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Postby Ardoki » Fri May 29, 2015 5:22 pm

Now, I'm not sure if this is restricted or not. But I found it pretty severe and I would expect it to be illegal on this forum, with the PG 13+ rule and all.

New Edom wrote:The New Edomite Ministry of Finance, Fineberg

Count Thomas Lalery had been watching the news broadcast of the Regent's speech and grunted to himself. He was a burly young man with black hair, nearly black eyes, of muscular build wearing an expensive light grey suit with a blue silk tie, heavy gold ring on one finger in a very modern office with gleaming black, steel and glass furniture, a small artificial waterfall and electronic portraits of the Queen, Heir, Regent and Christ on the walls which did different things. The Heir was shown at her recent ball in a beautiful crimson gown, then in military feminine full dress receiving the honours from a parade, then looking rather sweet in the Cathedral.

"Speech is not bad," he told his private Secretary, Hannah, who was setting out his paperwork for the day. "But as usual, rather dry. The Shogun had some panache, Elijah's always dry as a bone."

"I thought it was very typical, and very good," said Hannah with a smile.

"You would," said Lalery with a grin. "You like him, eh? Want to become a royal mistress?"

"Oh really, sir, now I couldn't..." she blushed and shook her head.

Lalery grunted to himself again. Sure she would. Women were all alike. "Imperial Chancellor Kassandra Tennison. What a bunch of lies she tells. She does it rather well, no proof of course, but who needs proof for the news?"

"She is being very provocative." said Hannah grimly.

"She wouldn't talk so much with my dick in her mouth," said Lalery. "What's with the look?" he demanded. "I realize she's a trifle old for me, but she still looks like she has some juice in her."
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Postby Transnapastain » Fri May 29, 2015 8:20 pm

Ardoki wrote:Now, I'm not sure if this is restricted or not. But I found it pretty severe and I would expect it to be illegal on this forum, with the PG 13+ rule and all.

New Edom wrote:The New Edomite Ministry of Finance, Fineberg

Count Thomas Lalery had been watching the news broadcast of the Regent's speech and grunted to himself. He was a burly young man with black hair, nearly black eyes, of muscular build wearing an expensive light grey suit with a blue silk tie, heavy gold ring on one finger in a very modern office with gleaming black, steel and glass furniture, a small artificial waterfall and electronic portraits of the Queen, Heir, Regent and Christ on the walls which did different things. The Heir was shown at her recent ball in a beautiful crimson gown, then in military feminine full dress receiving the honours from a parade, then looking rather sweet in the Cathedral.

"Speech is not bad," he told his private Secretary, Hannah, who was setting out his paperwork for the day. "But as usual, rather dry. The Shogun had some panache, Elijah's always dry as a bone."

"I thought it was very typical, and very good," said Hannah with a smile.

"You would," said Lalery with a grin. "You like him, eh? Want to become a royal mistress?"

"Oh really, sir, now I couldn't..." she blushed and shook her head.

Lalery grunted to himself again. Sure she would. Women were all alike. "Imperial Chancellor Kassandra Tennison. What a bunch of lies she tells. She does it rather well, no proof of course, but who needs proof for the news?"

"She is being very provocative." said Hannah grimly.

"She wouldn't talk so much with my dick in her mouth," said Lalery. "What's with the look?" he demanded. "I realize she's a trifle old for me, but she still looks like she has some juice in her."


Its certainly crude, its not "good" writing, and if it were directed at another poster it'd certainly be actionable. In this case, no, I don't think so unless it becomes habitual and lacks context.
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Postby Ardoki » Fri May 29, 2015 8:22 pm

Okay, sorry for wasting your time; and thank you.
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Postby Transnapastain » Fri May 29, 2015 8:25 pm

Ardoki wrote:Okay, sorry for wasting your time; and thank you.


No problem, thanks for the report.


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