Fall of Gods 2: OOC Thread (Character RP)

[Earth Sphere Coalition]

Alright well present it to the rest of the council and see what they say.

...

Well, isn't it enough by posting it here?

@African-Union: Much dreaded timezones, plus RL chores, affairs, etc, don't allow people to be on at all times. Just wait. I am.

...I don't like it either, but yeah.

@Alice: I didn't mean that YOU were mean. It was part of the situation I described. I know it was a suggestion and I appreciate it. Sorry if MY post came out wrong.

Also, you misquoted. >.<

Present it to them when they're on. Lol

[Zarkenis Ultima]

One'd think they would read the whole thing, if only to look for applications to reject/approve.

...Then again, if they miss it, I will.

[Bastinia]

Character Name: Kasimir Walter
Age: 31
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 183 lbs
Eye Color: Blue-Grey
Hair Color: Platinum Blond

Powers: Blood Manipulation, Slight Accelerated Healing
Description of Powers: Kasimir can control his blood in a variety of ways and other people's blood as long as he has physical contact with their blood. He can concentrate blood into a variety of shapes and even turn it into a solid mass that can be held and keep its shape. The downside of this power is the more blood Kasimir uses from his own body the less he has inside him so it becomes harded for his body to function. His secondary power only starts working after he uses his first power. His healing power allows him to quickly regain any lost blood he used and heal slight wounds like cuts quicker then normal humans.

Abilities: Billiards Expert, Martial Arts Style: Bojutsu
Weaknesses: His abilities have obvious limits to them for one. Kasimir also can't not accept a challenge under punishment of own his pride.

Short Biography: Kasimir was born in Adorf Germany he was the youngest of three children. He had a completely normal life until he turned 11 That was when all of his direct family died of a strange disease (The Neo-stigma). He was forced to go live with his godfather who had become an alcholic after his wife died of cancer two years earlier. His godfather would always bring Kasimir to the bar with him but being a minor he couldn't do anything but play billiards so every night he would play biliards and quickly got good at it. He also joined a school of Bushido after his godfather's friend offered to train him for free.

This lasted for many years until he turned 18 and left his godfather. His life was normal again and he soon got married at the age of 24 and had a daughter two years later. He would still occasionaly go to the bar and accept challenges from people he felt may have a chance against him. One of the people he didn't accept a chalenge from was slightly insane and he killed Kasimir's wife. Then he came at Kasimir with a knife he cut him and he started bleeding. Kasimir's blood became a blade and he used it to decapitate his wife's killer in rage. Now he constantly kills others that harm and steal from others, but still caringly takes care of his only daughter.

Role-play Example:

The night was a cold one, Kasimir was once again at his favorite bar playing billiard ball. The neon glow illuminated the table as he sunk the 8 ball into the corner pocket with a bank shot that gracefully slipped past his opponents efforts to block the shot. Kasimir puts his hand out to the opponent who angrily grunts as he hands over $50 in cash.

An hour later, after playing mutiple games of Billiards and making alot of money Kasimir left the bar. After, walking for a few minutes he came across a jewlery store being robbed. The robber instantly started to flee when he spoted Kasimir approach. Kasimir giggled in glee as he chased the culprit into an alleyway. They both pulled knives but Kasimir just cut his hand and droped his knife to the ground. The blood poured out much to rapidly for a normal cut and quickly took the shape of a bo. He charged the robber, who tried to run in fear before his skull was crushed. The man's body fell to the ground with a soft splash in his own blood. Kasimir grabed the bag that held the stolen goods and took a single diamond necklace he shoved it in his pocket and dropped the rest in the spreading pool of blood.

Once Kasimir made it home he walked into a small violet room and took a tooth from under his daughter's pillow and easily switched it with the necklace.
"Good night sweety," cooed Kasimir quietly as he kissed her forehead. He walked to his own room and slept.

[Earth Sphere Coalition]

Character Name: Kasimir Walter
Age: 31
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 183 lbs
Eye Color: Blue-Grey
Hair Color: Platinum Blond

Powers: Blood Manipulation, Slight Accelerated Healing
Description of Powers: Kasimir can control his blood in a variety of ways and other people's blood as long as he has physical contact with their blood. He can concentrate blood into a variety of shapes and even turn it into a solid mass that can be held and keep its shape. The downside of this power is the more blood Kasimir uses from his own body the less he has inside him so it becomes harded for his body to function. His secondary power only starts working after he uses his first power. His healing power allows him to quickly regain any lost blood he used and heal slight wounds like cuts quicker then normal humans.

Abilities: Billiards Expert, Martial Arts Style: Bojutsu
Weaknesses: His abilities have obvious limits to them for one. Kasimir also can't not accept a challenge under punishment of own his pride.

Short Biography: (Will do tomorrow, sorry for any inconvenience.)

Role-play Example:

The night was a cold one, Kasimir was once again at his favorite bar playing billiard ball. The neon glow illuminated the table as he sunk the 8 ball into the corner pocket with a bank shot that gracefully slipped past his opponents efforts to block the shot. Kasimir puts his hand out to the opponent who angrily grunts as he hands over $50 in cash.

An hour later, after playing mutiple games of Billiards and making alot of money Kasimir left the bar. After, walking for a few minutes he came across a jewlery store being robbed. The robber instantly started to flee when he spoted Kasimir approach. Kasimir giggled in glee as he chased the culprit into an alleyway. They both pulled knives but Kasimir just cut his hand and droped his knife to the ground. The blood poured out much to rapidly for a normal cut and quickly took the shape of a bo. He charged the robber, who tried to run in fear before his skull was crushed. The man's body fell to the ground with a soft splash in his own blood. Kasimir grabed the bag that held the stolen goods and took a single diamond necklace he shoved it in his pocket and dropped the rest in the spreading pool of blood.

Once Kasimir made it home he walked into a small violet room and took a tooth from under his daughter's pillow and easily switched it with the necklace.
"Good night sweety," cooed Kasimir quietly as he kissed her forehead. He walked to his own room and slept.

I like it but a few things. Get the Bio in and also when you write out an RP Post, don't use his name over and over again. Eventually all I kept seeing was Kasimir.

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally onix black

Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- he has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction, till he stops or is stopped. Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational ie. No true training, watched others fight and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted, though Samuel was epileptic and had a hard time fitting into society, and they were able to make him mend himself quicker then what seemed possible. They also experimented with other abilities, such as his limited flight. He soon came to resent his parents, every day they tried to find the limits to his ability to heal, so he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he, over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made a small den in the boiler room and routinely stole books from above it was not long till custodians found him and he made friends with them. They occasionally brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus, with this knowledge he enrolled in school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:
“man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies yes “it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanx of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits him in the back, as Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build them selves
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people marvel at what went on, trying to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this

[Earth Sphere Coalition]

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally onix black

Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- he has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction, till he stops or is stopped. Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational ie. No true training, watched others fight and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted, though Samuel was epileptic and had a hard time fitting into society, and they were able to make him mend himself quicker then what seemed possible. They also experimented with other abilities, such as his limited flight. He soon came to resent his parents, every day they tried to find the limits to his ability to heal, so he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he, over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made a small den in the boiler room and routinely stole books from above it was not long till custodians found him and he made friends with them. They occasionally brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus, with this knowledge he enrolled in school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:
“man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies yes “it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanx of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits him in the back, as Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build them selves
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people marvel at what went on, trying to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this

Work on your grammar and explain your powers a bit more.

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally onix black

Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- he has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction, till he stops or is stopped. Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational ie. No true training, watched others fight and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted, though Samuel was epileptic and had a hard time fitting into society, and they were able to make him mend himself quicker then what seemed possible. They also experimented with other abilities, such as his limited flight. He soon came to resent his parents, every day they tried to find the limits to his ability to heal, so he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he, over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made a small den in the boiler room and routinely stole books from above it was not long till custodians found him and he made friends with them. They occasionally brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus, with this knowledge he enrolled in school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:
“man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies yes “it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanx of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits him in the back, as Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build them selves
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people marvel at what went on, trying to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this

Work on your grammar and explain your powers a bit more.

what needs to be explained more? it seems clear to me

[African-Union]

As with me, his app appears to be pretty straightforward

[Earth Sphere Coalition]

Work on your grammar and explain your powers a bit more.

what needs to be explained more? it seems clear to me

This whole power augmentation thing, does it work on you as well or no? That's really my only question, oh and for flight do you sprout wings?

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

what needs to be explained more? it seems clear to me

This whole power augmentation thing, does it work on you as well or no? That's really my only question, oh and for flight do you sprout wings?

ah yes i apologize, i focused more on the bone manipulation thing.

first part- no real way of measuring that, he has never not had that unfortunate ability, so it is unknown if his current powers are merely is regular ones only improved

second- no he can not sprout wings, when i say direct flight, i mean it, he is basically shooting him self like you would a gun, he can change direction in mid flight, or when he eventually reaches another surface, but it will always be a straight line

[Earth Sphere Coalition]

This whole power augmentation thing, does it work on you as well or no? That's really my only question, oh and for flight do you sprout wings?

ah yes i apologize, i focused more on the bone manipulation thing.

first part- no real way of measuring that, he has never not had that unfortunate ability, so it is unknown if his current powers are merely is regular ones only improved

second- no he can not sprout wings, when i say direct flight, i mean it, he is basically shooting him self like you would a gun, he can change direction in mid flight, or when he eventually reaches another surface, but it will always be a straight line

I like it. Just work on the spelling and Grammar.

[Jedi8246]

If there any apps that need my review, just let me know the names.

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

ah yes i apologize, i focused more on the bone manipulation thing.

first part- no real way of measuring that, he has never not had that unfortunate ability, so it is unknown if his current powers are merely is regular ones only improved

second- no he can not sprout wings, when i say direct flight, i mean it, he is basically shooting him self like you would a gun, he can change direction in mid flight, or when he eventually reaches another surface, but it will always be a straight line

I like it. Just work on the spelling and Grammar.

damn you grasp on writing, you screw me over again! I will be writing most of these in Microsoft Word before publishing so that may fix the majority of my issues

[Jedi8246]

Character Name: Kasimir Walter
Age: 31
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 183 lbs
Eye Color: Blue-Grey
Hair Color: Platinum Blond

Powers: Blood Manipulation, Slight Accelerated Healing
Description of Powers: Kasimir can control his blood in a variety of ways and other people's blood as long as he has physical contact with their blood. He can concentrate blood into a variety of shapes and even turn it into a solid mass that can be held and keep its shape. The downside of this power is the more blood Kasimir uses from his own body the less he has inside him so it becomes harded for his body to function. His secondary power only starts working after he uses his first power. His healing power allows him to quickly regain any lost blood he used and heal slight wounds like cuts quicker then normal humans.

Abilities: Billiards Expert, Martial Arts Style: Bojutsu
Weaknesses: His abilities have obvious limits to them for one. Kasimir also can't not accept a challenge under punishment of own his pride.

Short Biography: (Will do tomorrow, sorry for any inconvenience.)

Role-play Example:

The night was a cold one, Kasimir was once again at his favorite bar playing billiard ball. The neon glow illuminated the table as he sunk the 8 ball into the corner pocket with a bank shot that gracefully slipped past his opponents efforts to block the shot. Kasimir puts his hand out to the opponent who angrily grunts as he hands over $50 in cash.

An hour later, after playing mutiple games of Billiards and making alot of money Kasimir left the bar. After, walking for a few minutes he came across a jewlery store being robbed. The robber instantly started to flee when he spoted Kasimir approach. Kasimir giggled in glee as he chased the culprit into an alleyway. They both pulled knives but Kasimir just cut his hand and droped his knife to the ground. The blood poured out much to rapidly for a normal cut and quickly took the shape of a bo. He charged the robber, who tried to run in fear before his skull was crushed. The man's body fell to the ground with a soft splash in his own blood. Kasimir grabed the bag that held the stolen goods and took a single diamond necklace he shoved it in his pocket and dropped the rest in the spreading pool of blood.

Once Kasimir made it home he walked into a small violet room and took a tooth from under his daughter's pillow and easily switched it with the necklace.
"Good night sweety," cooed Kasimir quietly as he kissed her forehead. He walked to his own room and slept.

Unless your bio totally defies all established canon, you have my approval.

[Jedi8246]

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally onix black

Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- he has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction, till he stops or is stopped. Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational ie. No true training, watched others fight and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted, though Samuel was epileptic and had a hard time fitting into society, and they were able to make him mend himself quicker then what seemed possible. They also experimented with other abilities, such as his limited flight. He soon came to resent his parents, every day they tried to find the limits to his ability to heal, so he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he, over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made a small den in the boiler room and routinely stole books from above it was not long till custodians found him and he made friends with them. They occasionally brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus, with this knowledge he enrolled in school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:
“man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies yes “it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanx of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits him in the back, as Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build them selves
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people marvel at what went on, trying to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this

The Grammar Nazi within is screaming. Yeah work on that. And when it says to make a RP sample three paragraphs or more, make it actual paragraphs, instead of mass blocks of text. Until it becomes easier to read, my approval is witheld.

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally onix black

Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- he has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction, till he stops or is stopped. Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational ie. No true training, watched others fight and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted, though Samuel was epileptic and had a hard time fitting into society, and they were able to make him mend himself quicker then what seemed possible. They also experimented with other abilities, such as his limited flight. He soon came to resent his parents, every day they tried to find the limits to his ability to heal, so he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he, over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made a small den in the boiler room and routinely stole books from above it was not long till custodians found him and he made friends with them. They occasionally brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus, with this knowledge he enrolled in school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:
“man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies yes “it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanx of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits him in the back, as Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build them selves
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people marvel at what went on, trying to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this

The Grammar Nazi within is screaming. Yeah work on that. And when it says to make a RP sample three paragraphs or more, make it actual paragraphs, instead of mass blocks of text. Until it becomes easier to read, my approval is witheld.

damn, Grammar Nazis ruin so much of my fun...

[African-Union]

If there any apps that need my review, just let me know the names.

Mine at the end of Page 4

[African-Union]

Character Name: Benedikt Schweitzer
Age: Unknown (i'll build on that)
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 191 lbs
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Dirty Blond
Image:

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Powers: Immortality (A varied form)
Description of Powers: Can suck the life force out of other supers through physical contact, he can then use the spare power as an energy source for weaponry.
Abilities: Very Charismatic (as such he can attract large amounts of followers), Skilled Surgeon, Highly Intelligent
Weaknesses: With each time he sucks out somebodies life force, the powers last for a shorter and shorter time, therefore he now must suck out people's life force at an alarming rate.

Short Biography: (Since I wrote such a long one before and it got deleted this one will be much shorter, but I'll add onto it a lot for the official bio)

Benedikt Schweitzer was born in Frankfurt Germany in the mid-1700s. His father was a farmer, and his mother a midwife, meaning the family often lived in adequate conditions. Over the years formal education and standards of society began to bore him and he ventured into reading various texts regarding surgical procedures and the anatomy of human beings. Throughout the 1800s he developed a reputation as an unknown serial killer, allowing various criminals though history take credit for his murders. By the time World War 1 arose, Benedikt served the German Empire, alongside a then unknown man by the name of Adolf Hitler. Throughout their service they became close comrades, and after the war continued a most fruitful relationship. With the age of the Weimar Republic coming to a close, Schweitzer was heavily hunted by law enforcement for his ruthless murders of the many people. As the National Socialists rose to power, Hitler acknowledged Benedikt's powers, and a curious dictator granted him a high ranking position in the Schutzstaffel as an expert surgeon. Leading several expeditions with elite German forces, Benedikt caputred numerous supers from across the world, conducted disturbing experiments, and reported back to Hitler. Feeling content with his life, Benedikt felt as though he had finally found where he belonged. When Germany fell to the allies at the closing of WW2, Schweitzer fell into a deep depression, as his beloved fatherland had fallen to communists and distgusting bureaucrat's. Rumors circulated in the underground that supers had contributed to the Allies victory. For the rest of his life, no matter how long that was, Benedikt dedicated his life to hunting down and ruthlessly slaughtering every super, and bringing the reclamation of Germany for the rise of the 4th Reich. Benedikt now runs a quiet, small underground network dedicated to overthrowing necessary forces in order to bringing a new age of National Socialism to Germany, and capturing every possible super in order to utilize their powers to extend his immortality (with an exception of a select few).

Role-play Example: You know me, I promise not to abandon the RP again.

Re-post for Jedi

[Jedi8246]

Character Name: Benedikt Schweitzer
Age: Unknown (i'll build on that)
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 191 lbs
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Dirty Blond
Image:

(Image)

(Image)

Powers: Immortality (A varied form)
Description of Powers: Can suck the life force out of other supers through physical contact, he can then use the spare power as an energy source for weaponry.
Abilities: Very Charismatic (as such he can attract large amounts of followers), Skilled Surgeon, Highly Intelligent
Weaknesses: With each time he sucks out somebodies life force, the powers last for a shorter and shorter time, therefore he now must suck out people's life force at an alarming rate.

Short Biography: (Since I wrote such a long one before and it got deleted this one will be much shorter, but I'll add onto it a lot for the official bio)

Benedikt Schweitzer was born in Frankfurt Germany in the mid-1700s. His father was a farmer, and his mother a midwife, meaning the family often lived in adequate conditions. Over the years formal education and standards of society began to bore him and he ventured into reading various texts regarding surgical procedures and the anatomy of human beings. Throughout the 1800s he developed a reputation as an unknown serial killer, allowing various criminals though history take credit for his murders. By the time World War 1 arose, Benedikt served the German Empire, alongside a then unknown man by the name of Adolf Hitler. Throughout their service they became close comrades, and after the war continued a most fruitful relationship. With the age of the Weimar Republic coming to a close, Schweitzer was heavily hunted by law enforcement for his ruthless murders of the many people. As the National Socialists rose to power, Hitler acknowledged Benedikt's powers, and a curious dictator granted him a high ranking position in the Schutzstaffel as an expert surgeon. Leading several expeditions with elite German forces, Benedikt caputred numerous supers from across the world, conducted disturbing experiments, and reported back to Hitler. Feeling content with his life, Benedikt felt as though he had finally found where he belonged. When Germany fell to the allies at the closing of WW2, Schweitzer fell into a deep depression, as his beloved fatherland had fallen to communists and distgusting bureaucrat's. Rumors circulated in the underground that supers had contributed to the Allies victory. For the rest of his life, no matter how long that was, Benedikt dedicated his life to hunting down and ruthlessly slaughtering every super, and bringing the reclamation of Germany for the rise of the 4th Reich. Benedikt now runs a quiet, small underground network dedicated to overthrowing necessary forces in order to bringing a new age of National Socialism to Germany, and capturing every possible super in order to utilize their powers to extend his immortality (with an exception of a select few).

Role-play Example: You know me, I promise not to abandon the RP again.

Better not abandon it again. Or I will find you. And you will suffer.

Your backstory is interesting, although I'm not sure it matches FOG canon. I do believe, and correct me if I'm wrong fellow Braintrust, that we had established that Germany came out on top in WW2, thus the rise of the Londim empire.

On another note, who is the actor that the pictures are of?

[African-Union]

I promise I won't comrade!

The actor is Christoph Waltz, he played a nazi officer in Inglorious Basterds.

Also, well if the Germans came out on top, either way it appears as though national socialism fell, so he'd still be on his murderous, rage driven rampage against supers/restoration of nazi germany.

[Jedi8246]

I promise I won't comrade!

The actor is Christoph Waltz, he played a nazi officer in Inglorious Basterds.

Also, well if the Germans came out on top, either way it appears as though national socialism fell, so he'd still be on his murderous, rage driven rampage against supers/restoration of nazi germany.

Sure sure. Even so, you should change your background to reflect that. Perhaps you could develop a reason for the fall of national socialism, so long the council approves.

[African-Union]

I promise I won't comrade!

The actor is Christoph Waltz, he played a nazi officer in Inglorious Basterds.

Also, well if the Germans came out on top, either way it appears as though national socialism fell, so he'd still be on his murderous, rage driven rampage against supers/restoration of nazi germany.

Sure sure. Even so, you should change your background to reflect that. Perhaps you could develop a reason for the fall of national socialism, so long the council approves.

Sounds like a plan my friend I'll change the background accordingly tomorrow, along with establishing a reason for the deterioration of National Socialism (should be easy considering the mass amount of flaws in the German implementation of the ideology)

[Jedi8246]

Sure sure. Even so, you should change your background to reflect that. Perhaps you could develop a reason for the fall of national socialism, so long the council approves.

Sounds like a plan my friend I'll change the background accordingly tomorrow, along with establishing a reason for the deterioration of National Socialism (should be easy considering the mass amount of flaws in the German implementation of the ideology)

Cool beans.

Do you have any plans for Jean at all? He would be in his 70's at this point,if he is still alive.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Application
Character Name: Milus (Mih-loos). (Last name unknown)
Age: 22
Height: 1.76
Weight: 78 Kg
Eye Color: Left: Olive Green. Right: Light Brown. (Heterochromia)
Hair Color: Black

Powers: An advanced form of Telekinesis, Lifeforce Telekinetic Boost.
Description of Powers:
First Power: In adittion to the usual "Push and pull and move around objects", Milus can use kinetic force to add pressure to an object by directing multiple kinetic force vectors towards the same object from several directions, and use kinetic force to augment his speed or increase the strenght of his strikes, for example. He can also "Influence something that's inside another thing". This means he can, for example, move around an object that's inside a box, or something similar. This power, if used correctly, can be highly lethal, as it could, for instance, tear appart a man's heart. Milus, however, does not know this and would not use it unless absolutely necessary if he did.

Second Power: The Lifeforce Telekinetic Boost is a very strong power that concentrates a portion of Milus' vital force and uses it to fuel Milus' kinetic powers for a limited ammount of time, effectively putting him into a state of "Super telekinesis" where his abilities are incredibly augmented greatly, making his kinetic blasts much more damaging and such. However, the vital force used up greatly decreases Milus' lifespan whenever it is used.

Abilities: Milus doesn't have any specific abilities, besides pheraps his great, yet still human, intelligence.
Weaknesses: Milus can't tolerate extreme temperatures, and he isn't exactly in the best physical condition. Additionally, he hasn't fully mastered his telekinetic powers yet, so, despite being highly unlikely, Milus could fail to use his powers, or worse yet, have them go out of control, even if only for a very short time.

Short Biography: Milus' mother died when he was born, leaving him as an orphan due to the fact that his father died while fighting on WWIII. He was taken in by his father's friend, a relatively wealthy businessman, who treated him as his own child. Milus had a good education. Eventually, Milus fell in love with his father's friend's daughter, who was his sister. Milus supressed this feeling for as long as he could, but one day, he just couldn't take it anymore. He was determined to tell her, but she was at a concert. On her way back, she suffered a car accident and died. This devastated Milus, who became very distant with his own father and the world in general. Eventually, his father died, leaving Milus as the sole heir to his vast fortune.

Role-play Example: Milus was calmly walking through the streets. It was another fine day, the sun was shining high in the sky, which was crystal-clear. Milus, however, did not care about these things, being the distant and somewhat indifferent person he was. Thus, he simply walked forward with the only thing in his mind being his wish to wrap up his business once and for all.

However, just then, he saw a robber broke into a jewelry store, threatening the clerk and running off with a huge stash, leaving the glass shattered on the ground. Milus considered the idea of taking advantage of this for a second, but he dismissed it quickly. He had enough wealth to maintain him well, he didn't need to do such unreasonable and deplorable acts.

Then, Milus considered other options. Calling the police would be useless. The robber was already getting away, and the police were, well, very good at slacking off. Walking off seemed like a reasonable enough thing, but it was rather mean, and the robber could have noticed him and make an attempt on his life in order to get rid of all witnesses.

Finally, he came to his last option. To pursue him. Milus wasn't exactly in the best physical condition, but he could easily run, and aid himself with his powers if he needed to. Besides, there was always the possibility that the jewelry store's clerk was a rather... Influential person, one way or another.

Thus, Milus began to run after the culprit, slowly catching up with him. When the time was right, he threw a trash can on the ground next to the robber, making him trip and fall to the ground. Milus used this oportunity to deliver a punch to the man's face, backed up by a strong kinetic impulse, which knocked the man down. He then picked up the jewels and walked back to the man's store.

Milus gave the jewels back to the store's clerk. The clerk thanked him, but Milus stated that it was his pleasure to help a fellow human being. Milus then asked the man's name, and after receiving it, walked away. "Mr. Roberts, huh? He could prove useful." Milus thought to himself as he walked towards his appointment. "I hope I'm not late."

I edited the app. Took out the "Soul Bullet" power, put in something else.

[SuperHappySmileyWorld]

revision-

Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally platinum blonde
Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation

Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- He has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction. Until he stops via something of suitable mass like a cement wall or an airplane getting in his way, or is stopped like a super strong man punching him to the ground, essentially turning himself into a human bullet. While with practice he has learned to shoot himself in other directions while in flight, it is always a straight line.

Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. it is unknown if he himself is affected by this augmentation, for he has never not been able to do it

Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones) the ones he shoots out will simply grow back, for example he once forced his thigh out of his body to be used has a club, or shooting the tips of his fingers out like a bullet.

Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational i.e. No true training, watched others fight and read about the martial arts and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy, sticks out like a sour thumb

Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted. Though Samuel was epileptic and his genes could not sync properly and he would die, they constantly tortured, maimed and made him suffer, all in the name of science. After they got all the required information on his healing ability they began to toy around with a few others of his, such as his limited flight. He quickly came to resent his parents, so after much timeing he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.

He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he. Over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.

After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made small living courters in the boiler room and occasionally stole books from above. It was not long till custodians found him and he, fearing of being sent back, made friends with them. The custodians enjoyed the small boy’s company so they decided they will help him out. They routinely brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus. At this time he was able to enroll in the school, and with this knowledge he attempted to join the school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation, of course.

He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down

Role-play Example:

Man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head.

“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”

The scared woman looks up to him and replies ‘yes’

“Well stand back a little… it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanxes of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits the thief in the back, but, Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build themselves, the female clerk screams in horror and Samuel knows it’s time to go

The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people try to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police, away from the flashing lights. he then uses this opportunity to get to the college as quick as he can, kneels down, and shoots himself at a perfect 30 degree angle, going around 70 MPH, he will be there in no time

I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this