[PASSED] Condemn Swarmlandia

[Sedgistan]

Condemn Swarmlandia
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.


Category: Condemnation Nominee: Swarmlandia Proposed by: Sakaba

Description: The Secruity Council:

IDENTIFIES that Swarmlandia has been capturing all tourist from neighboring nations around the world.

NOTING that the tourist are used as experimental test subjects.

HORRIFIED that test subjects undergo and are not limited to:
* Poison Testing (Documentation shows The poisons were secretly administered to experimental subjects in their food. The victims died as a result of the poison or were killed immediately in order to permit autopsies.
* Freezing Experiments (The Leader of Swarmlandia admitted to conducting experiments with the intent of discovering means to prevent and treat hypothermia. One study forced subjects to endure a tank of ice water for up to five hours.)
*Incendiary Bomb Testing (Documents clarify that experiments were conducted to test the effect of various pharmaceutical preparations on phosphorus burns. These burns were inflicted on captured tourist using phosphorus material extracted from incendiary bombs.)
* Bone, muscle, and nerve transplantation experiments (The bone transplantation from one person to another. Sections of bones, muscles, and nerves were removed from the subjects without use of anesthesia. As a result of these operations, many victims suffered intense agony, mutilation, and permanent disability.)

CLARIFYING that Swarmlandia is a nation that does not tolerate foreigners.

FINALIZING that Swarmlandia be condemned for the vicious acts against humanity of the peoples of the world.

The Security Council hereby Condemns The Infested Puppet Master of Swarmlandia

Approvals: 75 (Vrindavana, Justice and Befowlment, Funnicleism, Castigonia, Houkong, Moldowa, Weegee and Rick Steves, Obinada, The Terran Technate, Mixolidian, Laurenzi, Deconiate, Kyraina, Loonaterian, Kindjal, Pulangi, Graavenland, Nazi Centauri, Belrussia, Zelohaan, Gomiticus, South United Allies, Saranoth, Vendettium, Mirakovina, TableRase, Cyrupe, Daukulis Country, MyreBlood Coasts, Isis Rakael, The Mattabooloo, Indie Lovers, Kingsrook, Magical mystery island, Random crud, Ayakera, Independant Warlords, Erabixia, Bears Armed Mission, The State of New York, Radkicks, the Sons of Somerled, Knowlandia, Sjovenia, Leepaidamba, Defero Populus, --Europe--, Isengardslaves, Siorta, Bahgum, Brolak, Hancok, Metanih, Kemelom, Junkyland, Charlotte Ryberg, Hassak, Whatthefuhckery, Rudy the Dominator, Universal Petroleum, Othileon, Cat Pie, Indosias, Roman Templars, Greater Moletopia, Arcornia, Landfordshire, Sermak, Al-Harakut al-Islami, Former Reblle, Cresilia, SkillCrossbones, Omega15, Polstovsk, Deutchesbund)

Status: Quorum Reached: In Queue!

OOC: Let me firstly say before we jump on mistakes. I realized after submission I should of added an (s) to tourist in IDENTIFYING and NOTING. Please do not crucify for this. But I mainly submitted this proposal for the role-playing part this game. (I was looking at past passed commended and condemned resolutions and figured I would get myself involved a little by submitting this proposal of an old time role play buddy. (If I am doing something wrong please tell me, this is really my first attempt at this, and if it does alright, I look forward to becoming more active in this aspect of the game. I used to only do issues and offsite forums Role Play but, figured it was worth a shot.

Anyways Mr. Sedgistan told me to start this topic, so here it is.

`Sakaba

edit: tips are widely appreciated specially if you think I have potential and the upcoming proposals can be better

[Sedgistan]

Anyways Mr. Sedgistan told me to start this topic, so here it is.

Thanks for posting! I'm impressed by how quickly you attained quorum with this proposal, and it's a solid start. You did misspell "Secruity Council", and there's probably a few other things that could've been improved if you'd posted it here first, but importantly it's comprehensible, makes its case fairly well, and doesn't appear to be illegal.

[Sakaba]

Anyways Mr. Sedgistan told me to start this topic, so here it is.

Thanks for posting! I'm impressed by how quickly you attained quorum with this proposal, and it's a solid start. You did misspell "Secruity Council", and there's probably a few other things that could've been improved if you'd posted it here first, but importantly it's comprehensible, makes its case fairly well, and doesn't appear to be illegal.

*facepalm* I should slow my fingers down when typing and make sure I proof read like 3 or 4 more times.

[A mean old man]

This probably should have been drafted...

[Sakaba]

This probably should have been drafted...

Yes I notice this now, well if it fails to pass as resolution I will resubmit a better revised edition.

[Mahaj WA Seat]

i'm curious...did you do any campaigning? Because you reached quorum pretty fast.

[Zarvarza]

AWESOME use of The Zar-Illuminati Empire flag there, Swarm, I believe this is not your first run-in with the Illuminati, but, like you, we always make come-backs.

The Illuminati Supports you by NOT condemning you, as is our ten-region-wide empire policy

[Sakaba]

i'm curious...did you do any campaigning? Because you reached quorum pretty fast.

I went down the region list sorted by population started on page one explaining the situation to delegates (in character) I probably messaged about 150 different delegates that were recently active within the last 24 hours.

[Mahaj WA Seat]

i'm curious...did you do any campaigning? Because you reached quorum pretty fast.

I went down the region list sorted by population started on page one explaining the situation to delegates (in character) I probably messaged about 150 different delegates that were recently active within the last 24 hours.

Cool.

[Iron Marxia]

Please show me evidence that any of this is factual; I can find no reason to believe any of the accusations made in this resolution are true. I recommend that delegates consider what passing this resolution could mean if the charges are false.

[Mahaj WA Seat]

Please show me evidence that any of this is factual; I can find no reason to believe any of the accusations made in this resolution are true. I recommend that delegates consider what passing this resolution could mean if the charges are false.

It means a repeal would be in order.

[Retired WerePenguins]

The tourist is the national amimal of Retired WerePenguins. Tourists are tasty! Or nation could never see torturing these wonderful creatures. We strongly approve this condemnation!

Robert Brown

OOC: Let me firstly say before we jump on mistakes. I realized after submission I should of added an (s) to tourist in IDENTIFYING and NOTING.

OOC: Oh wait that lack of an "s" was not intentional. Oh well. Don't tell Robert Brown that.

[Homeland Russia]

how does one aprehend tourists in your region does this have to do with an issue given to this nation or what im confused

[Sakaba]

how does one aprehend tourists in your region does this have to do with an issue given to this nation or what im confused

If you have an imagination you can have almost anything

[Sakaba]

Please show me evidence that any of this is factual; I can find no reason to believe any of the accusations made in this resolution are true. I recommend that delegates consider what passing this resolution could mean if the charges are false.

Swarmlandia freely admits to these accusations. Just letting the rest of the world know.

editin: oh and

Freezing Experiments (The Leader of Swarmlandia admitted to conducting experiments with the intent of discovering means to prevent and treat hypothermia. One study forced subjects to endure a tank of ice water for up to five hours.)

it's said in the proposal

[Kalibarr]

This looks like an attempt to bring the illuminati attention.

Against.

[Theritia]

I voted for. No nations have the right to decide about other nation's citizens' fate. It's never right to use any persons as a test subjects, not even if the tests are made by the government of the home nation.

Woah, I'm really into role-play

[Awkies]

This is an incredibly poorly written proposal - beyond the typo in the first line, there are several instances of poor capitalisation and muddy grammar.
Too many nations decide that immediately after joining the roleplaying forums and finding one person who has done something that would be considered wrong in the real world, that they MUST write a condemnation.
Get into the game before you start writing proposals or issues.

AGAINST.

[Sakaba]

This is an incredibly poorly written proposal - beyond the typo in the first line, there are several instances of poor capitalisation and muddy grammar.
Too many nations decide that immediately after joining the roleplaying forums and finding one person who has done something that would be considered wrong in the real world, that they MUST write a condemnation.
Get into the game before you start writing proposals or issues.

AGAINST.

Thanks for the input, but please try not to tell me how to play the game. I been in NS since 2003. Also, I'm not involved in the NS Forums at all. My role playing is on an offsite forum and we thought it would be fun to try and condemn a nation. So, stop the assumptions.

[Maroza]

Please show me evidence that any of this is factual; I can find no reason to believe any of the accusations made in this resolution are true. I recommend that delegates consider what passing this resolution could mean if the charges are false.

[Metania]

This is an incredibly poorly written proposal - beyond the typo in the first line, there are several instances of poor capitalisation and muddy grammar.
Too many nations decide that immediately after joining the roleplaying forums and finding one person who has done something that would be considered wrong in the real world, that they MUST write a condemnation.
Get into the game before you start writing proposals or issues.

AGAINST.

Too many newbie nations who have learned just a little about the Security Council believe they must violently slam people who make mistakes, but that too is wrong, and something they really need to get into the game before they can start correcting people.

I think you should first look into that before claiming this is the product of a member from 7+ years ago acting like a newbie, because that is far less likely than someone who joined under a year ago doing so with their assumptions.

That said, it is a pity the grammar could not be cleaned up prior to submission, but otherwise it seems a reasonable proposal, which is why I voted for on it.

[Jasarite]

The grammar is poor but it is the effect of the legislation that counts and this nation deserves to be condemned. Therefore, I am backing your proposal.

[AETEN II]

Erm, whoever wrote this needs to take an English class.

Tourist should be tourists.

-slams the NAY button-

[Slarnia]

The United Socialist States of Slarnia believe that tourists tour a region or country at their own risk.

Against

[Walabamba]

Self condemnation, I'm AGAINST.