I haven't submitted this yet, but I thought I should get some feedback before I do anything else with it. See what you think, I'm open to making adjustments.
Commend The Commonwealth of Crowns
A resolution to recognise outstanding contribution by a nation or region
Description: The World Assembly Security Council,
RECOGNIZING the success of The Commonwealth of Crowns to serve as a community of Monarchy based Nations on NationStates.
APPLAUDING the lasting longevity of the Region, surviving more than four internal Coups and its effort to rebuild and re establish a friendly environment without fail.
NOTING The Comonwealth of Crowns as a bastion of free speech and Democracy and the services of the many Secretary Generals and Governments to further the success and equality of the Region and to provide stability in vulnerable times.
PRAISING the commitment to Roleplaying and the active participation of new and inexperienced Nations within the Region.
ADMIRING the long maintained Diplomatic relations across NationStates, distinct lack of enemies and willingness to work with others at an inter-regional level, in particular to Defending and helping other Regions that have fallen to Raiders.
APPRECIATING the services of long committed members, including in particular the Founder, founding nations, residing nations and expatriate nations over the past 5 years.
BELIEVING that surviving 5 years intact is alone worthy of a Commendation by the World Assmebly Security Council.
HEREBY COMMENDS The Commonwealth of Crowns for its distinguished 5 years service as a Monarchy based but accepting beacon to all ideologies, friendly and welcoming atmosphere, active Roleplays, fair and regular Government with Elections, a strong teamwork mentality and its lasting contribution to NationStates, inspiring other Regions old and new.
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