Warsaw Underground RP (OOC Thread)Always Open

[United Slavic Nations]

Whenever I leave for school in the morning, that fly is always on the ceiling. When I come home, it's always on the wall beside the door. Today, I came home, and Mr. Bondzz was sitting placidly on the wall beside my bookshelf. He hasn't moved since.

And I think he's eating all of the dead bugs that I have splattered all over my walls.

That's a creepy fly.

I think my jacket records me when I sing, 'cos I sing horribly.

Yup. You know what's creepier?

The fact that he NEVER. MOVES. At least not when I'm awake. But, when I'm asleep, I can hear him buzzing around. Right over my head. I think he's conspiring against me; maybe because I have a bad history with bugs.

HE'S A DARK INSECTHOOD ASSASSIN, I SWEAR.

[Shadyrya]

That's a creepy fly.

I think my jacket records me when I sing, 'cos I sing horribly.

Yup. You know what's creepier?

The fact that he NEVER. MOVES. At least not when I'm awake. But, when I'm asleep, I can hear him buzzing around. Right over my head. I think he's conspiring against me; maybe because I have a bad history with bugs.

HE'S A DARK INSECTHOOD ASSASSIN, I SWEAR.

Hire a Russian bodyguard. They're awesome.

[United Slavic Nations]

Yup. You know what's creepier?

The fact that he NEVER. MOVES. At least not when I'm awake. But, when I'm asleep, I can hear him buzzing around. Right over my head. I think he's conspiring against me; maybe because I have a bad history with bugs.

HE'S A DARK INSECTHOOD ASSASSIN, I SWEAR.

Hire a Russian bodyguard. They're awesome.

Why would I do that when I could tell my dad to guard my room for free?

[Shadyrya]

Hire a Russian bodyguard. They're awesome.

Why would I do that when I could tell my dad to guard my room for free?

'Cause Russia.

[United Slavic Nations]

Why would I do that when I could tell my dad to guard my room for free?

'Cause Russia.

You make a valid point.

Damn those sexy motherfuckers...

[Shadyrya]

'Cause Russia.

You make a valid point.

Damn those sexy motherfuckers...

Of course I do, I'm Russian.

[United Slavic Nations]

You make a valid point.

Damn those sexy motherfuckers...

Of course I do, I'm Russian.

Post in the IC, so it doesn't remain so stagnant.

[Burkia]

Character Application:
Nation Name: Burkia
Character Name: Gary-Stu Bartlomiej "Barty" Kamiński
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Appearance:
Point Allocation (be reasonable here):
Weapons Proficiencies: 8
Intelligence: 7
Sciences: 4
Machinery: 6
Charisma: 5
Weapons: Kbk wz. 1929, knife
Faction: The Resistance
Personality: Bartlomiej is a quiet young man who just wants to make it through the war. Fiercely patriotic, Bartlomiej is more than willing to die for his country and comrades; if, of course, you can gain his trust.
Bio (short and sweet, guys; but, for the love of Jesus, don't butcher the English language): A former farm boy who ran away to the "big" city of Warsaw, Bartlomiej is a quiet and fiercely patriotic young lad who is the oldest of five. Known as "Barty" to friends, he voluntairly joined the Polish army in February 1939. When hostilities broke out on 1 September, Barty was on leave visiting his friends in Poznan; he immediately attempted to make his way back to Warsaw to join his unit. Unfortunately, due to German attacks, he was unable to make it; he was grabbed and stuck in a hastily formed militia. After two engagements with the Germans(both ending in his unit being routed), the militia scattered. Barty was able to make his way back to Warsaw shortly after the German declared victory, eventually meeting up with a resistance unit.


This is my old one. OP, did you change anything between the old application and the new one?

[United Slavic Nations]

Character Application:
Nation Name: Burkia
Character Name: Gary-Stu Bartlomiej "Barty" Kamiński
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Point Allocation (be reasonable here):
Weapons Proficiencies: 8
Intelligence: 7
Sciences: 4
Machinery: 6
Charisma: 5
Weapons: Kbk wz. 1929, knife
Faction: The Resistance
Personality: Bartlomiej is a quiet young man who just wants to make it through the war. Fiercely patriotic, Bartlomiej is more than willing to die for his country and comrades; if, of course, you can gain his trust.
Bio (short and sweet, guys; but, for the love of Jesus, don't butcher the English language): A former farm boy who ran away to the "big" city of Warsaw, Bartlomiej is a quiet and fiercely patriotic young lad who is the oldest of five. Known as "Barty" to friends, he voluntairly joined the Polish army in February 1939. When hostilities broke out on 1 September, Barty was on leave visiting his friends in Poznan; he immediately attempted to make his way back to Warsaw to join his unit. Unfortunately, due to German attacks, he was unable to make it; he was grabbed and stuck in a hastily formed militia. After two engagements with the Germans(both ending in his unit being routed), the militia scattered. Barty was able to make his way back to Warsaw shortly after the German declared victory, eventually meeting up with a resistance unit.


This is my old one. OP, did you change anything between the old application and the new one?

I added an appearence part. :I Either giver me a picture or describe him for me and you're in.

[Burkia]

Edited

[United Slavic Nations]

Edited

Accepted.

[Shadyrya]

Oh hai there. Life stuff came up for a second... good life stuff!

[United Slavic Nations]

GOOD FOR SHAD.

MY LIFE STUFF SUCKS RIGHT NOW.

[Shadyrya]

GOOD FOR SHAD.

MY LIFE STUFF SUCKS RIGHT NOW.

Oh noes! TG's me abouts it!

[United Slavic Nations]

GOOD FOR SHAD.

MY LIFE STUFF SUCKS RIGHT NOW.

Oh noes! TG's me abouts it!

I'd...Rather not. It's a bit confusing, because my home life is really fucked up, especially right now. But, if you wish, just let me explain a few things:

-I live with an old man named Doc, who owns the mansion/farm we live in. He owns his own surgical practice and makes as much as both of my parents put together in a week.
-My mom is a good lady who is just now going back to college as an anestisiologist (??), and none of this is her fault. She makes $50,000 a month, but her credit score is not up to par. Most of her pocket money goes towards bills, groceries and school tuition. None of the problems I'm having to deal with now are her fault.
-My dad makes $40,000 a month, but his credit score is shit so 90% of this money goes towards paying something or other.
-My brother was diagnosed with grand mal seizures when he was four (he's nine now) and we still haven't paid off the hospital bills.
-I have bipolar/acute anxiety disorder and petit mal seizures. We're still paying off my medical bills from my psychiatric appointments and hospital check-ups.
-We were under a lot of financial stress until Doc came along.
-My uncle had supposedly been drug free for a year, and hadn't gotten into any trouble with the law until very recently.

Now, if you still want to hear about my exciting home life, I'll TG you about it. I guess talking about it will help me out a little...

[Iander]

GOOD FOR SHAD.

MY LIFE STUFF SUCKS RIGHT NOW.

Oh noes! TG's me abouts it!

_{Prolly Commies in the funhouse again}

[Shadyrya]

Oh noes! TG's me abouts it!

I'd...Rather not. It's a bit confusing, because my home life is really fucked up, especially right now. But, if you wish, just let me explain a few things:

-I live with an old man named Doc, who owns the mansion/farm we live in. He owns his own surgical practice and makes as much as both of my parents put together in a week.
-My mom is a good lady who is just now going back to college as an anestisiologist (??), and none of this is her fault. She makes $50,000 a month, but her credit score is not up to par. Most of her pocket money goes towards bills, groceries and school tuition. None of the problems I'm having to deal with now are her fault.
-My dad makes $40,000 a month, but his credit score is shit so 90% of this money goes towards paying something or other.
-My brother was diagnosed with grand mal seizures when he was four (he's nine now) and we still haven't paid off the hospital bills.
-I have bipolar/acute anxiety disorder and petit mal seizures. We're still paying off my medical bills from my psychiatric appointments and hospital check-ups.
-We were under a lot of financial stress until Doc came along.
-My uncle had supposedly been drug free for a year, and hadn't gotten into any trouble with the law until very recently.

Now, if you still want to hear about my exciting home life, I'll TG you about it. I guess talking about it will help me out a little...

I completely understand! I lived in a trailer park with my dying sister and mother, while they make maybe a couple hundred bucks a month. My Mom and stepdad are trying not to get involved in the whole drug scene, but old habits die hard. I freaking hate the people that were around.

Now I live with my stepmother, who constantly feels the need to put me down, and my dad, who's pretty much always drunk. Pretty hard to find him sober. I mean, it's a nicer neighborhood, definitely, and I really like my school life, but I hate my damn stepmother. But it's better than being trailer trash!

Go ahead and TG me

[Colbalt (Ancient)]

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Character Application:
Nation Name:Colbalt
Character Name:Ernst Teller
Age:42
Gender:male
Race:Cacuasian
Appearance:Six foot five with yellow hair and green eyes. Has a massive scar that crosses his right eye.
Point Allocation (be reasonable here):
Weapons Proficiencies: 1
Intelligence: 9
Sciences: 8
Machinery: 1
Charisma: 9
Weapons:a pocket knife
Personality:Meglomaniac and Machavellian is the only you can describe Ernst Teller. He has his own hidden agenda and aspires to rule the world and will do anything to do so.
Faction:The New Warsaw Order
Bio (short and sweet, guys; but, for the love of Jesus, don't butcher the English language): He grew up to poor parents in germany. When he was a kid he used his charisma and intillect to gain ever increacing power at the expence of other people in the city of Berlin. He soon had his fingers in a number of criminal pies: from extortion to racketeering. He had anything he could of possibly wanted. But that all changed when he was arrested and sent to jail for three years. He left prision, his reputation in tatters. Then a war started in warsaw between the gasstapo and the resistance. Where others saw loss he saw oppertunity. He immediatly bribed officals to clear his reccord and created with cash from his swiss bank account a secret underground bunker with plenty of labrtory equipment that could make universities envious. With the bunker hideout he started the The New Warsaw Order.

Faction Name:The New Warsaw Order
Faction Leader:Ernst Teller
Faction Nationality:Germany
Numbers (maximum of 500):nine
Specialties (weapons proficiency, sciences, machinery, etc. Maximum of two.):Siences and Charisma
Headquarters:in the concealed bunker with sewer acess under a small townhouse

[United Slavic Nations]

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Character Application:
Nation Name:Colbalt
Character Name:Ernst Teller
Age:42
Gender:male
Race:Cacuasian
Appearance:Six foot five with yellow hair and green eyes. Has a massive scar that crosses his right eye.
Point Allocation (be reasonable here):
Weapons Proficiencies: 1
Intelligence: 10
Sciences: 9
Machinery: 2
Charisma: 10
Weapons:one magnum revolver and a knife
Personality:Meglomaniac and Machavellian is the only you can describe Ernst Teller.. He has his own hidden agenda and aspires to rule the world and will do anything to do so.
Faction:Gastappo
Bio (short and sweet, guys; but, for the love of Jesus, don't butcher the English language): He grew up to poor parents in germany. He used his charisma and intallect to gain ever increacing power at the expence of other people in the city of berlin. He soon had his fingers in a number of criminal pies; from extortion to rakketering. He had anything he could of possibly wanted uintel he was arrested and sent to jail for three years. He left prision: his reputation in tatters. Then the war started warsaw captured and war occuring within the city. Where others saw loss he saw oppertunity. He immediatly joined the gastappo and bribed his way into warsaw.

I'm sorry, but I just can't accept you.

I blatantly said no tens or ones unless you TG me with a valid reason, and right now I'm not seeing any in your bio, which is absolutely atrocious due to grammar mistakes. Plus, if he was arrested on felony charges, it's likely that he wouldn't be eligable to be in the Gestapo.

[United Slavic Nations]

Select All
Character Application:
Nation Name:Colbalt
Character Name:Ernst Teller
Age:42
Gender:male
Race:Cacuasian
Appearance:Six foot five with yellow hair and green eyes. Has a massive scar that crosses his right eye.
Point Allocation (be reasonable here):
Weapons Proficiencies: 1
Intelligence: 9
Sciences: 7
Machinery: 2
Charisma: 9
Weapons:one magnum revolver and a knife
Personality:Meglomaniac and Machavellian is the only you can describe Ernst Teller. He has his own hidden agenda and aspires to rule the world and will do anything to do so.
Faction:The Resistance
Bio (short and sweet, guys; but, for the love of Jesus, don't butcher the English language): He grew up to poor parents in germany. When he was a kid he used his charisma and intillect to gain ever increacing power at the expence of other people in the city of Berlin. He soon had his fingers in a number of criminal pies: from extortion to racketeering. He had anything he could of possibly wanted. But that all changed when he was arrested and sent to jail for three years. He left prision, his reputation in tatters. Then a war started in warsaw between the gasstapo and the resistance. Where others saw loss he saw oppertunity. He immediatly bribed officals to clear his reccord and joined the warsaw resistance hiding his true intentions.

Alright, I can see you're really trying here. But, a Magnum revolver is, by far, one of the most powerful handguns in the world. It's revolver used for hunting big game, like bears, it has that much of a stopping kick.

So, with someone with a weapons proficiency of 1, I wouldn't recommend it. The first time I tried a 9mm pistol, my wrist was nearly broken and I was knocked onto my ass. I would say I had a weapons proficiency of 2 at that time, meaning I could handle melee weapons fairly well, but guns were a different story. A Magnum would be for someone with a weapons proficiency of 5.

Might I suggest you raise your skill level (and in turn, lower some others since your skills are at 28 now and that's danger close to my limit for everyone, since now I'm only allowing 30 for new characters. Shad, Iander and Burkia are all veterans of this RP, so the rules are a little more lenient with them) or have a nice little pocket knife?

[Colbalt (Ancient)]

Yes I understand a magnum is very powerful and a knife requires some skill but my character is suppost to be a master manipulator not however someone who can fight(the magnum was there just to be intimidating).

I also have adjusted my stats reducing my engenerring capabilitys and increaced my skill in science.

[United Slavic Nations]

Well, I suppose if it's just for show...

That'll be fine! Glad to have someone whose weapons aren't just overcompensation.

ACCEPTIFICATED.

However, your faction (and I'm sorry I'm making you edit so much, really, I am. D: I feel really bad about critisizing people) needs work.

A man named Ernst Teller did not start the Illuminati; the Illuminati were founded in 1776, in Ingolstadt, Upper Bavaria by an Jesuit-taught Bavarian named Adam Weishaupt, and had an initial membership of five, not fifty. Unless your faction is a fictional extenstion of this, I can't accept it. And you'll have to lower your numbers, because not everyone (certainly not that many people) are as like-minded (well, not as like-minded to that extreme) as your character. Might I suggest ten? Maybe a little less?

[Burkia]

How many characters are we waiting for?

[Colbalt (Ancient)]

Well, I suppose if it's just for show...

That'll be fine! Glad to have someone whose weapons aren't just overcompensation.

ACCEPTIFICATED.

However, your faction (and I'm sorry I'm making you edit so much, really, I am. D: I feel really bad about critisizing people) needs work.

A man named Ernst Teller did not start the Illuminati; the Illuminati were founded in 1776, in Ingolstadt, Upper Bavaria by an Jesuit-taught Bavarian named Adam Weishaupt, and had an initial membership of five, not fifty. Unless your faction is a fictional extenstion of this, I can't accept it. And you'll have to lower your numbers, because not everyone (certainly not that many people) are as like-minded (well, not as like-minded to that extreme) as your character. Might I suggest ten? Maybe a little less?

No problem as it makes the New Warsaw Order (joke on New World Order conspiracy theroys) better. Thanks for the tip in changing names, it made the name a little better than it was before. I also removed all the bribed officals ect. from my numbers leaving nine.

[United Slavic Nations]

How many characters are we waiting for?

None. I'm just waiting for someone to post in the IC.