Jersey Republic wrote:This is a character I created
His name is Harold spritzer
He fought with the Americans in World War II and is president of the Philippines
Any criticism you guys have?
It is a fine start, but is there any more to him? Where is he from? When was he born? Does he have siblings? What's his personality like? There are so many unanswered question that could help flesh out Harold Spritzer an turn him from a character into a person.