process are summarised in the reviews together, and as such to avoid the aforementioned bias or unfairness, individuals selected and ordained to critique (although illustrious) are to remain anonymous and their identities to not be publicised.


The Criteria followed by the Rothward Academy during the reviewing process are listed below. Storefronts are reviewed the moment they've been enrolled, and shall be continuously observed for the timespan of a month.

Following the Rothward Report, the storefront's grade is reset - in which they will be observed for the next month as if having been newly enrolled again. This allows a storefront to monitor its grade overtime, and will allow those interested in a storefront's standing to tell if they have done better or worse during each Report.

Due to this, it's important to note that all actions conducted by a storefront will in fact be closely monitored. Critics will be randomly selected, and may even anonymously purchase items from the aforementioned storefront to further ascertain the workings and conduct of a storefront during the review.

The Criteria

  • Conduct of Character and Professionalism
  • Ease of Use, Comprehension, and Organisation of Storefront
  • Conduct during Transaction
  • Quality and Quantity of Goods/Services
  • Time to respond to orders
  • Frequency of new items
  • Pricing of Goods/Services
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Alphabetical
This is the Alphabetical Index. Here you will find Storefronts listed Alphabetically - with certain Tags addressed to them. The format is as followed;

{Current Grade} {Name of Storefront} {Index}



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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: OPEN MISSIVE TO INTERESTED PARTIES
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: Enrolment now available for the Rothward Index



Greetings,

On behalf of the United Federacy, it is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies - to any and all interested parties wishing to enrol in the Rothward Index.

The Rothward Academy under the guidance of James L. Ardington, has been an illustrious University within the Federacy. Often consulted by the Ministry of Economics, among other institutions within our nation for their research into the fields of Business and Economics. They have served their role for well over a century, and with a high regard by the rest of the community for their exemplary students, and advice on varying matters.

With the open enrolment of the Index, the Rothward Academy hopes to expand its reputation, and welcomes all applicants to the linked page where they may find an application after a bit of reading on this prestigious school.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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Postby In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam » Wed Jun 17, 2015 10:58 am

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled::HarkBank
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled::http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=343790
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=344009&hilit=harkbank
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Harkback Union
CEO or Similar:: Harkback Union
Speciality of Business:: Bank
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Postby Marquesan » Wed Jun 17, 2015 11:25 am

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled::
Myrmidon Tactical Design.

Link of Storefront to be Enrolled::
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin::
The Meritocratic Union of Marquesan States.

CEO or Similar::
Publically-held international corporation chaired by a Board of Directors.

Speciality of Business::
Arms Manufacturing.
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Postby Geanna » Wed Jun 17, 2015 11:41 am

In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam wrote:Name of Storefront to be Enrolled::HarkBank
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled::http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=343790
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=344009&hilit=harkbank
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Harkback Union
CEO or Similar:: Harkback Union
Speciality of Business:: Bank
international II/GE&T currency/P2TM



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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: Harkbank International
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Harkbank International. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by the Harkbank International has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of FINANCE, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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Postby Geanna » Wed Jun 17, 2015 11:43 am

Marquesan wrote:Name of Storefront to be Enrolled::
Myrmidon Tactical Design.

Link of Storefront to be Enrolled::
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin::
The Meritocratic Union of Marquesan States.

CEO or Similar::
Publically-held international corporation chaired by a Board of Directors.

Speciality of Business::
Arms Manufacturing.



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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: Myrmidon Tactical Design
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Myrmidon Tactical Design. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by Myrmidon Tactical Design has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of MILITARY, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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A Communiqué to the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies:

In the eighteen years since I first took over control of Crown Azalea Meadery™ here in South Artica, our business has seen tremendous growth. Yet we never forgot who we were at our core, or where we came from. I am proud today to submit our loving brand, Crown Azalea Meadery™ for consideration in the Rothward Index. This decision is the culmination in our faith in our brand, and all that we stand for as a company. We relish in respecting time-honored customs and traditions which make our brand unique amongst our competition. Now, we would like for the merit of our work to stand on its own for the purview of our international customers. Below, in totality, is a petition for inclusion in the Rothward Index. It is the sincere hope of Crown Azalea Meadery™ that this missive finds you well, and we look forward to hearing back form you presently. I humbly thank you for your time and effort here!


Witness My Official Signature and Seal This Day, the 17th of June, 2015 C.E.

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Christophe Pettigrew de Sauveterre, Chief Executive Officer, Crown Azalea Meadery™





General Router Number: AX151D29150Authentication Codices: J91523F8153Locational Proximal C-1: S723K9X152XLocational Proximal C-I: 59A91K2Z5Z3



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Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Couronne Azalée (Crown Azalea Meadery)
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Couronne Azalée Meadery
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: The Evenguard of Azura (Nocturnalya)
CEO or Similar:: Christophe Pettigrew de Sauveterre
Speciality of Business:: Meadery / Fine Spirits
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A Communiqué to the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies:

In the eighteen years since I first took over control of Crown Azalea Meadery™ here in South Artica, our business has seen tremendous growth. Yet we never forgot who we were at our core, or where we came from. I am proud today to submit our loving brand, Crown Azalea Meadery™ for consideration in the Rothward Index. This decision is the culmination in our faith in our brand, and all that we stand for as a company. We relish in respecting time-honored customs and traditions which make our brand unique amongst our competition. Now, we would like for the merit of our work to stand on its own for the purview of our international customers. Below, in totality, is a petition for inclusion in the Rothward Index. It is the sincere hope of Crown Azalea Meadery™ that this missive finds you well, and we look forward to hearing back form you presently. I humbly thank you for your time and effort here!


Witness My Official Signature and Seal This Day, the 17th of June, 2015 C.E.

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Christophe Pettigrew de Sauveterre, Chief Executive Officer, Crown Azalea Meadery™





General Router Number: AX151D29150Authentication Codices: J91523F8153Locational Proximal C-1: S723K9X152XLocational Proximal C-I: 59A91K2Z5Z3



Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Couronne Azalée (Crown Azalea Meadery)
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Couronne Azalée Meadery
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: The Evenguard of Azura (Nocturnalya)
CEO or Similar:: Christophe Pettigrew de Sauveterre
Speciality of Business:: Meadery / Fine Spirits



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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: Crown Azalea Meadery
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Crown Azalea Meadery. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by Crown Azalea Meadery has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of BEVERAGES, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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Name of Storefront to be Enrolled: Bank of Yohannes
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=75306
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin: Yohannes [in game factbook]
CEO or Similar: Dame Julianna Fríða Stefansson
Speciality of Business: Finance & banking

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled: VMK AG
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Postby Geanna » Wed Jun 17, 2015 3:10 pm

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Harkbank International

Find Below the Grade Report and Review. Do note that this report is not the Monthly Rothward Report that depicts multiple storefronts.




Banking and Finance
Harkback Union
Grade 30.6

First Glance

Harkbank International is an institution of financial banking that utilises manipulated reserve pseudocurrency known as 'Internationales' that is dependent on population of an applicant to the firm.

The bank offers 'one million internationales' per ten million citizens within a nation, one million being as well, the minimum transactional engagement with the bank. The other method of gaining this fixed pseudocurrency is via loans that are taken out from the bank.

Loans offered by Harkbank International are dependent on a nation's credit rating, of which is as default, rating F. (A nation is unable to take out loans)

Another method further listed by the firm for obtaining more internationales, is by mining a supposed 'rare and mysterious element in very limited supply on a remote island whose location is knowable only to Harkbank Officials'.

In order to obtain this information, a nation must make a payment of 'one billion internationales' to the Harkbank in order to receive this location, to make internationales.


The Review

At first glance, Harkbank International may look like any other Storefront offering financial services. The bank has employees, conducts and participates in transactions, and operates in some ways as a bank is expected.

At a passing glimpse, the aesthetics of the storefronts page is hardly anything to be considered sweet on the eyes. An authoritative picture, crowned with a less than impressive title makes one wonder if they've truly come to the right place.

The formatting although largely recognisable as a basic format used by many storefronts, is poorly put together as if done so in a hurry or with little care. In fact, sections and their respective sub-sections show off their glamour with nothing more than a little italicisation.

Naturally, this results in some confusion of exactly where one is when reading, and whether or not they've ventured off into another section entirely. The only special formatting that's given any particular attention to (lack thereof) detail is the 'Disclaimer' and 'ToS' agreement haphazardly placed in the middle of the page.

The common practise of applying much too small text in the hopes of deceiving visitors as to what sort of sinister sophistry may be at play here.

As such, the formatting and aesthetics alone are utterly horrible.

Upon further review of Harkbank, there also came quite a bit of concern of whether this 'institution' was actually a bank, or masquerading as one. Outside of blatantly and upfront trying to strong-arm participants through extortion to gain more of its pseudo-currency by suggesting a payment of a billion internationales to find some wasteland out in the middle of nowhere – there was the concern of how exactly the firm could afford its policies.

Harkbank makes a note that it will offer one million of its pseudocurrency for every ten million citizens within a nation. Of course, one would have to wonder where exactly the bank was getting this money?

Considering the majority of the world runs on Fractional Reserve Systems, if the bank was simply printing the currency out of thin air (Fiat) its value would be practically worthless before it even finished paying the first nation.

Commodity backed currencies need commodities naturally, however, therein lies the problem of Harkbank actually having enough commodity. Since therein again, the bank would run out of x commodity long before it was finished paying out arguably free currency.

However, the appeal of free currency to anyone would most likely sound perfectly fine until one reaches the tiny-text gremlins lingering in the morass of text.

We've established that the bank makes its money from extortion up front. From the Disclaimer it reads;


''Disclaimer
1. Harkbank International does not guarantee to fulfill its promises and is exempt from all legal obligations.
2. Harkbank retains the right to add or subtract ][ from any accounts without the consent of the owner. Harkbank is not obliged to state the reasons behind such actions.
3. Harkbank cannot be held responsible for fraud conducted by our costumers. Its their fault, not ours.'' (SIC)

Essentially, Harkbank International has thrown off any legal repercussions for its actions, further affirming that it is exempt from any negative policy action against the bank, and that it holds the right to freely take money from its accountees as it sees fit.

Now it isn't uncommon to see financial establishments put up red-tape, there's a lot of legal obligation that must be fulfilled and put into ink and paper to protect individuals, both employees and not. However, there's a time when such red-tape goes to the extent of being an outright sham.

So if the bank runs itself into debt, and owes its creditors – it defines itself as not being legally obligated to fulfill and pay on their debt and instead forego all agreements, least agreements that no longer are beneficial to itself.

The Terms of Service are another tiny-text interjection as followed;

''Terms of service

1. By accepting the terms of service, you allow Harkbank to confiscate your nation's publicly and privately owned land, infrastructure, vehicles, satellites, gold, fiat currencies, woodchip reserves and ice cream, should you be overdue with payments. Your most valuable resource deposits, historical architecture and jet bombers can be sold by Harkbank at auctions across NS until enough ][ are raised to cover your debt, though you may also choose to sell WA votes to Harkbank International or fight wars for Harkbank International to have a portion of your debt ereased.
2. None of our costumers are allowed to discredit Harkbank International on any forums.
3. None of our costumers are allowed to complain the quality or speed of service by Harkbank International. It is allowed to report misconduct by our employees though.
4. By accepting the terms of service, You agree in advance to any points that will be added to this document by Harkbank International in the future, regardless of what they say. “ (SIC)

So, the first section operates how a bank operates normally to an extent. Such as, if one takes out a mortgage on a home – and fails to pay back the loan, the home is known as 'collateral' and the bank may seize it from you.

Though typically, this means you've mortgage all stated under an agreement priorly for Harkbank to thoroughly conduct such, which appears to be negligible.

The second point listed essentially sets up the old fashioned, “Highway Robbery” clause, by denying customers their right to have any form of voice that'd negatively impact the Bank. No doubt resulting in some form of shady repercussion.

The Bank goes so far to even point out selling WA votes, which naturally is a clear violation of numerous laws of corruption.

The last and final point means that if the bank decides that being a customer means they own your nation, then clearly it must be bound.

In all here, it's quite evident that Harkbank International is far from a legitimate establishment for Financial Security whose practises are based on International Fraud, Extortion, Corruption, and Intimidation tactics. The Professionalism of the establishment beyond this is far from clean, poorly managed, and typical of an illegal operation.

At which rate, the surprising lack of an International response from the WA or a coalition of nations is somewhat worrying, though the bank did receive a 'Cease and Desist' Mandate. However, this may be a result of how young the bank actually is in comparison, and the community as a whole has yet to discover this entity.



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Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Luxan Imperial Narcotics
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=329677
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Primordial Luxa
CEO or Similar:: The Blood Witch Theagan
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Myrmidon Tactical Design

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Arms Manufacturing
Myrmidon Tactical Design
Grade 74.6
B

First Glance

Myrmidon Tactical Design is an Arms Manufacturing storefront that produces a wide assortment of weapons, vehicles, and munitions to be bought and used by various armed forces through-out the world.

The company in itself was already multi-nationally run, though within the region of Sondria, founded between the Shogunate of Marquesan and the Elder Republic of Erjunhuf.

However, more recently MTD can be found in numerous regions and nations, deemed colloquially as “Partners”. For the most part, MTD is renowned for their more 'high-end' plethora of weapons, typically directed at PMT (as the designs are of that tech realm, and thus catered to) and have grown to be quite commonplace in several arsenals across the community.


The Review

From the moment one visits the storefront of MTD, they are hit with a sense of pride, of style, and of a particular notion of class. At the beginning, the logo and starting imagery immediately grabs your attention, and draws you in for quite the read.

The storefront is crowned with a remarkable, and aesthetically pleasing logo and title, “Myrmidon Tactical Design” and the Company Motto in stylistic, big letters designed to look like the blueprint sketches of some architect caught in the midst of an epiphany.

The next part that catches one's eye is the GETrax rating. Four Stars by the GET Rating Agency, and displayed in a manner that symbolises the pride felt no doubt by the craftmen behind MTD's work, but done so in an elegant manner that doesn't make them seem egotistical. Truly a clever, and well mentioned design for the beginning of a storefront.

Of course, once one gets to scrolling, is where the real magic continues. The page keeps you engaged – the organisation, the style, and the writing is all very attractive to the eye, easy to follow, and spaced out very well.

Even the 'Catalogs' listed depict the similar architect style mosaic seen in the title, it leads one to think that a lot of planning went into the construction of this storefront. Of course, above all else, despite the organisation, it is extremely, almost stupidly simple to the point of brilliance. It's to the point, lays everything out for you, and lets you be.

At the beginning of the journey through MTD's page, there are many helpful links. The 'MTD Workshop' showcases current and latest projects in development, a quaint OOC Notice depicts a well formulated disclaimer, and personal thoughts of the owner, known as “Rob”.

Then the conditions listed, for DPR, and privacy all neatly laid out and easy to follow. The language so far, has remained exceptionally concise, eloquent even. It makes one almost ashamed to have to point out the negatives in this well off of a storefront, but that remains the back action of these reviews – to assist.

For the most part, aside from the beautiful aesthetics and simplicity of the MTD structure – the first striking pimple that stuck out like the sickening mole on one's face was the Additional Information below the OOC Notice.

For the most part, the DPRs are agreeable, and everything checks out – though some concern may come from being short-changed by letting people work out their own calculations for prices.

It comes at a bit of a disappointment that for a storefront with so much heart into it, when it comes to customer satisfaction, it'd be like purchasing a queen sized bed and the staff telling you to find your own way of getting it home in that Prius.

Of course, it does state that there will be “spot checks” - and although we weren't able to put this to a test as of yet, it may or may not come in a future review.

Now naturally, following that point – we come across the hypocrisy listed thereafter about NS Calculators. It was a bit of a further disappointment, one being urged to check if they could truly afford it, and them withholding the right to decline a purchase if they didn't think one could afford it.

If anything, it's quite contradictory to the aforementioned “bag it yourselves”. Though the option for a yearly pay-out is attractive.


Then there's the issue with the catalogues, they're fine and useful upfront. However – once someone clicks one of the catalogues they're somewhat left in a big room, with mountains of equipment and a “find it yourself”, allegorical naturally to being forced to scroll down an entire page to find the item you're after.

In fact, “Vessels & Vehicles” are the only ones with clickable short cuts, almost as if the craftmen had suddenly lost the heart in it, and promptly decided to not bother putting any clickable short cuts on the other catalogues.

Of course, some may find this to be a bit trivial, but impatient people do exist, and although it isn't an “End of Days” scenario, I imagine they'll still find the scrolling to have to be an irritation.

Course, this is coming from an actual anonymous shopper that was used on MTD, who had personal experience operating their catalogues and dealing with the customer service.

In fact, when one's busy trying to ensure they can 'afford' what they're buying, and sifting through numerous different tabs, losing one's place and having to re-scroll can be a deeply rooted frustration apparently.

As far as the items themselves however, the images are a mix of handrawn and artistic designs that are appealing and do the writings justice, so there rests no complaints there. The descriptions are at least upfront, and more accessible then the scrolling.

Perhaps one of the few noteworthy things in this section, are the descriptions themselves. The language is well thought out, thought sometimes a bit “wall of text” heavy, but sound nonetheless. In all, it uses big words, attractive sounding ones at that, and is somewhat vague – which would sound like a bad thing, but it isn't.

It is, however, marketing, and an eloquent display at that – it's attractive, and makes you want to buy it. That, being a storefront, is what it's for – however they go a step further and outline the actual details below from powerplant to arms, size, weight – anything and everything for those actually concerned about statistics that you'll use once and then throw in the bin later.

And of course, who can forget the names – perhaps one of the most interesting features, or peculiarities for MTD are the names. They're attractive, but furthermore useful – some storefronts rumble off numbers like a chimpanzee who can't tell where to slober before they're done rambling. MTD does the same, but then gives an easier to remember code-name. Beautiful.

Despite the PMT dynamics, and systems, the pricing is somewhat on the high-end. It's unsure if one's being forced to pay a few billion extra than they should be for either the MTD logo, or because the PMT tech is really that good – though in of itself, it isn't all that special. MTD is known for its out-of-the-box thinking, given, but against other PMT it does about the same, which is actually a really good thing – which leaves one to wonder about the pricing.

However, for the quality of the equipment, and compared to some competitors, you're still getting your money's worth.

Straying from the frontpage of the storefront, Rothward dug through the history of every associated member of MTD. Their past, and recent postings, and conduct were sifted and observed – for the most part, speed to respond to postings isn't exactly excellent, averaging about 2.5 days.

As far as customer service goes, it seems dependent on whether there's a good or bad day. At times, professionalism is quite apparent in the employee's postings when responding, nice communiques, thought out language, organised.

Other times, it's a one-line, “Accepted/Denied” and then everyone carries on with their day, as if not realising that suddenly customer service seems somewhat distant.

Naturally, that reflects negatively on a storefront when those posts do occur, and it can cause one to think MTD is having a short identity crisis once you've passed the excellence in the front page.

In handling some issues, specifically of malicious in nature, is about as sincere as one may expect, and for the most part appeared to be handled relatively well comparative to other storefronts. Though – perhaps one of the good 'stand-outs' of MTD is continuous new content, which is a rarity.

In all, MTD is definitely a top-notch storefront of assorted weapons, and other accessories that can be deployed by armed forces. It's designed well, it's good quality, though a little overpriced, and outside of a few issues – definitely deserves the four star rating it harboured from GETrax.



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Yohannes wrote:[ Out of character: Hi Geanna, I will add an in character letter later today (^__^)

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled: Bank of Yohannes
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=75306
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin: Yohannes [in game factbook]
CEO or Similar: Dame Julianna Fríða Stefansson
Speciality of Business: Finance & banking

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled: VMK AG
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled: viewtopic.php?t=105528
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin: Yohannes
CEO or Similar: Paper von Towel und Bagel
Speciality of Business: Arms manufacturing & metallurgy



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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: VMK AG and Bank of Yohannes
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicants



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards the VMK AG, and the Bank of Yohannes. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by the VMK AG and Bank of Yohannes has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and have been officially ACCEPTED. The storefronts submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of FINANCE and MILITARY, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefronts' standings [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
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Primordial Luxa wrote:Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Luxan Imperial Narcotics
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=329677
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Primordial Luxa
CEO or Similar:: The Blood Witch Theagan
Speciality of Business:: Narcotics, Recreation Drugs and military pharmaceuticals



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TO: Luxan Imperial Narcotics
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Luxan Imperial Narcotics. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by Luxan Imperial Narcotics has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of LEISURE, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


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Crown Azalee Meadery

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Alcohol Production
Crown Azalee Meadery
Grade 80.9
A


First Glance

The Crown Azalee Meadery is a long standing brewery resting North of the Saint Veronique Villa in the Evenguard of Azura, a staple and widely respected testament to Azuran craftmanship in making a product that has since fallen out of favour.

Having been established since roughly a time following 1244, the Meadery has a long and steady history. Fresh ingredients are used in their daily production, and rather than use a distributor, the Meadery freely distributes the beverages themselves.


The Review

If there rest a time when one might be struck with a truly regal experience, it would no doubt happen when on stumbles upon the Couronne Azalee Meadery Storefront. At the forefront of the page, one is met with the highly stylised, posh looking title of “Couronne Azalee Hydromellerie” - Azuran for the Meadery's name.

In fact, it's a logo and title so grand, that it can only speak volumes as to the proud history of this Meadery – and gives one a sense that they truly have found themselves in a storefront set for that of Royalty.

From the start, a quick, simple description is laid out for the visitor about the brief history of the Meadery itself - which has stood for a very long time; antiquated with a culture so uniquely attested to its rich history, it comes at no surprise to what one will experience upon further review.

It is clean, organised, and structurally sound – an easy to use directory, with linking that works, and has little difficulty performing. Of course, much information is provided by the Meadery, about their brewing process, the history – neat paragraphs, careful, eloquent sentences – and to top it off, beautifully adorned pictures of their craft, something of work typical of true artisans in their prime.

(And no doubt the marketing crown jewel in obtaining the change of one's pocket if only to taste a single drop of this fine beverage.)

Everything used in the Mead they produce is fabricated, grown, and mixed – birthed directly from the virgin land within Azura itself, allowing a much assumed fresher taste to take root in the lucky glass to be graced with the subtle kiss of Azuran Mead.

Their entire process appears to be very carefully regulated, and all to ensure they brew a wide assortment of stylized meads for the luxurious consumption of its patrons. Consumption, that could most likely make one feel they have found themselves in a reverie, and in the safety and comfort of their privy leisure.

With all that said, only a fool could not take some time to reflect on the sheer work that went into the creation of this storefront. Everything is styled, it's as if one has walked into the Palace, adorned with the towering majesties of rich marble columns, and ornate tile floors, cornered with gold and jewels, that glisten in the natural light passing through crystal glass windows.

Truly, and absolutely – a noteworthy marketing image that sells.

Of course, should one finally feel their mouth water with the anticipation, the compulsion to empty their pockets for a glass of this unique experience – the customer service will be found to do even more justice to this whole establishment.

Everything from the roof, to the floor – and in between is nothing but professional at its finest grace. Truly a leading example for an almost perfect storefront deserving commendation, and their greatest pride, is of course – not to be lost without ensuring you are deeply satisfied and are left with an invigorated feeling of respect.

However, in the end – the only few tarnished pieces that could truly be found thus far was the ornate writing itself. The colour represented in the page, albeit very stylistic, and appealing does provide some difficulty in reading.

At times, one may lose their spot – and for those with less than perfect vision, it proves to be quite the difficult task. Below the crown jewel of a title, that exist – is is some form of writing, no doubt descriptive – but unable to be read, the white fades into a whitened background, and the most that could be made out of it, was something to do with “Quality”.

The purple text used, is no doubt, very attractive – but for those with poorer eyesight, actually produces difficulty and eye-strain when trying to read. Perhaps, the biggest injustice is the use of light grey-writing, the shade is light enough that even with good vision, on may find it difficult.

In all – the Couronne Azalee Meadery sells itself as the crown jewel of a regal experience, and one should expect nothing but that form of pleasure when engaging the Meadery. It has a long history, and it is a shame that Mead has generally fallen out of use, making the Meadery a somewhat monopoliser on the beverage, much to the delight of Mead enthusiasts.

As expected however, business is somewhat slow – and that is mostly attributed to the above no doubt, and the pricing for the most part appears fair, some a bit overpriced, others a bit under-priced, but given the market – it's perfectly acceptable and comparative to many other breweries, cheaper with far more class than you may expect from a poorly brewed competitor.

Sometimes it just goes to show, that in order to truly feel like a King – one needs only to pour a glass of this fine Mead, and enjoy the gentle quiet of a long day in the solitude of one's study, knowing full well that an artisan, a craftman of exemplary stature – poured the very heart of themselves into the glass that you so gently kiss with every sip.

Couronne Azalee Meadery has well earned its Grade A – at 80.9



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Hello! Our company, Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus, believes we may meet the criteria for recognition in your index. We are already an accredited storefront, but more publicity is never bad! Additionally, we believe that so called "Future Tech" storefronts are underrepresented in the global market compared to the prevalence of advanced cultures, and enrollment in your index might change that.

In your review of our storefront, I ask you to kindly ignore our acceptance of the pseudocurrency "Internationales" and our promotion of Harkbank. As I am an employee of Harkbank, I must provide positive publicity for that institution. However, given recent troubles and an unwillingness on the part of my "employer" to improve business practices, I am most likely going to discontinue acceptance of their currency, and will most likely resign my position as well.

We look forward to your feedback!

Below is our attached application:
Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=338905
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Excidium Planetis
CEO or Similar:: Valerie Nguyen
Speciality of Business:: Second hand Future/Post Modern Tech


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Bank of Yohannes

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Financial Banking
Bank of Yohannes
Grade 81
A



First Glance

The Bank of Yohannes is an internationally renowned, immediately recognisable hegemon of financial banking within the Global Economic Community. Most if not all major transactions, and financial withholding practises take place within this firm which holds a very long, deeply rooted history.

Everything from accounts, securities, loans, stocks and shares, investments and more are in the arsenal of this Bank, perhaps one of the most illustrious in the extreme, of financial institutions that has ever meddled in Global Economics.

Rarely do Banks have considerable access, and influence to an extent that can be felt outside of Economics, and into the day-to-day proceedings of International Politics.



The Review

There was a time when the Bank of Yohannes was hardly known, however it has tirelessly clawed its way into the minds of anyone who deals in international trade. It can be said quite easily, that when the Bank shrugs – the globe feels the tremor, an interesting analogy to depict for a firm that can arguably execute its own soft power should it see fit, and be as devastating as any standing army.

Naturally, with such great power comes responsibility, and few times have ever existed where the Bank has needed to create tsunamis in a world where the waves are constantly crashing. Rather – when administrators from the Bank of Yohannes enter a room, everyone stops and listens, they've truly garnered that much prestige.

The storefront in itself, is very complex, very organised, and very intimidating. Outside of a few glitches, such as the flashy information banners, with cyclic ads that do not fit well for many screen resolutions, the sheer construction of the page as a whole is titanic, and well deserving of one's respect.

Of course, it is loaded with nothing but information – and a lot to take in in a short read. There is an issue however, when reading – with the mountains of information – the need for better and shorter paragraphs is upfront and apparent. As wall of texts – and with the typical professional and legal jargon applied to such a titan, one can't help but feel a bit intimidated and lost.

Pictures are an amazing break-up for a storefront, and can make or break one's hard work. For the most part, the placing at the beginning is a bit haphazard but sorts itself out down the road, thought at times, can be somewhat distracting due to the sheer number of images applied.
Despite this, the reading will be the most extensive task one will conduct when visiting this storefront. Naturally, for the amount of services the Bank actually offers, there's a lot of legal and professional jargon that must be mulled over before someone accidentally digs themselves into a pit.

Though, some of the “large-word” syndrome encountered is nothing more than marketing garbble intended to to assert the Bank's position, and convince you that they are the best option in managing your financials.

In other areas however, some sections would appear to work best if this form of syndrome was restrained, and dulled to allow individuals who weren't completely savvy or well-educated in the matters of Banking and Finance, to better comprehend what was actually being said and not be met with walls of arguably condescending language.

With the intimidation factor, engaging an individual into a contract when they've not fully understood the parameters of the agreement is quite risky. Though this policy isn't exactly foreign to storefronts, and can be manipulated as a marketing trick. Naturally, people fall for it.

Though, to be fair, the Bank does make a fair point of attempting to appear humble and seem more relative to the customer by stating they “are not the best”. Which – in light, seems trivial for an additional tag following the “About Us” and merely aims to support the notion that they do think otherwise. Marketing after all.

Course if you can get passed the sporadic long strings of “long-word syndrome”, and carefully take your time to read, it does in fact make quite a bit of sense, so it isn't completely useless. However, impatient people do exist, and it's hard not to concern for those more prone to being impressionable.

Then again, that is the entire point of a storefront – to sell itself, thought we'll have to strike a few points simply because of the lengthy paragraphing.

Further on, everything else is extremely well organised, descriptions of the different types of accounts, fair and well balanced financial leveraging, and a wide plethora of services that may lead one to use the Bank of Yohannes for anything and everything. In this way, they've essentially established a financial hegemony.

Unfortunately, after some time digging through writing and glancing at the pictures – the aesthetics become quickly boring and grow one tired, if anything they seem to be there simply to keep your mind awake for a minute moment before you drift off into a slumberous retreat once more.

Now the practicality of the organisation, and the directive links are what really stands out here, and takes a large bulk of how one may view the page. Everything works, and it goes where it should – from there on, the process is mostly painless and upfront. Chiselled to perfection as some might ordain it.

Once you actually get to interact with customer service, response times are a toss of the coin. Averaging anywhere from 1.5 to 4 days, though one can't help but notice the stark professionalism when receiving a missive from the Bank.

In all – the Bank of Yohannes may not be full of expressive glamour, it isn't attractive – in fact it may be considered ugly and dull, boring, and not a first option when choosing a date if we must go by looks alone, but that does not do it justice.

Under the surface is where its real personality lies, and the actual beauty – if even not immediately obvious. Between the lines of the legal rabble, the Bank of Yohannes is exceptionally organised, practical, and one may expect nothing less than shrewd professionalism.

It is, in every right, a Titan amidst waves of competitors, and just goes to show – that sometimes looks aren't everything, and the Bank of Yohannes pulls far greater weight under the surface than it'll ever freely let on. It is the quiet, calm face of a wise man, sitting humbly in a chair out of sight, enjoying a glass of scotch to his wrinkled lip, and carefully pulling the strings of all those dancing in the room.



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Postby Urulandia » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:33 pm

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To: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies
From: Urulandian Agricultural Exports
Subject: Our Application



We have enclosed our application and hope to hear back from you soon.

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:Urulandian Agricultural Exports:
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=341395:
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:The Republic of Urulandia:
CEO or Similar:Lucho Narez:
Speciality of Business:Agricultural Products:

Kind Regards,
Lucho Narez,
Deputy Minister,
Urulandian Agricultural Exports

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Geanna
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Postby Geanna » Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:14 am

Excidium Planetis wrote:





Official Correspondence



Hello! Our company, Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus, believes we may meet the criteria for recognition in your index. We are already an accredited storefront, but more publicity is never bad! Additionally, we believe that so called "Future Tech" storefronts are underrepresented in the global market compared to the prevalence of advanced cultures, and enrollment in your index might change that.

In your review of our storefront, I ask you to kindly ignore our acceptance of the pseudocurrency "Internationales" and our promotion of Harkbank. As I am an employee of Harkbank, I must provide positive publicity for that institution. However, given recent troubles and an unwillingness on the part of my "employer" to improve business practices, I am most likely going to discontinue acceptance of their currency, and will most likely resign my position as well.

We look forward to your feedback!

Below is our attached application:
Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:: Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=338905
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:: Excidium Planetis
CEO or Similar:: Valerie Nguyen
Speciality of Business:: Second hand Future/Post Modern Tech


As Always,
Valerie Nguyen, CEO Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus





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TO: Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by Gizmos and Gadgets Surplus has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible. Futhermore, we would like to note, that all Storefronts are rated and reviewed separately, and cross-participation will not affect your ratings, the process that is done for your scoring is handled by a new group each time, making the possibility of bias negligible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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Postby Geanna » Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:16 am

Urulandia wrote:


To: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies
From: Urulandian Agricultural Exports
Subject: Our Application



We have enclosed our application and hope to hear back from you soon.

Name of Storefront to be Enrolled:Urulandian Agricultural Exports:
Link of Storefront to be Enrolled:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=341395:
Residing Nation, or Nation of Origin:The Republic of Urulandia:
CEO or Similar:Lucho Narez:
Speciality of Business:Agricultural Products:

Kind Regards,
Lucho Narez,
Deputy Minister,
Urulandian Agricultural Exports






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''UNION,INTEGRITY,PROGRESS''



TO: Urulandian Agricultural Exports
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: State of Applicant



Greetings,

It is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies, addressed towards Urulandian Agricultural Exports. The missive is stated as follows;

The Application priorly submitted by Urulandian Agricultural Exports has been reviewed and screened by the Application Committee of Rothward Academy, and has been officially ACCEPTED. The storefront submitted within the Application will be listed on the Index under the category of AGRICULTURE, and will begin the reviewing process for this Cycle.

We ask that you keep in mind, that through-out this cycle the storefront will be closely monitored by several individuals and graded on the listed criteria on our Index. The Cycle will end on July 6th, in which the Rothward Index will officially submit the 'Rothward Report'. At which point, the submitted storefront's status will be reset and re-assigned to new reviewers who will then review the storefront for the next cycle, and so on.

Overtime, with each passing of a cycle, you will be able to see the change in your storefront's standing [Grade], along with an archived report of the reviews associated with past Rothward Reports.

Should you have any further inquiries, please contact us via Telegram and we shall get to you as soon as possible.

For your accepted enrolment, please see the attachment below for your very own Signature tag to support the Index.


Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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⚖ Enrol for the Rothward Index!⚖

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Postby Geanna » Fri Jun 19, 2015 5:01 am


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TO: OPEN MISSIVE TO INTERESTED PARTIES
FROM: Rothward Academy of Economic Studies; Forwarded by UFG Directors of State; Director Victor Lorescu
ADDITIONAL(S):None
SUBJECT: Enrolment now available for the Rothward Index



Greetings,

On behalf of the United Federacy, it is with my pleasure that I forward this missive on the request of the Rothward Academy of Economic Studies - to any and all interested parties wishing to enrol in the Rothward Index.

The Rothward Index would like to remind interested parties, that to expect a Grade Report & Review prior to the release of the Rothward Report, applicants must have submitted their applications by June 20th, 12AM GMT. Should applications be submitted having passed this date, Grade Reports will be published following July 6th when the new cycle begins.

This allows the Index time to compile the Rothward Report for publishing. It is to be noted as well, that Storefronts can see their current Grades within the Index section, and that with each cycle this will change. An archived section under Storefront names is provided to see past reports, and graphs will be implemented to allow Storefronts to see their progress visualised.

With each Cycle, new reports will be made, and Storefronts re-assessed.

The Rothward Report

The Rothward Report is the main concern for many parties - as it is what the Rothward Index is built around. In order to clarify some things, procedures and other important information will be provided below;

The Rothward Report is a large compiled Index that rates storefronts operating in the GET. It will rate both participants, and non-participants in an extensive list and assign these storefronts to Tiers. Storefronts that find themselves in a Tier will be given a certain certification that they may display if they wish, on their storefront pages commemorating their success.

From this list, a storefront will be selected and obtain the Platinum Tier, along with the Platinum Certificate of Significance. The criteria on deciding where storefronts end up on the Rothward Report is entirely different than the Grade Report & Reviews. This is to eliminate the possibility of Storefronts anticipating that they shall gain a position in such a Tier, based on their Grade.

The criteria used for the Rothward Report is very extensive, and during the screening process - Storefronts will get anonymous shoppers, and be put in situations to manipulate their behaviour and see how they respond. [Within the Rules of the Site]. All activity conducted by the storefront will be closely monitored with absolute scrutiny, and any slip of conduct that compromises professionalism will reflect negatively on the Storefront in the Rothward Report.

A group of users will be handpicked at random, and asked to participate in some form for the Rothward Index. They will be given the criteria, and carefully observe their selected storefronts from June 20th, to July 6th. No two users will be given the same criteria, to avoid any user from attempting to publicise the criteria and compromising the Rothward Report.

Furthermore, the identities of the reviewers will remain absolutely anonymous. [[All reports will be written by myself, based off of the scoring, reviews, and other information I'm given from those who've volunteered]]

Many of the candidates that will be handpicked, are other storefront owners - No-one here, is your friend. Others are not, this both allows some, and disallows some bias within the Rothward Report, but makes it manageable. All the points of the criteria, in total, do not equal the same - some criteria have more weight, or are worth much more in points than others.

Some users will be selected, and asked only to find things they may like of a storefront - others, only what they dislike, Keep that in mind.

Once the process has ended, the Rothward Report will be compiled, and listed. It's impact is entirely dependent on the Storefronts themselves, it provides economic and marketing competition, and determines your storefront's entire worth within GET.

The storefronts that gain the highest tiers, will have bragging rights - and able to show off their prestige in obtaining their awards, those that fail to gain any Tier will have nothing to show for it, except for being deemed a bad storefront.

It is highly suggested, that storefronts look to all their flaws, and prepare themselves - the Grade Report is designed to display some complaints and criticisms, and may prove to be a vital resource when trying to better a storefront.

Good Luck.



Sincerely Signed,
DIRECTOR VICTOR LORESCU of the DIRECTORS OF STATE
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