Illegal SC proposals - post them here

[Drawkland]

Drawing attention to yourself with an illegal self-commend is never a good idea when mass multying.

Will keep that in mind, thanks Sedge.

[The Karakura Empire]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1481126414

Is this legal or acceptable? Also there is a spelling error.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=imperium_magnifica_1481126414

Is this legal or acceptable? Also there is a spelling error.

It's a GA proposal. This is the Security Council.

[The Karakura Empire]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=imperium_magnifica_1481126414

Is this legal or acceptable? Also there is a spelling error.

It's a GA proposal. This is the Security Council.

whoops!

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: korea2_1481306617

Commend Femdom Empire

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Femdom Empire

Proposed by: Korea2

femdom is atacking peacefull regions without regions

I Propose:
Sanctions to all femdom Countries

R3 and R4(d)

Security Council Proposal
ID: korea2_1481306996

Condemn Femdom Empire

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Femdom Empire

Proposed by: Korea2

Femdom Empire is Atacking Peacefull Nations without any reassom

Its an Invader,And Hate any governments that opose to it

Such as:Communist,Fascist And a few Other

And another one from the same author.

R3

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: socialist_catholic_ireland_1481383110

Commend The Communist Bloc

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The Communist Bloc

Proposed by: Socialist Catholic Ireland

The Communist Bloc has shown its worthyness of being commendation by not raiding any region and not funding anti-democracy or anti-fascism groups. I believe this is why the deserve to be commended

R3 and R4(d).

[Grezantime]

Repeal: “Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland”

Repeal: “Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#211

Proposed by: Lunia Prodaria

Security Council Resolution #211 “Liberate Kingdom of Ireland” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

delegates have the right to have Delegate-imposed barriers

R2(d), R3

[Kaboomlandia]

Repeal: “Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland”
R2(d), R3

In future, please quote them instead of just linking them, because that link is useless once the proposal gets yanked.

Security Council Proposal
ID: lunia_prodaria_1481479293

Repeal: “Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#211

Proposed by: Lunia Prodaria

Security Council Resolution #211 “Liberate Kingdom of Ireland” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

delegates have the right to have Delegate-imposed barriers

Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 107 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 9 hours

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: moo-moo_1481576598

Condemn Sweeps

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Sweeps

Proposed by: Moo-Moo

A couple weeks before the end of a war between our country and Oom-Oom, who was joined be Sweeps, Sweeps pulled out of the war. A reporter from Moo-Moo traveled to there to report this, but the Sweeps government are now keeping her there. One country suggested to other countries to not get involved. Moo-Moo does not want this to escalate into a war over just one person, like World War I although it was a prince who was shot. Sweeps said that they would release her if Moo-Moo relinquishes their provisional control, to install a new and less tyrannical government, to the tyrannical Sweeps.

R3 and R4(b).

[Indo-Malaysia]

Security Council Proposal
ID: korea2_1481584908

Commend Confederate Poland

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.


Category: Commendation

Nominee: Confederate Poland

Proposed by: Korea2


Democratic Reforms Is Happening on Poland,And the First Free Elections Happened we must make an referendum in poland to see what people want,Stay on the Warsaw Pact,Join NATO Or Became an neutral country



Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 106 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 5 hours

It doesn't need much explaining to say why this is illegal.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: korea2_1481584908

Commend Confederate Poland

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.


Category: Commendation

Nominee: Confederate Poland

Proposed by: Korea2


Democratic Reforms Is Happening on Poland,And the First Free Elections Happened we must make an referendum in poland to see what people want,Stay on the Warsaw Pact,Join NATO Or Became an neutral country



Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 106 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 5 hours

It doesn't need much explaining to say why this is illegal.

Well, yes it does actually. That's the whole point of this thread.

R3, R4(a) and R4(d).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: alkent_1481713318

Liberate Fire Moon

A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Fire Moon

Proposed by: Alkent

Let us change The SwordMansters delegate of Fire Moon, just me. Move to Fire Moon then endorse. Done!

R3, R4(a) and the author has no idea what a liberation is for.

[Grezantime]

Security Council Proposal
ID: alkent_1481713318

Liberate Fire Moon

A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Fire Moon

Proposed by: Alkent

Let us change The SwordMansters delegate of Fire Moon, just me. Move to Fire Moon then endorse. Done!

R3, R4(a) and the author has no idea what a liberation is for.

To be fair he knows what a liberation is, not a Liberation though.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: xo-nation_1481754053

Repeal: “Liberate Kingdom Of Ireland”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#211

Proposed by: XO-Nation

Security Council Resolution #211 “Liberate Kingdom of Ireland” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Wasn't this how the INVADERS started off? Are we really going to allow this to happen with another country?

R2(d), R3 and R4(d).

[Sovereign Slavic States]

Security Council Proposal
ID: commonwealth_states_of_britania_1481842806

Condemn British Isles

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation

Nominee: British Isles

Proposed by: Commonwealth States of Britania


The Security Council,

Recognising that the British Isles was a notable member of the interregional community - having been founded in 2012, peaking at 901 nations in 2013, and having developed strong links with other Anglo-Saxon themed regions of the community,

Noting that following a dispute between the people of the British Isles and its exclusively offsite forum-based government - regarding democracy and freedom of speech; a mass exodus resulted in the rapid decline of the region in both members and influence - leaving it in its current perilous state of just 39 nations and little activity onsite,

Expressing dismay at the British Isles oppressive political nature; with its solely offsite forum-based government - composed of unelected forum users (often whom are not even NationStates players, let alone regional members) - acting in an increasingly dictatorial manner to non-forum users of the overall region; including the severe suppression of any form of dissenting freedom of speech, and the institution of an inherently undemocratic authoritarian political system upon its native peoples,

Denouncing the British Isles's latest custodian, The Majesty of Madame Essien; appointed without the knowledge of the majority of the regional natives; hostility towards former British Isles members, her abrupt cessation of diplomatic communications with once friendly regions, and her suppression of any suggestion of the illegitimacy of her rule, offer of refuge for oppressed regional members by other regions, and comment on the declining status of the region,

Rebuking The Majesty of Madame Essien and other members of the British Isles personal aggression, insolence and gloating at former members of the region that decided to leave in protest at their inherently dictatorial governmental system and oppression of non-governmental members,

Asserting that the actions of the British Isles offsite regional government against its native population and the communities of other regions, constitutes an affront to self-determination, democratic governance, freedom of speech, and to the interregional peace, goodwill and friendship that this institution is charged with upholding,

Urging the non-forum native population of the British Isles to demand reform to the regional governmental system, and to press for democratic elections and genuine freedom of speech - so that the British Isles might topple its domestic tyranny and someday revitalise back to its former glory and reconcile with the interregional community.

Hereby condemns the British Isles.


Approvals: 0

Status: Lacking Support (requires 108 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 4 hours

R4(a), R4(b)

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

It's a shame it's so chock full of illegal terms and references, because the framework is there for a half decent proposal.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: commonwealth_states_of_britania_1481900263

Condemn British Isles

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: British Isles

Proposed by: Commonwealth States of Britania

The Security Council,

Recognising that the British Isles was a notable member of the interregional community - having been founded in 2012, peaking at 901 nations in 2013, and having developed strong links with other Anglo-Saxon themed regions of the community,

Noting that following a dispute between the people of the British Isles and its detached, oblivious forum-based government - regarding democracy and freedom of speech; a mass exodus resulted in the rapid decline of the region in both members and influence - leaving the region in its current perilous state of just 39 nations.

Expressing dismay at the British Isles oppressive political nature; with its entirely external forum-based government independent from the region - composed of unelected forum users (often whom are not members of the international community, let alone regional members) - acting in an increasingly dictatorial manner to non-forum users of the overall region; including the severe suppression of any form of dissenting freedom of speech, and the institution of an inherently undemocratic authoritarian political system upon its native peoples,

Denouncing the British Isles's latest custodian, The Majesty of Madame Essien; appointed without the knowledge of the majority of the regional natives; governmental hostility towards former British Isles members, abrupt cessation of diplomatic communications with once friendly regions, and state suppression of: any suggestion of the illegitimacy of the regional governments rule, offer of refuge for oppressed regional members by other regions, and comment on the declining status of the region,

Rebuking The Majesty of Madame Essien and other members of the British Isles's regional government, personal aggression, insolence and gloating at former members of the region that decided to leave in protest at their inherently dictatorial governmental system and oppression of non-governmental members,

Asserting that the actions of the British Isles oblivious, authoritarian external regional government against its native population and the communities of other regions, constitutes an affront to self-determination, democratic governance, freedom of speech, and to the interregional peace, goodwill and friendship that this institution is charged with upholding,

Urging the non-forum native population of the British Isles to demand reform to the regional governmental system, and to press for democratic elections and genuine freedom of speech - so that the British Isles might topple its domestic tyranny and someday revitalise back to its former glory and reconcile with the interregional community.

Hereby condemns the British Isles.

Resubmitted with the R4(b) errors removed, but still illegal. R4(a).

[Commonwealth States of Britania]

Security Council Proposal
ID: commonwealth_states_of_britania_1481900263

Condemn British Isles

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: British Isles

Proposed by: Commonwealth States of Britania

The Security Council,

Recognising that the British Isles was a notable member of the interregional community - having been founded in 2012, peaking at 901 nations in 2013, and having developed strong links with other Anglo-Saxon themed regions of the community,

Noting that following a dispute between the people of the British Isles and its detached, oblivious forum-based government - regarding democracy and freedom of speech; a mass exodus resulted in the rapid decline of the region in both members and influence - leaving the region in its current perilous state of just 39 nations.

Expressing dismay at the British Isles oppressive political nature; with its entirely external forum-based government independent from the region - composed of unelected forum users (often whom are not members of the international community, let alone regional members) - acting in an increasingly dictatorial manner to non-forum users of the overall region; including the severe suppression of any form of dissenting freedom of speech, and the institution of an inherently undemocratic authoritarian political system upon its native peoples,

Denouncing the British Isles's latest custodian, The Majesty of Madame Essien; appointed without the knowledge of the majority of the regional natives; governmental hostility towards former British Isles members, abrupt cessation of diplomatic communications with once friendly regions, and state suppression of: any suggestion of the illegitimacy of the regional governments rule, offer of refuge for oppressed regional members by other regions, and comment on the declining status of the region,

Rebuking The Majesty of Madame Essien and other members of the British Isles's regional government, personal aggression, insolence and gloating at former members of the region that decided to leave in protest at their inherently dictatorial governmental system and oppression of non-governmental members,

Asserting that the actions of the British Isles oblivious, authoritarian external regional government against its native population and the communities of other regions, constitutes an affront to self-determination, democratic governance, freedom of speech, and to the interregional peace, goodwill and friendship that this institution is charged with upholding,

Urging the non-forum native population of the British Isles to demand reform to the regional governmental system, and to press for democratic elections and genuine freedom of speech - so that the British Isles might topple its domestic tyranny and someday revitalise back to its former glory and reconcile with the interregional community.

Hereby condemns the British Isles.

Resubmitted with the R4(b) errors removed, but still illegal. R4(a).

Huzzah! I managed to load the forum. As I sent personally to Bhang Bhang Duc, our issue at Pax Britannia, is that our main critique of the British Isles is their use of dictatorial offsite forums to govern the in-game region - often with members of said offsite forum that do not even have NS accounts. I tried changing "offsite" to "external", but I can't figure out how I would rephrase it again to avoid referencing the IRL world, while still getting our main point across.

Do any of you have any suggestions?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Start a new thread in this forum, label it [DRAFT] Condemn British Isles and copy-paste your proposal into it.

I'll certainly comment as will other regulars.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: malaysian_sultanate_1482165579

Condemn Fascist Regions

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Fascist Regions

Proposed by: Malaysian Sultanate

Condemn Fascist Regions
Realizing Founder Nazi Hydraulics has made racist comments and has been since the foundation of Fascist Regions,this resolution hereby condemns the Fascist Regions. This resolution demands that,
A complete ban on the Nazi Hydraulics in major regions
All major areas close embassies and completely shut down all relations with the Fascist Regions.
All Regions close telegram preferences of the Nazi Hydraulic and nations located in the Fascist Regions

Possible R2(c) violation and although there is an active Condemnation clause buried in there it does more than a Condemnation can do and is, therefore, illegal.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: boonertropilis_1482280373

Commend 15 Area

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: 15 Area

Proposed by: BoonerTropilis

I have been studying this region for quite some time and it has proven that it is a great region because it takes care of its people and has great leaders who care for there residents. This region has deserved this reward by proving that it can hold its ground while taking care of its people without corruption or greed. This is why this region should be given a reward for proving its worth.

R3 and R4(d).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: uinted_communist_of_africa_1482448687

Commend The Communist Bloc

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The Communist Bloc

Proposed by: Uinted Communist of Africa

Considering: the communist bloc has been a shining beacon to all left winged nations
Observing: their numbers grow in friendship and favor
Measuring: the power of the region which is never abused
Making: a kind gesture to all left winged nations
Understanding: the communist bloc stands for all left winged nations
Nearing: the communist bloc's third year as nation-states left winged super power
Including: the various contributions the region had made on the international scene
Saluting: their engaging yet fun chat that never dies down
Taking: the necessary steps in healing the stereotypes of left leaning states
We hereby salute The Communist Bloc

R3 and R4(d).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: baltic-balkan_union_1482653877

Commend The Communist Bloc

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The Communist Bloc

Proposed by: Baltic-Balkan Union

The Communist Bloc is a region defending the poor from the rich. It stops all capitalist regions by invading them, this may sound bad, but it IS liberation, and they protect against Fascism and Capitalism, which is a tyranny seen as a right by many nations, this region shall be commended for good ideoloqgy, and may other Socialist and Communist regions follow, and this may be ideologacially biased, but I hereby commend them.

Credit: Someone unnamed in the Communist Bloc.

R4(d).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: united_sates_of_merica_1482683797

Condemn Wahhabist Islam

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Wahhabist Islam

Proposed by: United Sates of Merica

For terrorist actions in the name of the Arab League.
Condemnation for its motto" The one true Islam" not only hostile to other Muslims sects that are otherwise peaceful, but offensive to other religions and those without a religion."A misguided creed that fosters intolerance, promotes simplistic theology, and restricts Islam's capacity for adaption to diverse and shifting circumstances" (David Commins)
"a conservative reform movement ... the creed upon which the kingdom of Saudi Arabia was founded, and [which] has influenced Islamic movements worldwide" Saudi Arabia being a cash source for terror and safe harbor for terrorists.
Hereby condemns the Holy Empire of Wahhabist Islam for terrorist actions and war crimes.

R4(a). This "author" seems to be leaving a trail of illegal proposals in the GA and now in the SC.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Security Council Proposal
ID: stalin_lands_1482711268

Commend Nazi Europa

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Nazi Europa

Proposed by: Stalin Lands

CONSIDERING that royalists, conservative and liberal capitalists, social-democrats, democrats, socialists and communists are united to defeat nazifascism

CONSIDERING we need to protect ethnic minorities like jews and romani people

CONSIDERING we need to protect individual sexuality according General Assembly Resolution #383 “Right to Sexual Privacy”

RECOGNIZING nazism ideology as a eugeny, xenophobia and racism natural defender

CONSIDERING that nazism is a threat to human's rights, world's peace and stability

The Security Council CONDEMNS Nazi Europa and nazism vindication by this region

Right this version is an R3 violation - wants to Condemn, but has entered it as a Commend.

Security Council Proposal
ID: stalin_lands_1482711361

Condemn Nazi Europa

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Nazi Europa

Proposed by: Stalin Lands

CONSIDERING that royalists, conservative and liberal capitalists, social-democrats, democrats, socialists and communists are united to defeat nazifascism

CONSIDERING we need to protect ethnic minorities like jews and romani people

CONSIDERING we need to protect individual sexuality according General Assembly Resolution #383 “Right to Sexual Privacy”

RECOGNIZING nazism ideology as a eugeny, xenophobia and racism natural defender

CONSIDERING that nazism is a threat to human's rights, world's peace and stability

The Security Council CONDEMNS Nazi Europa and nazism vindication by this region

Still an R3 violation as the author is trying to condemn more than the subject of the proposal. Plus it's chock full of real world references, so R4(a) as well.