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[SUBMITTED] Condemn Bratislavskaya

Postby United Klotecnia » Fri Jan 16, 2015 7:32 pm

Hi, this is the draft of my proposal 'Condemn Bratislavskaya'. Please suggest any edits or things I should include in my draft

Condemn Bratislavskaya


Recognising Bratislavskaya as one of the founders of the People's Armed International Liberation Coalition (PAILC), an organisation that targets nations that are not in line with their communist beliefs.

Acknowledging that Bratislavskaya has endeavoured to invade or occupy nations that are accused of fascist activities including

United Klotecnia, who successfully fought against Bratislavskayan occupation during the Fourth Klotecnian Civil War was listed as fascist following Bratislavskayan defeat despite combating fascist revolutionaries during the war. The building of the Klotecnian People's Assembly was destroyed by ten minutes of intensive and unspeakable Bratislavskayan firepower which debris severely wounded many civilians in the process.

Ninten, whose nuclear stockpiles were destroyed by Bratislavskaya via careless means which resulted in the destruction of the Nintenian environment and the health of its people.

Noting that Bratislavskaya and the PAILC bullied the Klotecnian government into meeting demands such as a 24 hour deadline to sign the PAILC treaty

Appalled at the fact that many false excuses used by Bratislavskaya were

- Coercion in order to achieve 'freedom for the Klotecnian people'.
- The use of aggression to infringe the independence and sovereignty of nations opposing the PAILC was to 'uphold the USSR Treaty of Friendship and Cooperation' and to eliminate nations who disagreed with such ideals.
- Separation of families due to 'unjustified reasons' given by the Bratislavskayan government.

Disdained at Bratislavskaya's use of WMDs in conflict on enemies, totally ignoring the potential of its destructive result.

Shocked by the fact that independent, sovereign nations that made progressive reforms were pursued, oppressed, and horribly disrupted via coups by the Bratislavskayan government.

Understanding that the sole 'reason' for the unlawful invasion and occupation of nations was because of the governments' apparent 'fascist' ideologies which most of the time is an unfounded claim

Aware of the fact that Bratislavskaya also intends to discriminate against nations that do not accept Bratislavskayan foreign policy

Hereby condemns Bratislavskaya
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Postby The Novakian Empire » Fri Jan 16, 2015 7:35 pm

I support this
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Bump so this gets noticed
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Postby Redsward » Fri Jan 16, 2015 8:16 pm

I know how important RP's are in NS, but condemnations for IC characteristics are absolutely ridiculous. The WA believes in free thought.

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Postby The Novakian Empire » Fri Jan 16, 2015 8:23 pm

Hm.
Alright.
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Postby Redsward » Fri Jan 16, 2015 8:35 pm

The Novakian Empire wrote:Hm.
Alright.

It's just my opinion, keep the draft up and see if anyone else supports it. Even though I don't support it, many others do. Milograd was condemned twice for IC reasons. And neither of them were repealed.
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Postby Todd McCloud » Fri Jan 16, 2015 9:03 pm

Redsward wrote:I know how important RP's are in NS, but condemnations for IC characteristics are absolutely ridiculous. The WA believes in free thought.

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Based on what? If this stuff was actually RP'd, and it affected people in their nations ICly, and the draft is written well, then so what? Let the NS community determine that.
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Postby Todd McCloud » Fri Jan 16, 2015 9:17 pm

Assuming that all of these facts are correct, I have taken the liberty of revising your proposal. I would suggest highlighting the most important and heinous acts first to draw attention to them. As it sits, it still needs work. I would also recommend that you familiarize yourself with the rules for SC Proposals, i.e., you cannot use personified words like "his" or "him" when referring to nations.

United Klotecnia wrote:Hi, this is the draft of my proposal 'Condemn Bratislavskaya'. Please suggest any edits or things I should include in my draft

Condemn Bratislavskaya

Recognising Bratislavskaya as one of the founders of the People's Armed International Liberation Coalition, an organization that targets nations that are not in line with his their communist beliefs.

Acknowledging that Bratislavskaya has endeavoured to invade or occupy nations that are accused of 'being fascists' fascist activities including

*United Klotecnia, who drove out the PAILC (what does this stand for?) occupiers in order to be independent and did not cooperate with Bratislavskaya due to the thought that it wasn't suitable to the nation. (this clause needs rewritten}

*Ninten, whose who nuclear stockpiles were destroyed destructed by Bratislavskaya via careless means which resulted in the destruction of the unsafe, dangerous means that damaged Nintenian environment and the health of its people instead of a safer alternative

Appalled at the fact that many false excuses used by Bratislavskaya were

- that the use of coercion was in order to achieve 'freedom for the Klotecnian people'.
- that the use of aggression to infringe the independent and sovereignty of nations opposing the PAILC was to 'uphold the USSR Treaty of Friendship and Cooperation' and to eliminate nations who disagreed with such ideals.
- Separation of families due to 'unjustified reasons' given by the Bratislavskayan government.

Disdained at Bratislavskaya's use of WMDs in conflict on enemies, totally ignoring the potential of its destructive result.

Shocked by the fact that independent, sovereign nations making that made progressive reforms were pursued, oppressed, and horribly disrupted via coups (?) by the Bratislavskayan government. And Bratislavskaya recently overthrowed many governments in the USSR, when most were democratically elected.

Understanding that the sole 'reason' for the unlawful invasion and occupation of nations were was because of the governments' apparent 'fascist' ideology ideologies which most of the time is false an unfounded claim

Aware of the fact that Bratislavskaya also intends in the future to 'discriminate' (remove quotes)against nations not in acceptance of that do not accept Bratislavskayan foreign policy

To the conclusion of that the Bratislavskayan government purposely intends to 'infringe the sovereignty and independence' of nations, whose thought is declared 'unsuitable' by Bratislavskaya and the use of aggressive coercion in order to achieve its political objectives.

Hereby condemns Bratislavskaya
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Postby United Klotecnia » Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:52 pm

PAILC = People's Armed International Liberation Coalition

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Postby United Klotecnia » Fri Jan 16, 2015 11:14 pm

I read the SC rules for proposals and there aren't any personified words in there.

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Postby United Klotecnia » Fri Jan 16, 2015 11:30 pm

After a minor edit, I have submitted the proposal.

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Postby United Klotecnia » Fri Jan 16, 2015 11:31 pm

If any of you are WA Delegates, please approve my proposal.

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Postby Todd McCloud » Sat Jan 17, 2015 12:58 am

United Klotecnia wrote:I read the SC rules for proposals and there aren't any personified words in there.

Yes there are. You used the pronoun "his" in the first clause (at least the one you submitted to the SC). According to Rule 4, that's forbidden. I personally believe your proposal needs more work as well. If you look at a lot of the drafting threads for Security Council resolutions that passed, you'll notice that most of them have pages of critiques and revisions - very rarely is a proposal ready to go on the first night it was drafted.
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Postby United Klotecnia » Sat Jan 17, 2015 1:02 am

I edited the personifications.

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Postby Ramaeus » Sat Jan 17, 2015 1:13 am

Why did you submit this so soon? Your proposal isn't ready.

Secondly, your proposal is violation of SC Rules.
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The Novakian Empire wrote:Bump so this gets noticed

United Klotecnia wrote:If any of you are WA Delegates, please approve my proposal.

Both of you, knock off the spamming.

EDIT: Proposal removed, see:
Recognising Bratislavskaya as one of the founders of the People's Armed International Liberation Coalition (PAILC), an organization that targets nations that are not in line with his their communist beliefs.
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Postby Bratislavskaya » Sat Jan 17, 2015 2:08 am

I'm sorry, what? What? You're avin' a giggle mate. When I am back from the IRL stuff I'm doing, I'm going to give my side of the story, and show why you yourself should be condemned.
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Postby Bratislavskaya » Sat Jan 17, 2015 2:49 am

Sod waiting, I have time
United Klotecnia wrote:Condemn Bratislavskaya


Recognising Bratislavskaya as one of the founders of the People's Armed International Liberation Coalition (PAILC), an organisation that targets nations that are not in line with their communist beliefs.

We targeted you, and you only for a very specific set of reasons, which will be explained.
United Klotecnia wrote:Acknowledging that Bratislavskaya has endeavoured to invade or occupy nations that are accused of fascist activities including

United Klotecnia, who successfully fought against Bratislavskayan occupation during the Fourth Klotecnian Civil War was listed as fascist following Bratislavskayan defeat despite combating fascist revolutionaries during the war. The building of the Klotecnian People's Assembly was destroyed by ten minutes of intensive and unspeakable Bratislavskayan firepower which debris severely wounded many civilians in the process.

As I made very clear, all civilians were evacuated from the area of the building. All persons inside were detained, processed and most released. The building was destroyed due to the torching of the Bratislavskayan and Renbokian embassies by Klotecnian troops.
United Klotecnia wrote:Ninten, whose nuclear stockpiles were destroyed by Bratislavskaya via careless means which resulted in the destruction of the Nintenian environment and the health of its people.

The weapons disposed of were in fact chemical weapons, and the incident was not related to myself in ANY way.
United Klotecnia wrote:Noting that Bratislavskaya and the PAILC bullied the Klotecnian government into meeting demands such as a 24 hour deadline to sign the PAILC treaty

A treaty including such mad and unreasonable terms such as:
Lift the outright ban on Freedom of Speech
Lift the outright ban on being homosexual
Dispose of the Chemical weapons you just prior to the writing up of these terms used on your own civilians, which is an outright warcrime
Letting PAILC Troops take over the fighting against the fascist rebels in your nation that you were not dealing with, and had in fact invaded half of the USSR through you're godmodding.
Hand over a former leader for ordering the deaths of 10,000 "Ethnic Bratislavskayans" (a quote from yourself, after magically teleporting to my nation to do it)
United Klotecnia wrote:Appalled at the fact that many false excuses used by Bratislavskaya were

- Coercion in order to achieve 'freedom for the Klotecnian people'.

From a government that banned homosexuality, all freedom of speech, has concentration camps acknowledged in his own factbook
United Klotecnia wrote:- The use of aggression to infringe the independence and sovereignty of nations opposing the PAILC was to 'uphold the USSR Treaty of Friendship and Cooperation' and to eliminate nations who disagreed with such ideals.

One nation, your nation. I will link the USSR Treaty of Freindship and Co-Operation, as you were in Direct Violation of it's terms, and a threat to regional stability due to your rebels invading other nations.
United Klotecnia wrote:- Separation of families due to 'unjustified reasons' given by the Bratislavskayan government.

Arresting of persons accused of war crimes you mean?
United Klotecnia wrote:Disdained at Bratislavskaya's use of WMDs in conflict on enemies, totally ignoring the potential of its destructive result.

Which was not only retconned, but as a response to you fireing Nuclear weapons at myself.
United Klotecnia wrote:Shocked by the fact that independent, sovereign nations that made progressive reforms were pursued, oppressed, and horribly disrupted via coups by the Bratislavskayan government.

Made progressive reforms after members of the region made you do so, AND you then got rid of all of those reforms for no real reason
United Klotecnia wrote:Understanding that the sole 'reason' for the unlawful invasion and occupation of nations was because of the governments' apparent 'fascist' ideologies which most of the time is an unfounded claim

See reasons above for why we did intervene, letting you retain full control of your government until it was no longer possible .
United Klotecnia wrote:Aware of the fact that Bratislavskaya also intends to discriminate against nations that do not accept Bratislavskayan foreign policy

We have no, do not, and will continue not to discriminate against anyone. Ask anyone in the region.
United Klotecnia wrote:Hereby condemns Bratislavskaya

Hereby laughs at the ridiculous claims.

You are trying to take personal revenge to the W.A, because you been asked to leave the region by multiple persons as a troll and a warmonger. Multiple people in the region will agree. You have twisted facts. Check his own factbook for some of his crimes. If you are willing to go back to November-December in our regions RMB you will see why we intervened. And Just for Clarification

AGAINST
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Postby Renbokia » Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:35 am

You are condemning one of multiple nations who wanted your nation to ease on freedom of speech, allow homosexuals, stop the mass-killing of your own people and disable hereditary-based head of states?

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Postby Enclave of Soviet Germany » Sat Jan 17, 2015 2:23 pm

In addition to what the other two above me clarified, I want to say this:
United Klotecnia wrote:Disdained at Bratislavskaya's use of WMDs in conflict on enemies, totally ignoring the potential of its destructive result.

The other PAILC member nations condemned the use of these WMDs, but we did not and do not criticise Bratislavskaya since it was not only
1. Indeed a reaction to nuclear attacks by Klotecnia
but also
2. Requested by Klotecnia, although he wanted us to nuke only those of his citizens living in cities occupied by the Fascists, so basically he wanted us to kill hostages with WMDs.

United Klotecnia wrote:Understanding that the sole 'reason' for the unlawful invasion and occupation of nations was because of the governments' apparent 'fascist' ideologies which most of the time is an unfounded claim

I wrote the analysis of Klotecnia's overall policies, political stance and style of argumentation, it can be found on the RMB (buried under tons of discussion I fear).
The core points were:
- Oppression via an excessive political police as well as the military, both using intense violence against the people (concentration camps etc.)
- Tyranny by one family of dictators with the official title "Supreme Leader"
- Excessive and systematic oppression of various civil rights, such as freedom of speech and freedom of sexuality
- The fact that he does not only admit all these points, but also defends them
- The fact that he admits being not communist, but nationalist
- The fact that the only right he constantly defends is his national self-determination, while at the same time he always used soldiers of other USSR countries in the fights against his political enemies (?), especially
- The Fascist Front (KNFRF), which was annihilated multiple times by USSR forces that Klotecnia called for help, but always rised again, bigger and more powerful than before, always followed by "emergency acts", which allowed the Klotecnian government to take away any civil rights left.

With only these core points, Klotecnia would be classified as "Fascistoid military absolute dictatorship", but considering his private sector makes up over 40% of his economy, the last and most important point of Dimitroff's definition of Fascism is fulfilled - so, Klotecnia is indeed a Fascist state.
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Postby Enclave of Soviet Germany » Sun Jan 18, 2015 1:51 am

Klotecnia just wrote this on the RMB:
"I have the right to believe in Thai ultranationalism because it is my country, national identity, nationality.

Because U.S/western imperialists are threatening my country, I'm IRL a right-wing Thai ultranationalist because of western interference.

I now finally admit I have Thai right-wing ultranationalist beliefs. There isn't really a true communist state, all of you aren't really communists but western imperialists who endeavour to destroy our and other nations' essential resources. All of you are a region of so called communist but in truth, 'western imperialist, treacherous dogs'.

I wish to see this region be ripped apart by war.

Klotecnia launches its final nuclear weapons, chemical weapons and tungsten rods at New Terricon, Renbokia, Soviet Sovereignty."

Someone like this doesn't really fit in a communist region, I'd say.
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