NationStates

Posted: **Fri Sep 13, 2013 4:52 pm**

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Nation Name:The Allied States of New Edom
Storefront:Paladin Cinemas
Link to Storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=234290&hilit=Paladin
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No

Posted: **Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:33 pm**

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    Nation Name:The Empire of Helltank
    Storefront:The Iron Bank of Ferrum
    Link to Storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=258974
    Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

Posted: **Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:44 am**

Paladin Cinemas' Rating

Rating

Total Score: 189

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Inconsistent use of photos in "Playing Now", "Coming Soon", and "Previously Played" sections. Those sections look somewhat messy. 45 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects One of two providers, but revenue will dip in recessions. 13 pts
Overall Quality Mostly good quality. 24 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Find pictures for all movies playing.
Either center those pictures or don't- it looks bad having some centered, some not.

Posted: **Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:50 am**

Iron Bank of Ferrum's' Rating

Rating

Total Score: 184

Score Breakdown
Profit So-so profit. 12 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction- get more customers. 25 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Use of anchor tags. History present. Good description of products. 50 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Runs the gamut of banking accounts & locations. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Good long term prospects. 15 pts
Overall Quality Good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Advertise your business to get more customers.
Partner with other banks.
Time in the industry will lead to perfection.

Posted: **Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:09 am**

Cenian Storefront Rating Services,

A few months ago (OOC: IC time), just after the re-opening of Kreidberg International Aerospace-port, we have submitted a request for rating and have been rated. You have supplied us with some valuable tips regarding both the content of the store-front and business model. Your tips and suggestions were sent to the Aerospace-port directorate, and were integrated in our website.

Among the changes we made since being evaluated:

More detailed history.
Business application form.
Sponsorship application form.
Advertisement in all national posts (signature).
Applying for flights and business in other storefronts.
Addition of images and illustrations to the airport page.
List of airport services and facilities has been modified.

Thanks to your suggestions, our website is now more professional and our profits, both from passenger fees and from business rental fees and taxes, have grown.

We now kindly request the re-evaluation of our storefront, so our rating will fit its renewed state.

Rating Application Form
    Nation Name: Aeland
    Storefront: Kreidberg International Aerospace-port
    Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=260468
    Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No

Thanks in advance,
Rut Swingle Sattermort, CEO of Kreidberg International Aerospace-port

Posted: **Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:38 am**

Kreidberg International Aerospace-port's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 183

Score Breakdown
Profit Increased profit. 15 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction. 25 pts
Layout The layout is good. A table of contents is present. Good history. Good features. 50pts
Ecofriendliness Good ecofriendliness. 10 pts
Product Range The storefront relies on two sources of revenue rather than just one for most airports. More routes. 26 pts
Palatability Some of the PMT features may not be as palatable to most countries. 4 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Better prospects. Airports are susceptible to the effects of a recession. Overall, good long term prospects. 13 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. A lot of info. 25 pts

Suggestions
More time in the industry will lead to success.

Posted: **Mon Sep 16, 2013 5:00 am**

Uh...

How do I make a bank more eco-friendly? The only product we produce is bank vaults and loans, and it's not as if eco-friendly improvements can be made on those...

Posted: **Mon Sep 16, 2013 3:31 pm**

Helltank wrote:Uh...

How do I make a bank more eco-friendly? The only product we produce is bank vaults and loans, and it's not as if eco-friendly improvements can be made on those...

Have your locations and vaults powered by solar panels or other renewable means.

Posted: **Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:50 am**

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Nation Name: Racao
Storefront: Dukedom Drinks
Link to Storefront: www.dukedomdrinks.com.rac
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

Posted: **Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:53 am**

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    Nation Name: Nu Sparta
    Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
    Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
    Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

Posted: **Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:37 am**

Dukedom Drinks' Rating

Rating

Total Score: 182

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Good product explanation. News Feed/partner section needs work. No photos. 45 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Uphill battle against established providers. 10 pts
Long Term Prospects Vulnerable in recessions. Uphill battle against Jory Jory. 10 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Add pictures.
Advertise your storefront on businesses.
Ask restaurants, airlines, businesses to patronize your storefront.

Posted: **Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:43 am**

Coeli Concinnant's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 181

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Alright customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good description. Large font looks somewhat ungainly on first post. Some text unreadable. Products take up a lot of space. 40 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Create a separate catalog page for your products.
Scale down first post text.
Make some text easier to read.
Use anchor tags.

Posted: **Wed Sep 25, 2013 11:03 am**

You cannot change a rating without letting me know!

Posted: **Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:33 pm**

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Nation Name: Machina Haruspex
Storefront: HIA
Link to Storefront: Haruspex International Armaments
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

Posted: **Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:00 pm**

Britonisea wrote:You cannot change a rating without letting me know!

We just fixed an error in calculation. The error is totally ours.

Posted: **Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:05 pm**

Haruspex International Armament's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 196

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good description. We liked that you had a separate catalog page for each product. 50 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Your storefront will get better over time.

Posted: **Mon Sep 30, 2013 6:14 pm**

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    Nation Name: Nu Sparta
    Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
    Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
    Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

I'd like to be re-rated. I fixed text as suggested. I'm working on a catalog and what not, but that is going to take awhile and I'd like to be re-rated now on the things I've already fixed.

Also as for being "Green" I added in some more details on the factory complex to advocate a few of it's many Eco-friendly properties. The pictures for the buildings and schools weren't picked because i thought they would look "modern" or "futuristic". They were picked for their "greenness" as all modern Spartanian architecture is environmentally friendly due to highly paganistic roots in the culture. Though to go out of my way and designate every little feature would take away from posting and make it unnecessarily long I think. I don't know if that matters and will effect the rating you give to me for that section just figured I should let you know encase it does.

Posted: **Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:24 pm**

Coeli Concinnant's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 189

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Alright customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good description. Catalog in progress. 45 pts
Ecofriendliness Eco-friendly. 10 pts
Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Create a separate catalog page for your products.
Use anchor tags.

Posted: **Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:29 pm**

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Nation Name: Miraco
Storefront: Air Miraco
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=257087
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No

Posted: **Wed Oct 02, 2013 3:01 pm**

Air Miraco's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 135

Score Breakdown
Profit Alright profit. 10 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Not the best customer service. Alright customer satisfaction. 20 pts
Layout No table of contents. No anchor tags. Not much information. So-so header. 30 pts
Ecofriendliness Not-so eco-friendly. No efforts to reduce impact on environment. 5 pts
Product Range Alright range of products. 20 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects So-so short term prospects. 10 pts
Long Term Prospects So-so long term prospects. 10 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Use anchor tags.
Include table of contents.
Increase the information- add history.
Add more info on fleet.
Have more eco-friendly features.
Make the header more attractive.
View other airline storefronts for tips.
Add more features of your airline.

Posted: **Fri Oct 04, 2013 5:22 pm**

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Nation Name: The Second Empire of Anemos Major
Storefront: Anemonian State Armaments Export Authority (ASAEA)
Link to Storefront: [Link]
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No

Posted: **Sat Oct 05, 2013 2:21 am**

This is Air Liberte once again. We have corrected the spelling errors. Also, we have ordered some eco friendly aircraft in our fleet: viewtopic.php?p=16692719#p16692719

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Nation Name: Mizialand
Storefront: Air Liberte
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No

Posted: **Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:18 am**

ASAEA's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 196

Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Quick Navigation area not centered. Product layout good. Separate Catalog Pages present. 49 pts
Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts
Product Range Good range of products. Good product descriptions. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Good long term prospects. 15 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions
Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
Center Quick Navigation Boxes.

Posted: **Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:21 am**

Air Liberte's Rating

Rating

Total Score: 196

Score Breakdown
Profit It's an airline, so not much profit. But I'll give you full points anyway- you are one of the industry leaders. . 20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts
Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good description of services and fleet. 50 pts
Ecofriendliness Working on buying new airliners that are more eco-friendly. 8 pts
Product Range Good service range. 30 pts
Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts
Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts
Long Term Prospects Industry might be vulnerable in a recession. Otherwise, looks good. 13 pts
Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts

Suggestions

Integrate more environmentally-friendly aircraft.
Diversify

Posted: **Sun Oct 06, 2013 1:32 pm**

To whom it may concern,

CleverBulb™ Inc. saw the C rating you gave us, and we were determined to raise that standard. Therefore, we created an entire new storefront. We thank you for rating us, and ask that you do so once again. Our application is enclosed.

Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Sensorland
Storefront: CleverBulb™ Inc.
Link to Storefront: Old New
Suggestions: [√] Yes [] No

Thank you,
CleverBulb™ Inc,
Dr. Drew LeBeau, CEO

Profit	Good profit.	20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction	Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction.	30 pts
Layout	Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Inconsistent use of photos in "Playing Now", "Coming Soon", and "Previously Played" sections. Those sections look somewhat messy.	45 pts
Ecofriendliness	Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly.	7 pts
Product Range	Good range of products.	30 pts
Palatability	Palatable to the NS community.	5 pts
Short Term Prospects	Good short term prospects.	15 pts
Long Term Prospects	One of two providers, but revenue will dip in recessions.	13 pts
Overall Quality	Mostly good quality.	24 pts

Profit	So-so profit.	12 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction	Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction- get more customers.	25 pts
Layout	Table of contents present. Good layout. Use of anchor tags. History present. Good description of products.	50 pts
Ecofriendliness	Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly.	7 pts
Product Range	Runs the gamut of banking accounts & locations.	30 pts
Palatability	Palatable to the NS community.	5 pts
Short Term Prospects	Good short term prospects.	15 pts
Long Term Prospects	Good long term prospects.	15 pts
Overall Quality	Good quality.	25 pts

Profit	Increased profit.	15 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction	Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction.	25 pts
Layout	The layout is good. A table of contents is present. Good history. Good features.	50pts
Ecofriendliness	Good ecofriendliness.	10 pts
Product Range	The storefront relies on two sources of revenue rather than just one for most airports. More routes.	26 pts
Palatability	Some of the PMT features may not be as palatable to most countries.	4 pts
Short Term Prospects	Good short term prospects.	15 pts
Long Term Prospects	Better prospects. Airports are susceptible to the effects of a recession. Overall, good long term prospects.	13 pts
Overall Quality	Very good quality. A lot of info.	25 pts

Profit	Alright profit.	10 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction	Not the best customer service. Alright customer satisfaction.	20 pts
Layout	No table of contents. No anchor tags. Not much information. So-so header.	30 pts
Ecofriendliness	Not-so eco-friendly. No efforts to reduce impact on environment.	5 pts
Product Range	Alright range of products.	20 pts
Palatability	Palatable to the NS community.	5 pts
Short Term Prospects	So-so short term prospects.	10 pts
Long Term Prospects	So-so long term prospects.	10 pts
Overall Quality	Very good quality.	25 pts

Profit	It's an airline, so not much profit. But I'll give you full points anyway- you are one of the industry leaders. .	20 points
Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction	Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction.	30 pts
Layout	Table of contents present. Good layout. Good description of services and fleet.	50 pts
Ecofriendliness	Working on buying new airliners that are more eco-friendly.	8 pts
Product Range	Good service range.	30 pts
Palatability	Palatable to the NS community.	5 pts
Short Term Prospects	Good short term prospects.	15 pts
Long Term Prospects	Industry might be vulnerable in a recession. Otherwise, looks good.	13 pts
Overall Quality	Very good quality.	25 pts