Bankampar wrote:Hey, I finished my energy storefront not too long ago, but I've gotten no business so I wanted to ask some people's opinions of it that's cool.
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... 6&t=351325
It seems like you have put a bunch of work into it but all the large paragraphs/info cause information overload. Most potential customers will probably have their eyes glaze over when they see so much text. Maybe consider spoilering some stuff.