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Noting that many of the highly influential nations of the mentioned region, especially the current WA delegate and founder, United German Regions and many high power supervisor nations such as MERICA HECK YEAH, The Mickey Mouse Club, and Venedictov, have helped to advance the region and make peaceful encounters when possible but take appropriate action when it is seen as needed.

Furthermore Noting, the intelligence of the nations that hold offices of power within the region for their refuting of an attack by one of the larger raiding region in NationStates, when they were just a fledgling region.

Recognizing, the freedoms of roleplay and timely interactions among harboring nations and original usage of the creation of a regional government, land system, militaries and newspaper and the constant action taken by members to help other regions protect themselves and nations be aware of threats they may be facing.

Also Recognizing, the region’s actions to help protect ally regions, such as the scenario when The Insane Region took control of The Unity of Nations Assembly after a raider region took control of the region and beginning a campaign to take down this large enemy.

Praising the constant communication between this nation and many others, which is used to unite other regions under common purposes.

Aware of the constant WA votes and polls as most of the regional members participate and of the constant happenings across the world in regions and some of the larger nations.

Hereby declares that The Insane Region be commended for their efforts in the world and within their own region.

The last clause can just say "COMMENDS". Also "role-play" is illegal as a term.
In general, it's better to put it on the forums for debate, and then submit it. Also, are you trying to commend your own region?

Kaboomlandia wrote:The last clause can just say "COMMENDS". Also "role-play" is illegal as a term.
In general, it's better to put it on the forums for debate, and then submit it. Also, are you trying to commend your own region?

It is a region he comes in and out of. It is my region though.

The Mickey Mouse Club wrote:Noting that many of the highly influential nations of the mentioned region, especially the current WA delegate and founder, United German Regions and many high power supervisor nations such as MERICA HECK YEAH, The Mickey Mouse Club, and Venedictov, have helped to advance the region and make peaceful encounters when possible but take appropriate action when it is seen as needed.

I don't think it's necessary to list every member of your region. You could take out the nation's names and it would flow better. Also, having influence is not in itself a commendable feat.

Furthermore Noting, the intelligence of the nations that hold offices of power within the region for their refuting of an attack by one of the larger raiding region in NationStates, when they were just a fledgling region.

Yeah, so... This clause makes you sound like a jerk. I don't mean that I think you are a jerk, but noting your own intelligence?

Recognizing, the freedoms of roleplay and timely interactions among harboring nations and original usage of the creation of a regional government, land system, militaries and newspaper and the constant action taken by members to help other regions protect themselves and nations be aware of threats they may be facing.

I'm not sure if you are aware, but none of those things are particularly original. I mean, none of them.

Also Recognizing, the region’s actions to help protect ally regions, such as the scenario when The Insane Region took control of The Unity of Nations Assembly after a raider region took control of the region and beginning a campaign to take down this large enemy.

Praising the constant communication between this nation and many others, which is used to unite other regions under common purposes.

Meh. Not saying it isn't commend worthy, but I'd suggest accomplishing a bit more before you pursue a commendation. Many regions have accomplished this level of activity.

Aware of the constant WA votes and polls as most of the regional members participate and of the constant happenings across the world in regions and some of the larger nations.

You do realize that all regions have WA votes, right?

Hereby declares that The Insane Region be commended for their efforts in the world and within their own region.

Commended would be fine.

Overall, this is a sub par proposal, but it could be good with a lot of work. My main concern is that it honestly just doesn't seem like enough has been accomplished.

When it says "One of the larger raiding regions", do you mean us? If so I think we would have killed you.

'Aware that The Insane Region still haven't figured out how update works and provide much amusement to watching defenders' should be included

Drop Your Pants wrote:'Aware that The Insane Region still haven't figured out how update works and provide much amusement to watching defenders' should be included

I am aware of the update times, we don't care to meet those times closely. We go where-ever, whenever.

United German Regions wrote:

Drop Your Pants wrote:'Aware that The Insane Region still haven't figured out how update works and provide much amusement to watching defenders' should be included

I am aware of the update times, we don't care to meet those times closely. We go where-ever, whenever.

And this behavior is commendable?

The Sapientia wrote:

United German Regions wrote:I am aware of the update times, we don't care to meet those times closely. We go where-ever, whenever.

And this behavior is commendable?

We have better reasons to be commended, I need to get The Mickey Mouse Club to request forum topic lock since this is no longer a topic to be cared about.
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