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Commend HYDRA command (Rewriten)

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Commend HYDRA command (Rewriten)

Postby DAFT Universe » Mon Jun 06, 2016 1:34 pm

A pledge to commend HYDRA command

Noting that HYDRA command has helped defend many regions.

Noticing that HYDRA command has taken a massive amount of regions.

Amazed that HYDRA command can take lots of regions in a single update.

Liking HYDRA command's well designed ranking system.

Congratulating HYDRA command's helpfull ad active community.
When passed, this legistration will commend HYDRA command
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Postby Sygian » Mon Jun 06, 2016 1:49 pm

This could use a little work..
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Mon Jun 06, 2016 2:08 pm

Sygian wrote:This could use a little work..

Understatement of the year....

Daft Universe wrote:Recognising that HYDRA command is an exceptionally good raiding community.

Celebrating the fact that HYDRA command is one of the largest raiding communitys.

Noting that HYDRA command has helped defend regions as well as attack.

Congratulating on HYDRA command's well designed ranking system.


Ok, first things first go and read the rules about SC proposals. You have one glaring illegality for a start. Then go and read some successful commendations and see the amount of detail that is in them.

Following that do a rewrite top to bottom.

The good thing is that you posted here before submitting.
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Postby Drasnia » Mon Jun 06, 2016 2:12 pm

Oh don't be hard on him, BBD. I think an illegal self-commend that wasn't submitted before being posted on the forum is kinda cute.
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Postby McManniaa » Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:37 pm

Someone wants to commend hydra? ....I don't know how to feel about this but it feels wrong. Like dipping a chocolate chip cookie in tooth paste instead of milk.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Tue Jun 07, 2016 12:39 am

Drasnia wrote:Oh don't be hard on him, BBD. I think an illegal self-commend that wasn't submitted before being posted on the forum is kinda cute.

I did say it was a good thing that he posted here before submitting. Admittedly I was a little brusque but I was short on time.
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RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.

Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..

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Postby Lord Ravenclaw » Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:14 am

Hydra have done absolutely nothing of note to be even worthy of consideration (for either a condemnation or commendation) by the Security Council. One day, perhaps.
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Postby Dark Robes » Tue Jun 07, 2016 5:39 am

Yup, this is going to be popular when it reaches the voting floor. :p
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Postby The German Democratic Reich » Tue Jun 21, 2016 6:10 pm

I am giving a very strong against.

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Gameplay aint free, the raiding of regions has to be littered with the blood of roleplayers. Max "Crazy Baldman" Barry is no friend of mine! He's a writing roleplaying loser, and probably has a real life aswell. HYDRA and Black Riders not Portal to the multiverse and II ok. Praise DEN

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Postby Mall Santa » Wed Jun 22, 2016 8:45 am

Isn't this a self commandment? And there are illegalities that I see

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Postby Mall Santa » Wed Jun 22, 2016 8:46 am

Daft Universe wrote:A pledge to commend HYDRA command

Noting that HYDRA command has helped defend many regions.

Noticing that HYDRA command has taken a massive amount of regions.

Amazed that HYDRA command can take lots of regions in a single update.

Liking HYDRA command's well designed ranking system.

Congratulating HYDRA command's helpfull ad active community.
When passed, this legistration will commend HYDRA command

The first is illegal I believe and the second is an atrocious typo

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Postby DAFT Universe » Wed Jun 22, 2016 2:00 pm

I don't know why people are still commenting on this.

I'm not even a member of the WA, anymore!

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Postby Drasnia » Wed Jun 22, 2016 3:20 pm

Daft Universe wrote:I don't know why people are still commenting on this.

I'm not even a member of the WA, anymore!

It's called gravedigging. If you want this locked, post in the megathread in Moderation.
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Postby Sygian II » Wed Jun 22, 2016 10:49 pm

Daft Universe wrote:Noting that HYDRA command has helped defend many regions.

'Fenda' has six letters...
Hydra has six letters as well...
Tom has three letters...
Six divided by three is two...
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I'll just leave this here.. :eyebrow:

Hopefully nobody notices that "fenda" and "Hydra" don't have six letters
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