Illegal SC proposals - post them here

[We Are Not the NSA]

-snip-

EDIT: Dammit, NSA, you ninja'd me.

Haha! Now the sword is the other foot!... well, that didn't make sense...

Funny thing about this is that I saw them planning to submit this on the rmb, and still managed to be too distracted to catch it first. I have a feeling that this thread is going to be seeing some activity in the next day or two.

[Lady Selina Grey]

Description: The following is another re-write of two unfinished propositions that have been accidentally been submitted. You have my deepest apologies for the unfinished proposals.

Description: This proposal hereby condemns DEN if passed.

Noting that DEN is a large, organized, and relatively "civil" region, considering that it is a raiding region.

Shocked, however, that it was chosen to repeal their previous condemnation, even though there have been many known large region occupations done by the nominee, and further shocked that the writer of the resolution chose to point out of all things, the incorrect grammar and spelling of the previous condemnation.

Appalled that they have occupied another helpless region, Axolotlum, just as their previous condemnation was being repealed.

Further appalled that the nominee always changes the victim's flag when occupying regions, as flags are a nation or region's identification. I had worked on Axolotlum's flag for more than two hours, and it now needs to be put back.

This proposal, written by a nation who has dealt with DEN's occupation first hand, hereby condemns the region DEN.

Approvals: 1 (JOWOWWO)

Status: Lacking Support (requires 90 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 9 hours

I had worked on Axolotlum's flag for more than two hours, and it now needs to be put back.

I think this is against : (a) You cannot reference the "real world" outside of NationStates

[We Are Not the NSA]

Description: The following is another re-write of two unfinished propositions that have been accidentally been submitted. You have my deepest apologies for the unfinished proposals.

Description: This proposal hereby condemns DEN if passed.

Noting that DEN is a large, organized, and relatively "civil" region, considering that it is a raiding region.

Shocked, however, that it was chosen to repeal their previous condemnation, even though there have been many known large region occupations done by the nominee, and further shocked that the writer of the resolution chose to point out of all things, the incorrect grammar and spelling of the previous condemnation.

Appalled that they have occupied another helpless region, Axolotlum, just as their previous condemnation was being repealed.

Further appalled that the nominee always changes the victim's flag when occupying regions, as flags are a nation or region's identification. I had worked on Axolotlum's flag for more than two hours, and it now needs to be put back.

This proposal, written by a nation who has dealt with DEN's occupation first hand, hereby condemns the region DEN.

Approvals: 1 (JOWOWWO)

Status: Lacking Support (requires 90 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 9 hours

I had worked on Axolotlum's flag for more than two hours, and it now needs to be put back.

I think this is against : (a) You cannot reference the "real world" outside of NationStates

Ehhh... I don't think so. Flags are a part of the game and are acceptable to be referenced to. However, the entire proposal is one big R4d violation: it is clearly written from the author's perspective.

[New Leppikania]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: deez_walnuts_1453917433

Condemn Derptington

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Derptington

Proposed by: Deez Walnuts

Description: Argument: The Security Council,

Noting that Derptington has spammed the RMB boards and innocent nation's telegrams,

Recognizing that he has been asked to stop and continues to harass people,

Shocked that he continues to harass and defy the authorities of The North Pacific,

Recognizing that he has not contributed to The North Pacific and should not be allowed to do this anymore,

Concluding that Derptington is poisonous to Nationstates and The North Pacific and should not be permitted to do this anymore

Hereby Condems the nation of Derptington

Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 92 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 10 hours

Sounds like more GHR material...

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: deez_walnuts_1453917433

Condemn Derptington

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Derptington

Proposed by: Deez Walnuts

Description: Argument: The Security Council,

Noting that Derptington has spammed the RMB boards and innocent nation's telegrams,

Recognizing that he has been asked to stop and continues to harass people,

Shocked that he continues to harass and defy the authorities of The North Pacific,

Recognizing that he has not contributed to The North Pacific and should not be allowed to do this anymore,

Concluding that Derptington is poisonous to Nationstates and The North Pacific and should not be permitted to do this anymore

Hereby Condems the nation of Derptington

Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 92 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 10 hours

Sounds like more GHR material...

Rules 2c for the GHR material and 4b for the use of personal pronouns.

[Kaboomlandia]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: deez_walnuts_1453917433

Condemn Derptington

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Derptington

Proposed by: Deez Walnuts

Description: Argument: The Security Council,

Noting that Derptington has spammed the RMB boards and innocent nation's telegrams,

Recognizing that he has been asked to stop and continues to harass people,

Shocked that he continues to harass and defy the authorities of The North Pacific,

Recognizing that he has not contributed to The North Pacific and should not be allowed to do this anymore,

Concluding that Derptington is poisonous to Nationstates and The North Pacific and should not be permitted to do this anymore

Hereby Condems the nation of Derptington

Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 92 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 10 hours

Sounds like more GHR material...

Not to mention R4b and 4c.

EDIT: Ninja'd by BBD.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: united_republic_of_sadler_1453931762

Condemn Spartan project

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Spartan project

Proposed by: United Republic of Sadler

Description: As the former WA delegate of the region Cisco, Spartan Project did nothing more than try to take power away from the ruler and forced everyone to do his bidding.

R3 and R4b.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Condemn DEN

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: DEN

Proposed by: MooseHawk

Description: Security Council:

Recognizing that the region known as DEN has committed numerous atrocities throughout Nationstates, and will not quit raiding for the foreseeable future

Noting that these attacks or raids on other regions are not illegal, but have been and should be heavily criticized by many nations on Nationstates. The strategy of raiding defaces a region and leaves a barren region that destroys unique cultures and communities that exist on Nationstates

Appaled that DEN has conducted numerous raids on regions including:

The invasion and occupation of Catholic in the 2012, leading to the Security Resolution to Liberate the region.

The occupation of Japan

The invasion of the region of Christmas.

The occupation of California

The most recent invasion of St Abbaddon

Further Noting that the modern day DEN was the creation formed from the occupation of The Atheist Empire, later on attracting many former Black Riders, where they continue to deploy and use the same strategies and tactics that condemned the Black Riders

Shocked that these actions haven't deemed DEN worthy of a condemnation, even though the atrocities they have done to many regions on Nationstates.

Believing that these actions are an aspect of Nationstates that should not be condoned, but rather discouraged. Feeling as though these actions are worthy of international scrutiny

Hereby condemns DEN

Plagiarism of SC #187

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: derptington_1454349151

Condemn the West Pacific

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: the West Pacific

Proposed by: Derptington

Description: They banned me from their region. All I said was potato.
They are net letting me use my right to free speech
potato

R3 and R4.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: the_ussra_1454359202

Repeal "Condemn Macedon"

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.


Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#1

Proposed by: The USSRA

Description: WA Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Argument: Recognizing that Macedon is now a small region.
Saying that there is no point in condemning them.
Therefore repealing this condemnation.

Rule 2d.

[Herby]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: derptington_1454349151

Condemn the West Pacific

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: the West Pacific

Proposed by: Derptington

Description: They banned me from their region. All I said was potato.
They are net letting me use my right to free speech
potato

R3 and R4.

R4b and R4d to be exact. And also, potato.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

R4b and R4d to be exact. And also, potato.

Got called away for dinner before I could look up the exact clauses, a dinner which, stragely enough, featured potatoes.

[Bears Armed Mission]

Liberate the South Pacific
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation
Nominee (region): the South Pacific
Proposed by: Royal States Of Belgium

Description: We have to free the ones who are captured by there corrupt governments we have to stand for the weak, anyone who helps will be granted great profits a glory to there nation we have to attack the corrupt and save the ones who actually need help

Approvals: 0
Status: Lacking Support (requires 93 more approvals)
Voting Ends: in 2 days 23 hours

No operative clause, but tries to do more than a Liberation resolution can do?

[Wrapper]

Liberate the South Pacific
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation
Nominee (region): the South Pacific
Proposed by: Royal States Of Belgium

Description: We have to free the ones who are captured by there corrupt governments we have to stand for the weak, anyone who helps will be granted great profits a glory to there nation we have to attack the corrupt and save the ones who actually need help

Approvals: 0
Status: Lacking Support (requires 93 more approvals)
Voting Ends: in 2 days 23 hours

No operative clause, but tries to do more than a Liberation resolution can do?

Yes, an R3 double-whammy.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

SECURITY COUNCIL PROPOSAL
ID: orange_creek_1454658940

Commend Pierconium

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.


Category: Commendation

Nominee: Pierconium

Proposed by: Orange Creek

Description: Noting that through Pierconium's reign as Emperor and Delegate of The Pacific, Lawless elements such as internal disruption, support of dictatorial regimes, harassment of foreign regions, and the like, have been abolished from the region as noted in the SCR #177 Condemn The Pacific that the region, in the past year, has been notorious for its involvement in the NPO. A region infamous for the accusations against it. Such noted accusations are the following:

Suppression of Dissentful Speech

Support of Dictatorial Regimes (as seen above)

Support of coups d'état in North and South Pacific, and Lazarus

Oppression of Nations

Disruption of Regional and National Sovereignty, and other lawless practices that have been unheard of thanks to him

Observed that through his reign, The Pacific has been in organized and properly disciplined without the necessity of the creation of an Iron Fist Police State, One-party state, Authoritarian State, and the like. In which many democracies have risen and the region stabilized.

Knowing that throughout his reign, special offices which are rare in the other fellow Pacific regions, and proper regulation of rules in which offending countries are notably rare.

Applauding the fact that he has been the longest serving delegate of the Pacific regions with an outstanding 178 elected days as of the time this proposal was written.

Hereby commends Pierconium, WA Delegate and Emperor of The Pacific

Lots of R4b violations.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Repeal "Condemn The Black Hawks"

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.


Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#52

Proposed by: Cepcecic Ghost

Description: WA Security Council Resolution #52: Condemn The Black Hawks shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Argument: Description: WA Security Council Resolution #52: Condemn The Black Hawks

Argument: The Security Council,

Noting the acts of aggression committed by the TBH (The Black Hawks) war machine against innocent regions and recognizing it as a threat,

Recalling that raider groups have been using the name The Black Hawks, or a similar name, since ancient times,

Recognizing that TBH was spawned in the wake of the destruction of TBH, like DEN, but remained a separate entity from The Black Riders, having different leadership, attracting many new raiders who had never been members of the previously mentioned group, and employing different, less mechanical strategies,

Disappointed that SC #52, just like SC #187: Condemn DEN falls for the common misconception that the two raider groups are one and the same, when they are in fact quite different from one another,

Shocked that SC#52 insinuates that TBH “The Black Hawks have admitted to conspiring to pass a Security Council resolution to commend their own nation by drafting the text.” throughout NationStates, yet fails to provide even a single example to supportthis claim,

Reminded That there is not a single mention of a specific raided region within SC #52, thus rendering SC #52 Invalid,

Confused as to why there is no specific raided region named in SC #52, even though the author of the resolution clearly intended for the voting WA populace to vote on it, with prior knowledge to back up their vote,

Astounded by the fact that the voting WA populace had such a low level of disparity between votes For, and votes Against, even though there were clearly major flaws in SC #52,

Horrified By how quickly SC #52 was upgraded by WA Delegates from a Proposal to a Resolution, proving that all WA Delegates who voted for SC #52 did so without any regard to actually read the proposal through and through,

Appalled by the list of formal errors in grammar and Syntax in the course of the writing of SC #52, which include:

- Failure to use any formatting tags in the course of writing SC #52
- Improper writing format in all nine clauses of SC #52
- The statement in Clause Eight that "cooling of expression and democracy paralyze the Security Council" clearly demonstrates the appalling state of the Author's general grammar
- The statement in Clause Nine that "endangering the functioning and survival of the Security Council." is yet another example of the atrocious writing of the Author, for the aforementioned sentence makes little sense in correct grammatical form.

Asserting that the language used throughout SC #52 is not fit to be used in a book report, let alone in international law,

Realizing that the condemnation has been publicly dismissed by many Security Council veterans as being poorly written and hastily submitted,

Remembering that the condemnation of TBH is not a time sensitive issue, and should be done with at least enough care as to not make basic spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as to avoid major factual errors,

Concluding that Security Council Resolution #52 “Condemn The Black Hawks” is not fit for use by this esteemed body,

Hereby Repeals SC #52: Condemn The Black Hawks.

This is extremely well written, and feels a bit... familiar...

R2a (Every thing in red is plagiarized from SC #191, underlining is stuff that was literally copy pasted)

[Crazy girl]

Okay, now I'm impressed. Dealt with, good spot.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Okay, now I'm impressed. Dealt with, good spot.

o7

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Okay, now I'm impressed. Dealt with, good spot.

o7

*bows*
Wow, good catch.

[We Are Not the NSA]

o7

*bows*
Wow, good catch.

Well, I was the author of the original, so not noticing would have been really bad.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Condemn The Fascist Military Powers

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: The Fascist Military Powers

Proposed by: Rheneland

Description: Realizing that many nations and regions are dedicated to raiding and conquest.

Acknowledging that many of the regions that are raided are founder less or inactive.

Disturbed by the Fascist Military Powers’ wanton intolerance of any ideology that they do not agree with including capitalism, democracy and freedom.

Disgusted that the Fascist Military Powers bans free speech and democratic elections in the regions that they have conquered.

Horrified by the number of regions that have been destroyed in these marauders attempts to clear the world of any and all regions that does not adhere to their oppressive ideology.

Pleading to the World Assembly to recognize the threat of a fascist and authoritarian group dedicated to destruction.

Revolted by the anti-Islamic, homophobic, racist and otherwise culturally insensitive posts posted on the region's chat boards as well as the chat boards of the regions under their oppression.

Hereby Condemns The Fascist Military Powers

Is "chat boards" an R4c violation?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Condemn The Fascist Military Powers

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: The Fascist Military Powers

Proposed by: Rheneland

Description: Realizing that many nations and regions are dedicated to raiding and conquest.

Acknowledging that many of the regions that are raided are founder less or inactive.

Disturbed by the Fascist Military Powers’ wanton intolerance of any ideology that they do not agree with including capitalism, democracy and freedom.

Disgusted that the Fascist Military Powers bans free speech and democratic elections in the regions that they have conquered.

Horrified by the number of regions that have been destroyed in these marauders attempts to clear the world of any and all regions that does not adhere to their oppressive ideology.

Pleading to the World Assembly to recognize the threat of a fascist and authoritarian group dedicated to destruction.

Revolted by the anti-Islamic, homophobic, racist and otherwise culturally insensitive posts posted on the region's chat boards as well as the chat boards of the regions under their oppression.

Hereby Condemns The Fascist Military Powers

Is "chat boards" an R4c violation?

No, but the mention of "posts" is illegal. Also might be a 2c violation as well - if their posts are homophobic etc shouldn't they have been handled via GHRs rather than an SC condemn?

[We Are Not the NSA]

Condemn Gandalf

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Gandalf

Proposed by: Korstza

Description: They send spam relentlessly sends spam at any new nation. He is a member of the notorious group "DEN" and advertises it. He sends this message:
"Korstza, conquer with DEN!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Quick NationStates facts:
You will receive 1 issue every 12 hours
Your nation's population initially rises 1 million per day and then 5-8 million per day
Regions are the places where nations reside in
You are currently in one of the Pacifics, a huge spawning ground. Most nations move out of these regions
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
So what is DEN?
DEN is a military region that raids other regions. We're the largest and fastest-growing army in the game!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
I thought war didn't exist on NationStates!
DEN participates in the invasion game of NationStates, in which we take over other player's regions
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
But I don't know how to raid!
DEN has guides and mentors to teach you how to play the invasion game
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Why should I raid?
Because just answering issues is boring
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Join us by clicking the "Move Korstza to DEN" button found directly below
Move Korstza to DEN"
They along with many other nations advertise DEN. They MUST be dealt with.

R2c for the spam comments, although this appears to be a recruitment telegram, so that's BS. A ton of R4 violations as well. Also R3.

[Crazy girl]

Both chatboards and posts in this context are considered rule 4 violations.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Both chatboards and posts in this context are considered rule 4 violations.

Thank you for the clarification. o7