[Proposal] Condemn The Kingdom of Great Britain and puppets

[Goathland]

*A side note, I really need help to get this on the vote. If you guys can help me out with this it would be great!*

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region. Proposed by: Goathland of Votis

The Security Council

Aware that Alvoru Shock Army constantly spreads war around the world of NationStates and to the small democratic regions getting raided by them for no apparent reason.

Noting that The Holy Regime of The German Chocolate Cake was invaded without warning by The Kingdom of Great Britain.

Adding that Alvoru Shock Army suppressed all communications between peaceful members of the victim region, and dismissed all regional officers as well as removed all regional tags, and ordered the closure of all embassies established through a very long period time between peaceful allied regions.

Remarking that the Kingdom of Great Britain is amassing a large invading army of nations to send around the world to conquer peaceful democratic regions. These puppets include:
The Protectorate of Scotland
The Communist Bloc
Fleet Admiral Victor Lancaster
Alvoru Shock Army
Brigadier Constantine Hesse
PracinhaHYDRApuppet2
Commandant1
Commandant3
Hanover Puppet 2
The Glorious Prince of Wales
King-Emperor George VI
Neu-Ulmer Battle Boat 4
His Imperial and Divine Highnes
AlphaCoy
Royal Niger
(Many More)

Asserting that the world assembly and the security council should do its job and protect peaceful law abiding regions from ruthless and wanton invasion by aggressive regions.

Informing that to do nothing about invaders is merely destroying the peaceful tranquility that once existed in pre-invader era NS.

Concluding that this council shall outright condemn The Kingdom of Great Britain and express dismay on all of its puppet regions and nations for their ruthless wanton invasions of peaceful and democratic regions and destroying them, some never to recover again. We must also realise that a second proposal for a liberation may be in order.

[We Are Not the NSA]

The Security Council

Aware that Alvoru Shock Army constantly spreads war around the world of NationStates and to the small democratic regions getting raided by them for no apparent reason.

You mean "raiding them for no apparent reason"?

Noting that The German Chocolate Cake was invaded without warning by The Kingdom of Great Britain.

Forgot the period. Edit: you didn't list the right region; it is Holy Regime of the German Chocolate Cake.

Adding that Alvoru Shock Army suppressed all communications between peaceful members of the victim region, and dismissed all regional officers as well as removed all regional tags, and ordered the closure of all embassies established through a very long period time between peaceful allied regions.

Remarking that the Kingdom of Great Britain is amassing a large invading army of nations to send around the world to conquer peaceful democratic regions. These puppets include:
The Protectorate of Scotland
The Communist Bloc
Fleet Admiral Victor Lancaster
Alvoru Shock Army
Brigadier Constantine Hesse
PracinhaHYDRApuppet2
Commandant1
Commandant3
Hanover Puppet 2
The Glorious Prince of Wales
King-Emperor George VI
Neu-Ulmer Battle Boat 4
His Imperial and Divine Highnes

Edit 2: This nation does not exist.

AlphaCoy
Royal Niger
(Many More)

Asserting that the world assembly and the Security Council should do its job and protect peaceful, law abiding regions from ruthless and wanton invasion by aggressive regions.

Informing that to do nothing about invaders is merely destroying the peaceful tranquility that once existed in pre-invader era NS.

The pre-invader era of NS ended like, a decade ago. Pretty hard to destroy the peace much more.

Concluding that this council shall condemn The Kingdom of Great Britain and all of its puppet regions and nations for their ruthless wanton invasions of peaceful and democratic regions and destroying them, some never to recover again.

R3 violation in red.

[Goathland]

How is expressing dismay against puppets a violation?

[We Are Not the NSA]

How is expressing dismay against puppets a violation?

From the Rules For SC Proposals:

3. Your proposal must contain an operative clause stating what the proposal actually does, e.g. commends, condemns, liberates, or repeals. Commendations/Condemnation can only commend/condemn the nominee, Liberations can only liberate the targeted region, and Repeals can only repeal the targeted resolution. For example, your proposal cannot impose fines, sanctions or a boycott on a condemned nation.

[Goathland]

//You mean "raiding them for no apparent reason"?

No.

[We Are Not the NSA]

//You mean "raiding them for no apparent reason"?

No.

Oop, read that part wrong.

[Goathland]

How is expressing dismay against puppets a violation?

From the Rules For SC Proposals:

3. Your proposal must contain an operative clause stating what the proposal actually does, e.g. commends, condemns, liberates, or repeals. Commendations/Condemnation can only commend/condemn the nominee, Liberations can only liberate the targeted region, and Repeals can only repeal the targeted resolution. For example, your proposal cannot impose fines, sanctions or a boycott on a condemned nation.

Ok, but it doesn't say that expression of dismay isn't allowed only outright condemnation directed at nations other than the target nation or region.

[Krimsonland]

Congrat, you got the raided region name wrong!

[King Alexander]

Oh my, it appears that I can not be confuse.

[Vetelo]

You put PracinhaHYDRAPuppet2? I haven't used that puppet in ages, lol. Nice taking 5 minutes to do the research.

[Dagea]

98% of those links don't even work. You didn't organize this condemnation very well. Perhaps putting more time and effort in would help you when you're volleying for votes!

also congrat

[Vetelo]

98% of those links don't even work. You didn't organize this condemnation very well. Perhaps putting more time and effort in would help you when you're volleying for votes!

also congrat

can you not be confuse?

[King Alexander]

98% of those links don't even work. You didn't organize this condemnation very well. Perhaps putting more time and effort in would help you when you're volleying for votes!

also congrat

can you not be confuse?

No, we can not be confuse

[Vetelo]

can you not be confuse?

No, we can not be confuse

congrat

[Dagea]

No, we can not be confuse

congrat

thank

[King Alexander]

congrat

thank

i have to go now

[Krimsonland]

I forgiv

[Vetelo]

I forgiv

thank

[Vetelo]

Aware that Alvoru Shock Army constantly spreads war around the world of NationStates and to the small democratic regions getting raided by them for no apparent reason.

Um, that's just a puppet!

[We Are Not the NSA]

Okay. 2 AM NSA already had his say in this, let's see what 11 AM NSA has to say.

The Security Council

Aware that Alvoru Shock Army constantly spreads war around the world of NationStates and to the small democratic regions getting raided by them for no apparent reason.

One of the few responses in this thread so far that was not unneeded spam already pointed this out, but this nation is just a puppet. It would serve you much better, and increase your chances at getting this passed if you figured who that puppet belongs to and use them instead.

Noting that The Holy Regime of The German Chocolate Cake was invaded without warning by The Kingdom of Great Britain.

The region name is still incorrect: there is no "the" before "holy".

Adding that Alvoru Shock Army suppressed all communications between peaceful members of the victim region, and dismissed all regional officers as well as removed all regional tags, and ordered the closure of all embassies established through a very long period time between peaceful allied regions.

Remarking that the Kingdom of Great Britain is amassing a large invading army of nations to send around the world to conquer peaceful democratic regions. These puppets include:

You forgot the "the" before "Kingdom".

The Protectorate of Scotland

This region is just a jump point, barely worth noting.

The Communist Bloc

TCB is an allied region, not a puppet. Additionally, why did you list it but not USSD?

Fleet Admiral Victor Lancaster
Alvoru Shock Army
Brigadier Constantine Hesse

This nation has been inactive for the last 19 days.

PracinhaHYDRApuppet2

This nation hasn't left KGB's puppet storage in 29 days.

Commandant1
Commandant3
Hanover Puppet 2
The Glorious Prince of Wales
King-Emperor George VI
Neu-Ulmer Battle Boat 4
His Imperial and Divine Highnes

Still no such nation.

AlphaCoy
Royal Niger
(Many More)

I'm going to be frank with you: this list is pointless, and causes most of the problems with your proposal. I strongly suggest you remove it and focus on doing more research into additional things KGB has done that are worthy of condemnation.

Asserting that the world assembly and the security council should do its job and protect peaceful law abiding regions from ruthless and wanton invasion by aggressive regions.

Condemning a region does not help protect anyone. Liberating is the only way to protect a region, and a Liberation is completely unnecessary in this instance.

Informing that to do nothing about invaders is merely destroying the peaceful tranquility that once existed in pre-invader era NS.

Concluding that this council shall outright condemn The Kingdom of Great Britain and express dismay on all of its puppet regions and nations for their ruthless wanton invasions of peaceful and democratic regions and destroying them, some never to recover again. We must also realise that a second proposal for a liberation may be in order.

It really won't be necessary. Actually, this proposal would make a lot more sense logistically of it were rewritten as a Liberation, though as I just said a Liberation really isn't necessary yet.