Illegal SC proposals - post them here

[Western Evilly]

All of which could be summarised as Rule 4 (a, c and d), because none of the rules you mentioned exist in the SC.

Ah I see I've been ninja'd while writing this post.

Looks like I was reading the wrong rulebook... Thanks for that!

Frisbeeteeria has suggested you read. Please do so.

[Kaboomlandia]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: empire_of_new_korea_1479913965

Condemn Asiana

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.



Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Asiana

Proposed by: Empire of New Korea


Description: To condemn The Black Hawks for invading Asiana and installing a puppet regime.

Approvals: 3 (Ancient Free and Accepted Masons, DJ Raid, Aisciai)

Status: Lacking Support (requires 100 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 2 days 21 hours

R3. Surprisingly this looks like it's R4-legal.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: dp_country_1480370647

Commend The League Of Conservative Nations

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The League of Conservative Nations

Proposed by: Dp Country

Seeing as The League of Conservative Nations is a good wholesome region, I hereby move to commend them on their great contributions to the world.

Understanding that they might now be as big as the Pacific regions or as influential, but they have spread conservatism throughout the world through the Conservative Movement.

Knowing that they have united many regions together through The Christian Regions Cooperation Movement.

Acknowledging their great leadership which wisely leads the region through different problems and situations.

I hereby commend The League of Conservative Nations for their good deeds and contributions to our World.

R4(d).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: kingdom_of_dankistan_1480524540

Commend The Invaders

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The Invaders

Proposed by: Kingdom of Dankistan

This proposal hereby commends The Invaders, for
-Making great strides in the art of raiding, and
-Inspiring numerous WA propsals

Security Council Proposal
ID: fultzan_1480642223

Commend Gay

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Gay

Proposed by: Fultzan

This proposal hereby commends the region of Gay for:
- Providing a safe haven for all nations and people
-Working for LGBTQ rights

The second proposal is a copy of the framework of the first, as well as pinching the first line wholesale.

R2(a).

[We Are Not the NSA]

Commend The Glorious Nations Of Iwaku

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The Glorious Nations of Iwaku

Proposed by: Pyrovikings

I PROPOSE that we commend this region. They are not pretentious or prudish. Merely an insane collective accepting all who seek the shelter of its loving arms.

Embrace the madness and have a nice day.

R4d

[Sygian II]

Commend Tripartite State

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Tripartite State

Proposed by: ThatBookia

RECOGNIZING that this nation formed the Fire Pact,
KNOWING that this nation seeks to improve the East Pacific,
HELPING this nation to achieve its goal,
HEREBY commending Tripartite State for its actions.

R3

[Kaboomlandia]

Commend Tripartite State

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Tripartite State

Proposed by: ThatBookia

RECOGNIZING that this nation formed the Fire Pact,
KNOWING that this nation seeks to improve the East Pacific,
HELPING this nation to achieve its goal,
HEREBY commending Tripartite State for its actions.

R3

Do you mean R4? It has an operative clause and I don't see any RL violations in there.

[Sygian II]

No, I was referring to R3 since they are advocating to "help the nation achieve its goal". Is that still legal?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

No, I was referring to R3 since they are advocating to "help the nation achieve its goal". Is that still legal?

Yes it is.

It's an appalling attempt at writing a commendation, but it is legal as far as I can see.

[Sygian II]

No, I was referring to R3 since they are advocating to "help the nation achieve its goal". Is that still legal?

Yes it is.

It's an appalling attempt at writing a commendation, but it is legal as far as I can see.

Ah sorry for the mistake. I'll familiarize myself with the SC rules more.

[Kaboomlandia]

Security Council Proposal
ID: uqbaristan_1480881390

Condemn Uqbaristan

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Uqbaristan

Proposed by: Uqbaristan

A condemnation of uqbaristan for various transgressions across the years.
-spreading of hateful ideology ( fascism )
-insighting raids of peaceful regions
-participating in raids of peaceful regions

Approvals: 1 (Uqbaristan)

Status: Lacking Support (requires 103 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 8 hours

R3.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: uqbaristan_1480881390

Condemn Uqbaristan

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Uqbaristan

Proposed by: Uqbaristan

A condemnation of uqbaristan for various transgressions across the years.
-spreading of hateful ideology ( fascism )
-insighting raids of peaceful regions
-participating in raids of peaceful regions

R3 - there's no active clause per se.

Edit: Dammit Kaboom it's NSA who's supposed to ninja me.

[Ever-Wandering Souls]

Security Council Proposal
ID: grezantime_1480914908

Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland

A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Kingdom of Ireland

Proposed by: Grezantime

The World Assembly,

Noting the region of Kingdom of Ireland’s numerous relationships with other regions including embassies;

Citing the World Factbook Entry imposed by the raiders, instructing members to “move a W.A. puppet to Kingdom of Ireland and endorse Indian Russia as well as all regional officers, immediately”;

Observing that Kingdom of Ireland was recently invaded and its numerous embassies closed without stating reason, as well as the expulsion of the regional natives;

Believing that it is the intention of the raider groups to take permanent control of the region;

Concerned that there is a high probability that a password will be placed upon Kingdom of Ireland, effectively eliminating all chances for natives to return and regain control;

Resolved to prevent further damage from occurring;

Hereby Liberates Kingdom of Ireland.

I'm not sure of precedence on this, but is just 'puppet" a 4something violation? I know I've seen "puppet nation" before, so not sure. Similarly for password, Regional Officers, etc. I seem to recall that if NS uses the term, it's legal. My gut says RO is legal, but I'm pretty sure I've always seen "password" replaced with RP-talk like "regional borders" or "deny entry to the region" or whatever.

[Altmoras]

I'm not sure of precedence on this, but is just 'puppet" a 4something violation? I know I've seen "puppet nation" before, so not sure. Similarly for password, Regional Officers, etc. I seem to recall that if NS uses the term, it's legal. My gut says RO is legal, but I'm pretty sure I've always seen "password" replaced with RP-talk like "regional borders" or "deny entry to the region" or whatever.

If "sleeper" is a legal term "puppet" probably is as well, but I'm no expert.

[Ever-Wandering Souls]

I'm not sure of precedence on this, but is just 'puppet" a 4something violation? I know I've seen "puppet nation" before, so not sure. Similarly for password, Regional Officers, etc. I seem to recall that if NS uses the term, it's legal. My gut says RO is legal, but I'm pretty sure I've always seen "password" replaced with RP-talk like "regional borders" or "deny entry to the region" or whatever.

If "sleeper" is a legal term "puppet" probably is as well, but I'm no expert.

True. Legal/illegal terms is one of my weak points regarding proposal legality, hence my very questioning tone. Lot of stuff that has precedence one way or the other that is not very clear. My overall impression of this lib was that it at the least treads the line of some sort of r4 violation, and i was fairly certain that at least "password" is something I generally see replaced with more "security Council" nation-y words.

[Sedgistan]

"Password" is allowed, as while it looks odd, they're a feature of the NationStates world. "Puppet" is fine too, though the use of it here is rather jarring.

[Ever-Wandering Souls]

"Password" is allowed, as while it looks odd, they're a feature of the NationStates world. "Puppet" is fine too, though the use of it here is rather jarring.

Alright, thanks Sedge! So is "ejects" as used in https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1480883995 also legal, since the site has an "eject" button?

[Sedgistan]

Yep. We've even allowed "banject".

[Grezantime]

Security Council Proposal
ID: grezantime_1480914908

Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland

A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Kingdom of Ireland

Proposed by: Grezantime

The World Assembly,

Noting the region of Kingdom of Ireland’s numerous relationships with other regions including embassies;

Citing the World Factbook Entry imposed by the raiders, instructing members to “move a W.A. puppet to Kingdom of Ireland and endorse Indian Russia as well as all regional officers, immediately”;

Observing that Kingdom of Ireland was recently invaded and its numerous embassies closed without stating reason, as well as the expulsion of the regional natives;

Believing that it is the intention of the raider groups to take permanent control of the region;

Concerned that there is a high probability that a password will be placed upon Kingdom of Ireland, effectively eliminating all chances for natives to return and regain control;

Resolved to prevent further damage from occurring;

Hereby Liberates Kingdom of Ireland.

I'm not sure of precedence on this, but is just 'puppet" a 4something violation? I know I've seen "puppet nation" before, so not sure. Similarly for password, Regional Officers, etc. I seem to recall that if NS uses the term, it's legal. My gut says RO is legal, but I'm pretty sure I've always seen "password" replaced with RP-talk like "regional borders" or "deny entry to the region" or whatever.

Out of curiosity if a quote breaks a World Assembly Proposal rule is it better to exclude it or modify the quote?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: uqbaristan_1480974872

Condemn Uqbaristan

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Uqbaristan

Proposed by: Uqbaristan

NOTING the various nation-regions which the imperialist region of Macedon holds.

UNDERSTANDING that Uqbaristanism is both dangerous and discriminatory.

BELIEVING the bold orange text with blue accents on every colony's world factbook entry is distasteful and grotesque, furthermore removing the nation-region's right to support their own colors on the world factbook entry.

ACCEPTING the fact that Uqbaristan has prevented natives of a particular nation (such as Lithuania, Belarus, France, Pakistan, Finland, etc) from running their own region and celebrating the nation's culture.

CONDEMNING Uqbqaristan for the above statements.

R2(a) - plagiarism. Copy of SC #1 "Condemn Macedon".

Edit: GHR filed for its removal.

[The Saint James Islands]

Security Council Proposal
ID: eulanai_1480980495
Condemn Social Liberal Union

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Social Liberal Union

Proposed by: Eulanai

Social liberalism is a threat to the world, it's a threat to world peace, a threat to freedom, a threat to happiness, a threat to creativity, we must start a coalitions of right wing regions to launch a regional take over of the left, starting with the Social Liberal Union. This should be the first step to ensuring a perfect world with good minded people in power. Think for a moment before you vote, realize that this will be good for our economies, our military's, etc, there are plenty of benefits for us, and benefits for the world if this passes. Please vote yes in the name of freedom, strength, and liberty.

Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 104 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 3 hours

R3 violation at the very least: no operative clause.

[Grezantime]

This violates 4d.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: eulanai_1481025068

Condemn Social Liberal Union

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Social Liberal Union

Proposed by: Eulanai


THE REPUBLIC OF EULANAI HAS CRAFTED A PIECE OF LEGISLATION

Which intends to condemn and impose delegate barriers against the Social Liberal Union.

The Social Liberal Union is a region with countries whose political agendas are radical and morally reprehensible. Their policies degenerate their societies, weaken their societies, weaken their countries and if their policies and influence is spread before its too late, weaken the world.

We must think with logic and not the nonsense that radicals such as those who are apart of the Social Liberal Union have been attempting to hammer into peoples minds. We must stop the Social Liberal Union as a victory against radicalism and degeneracy, for humanity and a decent society.

They are against society, they don't believe in basic biology, they believe the absolute lie that all cultures can coexist peacefully. It's time we recognize that the "politically correct" ideology of the far left Social Liberal Union and other far leftists is destroying society as we know it and weakening the world. We must put an end to it and begin by taking a strong and effective stance against the Social Liberal Union.

SHOWING that this region claims to be for freedom and prosperity while rejecting nations with even slightly different view points than the leaders, and that they themselves are oppressive

REALIZING that this region has a political ideology of degeneracy. They believe that gender is non existent, they want our young daughters to shower with not only men, but mentally deranged men who believe that they are women, and vice versa. And that they want to destroy their own culture and society by allowing other cultures and societies to take over, and that they are a threat to the history and ways of life of millions and millions of good people

IMPOSING hardcore delegate barriers and launching raids against this region to start a regional take over and turn it into a new and prosperous one, it may take some work for us to do but in the end it will be very worth it

HOPING very sincerely that enough delegates see this, and hoping that they decide to vote yes. If you are a delegate reading this I plead for you to vote yes and help put an end to this dangerous region, and soon other regions like it.

HEREBY condemns region=social_liberal_union

Still an R3 violation (in red) - does more than a Condemnation can do.
R4(d) violation (in blue) - not from the SC's point of view.

And it's just a rant.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Commend Sarah Said

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Sarah Said

Proposed by: Melody Thornton

Sarah Said is a great nation she's young funny sweet pretty and much more but i wanna take this to a serious tip i wanna talk about Sarah*. Before me and Sarah started working together my nation was bearly popular but i came to her and i asked her for her help and look wear i am now WA Delegate of The State Of Texas because of her. And she has a strong voice for young women and girls all over America Her motto Is I'm Proud To Be A Girl Us Girls Can Change The World.
She also helped topple Normandy France help start a democracy in the Empire Of France she made a Great President in The Liberal National Union and she stood up to everyone who criticized her. She is indeed a great Woman

AND YES SHE HAPPENS TO BE A MUSLIM

RECOGNIZING that she has formed so many regions and tried to rebuild regions like Egypt.
KNOWING that this nation seeks to make sure that we all have a common purpose,
HELPING this nation to build a Strong Region for herself and others
HEREBY commending Sarah Said for her great leadership actions in Nationstate's.

*Note: it became too difficult to color so many violations so close together, so I've marked R4b violations in red and R4d by underlining them. Orange indicates an R4a violation.

All the R4b. And R4d. And an R4a.

[Sedgistan]

Drawing attention to yourself with an illegal self-commend is never a good idea when mass multying.