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[IDEA] Condemn The Queen's State of Machine Rules

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UNITED STATES OF ISLAMIC
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[IDEA] Condemn The Queen's State of Machine Rules

Postby UNITED STATES OF ISLAMIC » Sat Aug 23, 2014 5:38 am

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL

ID: The_United_States_of_Islamic_1346359755

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation


Nominee: The Queen's State of Machine Rules


Proposed by: The United States of Islamic

Description:Nation of The Queen's State of Machine Rules had invaded the neighboring countries including the United States of Islamic, and abusing women, children massacred for no reason. we would like to recommend this:
- I am the sultan, wants to make the world a defense pact formation called "WATO" (World Assembly Treaty Organization)
- And also conducted Operation Dark Storm, the impact of this operation will be decided Source Food


Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 68 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 6 hours

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Postby Mundiferrum » Sat Aug 23, 2014 9:42 am

Quick little comments:
If you're ever gonna submit this, you'll need an operative clause. "HEREBY Condemns [nation]."

Second: Your argument is....generally unintelligible. I don't know if my brain is just messing with me tonight or something, but the only thing I got from that was that the nation committed genocide and whatnot. Not good, but not necessarily bad enough to merit a condemnation, from what I've seen. (Highlight:
"- I am the sultan, wants to make the world a defense pact formation called "WATO" (World Assembly Treaty Organization)
- And also conducted Operation Dark Storm, the impact of this operation will be decided Source Food"
What does all of that even mean? Additionally, condemns can't do anything more than condemn the nation they're condemning; if you're looking to start some sort of WA treaty organization, go to the General Assembly about that)

Third: I suggest you read other resolutions, participate in other proposals' debates, and read the rules and whatnot (Here:
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=8809
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=218040 ) before really posting anything.
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