OOC post.
Umeria wrote:I'm going to assume that no answer to this question means yes.
7 hours 19 minutes until submission...
Or, as is more likely, it means that you're being too hasty again and people who have lives haven't been online long enough to comment.
Umeria wrote:Araraukar wrote:I think that should end with "when" instead of "where".
Are you sure? It's
in the time, not the time itself. I think. You know, in those dramatic speeches they say "the time has come where...", not when. Right?
I think I've only heard "when". And then the basic sentence would read "a time when there are ", which makes more sense than "a time where there are".
Well, "halt the spread of" refers to the entire epidemic, not that one person, and "halt them spreading" sounds... weird. If it were "stop" instead of "halt", it would be "stop them from spreading", but "halt" is better for this clause and "halt them from spreading" also sounds weird. Why can't I just leave it like it is?
Because "halt their spread" is even more wrong than either of those. If you're talking about the entire epidemic, then you're really not making sense - go with "to halt the spread of the disease".
I know "curing" sounds more romantic, but it's redundant in this case.
Well, feel-good wordings like mentioning curing (since most people
won't think that "cure" and "make non-contagious" are the same when it comes to quarantines) that may make it more likely to pass, but your call.
Araraukar wrote:[A rather obvious grammar error on my part... ]
You made that look like I said it.
So, aside from grammar, the proposal is finished?
Grammar matters, and I still think the whole thing unnecessary/redundant, but it's probably about as good as it's going to get. Just fix the grammar, give it 48 hours for others to comment (many people won't have time for NS except on weekends).
You might also consider adding an S to the end of the title. More a matter of personal preference, so either is likely going to be ok.