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Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:21 pm**

Alright here's the first draft of my app.

Name: Erik
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:22 pm**

I love it

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:27 pm**

I've updated the OP with the accepted apps and new Attributes.

TriStates wrote:@Nature-Spirits,

I've finished the other two applications. They are ready for you on the previous page whenever you'd like to check them.

K, I'll get to those sometime soon.

TriStates wrote:And no, I hadn't really expanded on the backstory of the specific Shadow Person. You have someone in mind?

Yep. I'll TG you with the info and you can decide whether or not you like it.

Hetland 2 wrote:Alright here's the first draft of my app.

Name: Erik
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

... *is horrified*

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:29 pm**

Nature-Spirits wrote:
Hetland 2 wrote:Alright here's the first draft of my app.

Name: Erik
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

... *is horrified*

Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:34 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Nature-Spirits wrote:... *is horrified*

Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

My app wasn't particularly noobish was it?

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:35 pm**

Jainun wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

My app wasn't particularly noobish was it?

Sorry. Didn't look at it. Give me a link to the post or repost it in a spoiler if you want my opinion.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:36 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Nature-Spirits wrote:... *is horrified*

Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

Shit. Sorry. Fixed.
Name: Eric
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:36 pm**

Jainun wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

My app wasn't particularly noobish was it?

*glances over it* Not at all. I'll read over it more extensively in a bit.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:39 pm**

Hetland 2 wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:Exactly. Het, don't be makin' the same mistakes as noobs. It's unbecoming.

Shit. Sorry. Fixed.
Name: Eric
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

I WILL end you. I know how to do it.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:40 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Jainun wrote:
My app wasn't particularly noobish was it?

Sorry. Didn't look at it. Give me a link to the post or repost it in a spoiler if you want my opinion.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:51 pm**

Jainun wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:Sorry. Didn't look at it. Give me a link to the post or repost it in a spoiler if you want my opinion.

Name: Sebaon Kuzoto
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: http://i45.tinypic.com/73chdz.jpg
Personality: Sebaon is a guy who hates having to introduce himself to other people, he prefers to talk to those he already knows own or not talk at all. On occasions he may force himself to talk if a pretty girl is involved but that ain't often. Being a bit of a nerd, Sebaon loves to play Strategy games like Victoria 2 and Rome Total War on the PC. As a result, he loves history and geography and will rant on occasion about equality to his friends. When it comes to friends, Sebaon only chooses those who accept who he is as a person and don't mind his rants. Now on to how he acts, in general Sebaon is a cool cat who doesn't get mad often but when he does, he'll let out a string of personal insults that will leave anyone crying without uttering a single curse. He likes to get to know a person well, his friendly and accepting nature draws people towards him and by talking with him, they'll give up their secrets. These secrets are something that he holds close to his heart, but he knows he can use these as leverage to get what he wants from people. His pragmaticism gets in the way of his moral compass but know one really notices
Likes: Secrets, Strategy Games, Ranting, Loyalty
Dislikes: Despises Sci Fi, Deception (He's a hypocrite), ironically he also hates hypocrites
Strengths/Abilities: Skilled sword fighter, Intelligent, Sharp Tongue, and Strategic Mind
Weaknesses: Talks too much and also reveals too much, depressed, can be annoying, when not mad he's too calm and doesn't show much feeling, when pissed off he only makes more trouble for himself
Bio: Being born to an ultra nationalistic family wasn't fun, no learning of other cultures no learning of others languages, just the Fatherland in all her glory. But in all the education of his home country, it only exposed the flaws within it in his mind. He became Radical about equality but knew he could never change his parents minds and so he ran away. He ran away from the city's center and towards the outskirts when he was picked up by a Renaissance Faire volunteer. The man took him in and called the police, demanding to find Sebaon's parents. They were dead, both crashing into a ditch in their frantic search for their son. Sebaon had no living relatives, so this man, having no children of his own adopted him as his son.

Life became bittersweet afterwards, this Renaissance style man was an artist with the sword and was determined to teach his new son the art. Sebaon was quick on his feet, even if he was clumsy, he always recovered quickly. In school he found a girl he thought he loved, until she ripped his heart out and showed it to him. If Sebaon wasn't already emotionally unstable already he was now, he even contemplated suicide if he hadn't remembered all that he had to look forward to. Learning the sword was simple for Sebaon, but he wanted more and his radicalness kicked in. He began playing games where he'd be able to choose his nations fate by watching over battles and memorizing the geography of the world through it.

In school he was an alright student, he got good grades, but they would've been better if he could keep his nose out of others business. Especially the Principal's. After a particularly bad marking period, he knew that only one person had the authority to change his grade. And he had just the leverage to do it, a little information that the principal didn't want let out. Of course who knew it would backfire and end up in expulsion.

Changing schools and finishing up high school, Sebaon plans on getting his degree and becoming a teacher, historian, or archeologist, but before then, he plans on having some fun.
Additional Information:

Anime Attributes:
Qualities: Glasses, Dramatic Entrance, Genki Girl (Only when ranting)
Advantages: Skilled with a Sword, Made of Iron
Disadvantages: Clumsy, Wide Eyed Idealist

Theme Song: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FNKPYhXmzoE
RP Sample: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=311694&p=21772511#p21772511

Looks good to me. I find the image a bit too... strange isn't the best word, but it's all I've got.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:54 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Hetland 2 wrote:
Shit. Sorry. Fixed.
Name: Eric
[b]Age: 40,000
[b]Gender: male
[b]Species: Magical male awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: caring to those in need but has no mercy for the evil faction. loves children and animals, smokes pipe weed and makes firework shows for children in spare time
[b]Likes: pipe weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:evil
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after trapped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

I WILL end you. I know how to do it.

Name: Gendolph the mixture of black and white.
[b]Age: 14(like a good boy ditektiv)
[b]Gender: mail
[b]Species: Magical mail awakened
[b]Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/imag ... V_jogHJWWa
[b]Personality: karing to thos in need but having no mercies for the evul fackon. <3s child and animals, smokes weed(erryday) and makes I.E.D.s for children in spare time
[b]Likes: Weed, fireworks, good and light magic
[b]Dislikes:The Popo
[b]Strengths/Abilities: good with sword, master at magic, 420YOLOSWAG
[b]Weaknesses: vary loyal to friends, will die for them and thus can be trapped easily, having him surrender after tripped is another mater entirely
[b]Powers: master at light magic, can heal and make shields of light to battle the forces of evil and to protect the good good
[b]Bio: Erik was a mage for 30,000 years when he died defending his home land from a faceless evil he was a witness to such atrocity's that he did the unthinkable, he defied death and became some what immortal he can die in combat but otherwise he will live forever.he has spent the past 100,000 years tracking the evil that destroyed his home world and has reasons to believe that it has returned and seeks now to engulf this world in shadow and flame. as long as Erik holds breath he will try to stop it... this is his task...his is oath... and he intends to see it fulfilled...

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:55 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Jainun wrote:
Name: Sebaon Kuzoto
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: http://i45.tinypic.com/73chdz.jpg
Personality: Sebaon is a guy who hates having to introduce himself to other people, he prefers to talk to those he already knows own or not talk at all. On occasions he may force himself to talk if a pretty girl is involved but that ain't often. Being a bit of a nerd, Sebaon loves to play Strategy games like Victoria 2 and Rome Total War on the PC. As a result, he loves history and geography and will rant on occasion about equality to his friends. When it comes to friends, Sebaon only chooses those who accept who he is as a person and don't mind his rants. Now on to how he acts, in general Sebaon is a cool cat who doesn't get mad often but when he does, he'll let out a string of personal insults that will leave anyone crying without uttering a single curse. He likes to get to know a person well, his friendly and accepting nature draws people towards him and by talking with him, they'll give up their secrets. These secrets are something that he holds close to his heart, but he knows he can use these as leverage to get what he wants from people. His pragmaticism gets in the way of his moral compass but know one really notices
Likes: Secrets, Strategy Games, Ranting, Loyalty
Dislikes: Despises Sci Fi, Deception (He's a hypocrite), ironically he also hates hypocrites
Strengths/Abilities: Skilled sword fighter, Intelligent, Sharp Tongue, and Strategic Mind
Weaknesses: Talks too much and also reveals too much, depressed, can be annoying, when not mad he's too calm and doesn't show much feeling, when pissed off he only makes more trouble for himself
Bio: Being born to an ultra nationalistic family wasn't fun, no learning of other cultures no learning of others languages, just the Fatherland in all her glory. But in all the education of his home country, it only exposed the flaws within it in his mind. He became Radical about equality but knew he could never change his parents minds and so he ran away. He ran away from the city's center and towards the outskirts when he was picked up by a Renaissance Faire volunteer. The man took him in and called the police, demanding to find Sebaon's parents. They were dead, both crashing into a ditch in their frantic search for their son. Sebaon had no living relatives, so this man, having no children of his own adopted him as his son.

Life became bittersweet afterwards, this Renaissance style man was an artist with the sword and was determined to teach his new son the art. Sebaon was quick on his feet, even if he was clumsy, he always recovered quickly. In school he found a girl he thought he loved, until she ripped his heart out and showed it to him. If Sebaon wasn't already emotionally unstable already he was now, he even contemplated suicide if he hadn't remembered all that he had to look forward to. Learning the sword was simple for Sebaon, but he wanted more and his radicalness kicked in. He began playing games where he'd be able to choose his nations fate by watching over battles and memorizing the geography of the world through it.

In school he was an alright student, he got good grades, but they would've been better if he could keep his nose out of others business. Especially the Principal's. After a particularly bad marking period, he knew that only one person had the authority to change his grade. And he had just the leverage to do it, a little information that the principal didn't want let out. Of course who knew it would backfire and end up in expulsion.

Changing schools and finishing up high school, Sebaon plans on getting his degree and becoming a teacher, historian, or archeologist, but before then, he plans on having some fun.
Additional Information:

Anime Attributes:
Qualities: Glasses, Dramatic Entrance, Genki Girl (Only when ranting)
Advantages: Skilled with a Sword, Made of Iron
Disadvantages: Clumsy, Wide Eyed Idealist

Theme Song: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FNKPYhXmzoE
RP Sample: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=311694&p=21772511#p21772511

Looks good to me. I find the image a bit too... strange isn't the best word, but it's all I've got.

Eh closest thing I could come to me as an anime character

just imagine him with glasses

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:57 pm**

Is Het just trolling?

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:01 pm**

West Suburbia wrote:Is Het just trolling?

I can't even tell anymore... :eyebrow:

Het, I'll break out the trenchfoot if I have to.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:01 pm**

Updated Character: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=313647&p=21956257#p21956257

Watch out for the angst and edge with this one.

Name: Sato Yuuta
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Species: Android
Appearance:

Personality: Extremely reserved, yet incredibly polite and well-meaning when prompted. Not much of a talker at all, mainly waits for someone else to talk to him first if a conversation develops. Sato is also pretty emotionless, like a stone wall of sorts. A quirk of his is that he does not understand social norms all too well, and thus may be rude on total accident.
Likes: Hand-to-hand combat (preference for Judo and Boxing), Sports, Electronics, Pets, Food
Dislikes: Useless conversations, Affection, Randomness
Strengths/Abilities: Android Body, Cyber Mind, Enhanced Combat
Weaknesses: No Friends, Cripplingly Anti-Social, Doormat up to 11, Relatively weak-willed and impressionable by charismatic people.
Powers: N/A
Bio:
A disastrous automobile accident when Sato was twenty placed him into a world of not just life-saving machines and body parts, but into the hands of the criminal underworld in order to pay off the immense cost of the devices used to save his life. Though, even before the accident, Sato was a relative outcast of a man who kept to himself throughout his life, so the chance to interact with others gave him some hope, but the Yakuza are no understanding masters. They loaded him with more technology until he was completely robotic, with next to no signs remaining of his humanity. His memories and thoughts were affected in the process as well, crippling him into a life where any kind of social situation is over-analyzed and his cultural identity lost.

He works as a hired muscle for the Yakuza, but absolutely hates his job and the people he works for, but he has no other options. The organization sees value in his complete overhaul into an almost mindless android, but he is still haunted by flickering moments of clarity where he remembers his humanity. He fights this battle within his head, alone, and leaving others unaware of what he's feeling. It's not like they could relate anyways, so he prefers not to bother them.

Additional Information: He has a cat named Seko and a goldfish named Orangey, which provides him with enough entertainment to make it through the end of a hard day/night.

Anime Attributes:
Qualities: Dramatic Entrance, Delinquent, Stoic Woobie (Though suffering and in immense pain, this version of the Woobie does not show it's true emotions on the outside, but must silently suffer an internal battle), Gentle Giant (He's big, he's scary, but he's got a heart of gold.)
Advantages: KO, Fast, Skilled: Hand-to-Hand Combat
Disadvantages: Extreme Doormat, Accidental Innuendo, Thickheaded

Theme Song: such angst
RP Sample: Okay.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:05 pm**

Neros wrote:-snip-

Looks good so far, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to ask for an RP sample since I can't recall having RPed with you before.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:07 pm**

Nature-Spirits wrote:
Neros wrote:-snip-

Looks good so far, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to ask for an RP sample since I can't recall having RPed with you before.

Am I kawaii yet, sempai?

It's a nation-based roleplay, but I provide a lot of character interaction.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:08 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
West Suburbia wrote:Is Het just trolling?

I can't even tell anymore...

Het, I'll break out the trenchfoot if I have to.

Too late. Already got it. I'm actually dead.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:09 pm**

Neros wrote:
Nature-Spirits wrote:Looks good so far, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to ask for an RP sample since I can't recall having RPed with you before.

Am I kawaii yet, sempai?

It's a nation-based roleplay, but I provide a lot of character interaction.

Looks good.

I'll look at the completed apps either tonight or tomorrow. Sorry it's taking so long; I'm kinda wiped.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:09 pm**

Hetland 2 wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:I can't even tell anymore...

Het, I'll break out the trenchfoot if I have to.

Too late. Already got it. I'm actually dead.

Oh... I'm sorry?

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:11 pm**

Hetland 2 wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:I can't even tell anymore...

Het, I'll break out the trenchfoot if I have to.

Too late. Already got it. I'm actually dead.

My condolences. How's death?

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:12 pm**

The Templar High Council wrote:
Hetland 2 wrote:Too late. Already got it. I'm actually dead.

Oh... I'm sorry?

Meh. Its ok.

Nature-Spirits wrote:
Hetland 2 wrote:
Too late. Already got it. I'm actually dead.

My condolences. How's death?

Like flying Delta.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:16 pm**

Nature-Spirits wrote:
Neros wrote:Am I kawaii yet, sempai?

It's a nation-based roleplay, but I provide a lot of character interaction.

Looks good.

I'll look at the completed apps either tonight or tomorrow. Sorry it's taking so long; I'm kinda wiped.

It's all good.

Mostly completed, I half-assed the Bio, though.

Posted: **Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:21 pm**

Nature-Spirits wrote:
Neros wrote:Am I kawaii yet, sempai?

It's a nation-based roleplay, but I provide a lot of character interaction.

Looks good.

I'll look at the completed apps either tonight or tomorrow. Sorry it's taking so long; I'm kinda wiped.

I'll do it if ya want me to.

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