[SUBMITTED] Condemn HYDRA Command

[Rabin Israel]

Does anyone want to help me write a better one than the current? It doesn't look it's gonna make quorum.

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding” is far too common and must be condemned for its every action. Raiding is defined as “entering a region and seizing the delegacy with the express purpose of claiming the region for an organization”.

Shocked that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent invasion and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Invasion of Peuce Island

-Invasion and eventual refound as a trophy of the Reckoning

-the illegal raid of Edisonia

-Invasion of and cruel refounding as a trophy of The Place That Has No Big Banks. This invasion resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in the Region That Has No Big Banks

-Invasion of Japan that forced the region into a strict lockdown

-Invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Invasion of Russia that was only thwarted by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby condemns HYDRA Command

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding”, and practiced daily by HYDRA Command, is far too common and must be condemned.

Apalled that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent occupation and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Peuce Island

-the Reckoning, which is now an empty trophy region.

-Edisonia, which was raided illegally.

-The Place That Has No Big Banks, whose refounding as a trophy region resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in The Region That Has No Big Banks

-Japan, forcing the region into a strict lockdown

-An invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Russia, which was only saved by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby Condemns HYDRA Command

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Does anyone want to help me write a better one than the current? It doesn't look it's gonna make quorum.

No, but draft one and post it here and I'm sure a few of us will critique it.

A couple of hints: make sure it's detailed and make sure the spelling is correct.

Oh and check the rules for SC resolutions as well.

[Rabin Israel]

Does anyone want to help me write a better one than the current? It doesn't look it's gonna make quorum.

No, but draft one and post it here and I'm sure a few of us will critique it.

A couple of hints: make sure it's detailed and make sure the spelling is correct.

Oh and check the rules for SC resolutions as well.

Thank you! This is my first action in the WA.

[Shek Tong Tsui]

You could try their:

• Illegal raid of Edisonia
• Takeover of The Place That Has No Big Banks
• Occupation of Dank Memes before Nazi Europa snatched it from HYDRA Command's hands
• Raid on Nasicournia: a predominantly defender region
• The invasion of Singapore

Along with their prolific amount of raiding....

[Rabin Israel]

You could try their:

• Illegal raid of Edisonia
• Takeover of The Place That Has No Big Banks
• Occupation of Dank Memes before Nazi Europa snatched it from HYDRA Command's hands
• Raid on Nasicournia: a predominantly defender region
• The invasion of Singapore

Along with their prolific amount of raiding....

Can someone give me the history of those raids in TG or something?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Hint: it's a good idea to do your own research, rather than getting other people to do it for you.

Looking in Hydra Command's Gameplay thread might be a good place to start.

[We Are Not the NSA]

You could try their:

• Illegal raid of Edisonia
• Takeover of The Place That Has No Big Banks
• Occupation of Dank Memes before Nazi Europa snatched it from HYDRA Command's hands
• Raid on Nasicournia: a predominantly defender region
• The invasion of Singapore

Along with their prolific amount of raiding....

We also invaded Russia, but then the founder came back. Also, the author should keep in mind that it is difficult to mention the Edisonia thing without breaking rule 2c, or a few of the sections of rule 4, so it is imperative that you post a draft here before submitting one. If there are any historical events that need to be further explained in the first draft, I'll happily do so.

Honestly, I doubt this will gather much support here on the forum, due to people's penchant for not condemning raiders, plus the condemnability... condemniness... merit for condemnation of Hydra is still in the questionable phase. There was a distinctively larger amount of crap attempts at condemnation when DEN was Hydra's age, and DEN wasn't condemned for another several months.

I haven't actually decided my stance on a condemnation yet, but there are several arguments to be made against one, so I'll just take one for the team and argue against it for the sake of debate. After all, who's better qualified to play Devil's advocate than the Devil himself?

Edit: Derp I forgot to mention a few things. Many people forget this, but HyCom was around before the fall of DEN, and had several raids that people always forget about. Originally they were known as the Brotherhood of Shadows, but they were forced to move when a rogue member seized the founder and drove the others out of their region. Every part of BoSS (don't ask where the second S comes from idk either) including their forum, moved to HyCom.

As BoSS we invaded Peuce Island and The Reckoning, the latter of which Hydra snagged the refound of later. At this point BoSS became Hydra, and most of our raids are already listed in this thread, but we also raided Japan at one point

[Imperium Anglorum]

(don't ask where the second S comes from idk either)

It's almost like GROSS. Get Rid Of Slimey girlS. :P

[We Are Not the NSA]

(don't ask where the second S comes from idk either)

It's almost like GROSS. Get Rid Of Slimey girlS.

Lol, didn't even have to click the link to get the Clavin and Hobbes reference.

[Rabin Israel]

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding” is far too common and must be condemned for its every action. Raiding is defined as “entering a region and seizing the delegacy with the express purpose of claiming the region for an organization”.

Shocked that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent invasion and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Invasion of Peuce Island

-Invasion and eventual refound as a trophy of the Reckoning

-the illegal raid of Edisonia

-Invasion of and cruel refounding as a trophy of The Place That Has No Big Banks. This invasion resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in the Region That Has No Big Banks

-Invasion of Japan that forced the region into a strict lockdown

-Invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Invasion of Russia that was only thwarted by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby condemns HYDRA Command


Critique, please.

[Nay-O-Bi]

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[Rabin Israel]

The World Assembly,

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees;

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding,” defined as "entering a region and taking control of the WA Delegacy or another Regional Office with the sole purpose of claiming the region for a foreign organization" and practiced daily by HYDRA Command, is far too common and must be condemned for its every action. due to its destructive nature; Raiding is defined as “entering a region and seizing the delegacy with the express purpose of claiming the region for an organization”.

Shocked that they region would do such horrible things actions that anger existing to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors;

Noting their recent invasion occupation and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands;

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as in the following recent events:

-An invasion of Peuce Island;

-An invasion and eventual refound as a trophy of [region]The Reckoning[/region];

-tThe illegal raid of Edisonia;

-An invasion of and cruel refounding as a trophy of The Place That Has No Big Banks. This invasion that resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in [region]The Region That Has No Big Banks[/region];

-An invasion of Japan that forced the region into lockdown;

-An invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens;

-An invasion of Russia that was only thwarted by the return of the regional founder;

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and have not been punished in any form by the Security Council;

Hereby condemns HYDRA Command

Those are what I believe are the necessary edits for this draft so far. I edited some grammar errors and restated many phrases in more flowing ways. Also, while I was checking one of the regions listed called Dank Memes, there seems to be no trace of any Nazis, other than the founder.

Aren't they a Nazi colony now?

[Nay-O-Bi]

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[Rabin Israel]

Aren't they a Nazi colony now?

Go to Dank Memes. There doesn't appear to be any major effect on the region at all; the founder is the only nation from Nazi Europa.

The founder is the owner of the region. Doesn't that mean that Nazis therefore own it?

[Kaboomlandia]

Aren't they a Nazi colony now?

Go to Dank Memes. There doesn't appear to be any major effect on the region at all; the founder is the only nation from Nazi Europa.

Yes, but the founder has unlimited power and could clear the entire region if he wanted. Not only that, the natives are actually party to this; they agreed to become a fascist colony of NE if they'd refound the region for them.

[Rabin Israel]

Go to Dank Memes. There doesn't appear to be any major effect on the region at all; the founder is the only nation from Nazi Europa.

Yes, but the founder has unlimited power and could clear the entire region if he wanted. Not only that, the natives are actually party to this; they agreed to become a fascist colony of NE if they'd refound the region for them.

So, keep the part about the Nazis? Do you see anything else wrong? Your input would be very appreciated.

[-The Vanu Sovereignty-]

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[Benevolent Thomas]

HYDRA is not even a year old yet. Give them time to cement a legacy before Condemning them. To commend HYDRA is to say that they're on par with the likes of Lone Wolves United and The Black Hawks and I think those of us in the GP community can agree that they're not quite there yet.

[Rabin Israel]

HYDRA is not even a year old yet. Give them time to cement a legacy before Condemning them. To commend HYDRA is to say that they're on par with the likes of Lone Wolves United and The Black Hawks and I think those of us in the GP community can agree that they're not quite there yet.

I'm sorry. I'm still relatively new to GP. I've just seen more from HYDRA in general. I don't know much about those other orgs.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

As usual, I'd just like to remind everyone that the vast majority of raids (in fact all but the ones listed here) do not destroy or degrade communities in any. Tag raids are only destructive when the natives take improper takes to combat them.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding” is far too common and must be condemned for its every action. Raiding is defined as “entering a region and seizing the delegacy with the express purpose of claiming the region for an organization”.

Not entirely sure that definition is R4 compliant, but it is unnecessary either way. You only need to provide definitions if the varying definitions change what the law does, which it can't in the SC, unless this is an R3 violation.

Shocked that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Honestly, I don't see why it is surprising. Disturbing, appalling, etc. makes more sense.

8Noting their recent invasion and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

You can blame the natives for that, not Hydra. And yes, the region is a Nazi puppet state, idk why there's confusion regarding that.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

1-Invasion of Peuce Island.

2-Invasion and eventual refound as a trophy of The Reckoning, which is now an empty trophy region.

3-the illegal raid of Edisonia, which was raided illegally.

6-Invasion of and cruel refounding as a trophy of The Place That Has No Big Banks. This invasion, whose refounding as a trophy region resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in the Region That Has No Big Banks.

4-Invasion ofJapanthat forced, forcing the region into a strict lockdown.

7-Invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

5-Invasion ofRussiathat was only thwarted, which was only saved by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby Condemns HYDRA Command.

I marked the order of events in orange.

[Rabin Israel]

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding”, and practiced daily by HYDRA Command, is far too common and must be condemned.

Apalled that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent occupation and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Peuce Island

-the Reckoning, which is now an empty trophy region.

-Edisonia, which was raided illegally.

-The Place That Has No Big Banks, whose refounding as a trophy region resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in The Region That Has No Big Banks

-Japan, forcing the region into a strict lockdown

-An invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Russia, which was only saved by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby Condemns HYDRA Command

[Rabin Israel]

I think I'm doing this right.

[Nay-O-Bi]

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding”, and practiced daily by HYDRA Command, is far too common and must be condemned.

Apalled that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent occupation and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Peuce Island

-the Reckoning, which is now an empty trophy region.

-Edisonia, which was raided illegally.

-The Place That Has No Big Banks, whose refounding as a trophy region resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in The Region That Has No Big Banks

-Japan, forcing the region into a strict lockdown

-An invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Russia, which was only saved by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby Condemns HYDRA Command

There are still quite a few grammar errors and unclear sentences...
Make more edits based on We Are Not The NSA and I's revisions, and this draft would certainly be better. You could start off listing the invaded regions by the order they took place.

[Rabin Israel]

Recognizing that the region known as HYDRA Command has invaded countless innocent regions and crushed the communities there, or forced them to flee as refugees.

Noting that the practice of invading regions known as “raiding”, and practiced daily by HYDRA Command, is far too common and must be condemned.

Apalled that they would do such horrible things to natives simply trying to coexist with their neighbors.

Noting their recent occupation and attempted refounding of Dank Memes in an attempt to make it a trophy, that led to the region falling into Nazi hands.

Further noting that they have also invaded and oppressed the natives of regions such as:

-Peuce Island

-the Reckoning, which is now an empty trophy region.

-Edisonia, which was raided illegally.

-The Place That Has No Big Banks, whose refounding as a trophy region resulted in the crushing of the active community and forced the natives to flee from their homeland and seek a new home in The Region That Has No Big Banks

-Japan, forcing the region into a strict lockdown

-An invasion of Singapore that was only thwarted through the valiant and powerful efforts of defenders from regions such as The Order of the Grey Wardens.

-Russia, which was only saved by the return of the regional founder.

Horrified that they have been allowed to get away with these actions and not been punished in any form by the Security Council

Hereby Condemns HYDRA Command

There are still quite a few grammar errors and unclear sentences...
Make more edits based on We Are Not The NSA and I's revisions, and this draft would certainly be better. You could start off listing the invaded regions by the order they took place.

Could you point out the grammatical errors?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

It's also a good idea to update your drafts in your opening post and spoiler the previous versions. That way people don't have to scroll through the whole thread to find the latest draft.

Sorry, scrub that - one of the dangers of going to the latest post first and not checking.